The Library
Chapter 5 of 8
muzicfan5A chance meeting, research and the restricted section
ReviewedDisclaimer: These are only my toys, not my inventions.
Thanks to my wonderful Beta hp4freek. Thanks for all of your help! Thanks to Southern Witch for the once over and corrections. Thanks to all who have read and reviewed. I've enjoyed the constructive criticism and tried to put your suggestions to good use!
Chapter Four: The Library
That evening at dinner, Hermione and Severus were engrossed in conversation. They were becoming fast friends. Severus latched onto the attention because nobody had ever cared about him before. The closest thing to a friend he'd ever had previously was Lily Evans. Even then, the only reason why Lily retained such a title was that she occasionally stopped those Black and Potter brats from harassing him. She would sit with him for Potions lessons sometimes, where they would have conversations that were pleasant enough; but that was only when she was running late, and she was resigned to sit next to him.
Hermione had latched onto the attention because she wanted an ally in this strange time. Little did she know that befriending Severus Snape would inevitably alienate her from the entirety of Hogwarts. She ate her dinner relatively quickly. Hermione was enjoying her conversations with Severus, but she wanted to do some research. She never really had any intelligent conversations with Harry and Ron. She loved them dearly, but all they ever really wanted to talk about was Quidditch. They only ever really asked her about homework if they needed her to correct their work. But, they were friends, practically family even. They were always there for each other when someone needed help. She missed them, but she knew that things would get better now that she had a friend and ally with Severus.
"Sev," Hermione gauged his reaction for a moment before adding, "is it alright if I call you Sev?"
Severus thought about it for a moment. Nobody had ever given him a nickname before. He liked his full name and had often thought he would be offended if anyone ever tried to shorten it. He often thought he would be indignant to having a nickname. With Hermione, though, it gave him a bit of a warm feeling in the pit of his stomach. He smiled at her. "No, I actually kind of like it."
Hermione smiled in return. "Well, Sev, I hate to cut this short, but I've got some work to do... I'll see you tonight in the common room though, right?" She added that last part hastily, when she saw his face falter momentarily. It was at that moment that she made the connection to what he had said this morning, about normally eating alone.
After a final smile to Severus, she picked up her bag, which she had brought with her to dinner, then headed off to the library. She wanted to do a bit of research about time travel. She didn't remember reading about any witches or wizards travelling back any substantial amount of time, only a few hours at a time with the aid of a Time-Turner. She may have to find a professor to give her a note to look in the Restricted Section. Perhaps Professor Dumbledore would be the person to ask for that. Hermione decided to concentrate on looking where she could now and worry about obtaining notes for the Restricted Section after she had exhausted her other options first.
Hermione walked through the library shelves and stacked books into her arms. By the time she completed her preliminary rounds, the pile of books was nearly taller than see was! She did a quick scan of the table of contents, before deciding how close to the top of the pile the book was, and then began reading. She had gotten through the first three books in the pile, when there was a noise immediately to her right. The table shifted slightly, and her pile of books looked in danger of falling. She looked up, ready to tell whoever bumped into her table "Watch where you're going." She saw a rather familiar face with a blush creeping up starting at his neck. Severus quickly tried to close his book and hide the title from Hermione. The mildly angry look on Hermione's face immediately changed, and a smile appeared in its place.
"Oh, hey, Sev; I didn't think I'd see you here."
"Oh, hi; I'm, uh, I'm just doing some, um, light reading..."
Hermione craned her neck to try to see what book he was so engrossed in that he was walking into tables. He pulled the front cover to his chest and tried to cover the binding with the draping sleeve of his robes.
"Oh, it's nothing, just some book on Potions; really dry reading, really. I'm sure you wouldn't like it."
"Actually, I find Potions really intriguing." Hermione made a final effort to read the book binding when she caught part of the authors' name. The book was by Pearsonelle H. Jean. "Is that the 'Potions for Personal Use' book? I've often thought of checking it for some sort of shampoo that would make my hair more... manageable. I never actually got around to looking it up, though.
"Really?" Severus asked her incredulously.
"Really. Really," Hermione assured him.
"My hair is a bit unruly itself. The only way I can get it to lay flat is if it looks like this..." The blush returned to Severus' face.
Hermione tried to dissipate his nerves. "Well, if you find something you think could be useful, we can brew it together, and we'll both give it a try. At least then, if something goes terribly wrong, we can look like drowned rats together."
