The Headmaster's Office
Chapter 3 of 8
muzicfan5To the headmaster?s office!
ReviewedThanks for my beta hp4freek! I can't remember if I put a disclaimer before now, but suffice it to say, I own precisely squat.
Chapter Two: The Headmaster's Office
Headmaster Armando Dippet sat behind his desk. There were portraits covering the walls of all of the past headmasters and mistresses. Some of them sat in their frames sleeping, or feigning sleep. Some chatted with their neighbours, discussing the latest gossip. There were also a few empty frames, the occupants having gone to visit another location they were linked to. The Headmaster had been staring at the door intently for a few minutes now; something was amiss in the castle. He was fairly certain that someone would be ambushing his office any minute now. The frames stirred a bit more, and Headmaster Dippet began a mental countdown. Ten... nine... eight... seven... six... five... four... three... two... The word 'one' had been cut off by an urgent knock on the door. With a wave of his wand, the door was opened to reveal Professor Dumbledore with a girl he didn't recognise. How curious. She looks to be about seventeen; surely she should have been in attendance for the past six to seven years.
"Professor, please, do come in. Who is this guest of yours?"
"My name is Miss Hermione Granger, sir."
"Miss Granger. Please, tell me why you have not attended classes here previously. You clearly possess magic."
"I have been to classes, sir. This is my sixth year of attending classes. There has just been a bit of a... mistake."
"I see. What kind of mistake would make everyone forget you?"
"An accident with a Time-Turner, sir. This isn't my timeline, you see."
"How did you come to own a Time-Turner? Those are held under strict control of the Ministry."
"I was given one by my Head of House in my third year. I was enrolled in every class available to me. The only way I could attend everything was with the aid of a Time-Turner."
"Why wasn't it returned at the end of term?"
Hermione blushed fiercely, but she didn't break eye contact with the Headmaster. "I didn't turn it in, despite rules and regulations. I know I should have, but I can't be persecuted for my mistakes at this point. After all, these wrongdoings won't take place for another fifteen years, or so."
"May I see your Time-Turner, Miss Granger?"
Hermione nodded and handed the instrument over the desk. Armando was lost in thought and examination for the next several minutes. The only noise was the occasional punctuation of his thoughts spoken aloud.
Mutters of "Excellent," "Interesting," and "Curious, very curious," were the only break of a mildly awkward silence. Hermione had known Professor Dumbledore, but that was his future self. She wasn't overly friendly with him, but she saw him at Order headquarters, and she knew a lot about him because of Harry. This Dumbledore didn't know a thing about her, though, and it felt odd to try to strike up a conversation with him.
There were wand movements now coming from the Headmaster's side of the desk. He had been performing charms on her Time-Turner, trying to spot a defect. He had yet to find a single one, though. There were several more minutes of silence as he looked over her Time-Turner.
"There isn't a blasted thing wrong with it!" Headmaster Dippet almost sounded disheartened by that fact. "It's in perfectly good working order."
"But, sir, how did I end up here then?"
"I think you willed yourself to this time. It's the only thing that makes sense to me. This Time-Turner hasn't been turned in about two and a half years, just like you said. Tell me; is there anything significant that you can think to have happened in your timeline in the year of 1977? Something you would want to change?"
Hermione thought; she thought very hard indeed. She tried to mentally picture Hogwarts: a History, but she couldn't remember anything that happened in this year. She shook her head as she spoke, "No, sir. Nothing of significance that I can recall."
"Well, I suppose you're going to have to attend classes like the other students until we can figure this out. We can't just send you back home again with the Time-Turner; you didn't arrive that way in the first place."
"Thank you, sir."
Professor Dumbledore took the opportunity to speak now. "Headmaster, Miss Granger had mentioned a desire to be resorted. She had been a Gryffindor in her timeline, but if you and the Sorting Hat are willing, then perhaps we should let her see if she still truly belongs in my House."
"Is this what you want Miss Granger; is this what you truly want?"
Very nervous about her decision, she didn't trust her own voice; Hermione could only nod in response.
A hat covered Hermione's head; it dropped to cover her ears and eyes. She heard the buzz of a voice in her ear. "Very interesting. Very interesting indeed. I see during your first sorting I wanted to put you into Ravenclaw. Very bright, very brave, too. That's no doubt why I placed you in Gryffindor in the first place."
