Chapter 9
Chapter 9 of 13
ProulxesAnd Promises to Keep....
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"Have you ever watched tennis in the flesh before, Professor Granger?" Lucius Malfoy asked as he led her along the maze of wide corridors and up shallow staircases towards their seats.
Hermione risked a look over her shoulder. She could not see Severus and Draco in the mass of people around them, but Nott was just behind her. He winked and grinned, tipping his boater in a mock salute.
She turned back, about to reply, "No, not really," but lost her train of thought as she stumbled slightly on the fine, dark green carpet, clutching on to Malfoy's arm more firmly for support. He responded by tightening it firmly against his side.
Around them, Muggles bustled and jostled along the corridor, speaking excitedly to each other.
Hermione fought down the sense of panicked claustrophobia that clawed at her throat as she was drawn along on Lucius Malfoy's arm.
Where is he? Why didn't he follow?
Oblivious to her frantic thoughts, Lucius chuckled. "I take it from your silence that you are not a follower of sporting events, Professor. But no matter! I hope that the occasion will make up for any shortcomings in the game itself."
Hermione's hand was trapped firmly between Lucius' elbow and his chest. She flexed her fingers. Where is Severus? "I...erm... No... no," she stuttered politely, her feet catching a little on the carpet beneath her feet.
Many of the surrounding people seemed to peel away, continuing along the wide corridor before them. She felt herself manoeuvred along briskly, borne powerlessly away, as Lucius directed her to the right and along another smaller corridor towards a second longer staircase.
This will never bloody do! She was not used to being guided along so forcefully, and the panic that threatened to consume her at his actions resurfaced. She pushed it determinedly away. Get a grip, Hermione! she berated herself. Taking a deep breath, she flexed her trapped fingers, making to pull her hand away from his arm. "Mister Malfoy," she began firmly.
"Lucius, please!" he corrected, gripping her arm tighter as they approached the second staircase.
She looked upwards. These steps appeared to lead up to an open space at the top. She could see the bright blue of the sky pouring light into the stairwell. Hermione could hear Nott right behind her, his breath huffing slightly and his feet tripping occasionally on the risers of the steps. In contrast to the younger man behind her, Malfoy appeared to be very fit and healthy. He did not seem to be breathing more heavily than usual, and the pressure of his arm on her right hand remained firm and constant.
"Professor Granger, you cannot imagine what a change has been wrought in me over these past years," Lucius spoke smoothly as they approached the top of the staircase.
Hermione could feel an increase in anticipation in the atmosphere... an eager anticipation. Lucius increased the pace of their climb, practically bouncing from step to step, and he urged her upward. She could hear Nott's footfalls falling steadily further behind.
"Oh... yes?" she managed, now using her other hand on the stair rail to pull herself along. She was beginning to regret her recent lack of exercise. The life of a schoolmistress was regrettably sedentary.
Malfoy chuckled she could feel his ribs move against her trapped hand. "Yes, Professor Granger! Since the Fall, I have had to embrace many new ideas... adopt new thinking patterns... take up ballroom dancing. My Rehabilitation... encouraged me to delve deeply into Muggle culture and society. I have achieved a far greater understanding of these astonishingly fascinating people."
She paused, pulling him to a standstill on the steps still a few feet before the top. "The fall?" she asked, cursing her breathlessness.
A shadow seemed to cross Malfoy's handsome face for a second, but he smiled once again and waved his free hand airily above him. "Why, the Fall of the Dark Lord, my dear lady," he explained. "The end of days," he added quietly, his pale eyes searching hers with an intensity that made her shiver.
Her arm itched. Mudblood, a voice hissed in her mind.
Lucius leaned forwards. "Imagine!" he whispered, the heat from his breath caressing her cheek. "Muggles have no magic, but despite that terrible handicap, they can still wield such power."
She wondered if he could hear the thumping of her heart in her chest, and then she realised that the pounding noise in her ears was the sound of Nott's heavy feet thumping up the stairs to where they were standing.
Nott reached the silent pair and stopped, looking between both of them, breathing heavily. "Well, thanks for waiting," he gasped sourly. "Bloody Muggle cigarettes... I knew they were bad for me!"
Lucius leaned back away from her and rolled his eyes. "You should take up the foxtrot, Mr Nott," he sneered. "It does wonders for one's... stamina. Come, Professor," he added with a flourish, "we have a tennis match to attend."
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"Darling, do come along!" Impatience tempering her voice, Narcissa Black-Malfoy swept through the Members' Enclosure of the All England Club. Her Muggle lover trotted slightly behind her, clearly still somewhat overwhelmed by his surroundings.
"I can't believe we've got tickets for the mens' final," he said for the seventh time in less than an hour.