Severus let out a bit of a nervous laugh. He was still a little embarrassed, but at least she wasn't going to tease him. "So, what are you looking up, anyway? There are so many books here, had I not walked into your table, I never would have seen you."
"All of this?" It was Hermione's turn to blush slightly. Severus didn't know the whole story, and she wanted to keep it that way. "I, um, I wanted to learn more about time travel. Sometimes I just like to research, you know? Pick a random topic and learn what I can about it." She lied a bit, adding in that last part, but it seemed like a reasonable lie. It would, hopefully, avoid any awkward questions regarding why she was so interested in the topic.
Severus smiled at this information. Maybe she would be interested in going through his personal library at some point. He made a mental note to let her borrow one of his books on the Dark Arts at some point, and gauge her reaction to it. She would be an interesting addition to the group he'd been spending his time with outside of school. He would spend a lot of his summer and holidays with Voldemort and his followers. He was a private political party. Voldemort was setting the groundwork to try to become Minister of Magic someday. He was a brilliant man, he really was. He wants to make some real changes to current policies. Minster Wanda DiFieet was a bit of an inept woman.
"Well, I'm going to get going then," Severus said, making an attempt to leave and research in private.
"Don't be silly, there's room for you here. You can join me if you wish." Severus thought his heart had bounded into his throat. He had never been asked to join anyone before! Hermione started moving books, so he had a place to work, and Severus gratefully accepted her offer.
Severus began flipping through the book he had taken, trying not to stay on any particular page too long. He didn't want to be caught on any page that could be considered too embarrassing. Pages that he passed included a hair-removing potion, a hair-growing potion, and various cleaning potions for household uses. The closer to the back he got the more questionable the information became. He found potions for medicinal uses, and he even stumbled across some sexual enhancing potions. He paled instantly with a blush creeping up his face immediately afterwards.
Hermione happened to pick that moment of horrification to steal a glance at Severus. A look of concern covered her face. "Sev, are you alright? You like a little ill."
He tried to collect himself, but found it difficult. "Unexpected part of the book..." Severus turned the book for her to see; he wasn't about to start reading from the page for her. Hermione glanced at the title of the potion and saw it was for endurance. Her eyes scanned down the page, and she was greeted with a cartoon-like image of a witch and wizard in mid sexual romp. The image seemed to be of the cartoon witch orgasming, and below that, was an image of a penis reaching climax, but remaining hard. A slight blush also came to Hermione's cheeks. She didn't have much experience with males and relationships other than friendship, but she had a feeling she knew more than Severus did.
Her relationship tally definitely wasn't very big. Hermione had her crush on Ron, of course, but nothing ever happened with that. He never acted on anything, and she decided that she loved him, but he was like her brother. The same went for Harry. There was Viktor in her fourth year. He'd asked her to be his date to the Yule ball. They hadn't done much more than had a few stolen kisses. They'd kept in contact with owls for a while, but lost touch; he was another one who wasn't much for intelligent conversation. There were a few Muggle boys from home, too. Nothing more than curling up together while watching a movie, or sitting together reading; maybe some hand holding and stolen kisses. She couldn't claim to have participated in any of the activities pictured on these two pages. She quickly turned the page, so she could stop watching that witch in the throes of passion. The next page wasn't much better. It was a potion used to enhance the sensitive feelings... down there. A deeper blush came to her face, and she found it hard to look Severus in the eye.
"I think it may be advisable to check the table of contents to see when this section ends. The potions only seem to be getting more inappropriate. It's a wonder this book wasn't from the Restricted Section." Hermione told him as she pushed the book back across the table.
Severus flipped to the back of the book. "It might just be from the Restricted Section; there's no place in the back to sign the book out." Severus decided to take this book with him. He wanted to do some reading, in the privacy of his bed curtains. He wanted a chance to carefully study this book. Besides, how will I be able to brew my hair care potions without the book?
Notes: I've gotten a chance to do some writing. I have the next chapter finished, and I'm working on chapter 6!
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27 Reviews | 6.41/10 Average
This is a wonderfull story, I realy like where this is going. And also very realistic in my opinion.
