Chapter 11: End Game Part 2....
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ProulxesEnd Game, part 2....
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Severus ate the strawberries.
Severus ate the strawberries.
Severus hates strawberries.
"Laaadieees and gentlemen! Please take your seats, as play is about to begin! Spectators are reminded that flash photography is not allowed while the ball is in play. Thank you!" The Muggle umpire's voice sounded loud and confident above the excited hubbub of the crowd.
About her, people began to sink back into the seats in the Royal Box, arranging themselves comfortably, chattering in excited whispers about the game ahead. She caught snatches of conversation.
"... Just as good as Borg..."
"... Two hundred on..."
"... Not like it was when..."
"... Taking the first set..."
Hermione stared blankly at the back of Severus' head, unable to breathe. As she looked on, she saw Draco reach up and stroke Severus' cheek with the fingers of one curled hand.
Narcissa leaned over her shoulder and made a small satisfied noise in her throat. "Not yours anymore, I think, Professor," she murmured in Hermione's ear.
"I believe that you will need to take your seat, dear." Lucius' voice cut through the rushing sound in Hermione's ears. He placed a proprietorial hand on Hermione's arm. "Shouldn't you be looking for your Muggle... companion?"
Narcissa's lips thinned. "Very well, husband," she spat. Hermione did not miss the emphasis that she placed on the final word. "I'll leave you and your delightful guest to the game. I believe that the view will be better from my seat, anyway."
Lucius smirked in great satisfaction as his wife spun on her heels and stalked away, up the shallow steps in the aisle towards the rear of the box. He waggled his eyebrows at Hermione, who was still staring at him in a kind of stunned haze.
He leaned forwards towards her once more. "Thank you, my dear," he murmured. "That was just what the doctor ordered." He giggled suddenly. "Narcissa will be absolutely furious...!"
Hermione looked at him in confusion. "W what? Mr Malfoy, I..." Her voice sounded incongruously loud amidst the hush of the surrounding spectators, and a silver haired man sitting in front of her turned around, scowling at them.
"Shhhh, my dear!" whispered Lucius, patting her arm again, his eyes dancing. "Let us watch the game. They are about to tee off."
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A dark corridor. Figures move and come together. The smell of sweat and fear and desperation hangs heavily in the air.
"Did you think I would not try to ask again? I can help you, you stupid boy." There is a desperate urgency in the deep, cajoling voice.
"I don't need your fucking help. I don't need that!" The reply is panicked, overwrought. A thin hand reaches forward, placed tentatively onto the fine silk of the dark dress robes before him. The younger man's voice softens, almost like yearning. "You know what I want..."
The taller figure stills. "Not that, Draco...." Snape tries to put understanding into his voice. This isn't the first time a prized pupil has fancied themselves in love with their Head of House. But Draco's infatuation is also dangerous. Severus can feel it in the magic that swirls about them, seeking, probing, twisting in the thin air of the cold castle walls.
Snape sighs and makes to speak, hoping to be gentle despite the urgency of the situation, but he is shoved away roughly with a barely contained sob as the boy half-ran away from him along the silent flagstoned corridor. His footfalls echo long after he disappears from sight.
There is a small gasp to his right, and Severus tenses. Had they been overheard? He quickly replays the little scene again in his mind, calms himself and turns.
In the shadows of the corridor, half-hidden by a large tapestry, stands Theodore Nott. The young Slytherin shakes with emotion, his hands balled tightly into fists by his side.
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The match was finely balanced, the crowd rowdily enthusiastic, hooting and applauding the physicality of the players as they skidded and lunged, smashed and parried around the court.
Lucius was thoroughly excited, as caught up with the action as almost everyone else around him. "For a game with only one ball and two players, this really is surprisingly enjoyable," he commented, hunched forward over his silver-tipped cane.
Hermione nodded absently, keeping half an eye on the game before them and the other half on Severus and Draco. Part of her mind was still numb with shock. She had had no idea. No idea at all that there had been something between Severus and Draco. She fixed her attention on the oddly coordinated familiarity of their body language, trying to make sense of the way that they were sitting so closely together; Draco's head was virtually on Severus' shoulder, for Merlin's sake! Why was Snape allowing it? In the all too short days of her liaison with him, he had not even allowed her to take his arm in the corridors of the school....
