Once again I have no bloody idea what is going on. That's why I enjoy your stories so much. Unpredictable and fabulous. Keep 'em coming!

Oooh, dark intrigue... wonderful! You have captured Draco's maniacal intentions chillingly well *shuddering* He had better have throrough supply of the pyscho-narcotic substance in hand because if and when Severus will be aware of what's happened and act against it--ufff! Even Azkaban won't save him... Can't wait for more! Imperius curse placed on real life to let Pxs write, write, write!

Ooooh yes, the plot thickens! *shudders* What has Draco done to poor Severus? And what has Lulu in mind for our heroine? And when and how and with what will Hermione connect that 'curiously burning expression' in Severus' eyes? Reading on, you minx-sphinx storyteller! Great chapter *and yes, I have to write it again, you write Slytherins so well--hehe!*

Loved the dream sequence *yum*! It has coated everything with a creeping, seeping mist of mystery *double yum*! Nott is a dubious one, isn't he? Regardless, I enjoyed this scene between him and Hermione--it almost makes me trust him... howver didn't our dearest Lucius & Draco refer to him earlier... so... Wimbledon or no Wimbledon, Hermione has her wand, right?;-) Aww, poor Severus, Pomona is enjoying herself almost too much at his expense--hehe! Go, Severus, go! Flee thee to Wimbledon! Make haste!xxx

I must say, you've written this scene with Narcissa and her personal trainer coming out of the shower so vividly and effortlessly it makes me think of the ol' writer's motto 'write what you know' *evil cackling* Seriously, I enjoyed Hermione, Ginny & little Lily just as thoroughly and the set up of what's to come. Yes, you are really giving us a new treat with this story and the fast-paced scene-changing dynamics in each chapter--you get my heart thumping with *anticipation*. Wonderful work! Looking forward to more and more of this delightful whirlwind tale!

Well, you've done it again. I can hardly wait for updates! This Draco is so icky. Brilliant!

This IS getting darker!  When Draco took out the vial of "sugar" to put on the strawberries, I immediately thought of the Sleeping Draught Severus had taken the night before.  Could Draco have somehow put the foolproof compulsion drug in the draught?  No, not likely... but how could he have gotten the drug into something Severus would eat or drink?  So, I went back a few chapters and skimmed for clues, and what I found makes me wonder if Draco and Nott aren't working together–each for his own reasons.  If Draco hadn't put the drug into the Sleeping Draught, then....... could Theo have put it in the sugar he passed to Severus at breakfast on the morning after Snape and Granger's second night together (in as many nights)?  It's possible.  I think. Oh, yeah.  What is it with the scar on Hermione's forearm and Severus' scar on his neck?  Evey time either of them think of the Malfoys, they rub their scars like they're itching or hurting?This chapter is chock full of clues!  However– as usual there are so many possibilities that I cannot think I have even a small chance of guessing correctly.  More clues, please.  Beth

Ewww!!! So that's what Draco has in store for Severus. Poor Hermione! I wonder who's all involved in this scheme. I'm hoping Severus is able to either fight it, or find a cure. No wonder Lucius wanted Hermione with him so bad. I'm thinking he's working with Draco, and they both knew that if Severus was with Hermione, he wouldn't have left her side. I hope Nott isn't a part of this. But if he knows about it, I hope he can help Severus.

discreet was spelt wrongly as discrete three times in your story. but a very original piece!

That was a dark twist!

Noooooo!  That didn't answer any questions!  I had originally thought that it wasn't too strange that the Malfoys invited Severus to join them.  But, now after that trial business ... who knows.  We don't know if what Severus said landed Draco in Azkaban, or if he was put there regardless of Severus' testimony.  If it is the former, this could be ugly.  I at least know the prompt for the story, and still, I have no idea what is going to happen.  Which-although it is killing me to not know where this goes- is a sign of a well written story.  You job, you!

So, who are you taking with you?"   Hermione sighed.  "Theodore Nott."   "I thought Snape was taking Nott!" Ginny sat backwards in surprise.   There was a short, embarrassed pause.  "As soon as Severus left the room, I Floo-called Theodore and invited him before Severus could."If that isn't the most Slytherin thing she could have done, I don't know what is, lol.  Can't wait to see the fallout from that move!She wondered what Lucius was up to... And a delicious thrill coursed through her at that thought.So she isn't as over Lucius as we might have thought.  I don't know if this makes things easier or more complicated.  Time will tell."But... but... It's just sitting there...!"     Narcissa rolled her eyes in some irritation.  "Well, of course it's just sitting there, you foolish man.  It's waiting to be paid." I love how she says this as if it is the most obvious thing in the world to a Muggle!And what is so clever about her boy?!  Moving on quickly ...