But... I don't know if you can change the words in this story, even though it is already 'published'. But I think that if you can, you might like too change the sequence of this following sentence:
"One of her steps seemed like three of his."
it makes more sence if HIS steps were three times larger then HERS. ;). It just 'pulled' me out of the story a bit. But it puled me out, wich meas I was IN! And that was most definitely the case. Now I will dive right back in, THANKS FOR WRITING THIS! KoenTje
Oh please do continue with this. I am enjoying it immensly :)
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
i've been trying to get back into this story and my muse doesn't seem to want to cooperate. i do intend to write more, but i'm really not sure when it will happen. sorry for the wait.
Please do continue your story! You have it set up so that so many interesting things could happen. I'd like to see Sev/Hermione develop more, I'd like to see some interaction with the Marauders, and I'd like to see something happening with Voldemort. Creative story so far~!
So funny . . . .The characters are a bit OOC, but it works. Really entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Hi Again there havn't been any updates in a while. And this is such a good story. When do you think there will anothere chapter?
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
i haven't thought about this story in ages. perhaps i'll re read it sometime soon and see if i get inspiration that goes along with what i was doing previously. thank you so much in your interest! ended up reading a bunch of reviews tonight and i'm pleased to see how many nice things people have written!
Sence the title of this chapter is prologe does that mean the storie is almost over?...that would really bite...Ididn't notice its title the first time i read it that is why you are geting my review now...sorry it took so long.One more thing it is unrelated to the story.Are you planing on going into writing professionaly?
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
the title defaulted to that and i forgot to change it oops. i think i can wrangle a few more chapters out of this and no i never thought about going into writing professionally. but i'll take it as a compliment anyway. thanks!
Update!
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
well, since there was an angry mob to be had, i guess i'm going to have to get myself into a writing frenzy. i'll have an empty home and 2 days off next week which means i can be a productive little one.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
excellent.
we thought you would see it our way. lol
how was your Christmas?
Happy New Year.
Awwwww... That was really cute. Can't wait to read more.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
I'm glad you liked it! thanks for reading!
hahahaha. such a slytherin. hair care potions my booty! lol. Love it babe! keep it up!
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thanks for reading! more should be posted soon
Researching behind the curtains. Is that a new one?? lol.
great chapter. I was tickled to see an update. Something to read while I eat my breakfast.
Thank you.
Patty
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
I had legitimately meant studying behind the curtains, but that does make quite a nice innuendo. hehe. thanks for reading!
looks like your off to a wonderful start with this story. waiting for more.
p
ps that dumbledore - sometimes i wonder if he should have his own matchmaking service. lol
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
that man knows too much for his own good lol.
wonder why he left the other student stay?
good introduction. onto the story.
hee hee hee! wow. bloody brilliant.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thanks! the writing process seems to be progressing well so more should be posted soon! thanks for reading!
Hello! I'm just reviewing to tell you that you have great potential with this story. It is very unorthodox, but extremely entertaining as well. :) I can't wait to read more. I would have posted reviews on all the chapters, but I'm feeling extremely lazy, hee! and I have to work on a banner for a fellow Ravenclaw ... long story. So, with that said ... let me get to it! :D
Prologue - ****
I like how you've explained the reason for Hermione's change. Background is always lovely.
I know you mentioned that this was OOC, but I'm hoping that you will explain the reason for Dr. Granger's decline ... besides the death of his wife. Because I have read further in your story, I know that Hermione suspects that her father killed his wife. I'm sure that there is something in this! :) Hermione wouldn't have said it if there weren't. I can't wait to find out what his reasoning was.
Also, I was wondering what type of abuse Hermione is suffering. Is it general? Or limited to hitting... etc. Just a thought... :)
Uh... a bit of critique. (One of my favorite things to do). You really don't need to change this, really, it's simply my own, personal preference. You really have a gift for writing though, make no mistake. Just trying to help, :).
"Her wit was fully in tact, however, giving her a sharp tongue and sarcasm that could make Severus Snape a very proud man."
Well, so I lied. This does need to be changed, hee! I believe the "in tact" should be changed to "intact," one word. I don't think you're talking about a state of mind or action (tact) you're saying that she was 'intact.' Hehe, very confusing, sorry...
The other bit of con. crit. I had for that sentence was that it "WOULD make Severus Snape a very proud man." The way you have it, "could," it almost seems to me ... that Hermione's sense of sarcasm, if it ever reached Snape's ears, has the potential of making him proud. However, if you change it to 'would,' it seems like Snape is doing the action instead of Hermione. Ah, but that's just me being picky. Hee! :) You don't necessarily have to change it.