How did you know that? Hermione thought desperately
"It's all in here, you know. I can see into the deepest parts of your mind. This is interesting; your memory of sorting didn't make mention of such a need for power, such a drive you have. A drive to prove yourself, to fit in. You could be great. I see all the power you possess."
What will it be then?
"That's an easy one. It'll be... Slytherin!" The last word was called out clearly to everyone in the room. Hermione's ears had a dull pain in them. Really, I don't think he realises just how much that hurts when he yells out your House.
Dumbledore hid a smile behind his long beard. There was an unmistakable twinkle in his eye as he recalled his thoughts about a certain Slytherin having such similar personality traits. "Shall I show you to your new common room then, Miss Granger? It's nearly curfew."
Hermione nodded and tried to smile at the two professors. "Thank you, both of you, for all of your help. I just hope we can figure out how to send me to my own time. I'd like to think my friends will miss me, but I'm pretty sure that I'm still there." She sighed as both teachers looked at her a little confused. "Well, I think that when you use the Time-Turner, it doesn't make you disappear. It makes you appear in the time you turned to, but you're still moving about in the time you came from. You have to make sure you're not seen in the past. That leads me to believe that you continue moving in the present, you just move twice in the past. I think you could actually make yourself appear multiple times at the same time, by time turning at the same point back to the same time. The danger with that, of course, would be a higher risk of self-exposure. It's dangerous enough having two of you in one time period. The risk of seeing yourself would only increase exponentially with every new being that appeared."
"That's an interesting theory, Miss Granger." Headmaster Dippet pondered the possibility. "Professor, did you want to walk Miss Granger to her new common room?"
"Certainly, sir." Hermione stood up, following behind Professor Dumbledore.
~~~
Hermione was standing in front of an archway that didn't seem any different from the rest of the hallway, but that was where Professor Dumbledore had left her. What was that password? Hermione remembered and spoke the password aloud.
"Hypsiglena Torquata." The stone archway opened and revealed a comfortable looking common room. Though, it was currently mostly desolate. She could see big couches that were made of dark leather; a warm fire was roaring in the fireplace, which cast shadows throughout the room. She walked into the room and scanned over her new surroundings. The couches looked comfortable, but they weren't overstuffed like Gryffindor. There were tables to do homework on in the far corner of the room. There were smaller armchairs sprinkled throughout the room, as well as a few small circles of chairs. None of the students had looked up when she entered, which was strange for her. In Gryffindor, everyone looked up when a new face walked into the room, even if they didn't greet you.
Hermione saw a boy sitting by himself in the corner of the room, by the homework tables. He was bent over a book, reading with a concentrated look on his face. He piqued her curiosity. He seemed vaguely familiar, though he really shouldn't. She was nineteen years in the past; she didn't know any Slytherins, let alone a Slytherin that is nearly twenty years her senior.
He glanced up at her, feeling like he was being stared at. "Take a picture, it'll last longer."
Hermione was broken out of her thoughts. "I'm sorry; I hadn't realised I was staring."
He sneered at her, which also seemed familiar. I'm here, possibly for eternity; I'll have plenty of time to get to know him. "I'm a bit tired; can you direct me to the girls' dormitory?"
"Down the hall, take a left up the stairs. Find your year on a sign on the door." He gave his instructions with a cold air; she smiled at him and headed towards the rooms. I hope they gave me a bed. I really hope they left some pyjamas or something I could sleep in. The only things I have here are the dirty robes and the school uniform I'm wearing. They aren't even the right colour for my House now. She held her tie in her hands, looking at it after she had taken it from around her neck. It changed colours? How the...
Hermione was too tired to think about it any longer. She picked a bed that was empty and collapsed onto it, exhausted.
Note: The password is the scientific name of the "Night Snake." I know its native to Colorado, I'm not sure about anywhere else.
This story is going to be slower than my last one. It's a work in progress and I actually have things to do during the day besides sit around and read and write. Silly work, getting in the way of things... Actually having roommates to entertain me seems to be detrimental to writing too.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Evil Hermione
27 Reviews | 6.41/10 Average
This is a wonderfull story, I realy like where this is going. And also very realistic in my opinion.
But... I don't know if you can change the words in this story, even though it is already 'published'. But I think that if you can, you might like too change the sequence of this following sentence:
"One of her steps seemed like three of his."
it makes more sence if HIS steps were three times larger then HERS. ;). It just 'pulled' me out of the story a bit. But it puled me out, wich meas I was IN! And that was most definitely the case. Now I will dive right back in, THANKS FOR WRITING THIS! KoenTje
Oh please do continue with this. I am enjoying it immensly :)
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
i've been trying to get back into this story and my muse doesn't seem to want to cooperate. i do intend to write more, but i'm really not sure when it will happen. sorry for the wait.
