Ginny Meets Harry's Girls
Chapter 10 of 16
jmlane57Ginny agrees to babysit Harry's daughters and she and they end up getting to know each other while waiting for him to contact them about Ron.
ReviewedChapter 10 Ginny Meets Harry's Girls
Once Ginny got to her feet, she straightened and dusted off her clothing, then looked over the two nine-year-olds who stood before her. So these were Harry and Hermione's daughters. Beautiful, naturally; that was to be expected, but she smiled to herself at the thought of her own daughter with Harry, young Rose, just a few months older than these two. Just as beautiful, if not more so, and the result of love, not simply strong hormones.
"Daddy's told us about you. He said you were once close friends," Helen said by way of starting a conversation.
"Before he and your mum got together, yes, that's true; we dated for a time. But now that he's split from her, we're back together," Ginny told the child. "We...he and I...have been meaning to bring the two of you to meet me; we've just been too busy to do so, at least so far."
"Are you saying that you and Daddy are dating again?" Helen asked as Lily simply stood by, listening and taking it all in. "Is that why we seem to be spending so much time at the Burrow these days?"
"Part of the reason," Ginny confessed. "When a couple really likes each other, like your father and me, they like to spend as much time as they can alone." Ginny wasn't sure how much these girls could grasp of the concepts of romance, she simply hoped that what she said wasn't too far over their heads. Harry wouldn't be pleased if they bombarded him with questions about her later. But even now, she was convinced that young Helen was far more perceptive than her years might indicate, so she had to watch her step around her.
"I hope you don't mind my being here. I offered to look after you only to make your father feel better. He has to be with a friend of his, my brother Ron, right now, and he can't have the two of you there at the moment. I'm sure he'll tell you ... us ... what happened when he comes back. For now, though, it's best if he just has one thing at a time to concentrate on and doesn't have your safety to worry about."
"Is it true that you have six brothers? Daddy said you did," Lily finally piped up.
"I do. Bill, Charlie, Percy, Fred and George...they're identical twins...and Ron, who is Harry's friend. They met when they were eleven years old on the way to Hogwarts."
"Daddy said we'll probably be getting letters inviting us to attend Hogwarts in a couple of years, and that he had already put in our names and birthday with the Headmistress there," the child continued.
"As far as I know, that's true. I think my daughter and sons will be going, too. They're about the same age as you two."
"You have two sons and a daughter? Who did you marry?" Helen inquired as the girls followed Ginny to the living room and the three sat down together.
"Have you heard of Malfoy Enterprises?" The girls nodded. "I married the young man who is now head of that company, Draco Malfoy. I married him about six months after your father married your mum, and we had twin boys, David and Daryl. Draco and I divorced last year, but we still keep in touch because of our boys, and I allow him to visit them periodically. After all, he's still their father, and they love him."
"What about your daughter?"
Ginny hesitated. How would the girls react once they realised that her daughter was actually their half-sister and that Harry was just as much Rose's father as he was theirs? She would simply have to explain as best she could and hope they understood. "As I said, before your father married your mum, he and I dated, but it wasn't simply ... dating. We were engaged and had planned to be married when he returned from fighting Voldemort. However, it wasn't long before we heard that he had decided to marry your mum instead and moved to America. Even at that, he and I had been together several times before that, and I found that I was pregnant not long after he left. That's part of the reason I married Draco, to give her a father, since yours...and hers...wasn't around."
"Does Daddy know that you were pregnant?" Helen wondered. "And will we get to meet our sister one day?"
"He does now. And it's a half-sister, actually, but yes, your father and I are seriously considering bringing you together one day soon. Draco gave your ... half-sibling his name, and they have affection for each other, but I recently gave your father a picture of her, so when you feel you're ready, you may ask him about her."
"We have a half-sister?" Lily broke in again.
"Yes. Her name is Rose, and she's just a few months older than you." Ginny smiled. "Which reminds me, I think I remember where your father put the picture I gave him. Would you like to see her?"
The girls nodded, and the three went into Harry's bedroom, where the picture she had given him of Rose was sitting on his nightstand alongside a picture of Lily and Helen. Ginny picked up the one of Rose and handed it to the nearest of the girls, who showed it to her sister. "She looks just like me," Lily opined.