Oh, Proulxes, I hope you aren't cursing me, as you've written me this lovely story, and I am just now getting around to reading it.  Real life has thrown me some serious curveballs in the last month or so.  I didn't realize how long I've been away until I see that there are three chapters for me to enjoy.  But still, I am a bit glad that there are three stacked up.  No cliffhangers for this lady ... for a couple chapters anyway.Poor Severus, he is just so ... Severus.  All good intentions with a mouth full of feet.  What was he thinking suggesting that he take Nott instead of Hermione?! Although in fairness, she was the one who asked to keep things under wraps, wasn't she?I loved the scene at breakfast where he was being interrogated by his colleagues, but he was keeping his cool and sort of holding his own, until Hermione breezed in and spoiled it.Snape fought the temptation to roll his eyes and groan. Gryffindors. She might as well have made an announcement to the whole bloody Hall.  HeeHee!But, I'm with Hermione.  Why would the Malfoy's suddenly invite her to an event?  Wimbledon, of all things.  I'm sure it has nothing to do with Narcissa ...

This tale has more twists and turns than a dog's hind leg!  I can't get rid of the thought that Severus' dream hints at future travails for our secret lovers... Was Draco sent to Azkaban in spite of or because of what Severus said from the witness stand?I'm glad that Pomona ran into Severus in the Entrance Hall.  At least now he knows that they tried to wake him."A purple and green ticket rested beside an empty vial of Sleeping Draught on the bedside table, his name inscribed upon it in Lucius' insouciant scrawl."  Does this mean Lucius' insouciant scrawl was on the tickets or on the empty vial? Or both?A nifty mystery you're giving us!  I love it.Beth

Well, that explains why Severus didn't answer the door for Hermione. Although, if he simply bucked up, and went to her room, then this whole mess could've been avoided. I'm glad he's finally realized he misunderstood Hermione's reluctance to be more open in their relationship. Of course, it seems that she's misunderstanding things herself. I think Theodore's up to something, and it definitely involves Draco.

Intriguing chapter - there seems to be a lot more plotting going on. And what's up with Severus dream?

It seems Narcissa has got over her infatuation quickly. Perhaps there is hope for her and Lucius yet?Also I want to give both Hermione and Severus a good kick right now for making all those assumptions about each other.And what are Draco and Nott up to?I'm enjoying this so much! Looking forward to the next chapter!

I love this delightfully awkward morning after, and I'm glad about the "this" between them.

Very intriguing start. I love the glance at the Malfoys here ,and do I spot the beginning of some scheming?

Where Hermione is concerned, Severus is just opening his mouth to change feet. 

Boyfriend? The Horror! that's what the little snots have, and moon over, and pass notes to. Oh Severus, how the mighty have fallen.

Stars and garters!  I want to sit Hermione and Severus in front of a Pensieve, put their memories in it, and show them a rerun of all the things they've said to each other.  And done with each other.  It made me happy to see that Narcissa's and Lucius' broken marriage is not a fait accompli.  Draco is a clever boy, indeed!  Just how clever has yet to be determined, but one thing is certain—he will be the instigator of some riotous antics before Wimbledon is over.  What is Severus going to do when he sees Theodore Nott with Hermione at the Champions' Ball?  What was she thinking????  I just had a thought:  is Theodore feeding all this information about Hermione and Severus to Draco because he wants Hermione?  Who is Iago? I'm beginning to think there are more than one. Hee hee.Beth

"What is he up to? And why bloody Wimbledon, for goodness sakes?"  Hummm... me thinks that Wimbledon has more to do with Lucius separating Narcissa and her Muggle tennis coach than in having an intended affect on the relationship between Severus and Hermione... except that Draco has been spearheading this charge.  At least I think he has.  Who is the real Iago?  Does Draco fancy Hermione for himself?  Will Severus get a hand on his focused efforts to woo Hermione without giving any outward appearance to their colleagues at Hogwarts?  Will Severus really invite Nott to accompany him to the Champions' Ball?  Will Hermione remember that she was the one who wanted to keep their relationship quiet?  There are no end of possibilities, are there?Well done!!!Beth

Wonderful beginning!  I laughed when reading that Narcissa ran off with the tennis pro.  How utterly perfect.

Oh, Severus, just relax! Thank you for a wonderful, amusing story. Lucius is not my favourite person but you nearly made me pity him. Thank you!