Please do continue your story! You have it set up so that so many interesting things could happen. I'd like to see Sev/Hermione develop more, I'd like to see some interaction with the Marauders, and I'd like to see something happening with Voldemort. Creative story so far~!
So funny . . . .The characters are a bit OOC, but it works. Really entertaining. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Hi Again there havn't been any updates in a while. And this is such a good story. When do you think there will anothere chapter?
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
i haven't thought about this story in ages. perhaps i'll re read it sometime soon and see if i get inspiration that goes along with what i was doing previously. thank you so much in your interest! ended up reading a bunch of reviews tonight and i'm pleased to see how many nice things people have written!
Sence the title of this chapter is prologe does that mean the storie is almost over?...that would really bite...Ididn't notice its title the first time i read it that is why you are geting my review now...sorry it took so long.One more thing it is unrelated to the story.Are you planing on going into writing professionaly?
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
the title defaulted to that and i forgot to change it oops. i think i can wrangle a few more chapters out of this and no i never thought about going into writing professionally. but i'll take it as a compliment anyway. thanks!
Update!
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
well, since there was an angry mob to be had, i guess i'm going to have to get myself into a writing frenzy. i'll have an empty home and 2 days off next week which means i can be a productive little one.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
excellent.
we thought you would see it our way. lol
how was your Christmas?
Happy New Year.
Awwwww... That was really cute. Can't wait to read more.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
I'm glad you liked it! thanks for reading!
hahahaha. such a slytherin. hair care potions my booty! lol. Love it babe! keep it up!
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thanks for reading! more should be posted soon
Researching behind the curtains. Is that a new one?? lol.
great chapter. I was tickled to see an update. Something to read while I eat my breakfast.
Thank you.
Patty
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
I had legitimately meant studying behind the curtains, but that does make quite a nice innuendo. hehe. thanks for reading!
looks like your off to a wonderful start with this story. waiting for more.
p
ps that dumbledore - sometimes i wonder if he should have his own matchmaking service. lol
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
that man knows too much for his own good lol.
wonder why he left the other student stay?
good introduction. onto the story.
hee hee hee! wow. bloody brilliant.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thanks! the writing process seems to be progressing well so more should be posted soon! thanks for reading!
Hello! I'm just reviewing to tell you that you have great potential with this story. It is very unorthodox, but extremely entertaining as well. :) I can't wait to read more. I would have posted reviews on all the chapters, but I'm feeling extremely lazy, hee! and I have to work on a banner for a fellow Ravenclaw ... long story. So, with that said ... let me get to it! :D
Prologue - ****
I like how you've explained the reason for Hermione's change. Background is always lovely.
I know you mentioned that this was OOC, but I'm hoping that you will explain the reason for Dr. Granger's decline ... besides the death of his wife. Because I have read further in your story, I know that Hermione suspects that her father killed his wife. I'm sure that there is something in this! :) Hermione wouldn't have said it if there weren't. I can't wait to find out what his reasoning was.
Also, I was wondering what type of abuse Hermione is suffering. Is it general? Or limited to hitting... etc. Just a thought... :)
Uh... a bit of critique. (One of my favorite things to do). You really don't need to change this, really, it's simply my own, personal preference. You really have a gift for writing though, make no mistake. Just trying to help, :).
"Her wit was fully in tact, however, giving her a sharp tongue and sarcasm that could make Severus Snape a very proud man."
Well, so I lied. This does need to be changed, hee! I believe the "in tact" should be changed to "intact," one word. I don't think you're talking about a state of mind or action (tact) you're saying that she was 'intact.' Hehe, very confusing, sorry...
The other bit of con. crit. I had for that sentence was that it "WOULD make Severus Snape a very proud man." The way you have it, "could," it almost seems to me ... that Hermione's sense of sarcasm, if it ever reached Snape's ears, has the potential of making him proud. However, if you change it to 'would,' it seems like Snape is doing the action instead of Hermione. Ah, but that's just me being picky. Hee! :) You don't necessarily have to change it.
