Wow.  I don't think I really want to know of the reaction to this.  I love all the different mysteries you weave into the story: the weird bond thing, the lack of maternal instincts, etc.

Anyway, it's great so far!

If this is HBP compliant, shouldn't Snape be teaching Defence Against the Dark Arts, instead of Potions?

Granted, I much prefer him as a Potions instructor *grins*

Ooh, not a good idea, Hermione!  O.oI'm loving this story, I can't wait to see what happens next!  Please update soon!

Hello Melusin  i really like your story, and can not wait to see how hermione is going to break free from this life, it really amaze me how you could focus on this 2 characters and put is on like this, i do think that severus if given some power will take it all and give little, not becasue he is bad, but because he is a manipulative bastard, i hope you can update soon

Wow. Lovely. Ok, "like Scotland, only warmer?" That's funny. I loved the first chapter "Mum meee!" That was really memorable. I am curious about the distance between Hermione and her children, I am guessing there is a interesting riddle to that issue. Everything is written well, is lots of fun, and it moves well. I look forward to reading the next chapters. ^ hugs ^

I love this fic!  It has grabbed me and reeled me in like a huge fish.  The mystery and intrigue are excellent and the tantalising approach is fantastic! All I need now is MORE, MORE, MORE! *humbly offers a dozen sugar quills and a pound of lemon sherbets to your muse* Blessings!

Interesting story.  I find the jumping back and forth in time to be a little confusing though.  A minor point, FYI:  Dumbledore did not Stun Harry when they were atop the Astronomy Tower-he immobilized him with Petrificus Totalis.

I've just caught up and am wondering what's wrong with her? Why can she not feel anything for her kids? Only for Snape? At least she's starting to think about Snape being on the good side and Ron's helping.

Mmmmm, delicous.

I hope one day you get some time to finish this story, I'm really curious as to what will happen and if severus will ever find out that he didn't need the binding rings and that he's royallyed messed everything up. I know there is no one else for either of them but I don't think if she knew she'd stand for any of that.

I love your Severus. He does not want to be hero-worshipped or rewarded for things that aren't truly *him* but are instead the result of his fame. This is exactly how I see Severus postwar.

 The snowglobe present was beautiful!

 There is so much going on here! Earlier in the story, I think I remember that Hermione had wanted to be a Curse-Breaker but never did and is now feeling restless. I wonder what is will be that keeps her from going? Is it as sacrifice for Severus? Probably, I think. Although she might try to convince herself that it's what she wants too.

Well their relationship certainly survived Hermione's appalling attempt to order Snape around (for his own good, of course!). They seem to be okay now, for the most part anyway. Except for the next chapter being called *The Road To Hell Part 2*!

Dun! Dun! DUN! 

Well! I certainly wonder just what the implications are!

Minerva surprised me by being more concerned about Snape's well-being and his heart than she was about the relationship itself. Pleasantly surprised. I'm glad Severus has a friend in Minerva!

Excellent story! You've had me reading the whole lot all day, i missed my lecture because of it!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

The sex and the feelings between them were both so powerful and amazing!

Wow! I am in awe of your story-telling ability. I love how real Severus' emotions are. I can easily see him feeling the way he does postwar and Hermione responding the way she is. "Severus had kept them safe all these years, after all; now it was her turn to take care of him." Good stuff. I liked the Mirror Severus thing. Amusing and so very useful. I wonder if he still uses it to spy on is family in the present day?

I just started reading this story or I certainly would have reviewed earlier.? [Seems the least I can do when I enjoy something that someone has put so much hard work into!]? I'm horrible at suspense, though, so hope you'll post more soon.? I think you've done some very clever things with the character development and also some very nice portrayals of a number of individuals.? I actually like your Ron -- he mostly annoys me in the Rowling books.? Having Harry work through his hatred of Snape was done well.? I'm sure you already have the end in mind, but regardless, I'll put in my plea for a happy ending ... which to me means Severus and Hermione together and happy.? Pretty please?? Although they're not in a good place now, I'm sure you can salvage it all quite nicely.? Pretty please with sugar on top?? OK, I'll stop begging now.? But thanks for the good story and all your work!

i love the idea of being in the other's mind during sex. how intimate! <3

Wow, this is wonderfully dark.

albus is wack!!!

Severus is such a deep and complex person. Thanks for exploring his past and describing how it influenced him.

::cries for Ron::  That was an intense scene. I like the way you envisioned the final battle and the way Love was used to defeat Voldemort. Great writing!

It looks like I'm not the only one who thinks meditation practice would make mastering Occlumency easier That rocks! I like how Harry was able to use it to connect with the Otherworld. Hmmm Ron/Hermione. I understand it, but I am so curious about what will happen. I know he dies, and Hermione remembers him fondly. I wonder if Severus discovers their relationship before he and Hermione recommence their own? Good thing I found this story so late in the game, and all I have to do is keep reading!

I was very happy to see an update -- I'd just about given up. Still hoping for the Severus-and-Hermione-happy-together ending, though!

Broom sex! YES!