"Yes, she does," Ginny had to agree. "You could almost be twins. The boys, on the other hand, look like miniatures of their father, even though they are also Rose's half-siblings. Half-siblings happen when parents have children with different partners as your father and I did. The two of you and Rose share a father, as she and the boys share a mother...me." Ginny checked her watch and said, "I think we'd better get back to the living room. Your father said he'd give me updates on Ron's condition, and we need to be there to catch him when he Floos me."
They left Harry's room after Ginny replaced the picture of Rose on the bedside table, unable to help recalling all the tenderly passionate interludes she and Harry had shared, both here in this bed and in her own, and in spite of herself, she couldn't help blushing at the prospect of the upcoming one the following night, most likely here again. With luck, they would actually get married this time, and she would be able to share Harry's bed for the rest of her life and perhaps even have more children ... but that was getting a bit ahead of herself. If it was meant to be, it would happen. For the time being, it was best that she get to know his daughters as best she could in the time they had.
"But enough about me. Tell me about yourselves. What do you like to do, both by yourselves and with your parents?" That was when both Lily and Helen began talking at once, and Ginny had to hold up a hand to stop them. "One at a time! How about you go first, Lily?" Ginny suggested, and Lily smiled and did so. Ginny spending the next couple of hours learning all she could about Harry's younger daughter. They periodically checked the fire but hadn't seen Harry's head there yet, so she continued her talks, this time with Helen.
By the time the talks wound down, Ginny looked at her watch. Eleven o'clock and still no word from Harry. She began to get worried seeing how late it was, and if he didn't call soon, she would have to owl the hospital to find out what was going on. Lily was already curled up next to her, asleep. Even as Ginny was struck at how much Lily resembled her own daughter, she noted that Helen had been nodding off more and more often.
Even at that, Ginny was reluctant to leave the room for fear of missing Harry, so she remained on the sofa with the girls, and eventually, Helen fell asleep as well. It wasn't until eleven-thirty that a faint crackle and pop indicated that someone had entered the fire. Ginny looked up through sleepy eyes to see Harry's concerned yet tired face looking back at her.
"Sorry to take so long, Gin, but it was touch-and-go with Ron for a while. He's definitely going to be okay, but the Healers say he's going to have to spend more time in Rehab again ... probably about three months or so, at least, so we're going to have to help Luna out for a while."
"That's good that Ron's going to be all right, but it's not going to be easy to balance our work, home life, and helping Luna out. By the way, can you come home yet? I've been waiting here by the fire for hours, afraid to leave or even put the girls down for fear of missing you," Ginny informed him.
"I noticed," Harry returned dryly. "Thanks for waiting, luv, but feel free to put the girls down. I'll wait." Harry smiled warmly, his gaze full of both love and desire. "Don't worry; I'll be back as soon as I can."
"I know," Ginny assured him. "It's just not easy to have to wait for news."
"I know what you mean. As I said, I'll give you all the details when I get back. Go on, put the girls down now."
"All right." With that, Ginny gently awakened the girls long enough to take them to their room, and not knowing where their pajamas were, just removed their shoes and put them into their beds, smoothing their hair back and kissing their foreheads, then waving her hand to turn out the light and closing the door before returning to Harry in the living room.
"Good to see you again, Gin. Missed you. Girls asleep?"
Ginny smiled, nodded, and curled up near the fire, wishing she could touch Harry but having to settle for talking to him. "I wish I could touch you, luv."
"I know. I wish I could touch you, too," he confessed. "Don't worry. We'll be together tomorrow."
"An eternity," she groused.
"Tell me about it. Which reminds me...how did you and the girls get along?"
"Okay. We've spent the last several hours getting to know each other. It's incredible how much your Lily looks like ours. They could almost be twins."
"That's the Potter genes for you." Harry chuckled softly. "Dominant as all hell. Watch out for my Lily's temper, though ... Remus says it reminds him of my mum's."
"Are you reconciled with Remus yet?"
"We're corresponding, and it looks promising, but he's still adamant about not reinstating me as his and Sirius's godson until I've ... proven myself. But I've been telling him about my girls, and that's what he said about Lily in his last letter."
