A Day in the Life of Harry James Potter
Chapter 8 of 16
jmlane57A given day in Harry's life about a month after his reunion with Ginny.
ReviewedChapter 8 – A Day in the Life of Harry James Potter
Of course, all good things must come to an end, or at least a temporary one. When Harry least expected it, he saw Hermione approach him, a suspicious look on her face. “Harry, I'd like to speak to you.”
“What about?”
“I hear you’re seeing Ginny again.”
“So? What business is that of yours? We’re not together anymore. Haven’t been for six months.”
“That’s not the issue. I'm just concerned about the girls. What if they saw something inappropriate going on between you?”
“Don’t worry about that. I make sure the girls are elsewhere before anything happens. Whatever else I am, I’m not an exhibitionist and have no intention of doing anything ‘inappropriate,’ as you call it … especially not in front of them! Frankly I’d be more worried about my own conduct if I were you.”
Hermione’s eyes became hard. “What is that supposed to mean?”
“You know exactly what I mean. If you find yourself wanting to shag someone, kindly make sure our girls are nowhere around. I don’t want them to catch you with a lover again, nor do I care to have to re-explain to them later on just what you were doing and who you were doing it with. In fact, aren’t they due to visit you next weekend?”
“I believe so. But for your information, I’m not seeing anyone at the moment.”
“I never claimed you were. I just want you to make sure to take the proper precautions where the girls are concerned once you start,” he returned calmly. “Now, if you don’t mind, I’m hungry and don’t have a lot of time to eat.” Hermione glared at him but couldn’t argue the point any longer, and she took her leave to sit down at another table halfway across the staff room from Harry.
Harry was glad she was gone. He was expecting Ginny and was glad she hadn’t walked in on his confrontation with his ex-wife. By this time, it didn’t make much difference whether or not he and Ginny kissed in public, so once she arrived they did just that, and Harry frankly hoped ’Mione had seen them. They were too engrossed in each other to notice afterwards, but Hermione had indeed seen Harry snog Ginny, then cuddle with her at the other table, their heads together and their hands intricately intertwined. They even, to her great displeasure, occasionally kissed in between bites of food.
For Harry’s sake, Hermione hoped he was happy with Ginny again; she just wished he didn’t have to be so bloody obvious about it. In fact, she couldn’t help envying his newfound happiness and told herself it didn’t matter that she was alone, although deep down she knew it really did. But she had no time to dwell on it at the moment. There would be time enough to take care of that problem later. She had to figure how to entertain the girls next weekend.
* * * * *
And just when Harry least expected it (fortunately, Ginny wasn’t around at this point; she had a class), he saw his least favourite person approaching him as he was heading back to his own classroom. “What are you doing here, Malfoy?” he demanded as the blond man fell into step beside him.
“I warned you what would happen if you harassed Ginny, Potter.”
“I’m not harassing her. She’s seeing me of her own free will. We’re very happy together. You can ask her if you don’t believe me. And what do you care what she does or who she’s with? You’re not married to her anymore.”
“She’s still the mother of my sons, Potter, so watch your step. The last thing I or my business needs is unsavoury publicity because of you,” Draco shot back.
Harry thought of a sharp retort but really didn’t feel like getting into a long harangue with Malfoy just now, so he refrained.
“Harassment goes both ways, Malfoy; I suggest you remember that,” he returned coolly, although he was anything but cool on the inside. “Now, if you don’t mind, I have a class in a few minutes and need to prepare for it. Good day.” They were standing at the door of the Defence classroom, and Harry was getting ready to close it.
Draco glared at Harry but couldn’t think of anything else to say, so he simply gave a curt nod and departed, which suited Harry just fine. It not only gave him time to prepare today’s lesson, but he could also think about Ginny and their upcoming night together. He would be free because Hermione was due to take the girls for her regularly scheduled visit. He could fix dinner, then he and Ginny could make love, which they had been doing fairly regularly several times a week since they had reconciled roughly a month ago. He could just imagine how she would react once he told her about Draco’s confronting him again but preferred not to dwell on it too much; there were much better, nicer things for him to think about.
Just then, a brown owl swooped in the open window and headed for his desk, quickly dropping an envelope on it before flying off again. He was both surprised and pleased to see that it was from Remus. Had Minerva contacted him again? He had no idea if that had been the case or not, but what mattered was that he had heard from Moony again at last. He opened the envelope and was even more pleased to learn that Remus had learned that he was seeing Ginny steadily again.
… I’m very pleased to learn this, Harry, and hope it continues. However, my earlier statement still stands until and unless you actually make your relationship with Ginny permanent. Let me know once you propose to her again, then perhaps we can get together and really catch up on things. I also promise that I won’t confiscate your wand again, nor will I forcibly restrain you. I have been speaking with the other members of the Order and they have agreed to admit you both as regular members once you actually marry her. The main reason she is not already a member is as I think you can surmise: she was not allowed to join for the duration of her marriage to Draco. After all, how would it look for the son of a Death Eater to be married to a member of the Order of the Phoenix?