The Time-Turner - ****/
This chapter was very entertaining. I wonder if Sam is, in actuality, Minerva? The heavy Scottish accent got me thinking, hee! This bit here really supports the idea that Sam is actually Minerva: "...she had only known a grip like that to belong to Professor McGonagall herself." Am I wrong? Although, I suppose that if Tom Riddle, who wouldn't be known as Voldemort although I understand that you are using creative license :), is now a crooked politician, Minerva would also be out of school. *sigh* I don't know. I'm overanalyzing when I needn't be. This really is a great story. I'm just so passionate about things. tsk, tsk, tsk... moving on.
The only bit of con. crit. I have for you, though, is that Hermione's transition from contemplating the time-turner shifts rather quickly to the girls' dormitory. Perhaps if you seamed it together with a transitory paragraph?
The Headmaster's Office ****
I truly enjoyed your characterization of Headmaster Dippet. :) Very fun! The only bit of crit. I had was that the Hat seemed to place Hermione very quickly. However, as you explained the Hat's reasoning, I think it's completely suitable if you just want to leave it that way. :) Again, I'm overanalyzing.
Oh, by the way, I absolutely adored Severus's comment, "Take a picture, it'll last longer." Hee! Ha! Funny! I laughed so hard. Great comment. Snarky but not jaded yet. I hope Hermione can change this Snape for the better.
I loved the way in which you wrote of Hermione's first encounter with the Slytherin Common Room. The password was fantastic. Thank you for the clarification of it. :)
Slytherin - *****
I can see why this is your favorite chapter so far, it's my favorite, too. Really nice job on the tender beginnings of Severus and Hermione's budding relationship. I hope they become best of friends! What a laugh that will be. :)
Also, I can't wait to see the reaction of Hermione when she meets the Marauders and Lily. I do so hope that you find time to continue the story.
Although I have commented (excessively) on your wonderful story and con. crit-ted it to death, :P, please know that I'm only trying to be constructive and I truly enjoyed this. Well done!
~Julia~
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know how i can improve! i really do apprecaite it. I edited slightly taking your advice. i added a paragraph to time turner and i fixed the sev thing in the prologue like you suggested. i'm hopeful that the sorting hat will explain itself in future chapters, and i really like the suggestion that you made in regards to dad's history. perhaps thats something to get into at a later date.
i'm trying my best to continue writing, i got in a bit of a slump and couldn't find anything i really liked to continue on. i have the next chapter written, but i didn't really want to post it until i was a chapter ahead of myself. I'm sure that the marauders will make an appearance in the story at some point, but fair warning, they won't be shown in a good light at all.
Thank you so much for the constructive critisium, it gave me a lot to think about and perhaps some inspiration. now all i need is time to actually write...good thing i'm starting a second job in a few days. LOL
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Jen
I really like this so far. Please update soon!~Sarah
interesting chapter. i look forward to hermione as a slytherin
Um quick question... about Dumbledore... didn't he become Headmaster of Hogwarts the year Lupin, James, Sirius, and Snape became students? I thought that was how Lupin was allowed to attend Hogwarts while being a werewolf, that and the willow. ~scampers off to hp-lexicon to see if she is insane~ Very interesting story by the way! I have a special interest in SS/ HG's that start in his time. I like that you have decided to put Hermione in Slytherin... that makes it EXTRA fun!!! I hope you get the time for an update soon!~*~Selene~*~
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
true story about the timeline. i took my creative lisence and tweeked it to what i wanted it to be. that's the beauty of AU :)
thanks for reading/reviewing, i hope to write more soon.
If you've lost motivation, what can I say who have not had the chance to guess where the story is going? Judging by the title, Hermione is meant to become evil at some point. Once you reach that point, I might know what to tell you and, maybe, boost your motivation (or not).
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
Thanks for the kind words. It's currently more an issue of time than motivation. I work about 70 hours a week, and i don't think anyone really wants to write at one am, or even three am, knowing that they have to get up for 9 or 10 the next morning... I'm making it a goal to finish this story in a timely manner.
thank you for a new chapter. seems things are progressing for sev.
Interesting. I hope you find time to continue.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
i've been a writing fiend when i've had time. hopefully more will be posted in about a week!
Oooh... this story is cooking up to be really good. I'm bookmarking it so I don't miss what comes next.
Response from muzicfan5 (Author of Evil Hermione)
that's so awesome! that means a lot coming from you, seeing as you have to at least browse everything that gets submited to the site. Thanks!
Yes! At last they kiss! I'm really enjoying the story so far. I hope you update soon!