Indeed, apart from that first night at the pub and the time they had spent together in their private chambers, he had not even allowed her to touch him at all. At all!
Hermione felt a wave of deep hurt and angry resentment wash through her. Perhaps, she thought, feeling her face begin to flush and her throat tightening, this was all a huge mistake.
Her heart began thumping in her chest so heavily that she could feel it in her throat. Was this all a game to get me to this place? To trap me? To humiliate me? Hot tears threatened to spill onto her cheeks, and she blinked furiously. Is Severus a part of this?
She dashed quick looks to her left and right. Lucius was still engrossed in the game, clapping and cheering the players on. Nott, on the other hand, was also watching Severus and Draco, his face tense and drawn. Hermione frowned. What...?
"Look! Look, my dear!" Lucius' delighted cry interrupted her painful thoughts. "They are changing their balls!"
Hermione stared at him for a horrified moment before she realised what he actually meant.
"I... I thought that you would be more familiar with tennis. After all..." Hermione waved her hand to indicate their surroundings.
"After all...?"
"Well, you are a member here! I thought..."
"Oh no, my dear girl! Don't be so droll. A simple bribe and Confundus Charm on the Membership Committee..." He waved his hand airily at her shocked expression.
He shot a quick glance behind them both and then grinned maniacally at her. "Can she see me? Can Narcissa see me?" he asked breathlessly as the players completed another exhausting rally to tumultuous applause. The crowd shifted and undulated, some standing up and stretching, chattering excitedly to one another. Lucius strained to see behind them.
Hermione couldn't have cared less what Narcissa Malfoy was doing. She shifted uncomfortably as he leaned over again.
"That's not all I can do," Malfoy murmured in her ear. "Care to see?"
The play resumed. The taller of the two finalists bounced the ball in his hand once, twice, three times... bent his knees... tossed the ball in the air, and...
The ball dropped to his feet, unstruck.
The crowd ooohed in surprise.
Malfoy smirked.
The player called for another ball and began to go through his pre-serve preparations as before.
"Top left hand corner," whispered Lucius.
The racket blurred, and the ball flew forwards... hitting the top left hand corner of the box.
"Fifteen, love," the umpire called.
The serving player reset himself. Bounced the ball. Bent, dipped...
"Middle right, fifteen all," Lucius murmured.
And struck. The ball hit the middle right of his opponent's serving box and was returned with a swerving low back-handed volley that left him standing.
"Fifteen all!"
"Stop it!" Hermione hissed.
Lucius snickered a little at her expression. "You see, the slightest impetus can push an object off balance, can make it behave as it shouldn't...."
He twirled the serpent cane again in his fingers.
The crowd aaahed.
"Fifteen, thirty!"
He leaned closer again. "How do you think I rebuilt my fortune, Professor?"
"Fifteen, forty!"
Hermione pulled back from him, jostling into Nott with her shoulder. "That's illegal!" she blurted, her voice sounding shrill in her ears.
Lucius tutted and waggled his fingers. "I prefer to think of it as good karma, Professor. What goes around..." He waggled his eyebrows knowingly.
"Malfoy men are used to getting what they want, eh, Lucius?" Nott muttered. "No matter what the cost."
Lucius smiled at that and lifted the cane slightly, his fingers caressing the flat top of the snake's head.
The crowd roared, and a thunder of applause swept the court.
"Game and second set!" called the umpire. The crowd erupted again into a riot of excitement. The players returned to their seats for the break between games.
Hermione's attention was drawn once more to the dark figure sitting stiffly below them, Draco's arm draped casually around the seat behind his shoulder. Her heart constricted painfully again.
"And what about Draco?" she asked Lucius as if poking a sore tooth. "Has he got what he wants?"
Lucius pursed his lips. "Oh, I'm sure he will find his way." At her arched eyebrow, Lucius sighed in an exaggerated manner and brushed a speck of dust from his jacket's arm.
"Draco prefers to labour for his rewards. He has recently developed an interest in... Oh, what do they call them? Muggle potions. If it hadn't been for the... distractions... of his teenage years, he would no doubt have been studying for his mastership by now. He served his Rehabilitation at one of their Muggle hospitals and aided their Healers in the... What was the name of the place? The pharmacy. I believe that he has developed some interesting compounds of his own, isn't that right, Theodore?"
Nott made a small strangled noise in the back of his throat and looked away, back to where Draco was running a possessive finger along Severus' collar beneath his hair.
