This story was a joy to read.  I looked forward to each chapter.  Thank you!

Okay.  I cried.  Mainly because it's over.Considering that this was not a dark story, this was the most believable, reasonable, pragmatic Snape/Granger story I think I have ever had the pleasure of reading.  Everything about it was so right and perfectly acceptable.  The day to day interaction between characters was pleasant.  The pacing was wonderful, the dialogue superb.Thank you for writing something that I have enjoyed very much.

Bouhouhou  it's over. And practically without warning.  that was a so good story and I'm so sad it's already finished. I'd like to thank you for the wonderful weeks I've passed with you. Maybe we'll have the pleasure to read you soon.

loved every bit fantastic story thank you for shareing it with us all

ah...now that is a much better ending. LOL... I absolutely LOVED this story. Wonderfully told. Thanks!Red

Sweet, sugary, fluffy. Thank you, Kailin, for giving Hermione her book after you've given her a perfect proposal from her perfect partner. This chapter was a bit more explanatory than strictly necessary, yet most of the time it flew smoothly as the rest of the story. In conclusion, this has been a wonderful ride with excellent characters and charming plot. I enjoyed it very much.

Oh thank you for the epilogue.  This put the icing on the chocalatey goodness that is this story. 

Now that this is done I'm going to go back and re-read it.  It's always hard to put the story together when there is one chapter at a time.  But I will say that it was worth the wait!!!!  What a great end to the story.

Ahhh!  The end of a perfectly lovely story... it was fun while it lasted and I hope we get to see more stories from your pen.  *Bows*  Cheers!

I am so sad to see this come to an end! What a great story!

Awww. Honestly, I've never read such a "Snapeish" marriage proposal. I love this fic!

Thank you for writing this beautiful story.

Rosi 

Holy balls. I did not expect that. Once again, lovely chapter!

I can't believe this story is done. 

It makes me all warm and fuzzy considering if they ended up with one child or a set of twins the first time around.

You created a wonderful story.  Thank you so much.  Waiting for more. 

I have to say how much I enjoyed this!  Very good work!

A very sweet story!

Ooooohhhh mmmmyyyyy GOD!  That was an eye opener!  Here I was, reading quietly, feeling slightly sleepy from my nightshift.... and BAM! He offers her marriage!  Didn't quite see that one come along.  Great stuff, really!  Will we be seeing more soon?  Hope so. *big grin*

that was the coolest sort of proposal thingy i have ever heard of, and I just love it, its was almost as good as the one i once read where he told her she was marrying him and that was that!

update soon ok 

Completed? Now? Odd way to end a story. but I did like it. A fun read.Red 

Words fail me...no, really...the first thing that came into my head was not printable and the second was probably around the same...He WANTS children with Hermione?  Wow, don't think she needs the words really...he wants to make a commitment, and have children with her.  I am LOVING this story and can't wait to read more.

*CLUMP*  LoL  I just fell out of my chair with that last line from Severus:  “Then I choose to do so after benefit of marriage. If you think I spent all those years patrolling the corridors of Hogwarts to keep the teen birth rate at from rising sky-high for nothing, then you obviously don’t know me very well. I have a reputation to consider. We will select rings tomorrow."

And just like that, it's done!  I love it!

I love the pacing of this story, it's so natural. A few steps forward, a few back. The book, their relationship, the families and friends, the wizarding world at large -- you've handled it all very deflt and given us a nuanced piece of work. I enjoy the way you've depicted their relationship -- it's complicated, prickly, affectionate, a bit at arms-length -- very real.

Now, I've been reading this at top speed. Revealing Snape's History and relishing in your thorough search for plausible justifications in the best editorials around. Oh my, I've enjoyed the ride! This time, I must confess though. I stumbled across your story when it ended in Toulouse and it did not grab my attention back then. Now? Now! Where do they go from there? I long for more excellent discussions and wonderful development.?

Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this. I hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!  I really appreciate it.

Thanks for sharing the story. You're really taking your time to develop the relationship between the two characters. Realistic

Silly Hermione.  Of course he said something--he said "I hope you're satisfied with the Plaid Pony."  In other words, he wants to have dinner(s) with you again.  *shakes head*  So clever in some ways, so utterly clueless in others.  You need a gaggle of girlfriends to set you straight, Herms.