"I can't believe that we are so late in getting here," she muttered under her breath as they moved quickly between the now virtually empty picnic tables. The Muggle waiters and waitresses were clearing up empty champagne bottles and strawberry punnets. A few latecomers were still finishing off their drinks.
She paused before her reflection in the large windows of the entrance hallway to take in her appearance, self-consciously straightening her back and tossing her hair backwards as she regarded her décolletage critically. The charms were holding well. She nodded in satisfaction.
"You look beautiful, baby," he murmured behind her, curling his large hands about her slim waist, pulling her uncomfortably off balance and springing back with a startled yelp as her shrewdly executed wandless hex struck, shooting a sharp burst of sparks into his skin.
"Static electricity, darling," she explained soothingly, still looking at herself in the window while he rubbed his hands to dissipate the pain.
"Simply shocking, Mother...," Draco's languid drawl caused her to smile even more widely as she turned to greet her son.
She looked her boy up and down. "Darling," she cooed, noting his girth, the sheen on his skin, his unhealthy pallor and reddened cheeks. "You look marvellous."
Draco smiled at her, as if he could read her real response. "Never better, darling. I thought you were already up in the Box," he added, flicking a brief and calculating look at the Muggle beside her. "Father arrived a few minutes ago... along with our other guests."
He moved to one side, and Narcissa could see that Severus Snape was sitting, pale and still, on one of the garden chairs beside Draco. He did not acknowledge her. Narcissa frowned... this was unexpected.
"Hi! You must be Draco. Cissy has told me all about you!"
Draco winced and recoiled from the rough hand that had been thrust towards him. He looked at his mother again and flicked his fingers at her impertinent paramour who immediately froze where he stood, the foolish, open smile still on his face.
"I use that one, too," Narcissa admitted, moving slightly away from her lover and casting another evaluative look at the still and silent Snape.
"Apes," spat Draco quietly.
She blushed, glancing again at the stupid Muggle tennis coach, his handsome face stuck unblinkingly in that rictus grin of surprise.
"Well, I suppose at least this one is pretty," Draco grudgingly allowed with a long suffering air.
"But insufficient for my... long term needs," Narcissa finished.
"You want father back," Draco's voice was flat and calm, his pale eyes watchful.
She sighed, frustrated, and shook her head. "Not like he is now. He is not the same man he once was, Draco."
"He wants you," Draco stated, inspecting the fingernails on his right hand. It shook slightly under his gaze, and she thought she saw him blush slightly. "The Manor is in decline... the magic is failing. You must return." His eyes rose to meet hers again. "Consider it a protection of my inheritance," he added, and she heard a certain ring of arrogant authority in his voice.
Narcissa made a small disparaging noise. "Putting the Manor in my name was no more than a mechanism to avoid the seizure of the estate by the Wizengamot. I was stuck in that mouldering pile like some sort of prisoner while Lucius was Rehabilitated... Then when he came home, all the ungrateful bastard did was watch Muggle musicals and take dancing lessons. He did nothing... he was nothing. There is nothing left of my husband."
She flicked a glance at the motionless man beside her and felt her chin rise defensively. "Naturally, I needed an outlet for my... energies. I..."
Draco held up one meticulously manicured finger to her lips, startling her into silence. "I said that you wanted him back, Mother," he whispered quietly. "I promised in my letter that I could deliver him to you as he was... before the Mudblood-loving Potterlings took away everything from him!"
Narcissa felt a shiver of adrenaline race across her skin. She shot another look at the silent figure of Severus Snape, sitting neatly with his hands folded before him, a thin stream of red strawberry juice on his chin.
"How will you do it?" she breathed.
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A/N: Clairvoyant and beaweasely2 are wonderful. Thank you also to all those who read and review.... I'm sorry about the gaps between updates recently. Real Life... grrrr!