She watched Severus shudder under his touch, then relax.
Sod this, she thought suddenly. Sod it all. I'm leaving.
She rose to her feet, just as the crowd began to cheer and bay in anticipation. Confused by the sudden outburst, Hermione spun about, then realised that the players had finished their break and were taking their places for the next set.
"Professor?" Malfoy asked her, surprised.
"Hermione?" Nott reached up to catch her arm. She jerked it free, scowling fiercely at her colleague.
Hermione turned to face Lucius, her jaw set and her fingers brushing over the wand hidden in her clutch bag. "I'm leaving," she hissed baldly. "I don't know what you are all playing at, you manipulative bastards, but I want nothing to do with any of you." She glowered at Nott and had the brief satisfaction of seeing him blanch under her angry regard. She could not bear to look in Severus' direction.
"Would all spectators please take their seats quickly, as play is about to resume...." The umpire's announcement prompted a ripple of applause from the Muggle spectators around the tennis court.
"Please don't go, Professor," Malfoy urged. "I apologise for my outrageous display earlier. I fear that I was... showing off."
"What do you want, Mr Malfoy?" she asked him bluntly. "Why did you invite me and Severus here today?"
"... Play is about to begin, ladies and gentlemen.... Madam, would you please take your seat without delay?"
Hermione glanced down towards the umpire and was shocked to see the serving player bouncing his ball pointedly while staring up directly at her.
Automatically, her knees buckled, and she all but collapsed into her seat. The ironic applause that broke out around her swiftly dissipated as she cast abrupt nonverbal Muffliato.
The fingers of her right hand gripped her wand tightly.
Malfoy's expression was slightly abashed.
"What do you want of me?" she reiterated, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the silent bubble that Muffliato provided. She had had enough of Slytherin posturing and half-truths.
To her surprise, she saw twin spots of pink bloom on his cheekbones.
"Enough. You should just ask her, Lucius." Nott's voice held the same bored note in it that Severus used when he was particularly anxious about something.
Lucius shot him a brief, poisonous look. "Miss... Professor Granger," he began. "I want... to beg for your forgiveness." He paused, clearly ruffled. "And ask for your endorsement."
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A/N: beaweasley2 and Clairvoyant are utterly wonderful. So is JKR, who owns all these characters, and those of you who take the time and trouble to review! Two more chapters to go now....
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129 Reviews | 5.41/10 Average
"Drink Me, Professor" - I'm loving this! And I loved that little reflection to AiW. It was the perfect way to hint these two are abound to go down the rabbit hole!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Ha! Thank you for taking the time to review, Helen Rickman! I'm glad that this chapter amused you! Not so sure about the darker direction this story took as it grew... but I did enjoy getting the dancing Lucius in!Pxx
Chilling, Proulxes. So glad to see more of your writing!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Cheers,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! I really appreciated your bombing run this morning! I am working on the next story (much more in the style of Anima Mea then these shorter fics). It's coming along slowly, but I hope people will be patient as I will start posting very soon but there are going to be gaps between chapters! Best wishes, Pxx
Ooooooh. Very evil, Draco.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Oh yes. This time around, I fancied a truly nasty Draco - but he has good reason for it. Thank you for your review! Pxx
Really well written, thank you for sharing! :D
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Thank you,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
- I really appreciate you taking hte time to get in touch. Best wishes, Pxx
I'm sorry I've been slow to review! I'm very much enjoying this story, I've been hooked since the beginning. Thank goodness for Nott, finally expressing some of the hidden truths that have been hinted at! How will they get themselves out of this one? Will Severus be able to find some kind of resistance? Will Hermione save him? Will Nott help? I feel a bit sorry for Lucius, as he seems to have been manipulated rather neatly by Draco, which you set up and made clear from the beginning, but because Lucius' character upholds a kind of belief in his own power--despite everything--I can feel his own sense of losing control over what it was he really wanted.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi there,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! Thank you for your review! You have hit a number of nails right on the head in your comments. I see Lucius essentially as you do - someone so used to exercising power that when it is taken away, really cannot function anymore. Draco is more sinister in this tale - and I very much enjoyed playing about with Nott. We don't know that much about Theodore, and so I was able to exploit that to my advantage. I did want you to get the sense of losing control, from a number of the characters, and hope that you enjoy the final installment on New Year's Day! Best wishes, Pxx