I hope you understand that due to what you did last time, we require actual marriage as proof of your feelings for her, not simply an engagement. We have also been exchanging regular owls with Hermione and intend to meet with her at the earliest opportunity, as I mentioned to you last time. She will not be admitted as an Order member until she has proved to us that she has shown proper remorse for her wrongdoing where you’re concerned, which includes refraining from harassing you and your renewed love with Ginny in any way. I know how this must sound to you, but at this point I’m not speaking as Head of the Order but simply as someone who cares about you.
I look forward to spending time with you and being brought up to date again, particularly about your teaching, and will be glad to give you advice on the subject at that point if you so desire. I also believe that both your parents and Padfoot would be pleased with you for the effort you have shown in making amends to everyone for the wrongs you have done them. I’ve missed you and want very much to renew my relationship with you, but you need to prove your sincerity first. Once you’ve done that to my satisfaction, I will be happy to reinstate you as both Padfoot’s and my godson. You will also be allowed to call me Moony again.
Keep up the good work!
Remus
PS – I also understand that you’ve been able to reconcile with Molly. Congratulations on being back in the fold; I hope you stay there this time.
This was the best news Harry had had from Remus in a long time, and it made him feel like a great weight had been lifted from his shoulders. It was now only a matter of time until he was back as part of the Order as well as godson to Padfoot and Moony again. He entertained these thoughts for a moment before setting the letter aside; he had best finish his lesson plan because his next students were due in just a few minutes and he wanted to have at least some idea of how to proceed with the current class before they arrived.
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Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Oh I am so happy for Hermione, it's good to see she is also making a life for herself.
Now that I've read this chapter, I can say without hesitation that I was right in my last comment about your characterization of Harry and Ginny. You've made Ginny such a doormat that she's ready to jump into bed with Harry even after all of the things that he's done wrong. She has no self-respect.
You might also want to examine your sentence structure. You have sentences that are excessively long; their length does not add to the reader's comprehension. At times, you have misplaced modifiers. Look at the first sentence of this chapter:
<i>When they saw each other again, Ginny wasn’t pleased with Harry’s actions of the previous day shortly after she’d seated herself facing him.</i>
Are you trying to say: <i>As she sat down, Ginny considered her displeasure at Harry's impertinent kiss. </i>
Much of your difficulty stems from the way you try to make your narrator understand everyone's feelings and point of view. If you look at JK Rowling's works, you'll see that we understand the story from Harry's point of view. We don't know what everyone is thinking and feeling, but that doesn't matter. In fact, the story of Harry Potter is stronger because JKR doesn't try to explain every little feeling that the characters have. She is true to the characterization she has created. Harry changes as he gets older, but he is still the same person from Book One to Book Six. JK Rowling's Harry Potter is not the person you are writing about.
I can see that you continue to make Harry the "one in charge" of everything. In your stories, he's always rich and he's always telling everyone what to do.
I had hoped that Ginny would be something like the Ginny we see in JK Rowling's works--a young woman with backbone! My hope was dashed when I saw that once again, you have made Ginny a door mat. She mildly protests his kiss, then she pretty much gives in and accepts all that Harry has done in the past.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Are you sure you've read the entire story? To a degree, you're correct, but if I remember correctly, Harry's parents and Sirius left him a lot of money, and in addition to that, he's earned his share in his work. So he's rich. Something wrong with that? And the people he associates with, he's NOT demanding or dictating everything to everyone; he's asking politely, as with the letter to Luna asking her to look after his girls while he was working. He even offered to pay her.
And I do NOT have Ginny accept Harry back right away. It takes six chapters before he can even touch her, much less kiss her. She told him flat out at the get-go that SHE was the one who was going to be in charge of their relationship and that if he couldn't handle that, that he could leave again right now.
She was even the one who told the Daily Prophet that he and Hermione had returned from America. In fact, Harry's had a lot of trouble in the story, and rightly so...and in Chapter 4, I believe it was, Remus disowned him, basically renounced his position as surrogate godfather (and even took back Sirius's own) until Harry shaped up. If that's not enough for you, so be it. To each his own.
Locking charms? Are we to believe that McGonagall would intentionally hold Hermione against her will? I can't see any of the Hogwarts professors getting involved in a personal matter. It's not at all like them.
Erstwhile wife? Erstwhile means "former" and Harry and Hermione are still married; therefore, Hermione cannot be an "erstwhile wife."
Have you considered using a Beta to help you with your writing problems? While your punctuation and grammar are generally good, you could benefit from someone who could help you with your redundancy issues and with word usage. It seems that you try to use words that are supposedly "educated" but if they're not a natural part of your vocabulary, you will continue to risk using words inappropriately.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Oh really, so "none" of the Hogwarts professors get involved in a personal matter? What about Dumbledore, or doesn't he count? And I seem to recall in the fifth book that McGonagall offered to help Harry become an Auror, despite Umbridge's attempts at interference. Or don't you consider Harry's potential future career a "personal matter"?
