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The Iago Complex
Proulxes129 Reviews | 5.41/10 (129 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )
What happens when a new relationship is threatened? A story for HBAR, combining politics, passion and peacock shit.
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Reviews for The Iago Complex
"Drink Me, Professor" - I'm loving this! And I loved that little reflection to AiW. It was the perfect way to hint these two are abound to go down the rabbit hole!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Ha! Thank you for taking the time to review, Helen Rickman! I'm glad that this chapter amused you! Not so sure about the darker direction this story took as it grew... but I did enjoy getting the dancing Lucius in!Pxx
Chilling, Proulxes. So glad to see more of your writing!
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Cheers,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! I really appreciated your bombing run this morning! I am working on the next story (much more in the style of Anima Mea then these shorter fics). It's coming along slowly, but I hope people will be patient as I will start posting very soon but there are going to be gaps between chapters! Best wishes, Pxx
Ooooooh. Very evil, Draco.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Oh yes. This time around, I fancied a truly nasty Draco - but he has good reason for it. Thank you for your review! Pxx
Really well written, thank you for sharing! :D
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Thank you,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
- I really appreciate you taking hte time to get in touch. Best wishes, Pxx
I'm sorry I've been slow to review! I'm very much enjoying this story, I've been hooked since the beginning. Thank goodness for Nott, finally expressing some of the hidden truths that have been hinted at! How will they get themselves out of this one? Will Severus be able to find some kind of resistance? Will Hermione save him? Will Nott help? I feel a bit sorry for Lucius, as he seems to have been manipulated rather neatly by Draco, which you set up and made clear from the beginning, but because Lucius' character upholds a kind of belief in his own power--despite everything--I can feel his own sense of losing control over what it was he really wanted.
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Hi there,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! Thank you for your review! You have hit a number of nails right on the head in your comments. I see Lucius essentially as you do - someone so used to exercising power that when it is taken away, really cannot function anymore. Draco is more sinister in this tale - and I very much enjoyed playing about with Nott. We don't know that much about Theodore, and so I was able to exploit that to my advantage. I did want you to get the sense of losing control, from a number of the characters, and hope that you enjoy the final installment on New Year's Day! Best wishes, Pxx
Oh and yeah, Severus, SNAP out of it!!!!!
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Tee hee!! Yeah, come ON Severus!! Pxx
Can't wait for the conclusion on New Year's Day...The suspense is killing meeeeee!!!!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Count with me... 48... 47... 46.... lol. Thanks for your review!! Pxx
Draco obviously has some sort of revenge planned out. I think Theodore knows everything that's going on, and I think Severus will push through Iago, once he sees Hermione. He was already starting to pull through in this chapter, until Draco fed him another strawberry. Whether or not Severus will be in time to save the day, is a different matter. But I'm sitting on pins and needles.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I hope the final chapter lives up to your expectations,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
!! Thank you for taking the time to write to me. The end is nigh!!! Pxx
Sooo... Iago is a potion... and allows the user to manipulate anyone they can trick into ingesting it? And this is the way Draco intends to exact retribution from Severus for not defending him at trial... And Theo and Draco were an item until Lucius busted up the happy couple? That would have to be before they graduated from Hogwarts, wouldn't it?"Severus and Draco had turned around." OMG! Did both Draco and Severus hear Theo's statement that he and Draco had been a couple, and that Draco had developed the Iago Potion? Noooo, Hermione had cast the Muffliato Charm.I cannot imagine how you're going to conclude this story, but I hope Hermione and Severus will have the opportunity to get their poop in a group and kiss and make up. I can't wait for New Year's Day!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
HI braye! Lovely to hear from you again! I think you do know how I'm going to resolve it... ;) ... given that you guessed most of the story in one of your first reviews!!! Lol!! As you know I do love a good HEA.., so long as there is a little bit of angst and vulnerability on the way.... Best wishes, Pxx
One, two--three days until the New Year and can't wait for the next chapter!!! Enjoying the suspense and tension, and am eagerly waiting in *anticipation* But I must side with those who hope the Malfoys don't get away with their despicable plotting too easily... I know Hermione can be quite juidicious, but in the case, nah... let 'em have it (yes, I'm in a feisty mood this evening--hehe!)! xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi nag! I am so pleased you are enjoying the suspense in this story - it has driven me crazy to place our heroes in such a constrained position and keep things so tightly controlled... but I hope that the final chapter will offer a final showdown that is worthy, logical, and satisfying. Pxx
Yikes. Just... yikes. Now that Lucius' and Draco's motivations have (mostly) been exposed, I'm anxious to learn how Theodore figures into the equation.Well done, P!hm88
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Hello, hm88!! Ahhh - the answers are there, and they are coming fast! Shall Severus find a way to resist Iago? Will Hermione let rip at Wimbledon and blow the Statute of Secrecy right out of the water? Will Cliff Richard return and save the day? THANK YOU so much for reviewing! Pxx
All this for an endorsement? Not likely in the mood Hermione's in. I think Nott has feelings for Draco, which would explain why he reacted the way he did in the flashback. I wonder if Draco has feelings for Severus, which is what I thought from the same scene. I hope Severus makes the right choice. I'm surprised Hermione hasn't sent out those sparks of hers yet.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I'm not sure that Severus can do much at the moment - because of the power that Draco is exerting over him... will Hermione realise what is going on, and what can she do about it without risking blowing the Statute of Secrecy out of Centre Court.... the story is now complete and I'll post the penultimate chapter on Sunday, with the final one on New Year's Eve - and all the questions will be answered... THANK YOU so much for taking the time to review again! Best wishes, Pxx