Oh and yeah, Severus, SNAP out of it!!!!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Tee hee!! Yeah, come ON Severus!! Pxx
Can't wait for the conclusion on New Year's Day...The suspense is killing meeeeee!!!!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Count with me... 48... 47... 46.... lol. Thanks for your review!! Pxx
Draco obviously has some sort of revenge planned out. I think Theodore knows everything that's going on, and I think Severus will push through Iago, once he sees Hermione. He was already starting to pull through in this chapter, until Draco fed him another strawberry. Whether or not Severus will be in time to save the day, is a different matter. But I'm sitting on pins and needles.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I hope the final chapter lives up to your expectations,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
!! Thank you for taking the time to write to me. The end is nigh!!! Pxx
Sooo... Iago is a potion... and allows the user to manipulate anyone they can trick into ingesting it? And this is the way Draco intends to exact retribution from Severus for not defending him at trial... And Theo and Draco were an item until Lucius busted up the happy couple? That would have to be before they graduated from Hogwarts, wouldn't it?"Severus and Draco had turned around." OMG! Did both Draco and Severus hear Theo's statement that he and Draco had been a couple, and that Draco had developed the Iago Potion? Noooo, Hermione had cast the Muffliato Charm.I cannot imagine how you're going to conclude this story, but I hope Hermione and Severus will have the opportunity to get their poop in a group and kiss and make up. I can't wait for New Year's Day!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
HI braye! Lovely to hear from you again! I think you do know how I'm going to resolve it... ;) ... given that you guessed most of the story in one of your first reviews!!! Lol!! As you know I do love a good HEA.., so long as there is a little bit of angst and vulnerability on the way.... Best wishes, Pxx
One, two--three days until the New Year and can't wait for the next chapter!!! Enjoying the suspense and tension, and am eagerly waiting in *anticipation* But I must side with those who hope the Malfoys don't get away with their despicable plotting too easily... I know Hermione can be quite juidicious, but in the case, nah... let 'em have it (yes, I'm in a feisty mood this evening--hehe!)! xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi nag! I am so pleased you are enjoying the suspense in this story - it has driven me crazy to place our heroes in such a constrained position and keep things so tightly controlled... but I hope that the final chapter will offer a final showdown that is worthy, logical, and satisfying. Pxx
Yikes. Just... yikes. Now that Lucius' and Draco's motivations have (mostly) been exposed, I'm anxious to learn how Theodore figures into the equation.Well done, P!hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hello, hm88!! Ahhh - the answers are there, and they are coming fast! Shall Severus find a way to resist Iago? Will Hermione let rip at Wimbledon and blow the Statute of Secrecy right out of the water? Will Cliff Richard return and save the day? THANK YOU so much for reviewing! Pxx
All this for an endorsement? Not likely in the mood Hermione's in. I think Nott has feelings for Draco, which would explain why he reacted the way he did in the flashback. I wonder if Draco has feelings for Severus, which is what I thought from the same scene. I hope Severus makes the right choice. I'm surprised Hermione hasn't sent out those sparks of hers yet.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I'm not sure that Severus can do much at the moment - because of the power that Draco is exerting over him... will Hermione realise what is going on, and what can she do about it without risking blowing the Statute of Secrecy out of Centre Court.... the story is now complete and I'll post the penultimate chapter on Sunday, with the final one on New Year's Eve - and all the questions will be answered... THANK YOU so much for taking the time to review again! Best wishes, Pxx
When Lucius announced that they were about to tee off I cracked up. He really has outdone himself in wrangling an invitation to Wimbledon! I had no idea Draco has been in love with Severus. So I guess Lucius is in love with Narcissa, and Narcissa is really in love with Luciuc, too. Severus and Hermione are really in love with each other. Is Theo is in love with Draco, or with Hermione? How long will it take Hermione to decide to rescue Severus? "Miss— Professor Granger... I want... to beg for your forgiveness... And ask for your endorsement."If Hermione is willing to sponsor Lucius' return to polite Wizarding society, perhaps he will return the favor and help her free Severus. Perhaps...Hope you had a wonderful Christmas.Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
It was lovely, thank you, Beth - and I finished this story too which was an added bonus! Mmmm. I'm not sure our Slytherin anti-heroes embrace the idea of 'love' in quite the same way as we might! The next two chapters will be up soon. I do hope you had a great Christmas - and thank you as ever for the review!! Pxx