"I can imagine how his disowning you must have hurt," Ginny remarked sympathetically when she saw the pain in her beloved's eyes even through the fire.
"It did, very much," Harry assured her. "It was almost as though one of my own parents had done it."
"By the way, how are you supposed to prove yourself?"
"He says I've got to marry you before he'll consider reinstating me," Harry quietly confessed. "I haven't asked because I don't think you're quite ready yet ... but I want you to know that I would still like very much to marry you."
Ginny was speechless for a long time, then said, "I still want that very much too, Harry, but I also don't want to have to worry about you dumping me for someone else again."
"No chance," Harry assured her. "For one thing, the circumstances are different."
"Not to mention the fact that we're both ten years older ... and hopefully wiser," she added quietly, hoping Harry hadn't heard, but his next statement proved that he had.
"I think I've definitely learned my lesson," Harry remarked softly. "'Mione was good for short stretches, but couldn't go the distance ... at least not with me. I should never have left you, Gin, and if you'll give me the chance, I promise I'll spend the rest of my life making it up to you."
His sincerity and love for her was so obvious that Ginny couldn't help but be warmed by it. Unfortunately, he was too far away at the moment to warm her as she truly wanted. Tomorrow just wasn't quickly enough for her taste, and she was sure it wasn't Harry's, either, but they would have to make the best of it.
"I love you," Harry crooned. "And I intend to make sure that you never doubt that fact again."
"I love you too, Harry, and I intend to show you just how much tomorrow night," Ginny crooned back.
"I look forward to it," he returned with a sly smile.
"And once we have the time, I intend to introduce you to our daughter," Ginny informed him.
"Draco's not going to like it," Harry reminded her.
"He's just going to have to not like it, then. I appreciate what he's done for Rose and always will, but you're her father, and you two deserve a chance to know each other."
Harry was effectively stunned speechless for a while, then said, "Thank you, Gin. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it."
"Show me, then ... tomorrow," she purred. "Meanwhile, tell me about Ron."
However, just then, Harry said, "Somebody's coming. Be right back." His head pulled out of the fire, and Ginny waited anxiously for the next ten minutes or so until his head popped back in. "Sorry, luv. One of the orderlies came to tell me that Ron's had a combination Sleeping/Sober-Up Potion which should also help him avoid a bad hangover. Arthur and Molly are coming back in the morning, and we can come visit him later in the day if you like. Fred and George have gone back to their flat, and I've been assured that Ron will be watched closely all night, so I should be able to come home soon. I just need to say goodnight to Luna and your parents, and then I'll be right there. See you soon, luv." With that, Harry popped out of the fire again.
Five minutes later, Harry stepped out of the fireplace, and Ginny almost literally leapt to meet him. She flung herself into his arms, holding him tightly as they kissed ... and kissed ... and kissed. They didn't come up for air for a long time, and it seemed that neither ever had any intention of doing so again before he finally released her.
"Sorry, luv, I just couldn't resist," he told her as they reluctantly stepped apart.
"Don't apologise. I wanted it as much as you did."
"Thanks for looking after the girls," he returned with a smile.
"It was a pleasure. I wouldn't mind doing it again, although I don't think Helen was very enthusiastic at first."
"Not surprising. As I've said, she's always been self-sufficient for her age."
Ginny sighed and looked at her watch again. Midnight. Even as much as she wanted to stay, she knew she had to get home. Rose was there alone, having returned from her friend's house shortly before Ginny had learned about Ron's predicament. She was okay for a while, but Ginny didn't want to leave her alone any longer than absolutely necessary. "I'd better get home now. Lily--I mean, Rose--came back from her friend's house a few hours ago, and I don't want to leave her alone any longer than I have to."
"I understand," Harry returned quietly, although it was obvious just from the look in his eyes that he didn't want her to go.
Ginny placed a hand on his cheek, and Harry covered it with his nearest one. "Don't worry, luv; you'll meet her very soon. It's just too late right now."
A short time later, Harry grasped her hand and brought it to his lips, his green eyes dark with yearning. "Sleep well. I'll see you tomorrow. Love you."
"Love you. Good night."
With that, Ginny threw a handful of Floo powder into the fireplace and stepped into the fire. "The Ginevra Weasley residence!" She blew Harry a quick kiss, then was gone.