When Lucius announced that they were about to tee off I cracked up. He really has outdone himself in wrangling an invitation to Wimbledon! I had no idea Draco has been in love with Severus. So I guess Lucius is in love with Narcissa, and Narcissa is really in love with Luciuc, too. Severus and Hermione are really in love with each other. Is Theo is in love with Draco, or with Hermione? How long will it take Hermione to decide to rescue Severus? "Miss— Professor Granger... I want... to beg for your forgiveness... And ask for your endorsement."If Hermione is willing to sponsor Lucius' return to polite Wizarding society, perhaps he will return the favor and help her free Severus. Perhaps...Hope you had a wonderful Christmas.Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
It was lovely, thank you, Beth - and I finished this story too which was an added bonus! Mmmm. I'm not sure our Slytherin anti-heroes embrace the idea of 'love' in quite the same way as we might! The next two chapters will be up soon. I do hope you had a great Christmas - and thank you as ever for the review!! Pxx
Her endorsement? Oooh, can't wait for Hermione's response! And can't wait for things to explode, off the court that is--or for *someone* to help Severus escape the *paws*, clutches, of Draco and what he may have planned... I'll never look at strawberries the same again--Can't wait for more!xx
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Hello nag!! Hope you had a lovely Christmas. The end is nigh -- and Severus will face a terrible choice. Da da da duuuuuuuummmmmm! Pxx
Oooh, okay, I'm officially in a tizzy about Narcissa, and Nott--but thank Merlin, Hermione is registering that Severus is not himself... Ooooh, please, please, please--forget Christmas and get the next chapter posted as soon as possible--lol! Seriously-as soon as possible! Eagerly awaiting more!xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
You have your wish, nag!! The next chapter is now posted.. and I have also (thanks to the holidays) completely finished it! The final two chapters are now awaiting the attentions of the fabulous Clairvoyant. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Pxx
The subtle menacing air threatening to be unleashed by Lucius on Hermione is palpable, as is the dubious (?) reuniting of mother and son in the Narcissa and Draco scene--and Severus! What else has Draco done and how long will the effects last, and does Narcissa have any buried loyalty to Severus to help him out in a time of need? Must read on! Thank you for a thrilling, plot-thickening chapter--can't wait for things to *explode*--one way or another!:-D
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Aaaahhh, yes... Narcissa will survive, no doubt. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the chapter. This story has been a tough one to write because I have made myself stick to fewer than 2,000 words per chapter.... ;) Pxx
Oh, P... What on earth do you have in store for our heroes?Holding my breath in anticipation--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Bad things. Baaad things...! But you know me... there will be a resolution... and some redemption... and the rest would be telling! More coming soon! Pxx
I do think Nott knows whats going on...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
*whispers* I think he does too!! Pxx
I must admit that I am completely bewildered by the turns this story takes, besides being intrigued. I am looking forward to more from Severus, Lucius and even Cliff Richard...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Answers are on the way, believe me! Each Slytherin has his or her own agenda and the climax of the story sees all of them laid bare. Thank you so much for sticking with me on this tricky, tricky tale....! Pxx
This was really exciting.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Thank you! More to come soon! Pxx
Ah ha! Hermione is finally reaching the limit of her tolerance for BS and is starting to issue her own demands: "Stop messing me around, and answer the bloody question, you supercilious cow!" she hissed in the woman's ear. "Where the hell is Severus? What have you done with my– him?" This cracked me up.I'm glad that Severus realizes that he has been drugged, but I can't imagine what he can do to free himself from Draco's influence... so I think it's going to fall on Hermione's shoulders to "kick a little arse." What was Lucius about to say he wanted from Hermione. Why does touching her wrist seem to have a numbing/calming effect on her... or at least momentarily divert her attention?What does Theo know that no one else seems to be aware of? It seems that Draco is driving the behavior of everyone of interest here, and I hope Hermione snaps out of her "wondering phase" and starts "kicking arse." I'm really looking forward to the next update!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi Beth! It's on its way - chapter 11 will take a few days to beat into shape.. and we are definitely on the spiral towards the climax of the tale. With your customary insight you are picking up the clues in the chapter....! Pxx
I'm glad Severus realizes he's drugged, and now Hermione knows something's not right. Was it me, or did Theodore try to signal Hermione about the situation. It seemed that he was going to tell her what's happening. I hope she can get to Severus before anything else goes on. The implied Draco/Severus is sort of skeeving me out a bit.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Sorry for the skeeve -- but thank you so much for letting me know what you think. We are nearing the endgame... And yes, do keep an eye on Nott. Two Slytherin's have betrayed their intentions... Two to go. And when will Hermione realise what is happening to Severus? Pxx
How will he do it, indeed?There is so much more going on here than meets the eye. Looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds.Thank you for posting--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Mmmmm! There are plots within plots here... Draco wants something just as his parents do... And I wonder what Theodore Nott is up to...? Thank you so much for sticking with me over this story... It's a bit of a departure for me, and I do love a challenge! Pxx
Draco is really, really creeping me out.
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*Twiddles imaginary moustache and giggles evilly*.... I do live an evil Draco....! Pxx