Her endorsement? Oooh, can't wait for Hermione's response! And can't wait for things to explode, off the court that is--or for *someone* to help Severus escape the *paws*, clutches, of Draco and what he may have planned... I'll never look at strawberries the same again--Can't wait for more!xx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hello nag!! Hope you had a lovely Christmas. The end is nigh -- and Severus will face a terrible choice. Da da da duuuuuuuummmmmm! Pxx
Oooh, okay, I'm officially in a tizzy about Narcissa, and Nott--but thank Merlin, Hermione is registering that Severus is not himself... Ooooh, please, please, please--forget Christmas and get the next chapter posted as soon as possible--lol! Seriously-as soon as possible! Eagerly awaiting more!xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
You have your wish, nag!! The next chapter is now posted.. and I have also (thanks to the holidays) completely finished it! The final two chapters are now awaiting the attentions of the fabulous Clairvoyant. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Pxx
The subtle menacing air threatening to be unleashed by Lucius on Hermione is palpable, as is the dubious (?) reuniting of mother and son in the Narcissa and Draco scene--and Severus! What else has Draco done and how long will the effects last, and does Narcissa have any buried loyalty to Severus to help him out in a time of need? Must read on! Thank you for a thrilling, plot-thickening chapter--can't wait for things to *explode*--one way or another!:-D
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Aaaahhh, yes... Narcissa will survive, no doubt. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the chapter. This story has been a tough one to write because I have made myself stick to fewer than 2,000 words per chapter.... ;) Pxx
Oh, P... What on earth do you have in store for our heroes?Holding my breath in anticipation--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Bad things. Baaad things...! But you know me... there will be a resolution... and some redemption... and the rest would be telling! More coming soon! Pxx
I do think Nott knows whats going on...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
*whispers* I think he does too!! Pxx
I must admit that I am completely bewildered by the turns this story takes, besides being intrigued. I am looking forward to more from Severus, Lucius and even Cliff Richard...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Answers are on the way, believe me! Each Slytherin has his or her own agenda and the climax of the story sees all of them laid bare. Thank you so much for sticking with me on this tricky, tricky tale....! Pxx
This was really exciting.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Thank you! More to come soon! Pxx
Ah ha! Hermione is finally reaching the limit of her tolerance for BS and is starting to issue her own demands: "Stop messing me around, and answer the bloody question, you supercilious cow!" she hissed in the woman's ear. "Where the hell is Severus? What have you done with my– him?" This cracked me up.I'm glad that Severus realizes that he has been drugged, but I can't imagine what he can do to free himself from Draco's influence... so I think it's going to fall on Hermione's shoulders to "kick a little arse." What was Lucius about to say he wanted from Hermione. Why does touching her wrist seem to have a numbing/calming effect on her... or at least momentarily divert her attention?What does Theo know that no one else seems to be aware of? It seems that Draco is driving the behavior of everyone of interest here, and I hope Hermione snaps out of her "wondering phase" and starts "kicking arse." I'm really looking forward to the next update!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi Beth! It's on its way - chapter 11 will take a few days to beat into shape.. and we are definitely on the spiral towards the climax of the tale. With your customary insight you are picking up the clues in the chapter....! Pxx
I'm glad Severus realizes he's drugged, and now Hermione knows something's not right. Was it me, or did Theodore try to signal Hermione about the situation. It seemed that he was going to tell her what's happening. I hope she can get to Severus before anything else goes on. The implied Draco/Severus is sort of skeeving me out a bit.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Sorry for the skeeve -- but thank you so much for letting me know what you think. We are nearing the endgame... And yes, do keep an eye on Nott. Two Slytherin's have betrayed their intentions... Two to go. And when will Hermione realise what is happening to Severus? Pxx
How will he do it, indeed?There is so much more going on here than meets the eye. Looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds.Thank you for posting--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Mmmmm! There are plots within plots here... Draco wants something just as his parents do... And I wonder what Theodore Nott is up to...? Thank you so much for sticking with me over this story... It's a bit of a departure for me, and I do love a challenge! Pxx
Draco is really, really creeping me out.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
*Twiddles imaginary moustache and giggles evilly*.... I do live an evil Draco....! Pxx