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129 Reviews | 5.41/10 Average
"Drink Me, Professor" - I'm loving this! And I loved that little reflection to AiW. It was the perfect way to hint these two are abound to go down the rabbit hole!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Ha! Thank you for taking the time to review, Helen Rickman! I'm glad that this chapter amused you! Not so sure about the darker direction this story took as it grew... but I did enjoy getting the dancing Lucius in!Pxx
Chilling, Proulxes. So glad to see more of your writing!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Cheers,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! I really appreciated your bombing run this morning! I am working on the next story (much more in the style of Anima Mea then these shorter fics). It's coming along slowly, but I hope people will be patient as I will start posting very soon but there are going to be gaps between chapters! Best wishes, Pxx
Ooooooh. Very evil, Draco.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Oh yes. This time around, I fancied a truly nasty Draco - but he has good reason for it. Thank you for your review! Pxx
Really well written, thank you for sharing! :D
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Thank you,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
- I really appreciate you taking hte time to get in touch. Best wishes, Pxx
I'm sorry I've been slow to review! I'm very much enjoying this story, I've been hooked since the beginning. Thank goodness for Nott, finally expressing some of the hidden truths that have been hinted at! How will they get themselves out of this one? Will Severus be able to find some kind of resistance? Will Hermione save him? Will Nott help? I feel a bit sorry for Lucius, as he seems to have been manipulated rather neatly by Draco, which you set up and made clear from the beginning, but because Lucius' character upholds a kind of belief in his own power--despite everything--I can feel his own sense of losing control over what it was he really wanted.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi there,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! Thank you for your review! You have hit a number of nails right on the head in your comments. I see Lucius essentially as you do - someone so used to exercising power that when it is taken away, really cannot function anymore. Draco is more sinister in this tale - and I very much enjoyed playing about with Nott. We don't know that much about Theodore, and so I was able to exploit that to my advantage. I did want you to get the sense of losing control, from a number of the characters, and hope that you enjoy the final installment on New Year's Day! Best wishes, Pxx
Oh and yeah, Severus, SNAP out of it!!!!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Tee hee!! Yeah, come ON Severus!! Pxx
Can't wait for the conclusion on New Year's Day...The suspense is killing meeeeee!!!!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Count with me... 48... 47... 46.... lol. Thanks for your review!! Pxx
Draco obviously has some sort of revenge planned out. I think Theodore knows everything that's going on, and I think Severus will push through Iago, once he sees Hermione. He was already starting to pull through in this chapter, until Draco fed him another strawberry. Whether or not Severus will be in time to save the day, is a different matter. But I'm sitting on pins and needles.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I hope the final chapter lives up to your expectations,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
!! Thank you for taking the time to write to me. The end is nigh!!! Pxx
Sooo... Iago is a potion... and allows the user to manipulate anyone they can trick into ingesting it? And this is the way Draco intends to exact retribution from Severus for not defending him at trial... And Theo and Draco were an item until Lucius busted up the happy couple? That would have to be before they graduated from Hogwarts, wouldn't it?"Severus and Draco had turned around." OMG! Did both Draco and Severus hear Theo's statement that he and Draco had been a couple, and that Draco had developed the Iago Potion? Noooo, Hermione had cast the Muffliato Charm.I cannot imagine how you're going to conclude this story, but I hope Hermione and Severus will have the opportunity to get their poop in a group and kiss and make up. I can't wait for New Year's Day!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
HI braye! Lovely to hear from you again! I think you do know how I'm going to resolve it... ;) ... given that you guessed most of the story in one of your first reviews!!! Lol!! As you know I do love a good HEA.., so long as there is a little bit of angst and vulnerability on the way.... Best wishes, Pxx
One, two--three days until the New Year and can't wait for the next chapter!!! Enjoying the suspense and tension, and am eagerly waiting in *anticipation* But I must side with those who hope the Malfoys don't get away with their despicable plotting too easily... I know Hermione can be quite juidicious, but in the case, nah... let 'em have it (yes, I'm in a feisty mood this evening--hehe!)! xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi nag! I am so pleased you are enjoying the suspense in this story - it has driven me crazy to place our heroes in such a constrained position and keep things so tightly controlled... but I hope that the final chapter will offer a final showdown that is worthy, logical, and satisfying. Pxx
Yikes. Just... yikes. Now that Lucius' and Draco's motivations have (mostly) been exposed, I'm anxious to learn how Theodore figures into the equation.Well done, P!hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hello, hm88!! Ahhh - the answers are there, and they are coming fast! Shall Severus find a way to resist Iago? Will Hermione let rip at Wimbledon and blow the Statute of Secrecy right out of the water? Will Cliff Richard return and save the day? THANK YOU so much for reviewing! Pxx
All this for an endorsement? Not likely in the mood Hermione's in. I think Nott has feelings for Draco, which would explain why he reacted the way he did in the flashback. I wonder if Draco has feelings for Severus, which is what I thought from the same scene. I hope Severus makes the right choice. I'm surprised Hermione hasn't sent out those sparks of hers yet.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I'm not sure that Severus can do much at the moment - because of the power that Draco is exerting over him... will Hermione realise what is going on, and what can she do about it without risking blowing the Statute of Secrecy out of Centre Court.... the story is now complete and I'll post the penultimate chapter on Sunday, with the final one on New Year's Eve - and all the questions will be answered... THANK YOU so much for taking the time to review again! Best wishes, Pxx