The Time-Turner - ****/
This chapter was very entertaining. I wonder if Sam is, in actuality, Minerva? The heavy Scottish accent got me thinking, hee! This bit here really supports the idea that Sam is actually Minerva: "...she had only known a grip like that to belong to Professor McGonagall herself." Am I wrong? Although, I suppose that if Tom Riddle, who wouldn't be known as Voldemort although I understand that you are using creative license :), is now a crooked politician, Minerva would also be out of school. *sigh* I don't know. I'm overanalyzing when I needn't be. This really is a great story. I'm just so passionate about things. tsk, tsk, tsk... moving on.
The only bit of con. crit. I have for you, though, is that Hermione's transition from contemplating the time-turner shifts rather quickly to the girls' dormitory. Perhaps if you seamed it together with a transitory paragraph?
The Headmaster's Office ****
I truly enjoyed your characterization of Headmaster Dippet. :) Very fun! The only bit of crit. I had was that the Hat seemed to place Hermione very quickly. However, as you explained the Hat's reasoning, I think it's completely suitable if you just want to leave it that way. :) Again, I'm overanalyzing.
Oh, by the way, I absolutely adored Severus's comment, "Take a picture, it'll last longer." Hee! Ha! Funny! I laughed so hard. Great comment. Snarky but not jaded yet. I hope Hermione can change this Snape for the better.
I loved the way in which you wrote of Hermione's first encounter with the Slytherin Common Room. The password was fantastic. Thank you for the clarification of it. :)
Slytherin - *****
I can see why this is your favorite chapter so far, it's my favorite, too. Really nice job on the tender beginnings of Severus and Hermione's budding relationship. I hope they become best of friends! What a laugh that will be. :)
Also, I can't wait to see the reaction of Hermione when she meets the Marauders and Lily. I do so hope that you find time to continue the story.
Although I have commented (excessively) on your wonderful story and con. crit-ted it to death, :P, please know that I'm only trying to be constructive and I truly enjoyed this. Well done!
~Julia~
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know how i can improve! i really do apprecaite it. I edited slightly taking your advice. i added a paragraph to time turner and i fixed the sev thing in the prologue like you suggested. i'm hopeful that the sorting hat will explain itself in future chapters, and i really like the suggestion that you made in regards to dad's history. perhaps thats something to get into at a later date.
i'm trying my best to continue writing, i got in a bit of a slump and couldn't find anything i really liked to continue on. i have the next chapter written, but i didn't really want to post it until i was a chapter ahead of myself. I'm sure that the marauders will make an appearance in the story at some point, but fair warning, they won't be shown in a good light at all.
Thank you so much for the constructive critisium, it gave me a lot to think about and perhaps some inspiration. now all i need is time to actually write...good thing i'm starting a second job in a few days. LOL
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Jen
I really like this so far. Please update soon!~Sarah
interesting chapter. i look forward to hermione as a slytherin
Um quick question... about Dumbledore... didn't he become Headmaster of Hogwarts the year Lupin, James, Sirius, and Snape became students? I thought that was how Lupin was allowed to attend Hogwarts while being a werewolf, that and the willow. ~scampers off to hp-lexicon to see if she is insane~ Very interesting story by the way! I have a special interest in SS/ HG's that start in his time. I like that you have decided to put Hermione in Slytherin... that makes it EXTRA fun!!! I hope you get the time for an update soon!~*~Selene~*~
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
true story about the timeline. i took my creative lisence and tweeked it to what i wanted it to be. that's the beauty of AU :)
thanks for reading/reviewing, i hope to write more soon.
If you've lost motivation, what can I say who have not had the chance to guess where the story is going? Judging by the title, Hermione is meant to become evil at some point. Once you reach that point, I might know what to tell you and, maybe, boost your motivation (or not).
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thanks for the kind words. It's currently more an issue of time than motivation. I work about 70 hours a week, and i don't think anyone really wants to write at one am, or even three am, knowing that they have to get up for 9 or 10 the next morning... I'm making it a goal to finish this story in a timely manner.
thank you for a new chapter. seems things are progressing for sev.
Interesting. I hope you find time to continue.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
i've been a writing fiend when i've had time. hopefully more will be posted in about a week!
Oooh... this story is cooking up to be really good. I'm bookmarking it so I don't miss what comes next.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
that's so awesome! that means a lot coming from you, seeing as you have to at least browse everything that gets submited to the site. Thanks!
Yes! At last they kiss! I'm really enjoying the story so far. I hope you update soon!