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Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Yay! I'm happy fror everyone. I hope Hermione learned a lesson too, or maybe already arranged for child care or something.
Oh I am so happy for Hermione, it's good to see she is also making a life for herself.
Now that I've read this chapter, I can say without hesitation that I was right in my last comment about your characterization of Harry and Ginny. You've made Ginny such a doormat that she's ready to jump into bed with Harry even after all of the things that he's done wrong. She has no self-respect.
You might also want to examine your sentence structure. You have sentences that are excessively long; their length does not add to the reader's comprehension. At times, you have misplaced modifiers. Look at the first sentence of this chapter:
<i>When they saw each other again, Ginny wasn’t pleased with Harry’s actions of the previous day shortly after she’d seated herself facing him.</i>
Are you trying to say: <i>As she sat down, Ginny considered her displeasure at Harry's impertinent kiss. </i>
Much of your difficulty stems from the way you try to make your narrator understand everyone's feelings and point of view. If you look at JK Rowling's works, you'll see that we understand the story from Harry's point of view. We don't know what everyone is thinking and feeling, but that doesn't matter. In fact, the story of Harry Potter is stronger because JKR doesn't try to explain every little feeling that the characters have. She is true to the characterization she has created. Harry changes as he gets older, but he is still the same person from Book One to Book Six. JK Rowling's Harry Potter is not the person you are writing about.
I can see that you continue to make Harry the "one in charge" of everything. In your stories, he's always rich and he's always telling everyone what to do.
I had hoped that Ginny would be something like the Ginny we see in JK Rowling's works--a young woman with backbone! My hope was dashed when I saw that once again, you have made Ginny a door mat. She mildly protests his kiss, then she pretty much gives in and accepts all that Harry has done in the past.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Are you sure you've read the entire story? To a degree, you're correct, but if I remember correctly, Harry's parents and Sirius left him a lot of money, and in addition to that, he's earned his share in his work. So he's rich. Something wrong with that? And the people he associates with, he's NOT demanding or dictating everything to everyone; he's asking politely, as with the letter to Luna asking her to look after his girls while he was working. He even offered to pay her.
And I do NOT have Ginny accept Harry back right away. It takes six chapters before he can even touch her, much less kiss her. She told him flat out at the get-go that SHE was the one who was going to be in charge of their relationship and that if he couldn't handle that, that he could leave again right now.
She was even the one who told the Daily Prophet that he and Hermione had returned from America. In fact, Harry's had a lot of trouble in the story, and rightly so...and in Chapter 4, I believe it was, Remus disowned him, basically renounced his position as surrogate godfather (and even took back Sirius's own) until Harry shaped up. If that's not enough for you, so be it. To each his own.
Locking charms? Are we to believe that McGonagall would intentionally hold Hermione against her will? I can't see any of the Hogwarts professors getting involved in a personal matter. It's not at all like them.
Erstwhile wife? Erstwhile means "former" and Harry and Hermione are still married; therefore, Hermione cannot be an "erstwhile wife."
Have you considered using a Beta to help you with your writing problems? While your punctuation and grammar are generally good, you could benefit from someone who could help you with your redundancy issues and with word usage. It seems that you try to use words that are supposedly "educated" but if they're not a natural part of your vocabulary, you will continue to risk using words inappropriately.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Oh really, so "none" of the Hogwarts professors get involved in a personal matter? What about Dumbledore, or doesn't he count? And I seem to recall in the fifth book that McGonagall offered to help Harry become an Auror, despite Umbridge's attempts at interference. Or don't you consider Harry's potential future career a "personal matter"?
No, I don't mean to imply that Hermione would be held against her will; it's just that Harry has been trying to get her to sit down with him to discuss the disposition of their marriage and what to do about their children, and she's been avoiding him. He just wants to make sure she'll stay long enough to get a few important decisions made. Maybe I should have just had the threat made instead of actually carried out.
Okay, and maybe I should also have put 'estranged' instead of 'erstwhile.' Don't worry, I've got a beta who has already mentioned to me about the issues you've mentioned--or at least the majority of them.