When Lucius announced that they were about to tee off I cracked up. He really has outdone himself in wrangling an invitation to Wimbledon! I had no idea Draco has been in love with Severus. So I guess Lucius is in love with Narcissa, and Narcissa is really in love with Luciuc, too. Severus and Hermione are really in love with each other. Is Theo is in love with Draco, or with Hermione? How long will it take Hermione to decide to rescue Severus? "Miss— Professor Granger... I want... to beg for your forgiveness... And ask for your endorsement."If Hermione is willing to sponsor Lucius' return to polite Wizarding society, perhaps he will return the favor and help her free Severus. Perhaps...Hope you had a wonderful Christmas.Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
It was lovely, thank you, Beth - and I finished this story too which was an added bonus! Mmmm. I'm not sure our Slytherin anti-heroes embrace the idea of 'love' in quite the same way as we might! The next two chapters will be up soon. I do hope you had a great Christmas - and thank you as ever for the review!! Pxx
Her endorsement? Oooh, can't wait for Hermione's response! And can't wait for things to explode, off the court that is--or for *someone* to help Severus escape the *paws*, clutches, of Draco and what he may have planned... I'll never look at strawberries the same again--Can't wait for more!xx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hello nag!! Hope you had a lovely Christmas. The end is nigh -- and Severus will face a terrible choice. Da da da duuuuuuuummmmmm! Pxx
Oooh, okay, I'm officially in a tizzy about Narcissa, and Nott--but thank Merlin, Hermione is registering that Severus is not himself... Ooooh, please, please, please--forget Christmas and get the next chapter posted as soon as possible--lol! Seriously-as soon as possible! Eagerly awaiting more!xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
You have your wish, nag!! The next chapter is now posted.. and I have also (thanks to the holidays) completely finished it! The final two chapters are now awaiting the attentions of the fabulous Clairvoyant. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Pxx
The subtle menacing air threatening to be unleashed by Lucius on Hermione is palpable, as is the dubious (?) reuniting of mother and son in the Narcissa and Draco scene--and Severus! What else has Draco done and how long will the effects last, and does Narcissa have any buried loyalty to Severus to help him out in a time of need? Must read on! Thank you for a thrilling, plot-thickening chapter--can't wait for things to *explode*--one way or another!:-D
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Aaaahhh, yes... Narcissa will survive, no doubt. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the chapter. This story has been a tough one to write because I have made myself stick to fewer than 2,000 words per chapter.... ;) Pxx
Oh, P... What on earth do you have in store for our heroes?Holding my breath in anticipation--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Bad things. Baaad things...! But you know me... there will be a resolution... and some redemption... and the rest would be telling! More coming soon! Pxx
I do think Nott knows whats going on...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
*whispers* I think he does too!! Pxx
I must admit that I am completely bewildered by the turns this story takes, besides being intrigued. I am looking forward to more from Severus, Lucius and even Cliff Richard...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Answers are on the way, believe me! Each Slytherin has his or her own agenda and the climax of the story sees all of them laid bare. Thank you so much for sticking with me on this tricky, tricky tale....! Pxx
This was really exciting.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Thank you! More to come soon! Pxx
Ah ha! Hermione is finally reaching the limit of her tolerance for BS and is starting to issue her own demands: "Stop messing me around, and answer the bloody question, you supercilious cow!" she hissed in the woman's ear. "Where the hell is Severus? What have you done with my– him?" This cracked me up.I'm glad that Severus realizes that he has been drugged, but I can't imagine what he can do to free himself from Draco's influence... so I think it's going to fall on Hermione's shoulders to "kick a little arse." What was Lucius about to say he wanted from Hermione. Why does touching her wrist seem to have a numbing/calming effect on her... or at least momentarily divert her attention?What does Theo know that no one else seems to be aware of? It seems that Draco is driving the behavior of everyone of interest here, and I hope Hermione snaps out of her "wondering phase" and starts "kicking arse." I'm really looking forward to the next update!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi Beth! It's on its way - chapter 11 will take a few days to beat into shape.. and we are definitely on the spiral towards the climax of the tale. With your customary insight you are picking up the clues in the chapter....! Pxx
I'm glad Severus realizes he's drugged, and now Hermione knows something's not right. Was it me, or did Theodore try to signal Hermione about the situation. It seemed that he was going to tell her what's happening. I hope she can get to Severus before anything else goes on. The implied Draco/Severus is sort of skeeving me out a bit.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Sorry for the skeeve -- but thank you so much for letting me know what you think. We are nearing the endgame... And yes, do keep an eye on Nott. Two Slytherin's have betrayed their intentions... Two to go. And when will Hermione realise what is happening to Severus? Pxx
How will he do it, indeed?There is so much more going on here than meets the eye. Looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds.Thank you for posting--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Mmmmm! There are plots within plots here... Draco wants something just as his parents do... And I wonder what Theodore Nott is up to...? Thank you so much for sticking with me over this story... It's a bit of a departure for me, and I do love a challenge! Pxx
Draco is really, really creeping me out.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
*Twiddles imaginary moustache and giggles evilly*.... I do live an evil Draco....! Pxx