No, I don't mean to imply that Hermione would be held against her will; it's just that Harry has been trying to get her to sit down with him to discuss the disposition of their marriage and what to do about their children, and she's been avoiding him. He just wants to make sure she'll stay long enough to get a few important decisions made. Maybe I should have just had the threat made instead of actually carried out.
Okay, and maybe I should also have put 'estranged' instead of 'erstwhile.' Don't worry, I've got a beta who has already mentioned to me about the issues you've mentioned--or at least the majority of them.
Of course, at the moment I'm waiting on the beta'd chapter 6, so there are bound to be changes. Neither have any of the admins said anything to me in regards to things you've mentioned in their messages, and I happen to know that southern_witch is very good at that sort of thing!
My beta has also not mentioned anything about supposed 'mischaracterisation' and I know her style well enough by now to know that she would say as much if she felt the characters were misrepresented in any way. I have read the books umpteen times, so I think I have a pretty good idea how the characters act, think and feel.
In fact, I think I'll even send her some of these reviews and see what she thinks of them. And is there something wrong with representing the feelings of everyone concerned instead of just those of one person? I've written fanfic for 20 years; that's how I've always done my stories and no one's complained about it until now. And maybe the books (for the most part) tell things from Harry's point of view, but they DO delve into the feelings of other characters as well as him. I've seen passages on Hermione's feelings, Ron's feelings...just to name two.
Also, you would do well to keep in mind that at least part of the reason the characters act as they do here is because this is an AU story! People can act differently in AU stories. Maybe it's not precisely as in the books, but the characters are hardly unrecognisable.
One last question--do you have an English degree? I've seen people even with an English degree have no more knowledge of proper punctuation, capitalisation, grammar, spelling or word usage than the average third-grader. (Not you so much, but others I've seen. Makes me wonder how they ever managed to get it!)
Do you really think that your readers needed an explanation of what alimony is?
You repeat yourself a lot when you write. It's almost as if you feel the need to pad your chapters, yet since there is so much redundancy, you actually make the story plodding in nature.
I'm happy to se Harry and Ginny back toghther and fences being mended so to speak. However, I would like to see Hermione get on with her life. She is still a young woman and she wasn't evil, just misguided. Let's see if she can get hooked up with some one so she doen't wind up bitter.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Don't worry, she will be...it'll just take a little while yet.
why isn't hermione watching the kids while harry is off playing house?
good chapters.
more please.
Another great chapter, but what's happening with Hermione?
I'm happy that Molly was able to forgive Harry, but even Happier that Ginny is making him tow the line.
Another great chapter! I'm so glad Molly excepted Harry back into the family. I can't wait until Harry meets his daughter. And when Helen and Lily meet the older Lily.
what a huge mess they have created..
too bad this story couldn't be given to teenagers. maybe they could learn something from it. then again...
great story.
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WOW! This is a really great story. Definitely going to add it to my faves. I can't wait for an update. I just hope it has a happy ending. Harry/Ginny are my favorite.
This is a great transitional chapter, off with the old on with the new. This being off with a mistake that should never have happened to reperaion of said mistake and building new bridges.
So, exactly why is Draco angry with Harry? It seems that Harry's departure gave Draco the ability to pursue and marry Ginny. That would be a good thing.
On the other hand, now that Draco and Ginny are divorced, he shouldn't care about Harry's return.
And what kind of father would lay out his marital difficulties to his young daughters? That's poor parenting!
It seems like their decision to go to America without telling their friends the truth was hardly worthy of two Gryffindors.
How sad for everyone, I can't understand why those two ran off, maybe P.T.S.S.?
awwwww, how sweet! Can't wait for more.
I really liked this chapter. I just love weddings. One question, though... When did Draco become head of Slytherin. I thought he was a business man. Is he a teacher now, too?
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Draco IS a businessman, at least in this story. It's just that he recently gave a hefty financial contribution to the school (remember all the times Lucius did things like that?), enough so that he was granted an honorary professorship at Hogwarts and thus was able to become Head of Slytherin House. He can't always be there, of course--after all, he does have a business to run--but he does drop by several times a week. (On one of those times he just happens to run into Harry and confront him about Ginny, as shown in Chapter 8.) Hope that answers your question.
Hermione caught the bouqet, traditionally that means she is next to marry. Since Ron and Ginney are finally together I am assuming that Hermione's story is going to pick up. I'm happy for tthe newlyweds and can't wait to see more.
ohhhh could Hemione and Draco make a go of it???
Nice chapter, but how's Hermione? Is she and Ginney going to be friends again? Good to see Harry fixing his life back up too.
I really liked this chapter. I sure hope Ron comes 'round soon.