Of course, at the moment I'm waiting on the beta'd chapter 6, so there are bound to be changes. Neither have any of the admins said anything to me in regards to things you've mentioned in their messages, and I happen to know that southern_witch is very good at that sort of thing!
My beta has also not mentioned anything about supposed 'mischaracterisation' and I know her style well enough by now to know that she would say as much if she felt the characters were misrepresented in any way. I have read the books umpteen times, so I think I have a pretty good idea how the characters act, think and feel.
In fact, I think I'll even send her some of these reviews and see what she thinks of them. And is there something wrong with representing the feelings of everyone concerned instead of just those of one person? I've written fanfic for 20 years; that's how I've always done my stories and no one's complained about it until now. And maybe the books (for the most part) tell things from Harry's point of view, but they DO delve into the feelings of other characters as well as him. I've seen passages on Hermione's feelings, Ron's feelings...just to name two.
Also, you would do well to keep in mind that at least part of the reason the characters act as they do here is because this is an AU story! People can act differently in AU stories. Maybe it's not precisely as in the books, but the characters are hardly unrecognisable.
One last question--do you have an English degree? I've seen people even with an English degree have no more knowledge of proper punctuation, capitalisation, grammar, spelling or word usage than the average third-grader. (Not you so much, but others I've seen. Makes me wonder how they ever managed to get it!)
Do you really think that your readers needed an explanation of what alimony is?
You repeat yourself a lot when you write. It's almost as if you feel the need to pad your chapters, yet since there is so much redundancy, you actually make the story plodding in nature.
I'm happy to se Harry and Ginny back toghther and fences being mended so to speak. However, I would like to see Hermione get on with her life. She is still a young woman and she wasn't evil, just misguided. Let's see if she can get hooked up with some one so she doen't wind up bitter.
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Don't worry, she will be...it'll just take a little while yet.
why isn't hermione watching the kids while harry is off playing house?
good chapters.
more please.
Another great chapter, but what's happening with Hermione?
I'm happy that Molly was able to forgive Harry, but even Happier that Ginny is making him tow the line.
Another great chapter! I'm so glad Molly excepted Harry back into the family. I can't wait until Harry meets his daughter. And when Helen and Lily meet the older Lily.
what a huge mess they have created..
too bad this story couldn't be given to teenagers. maybe they could learn something from it. then again...
great story.
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WOW! This is a really great story. Definitely going to add it to my faves. I can't wait for an update. I just hope it has a happy ending. Harry/Ginny are my favorite.
This is a great transitional chapter, off with the old on with the new. This being off with a mistake that should never have happened to reperaion of said mistake and building new bridges.
So, exactly why is Draco angry with Harry? It seems that Harry's departure gave Draco the ability to pursue and marry Ginny. That would be a good thing.
On the other hand, now that Draco and Ginny are divorced, he shouldn't care about Harry's return.
And what kind of father would lay out his marital difficulties to his young daughters? That's poor parenting!
It seems like their decision to go to America without telling their friends the truth was hardly worthy of two Gryffindors.
How sad for everyone, I can't understand why those two ran off, maybe P.T.S.S.?
awwwww, how sweet! Can't wait for more.
I really liked this chapter. I just love weddings. One question, though... When did Draco become head of Slytherin. I thought he was a business man. Is he a teacher now, too?
Response from jmlane57 (Author of Love's Battle Revisited)
Draco IS a businessman, at least in this story. It's just that he recently gave a hefty financial contribution to the school (remember all the times Lucius did things like that?), enough so that he was granted an honorary professorship at Hogwarts and thus was able to become Head of Slytherin House. He can't always be there, of course--after all, he does have a business to run--but he does drop by several times a week. (On one of those times he just happens to run into Harry and confront him about Ginny, as shown in Chapter 8.) Hope that answers your question.
Hermione caught the bouqet, traditionally that means she is next to marry. Since Ron and Ginney are finally together I am assuming that Hermione's story is going to pick up. I'm happy for tthe newlyweds and can't wait to see more.
ohhhh could Hemione and Draco make a go of it???
Nice chapter, but how's Hermione? Is she and Ginney going to be friends again? Good to see Harry fixing his life back up too.
I really liked this chapter. I sure hope Ron comes 'round soon.