Chapter 12
Chapter 12 of 13
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"Professor Granger," Lucius Malfoy began. "I want... to beg for your forgiveness," he paused, clearly ruffled, "and ask for your endorsement."
Hermione stared at him in dumbfounded shock, watching as he carefully assembled an expression on his face that was part humble plea and part insouciant sneer.
A hundred questions queued up to fight for the use of her larynx. What the hell do you mean? Why didn't you lose everything as you should have done at the end of the war? Why did you follow Him? Why did you let her torture me? How did you survive? What is Draco doing, touching Severus like that? But they were so huge that they were impossible to say aloud.
What actually escaped her lips was an abstract whirring sound.
Lucius frowned, clearly disconcerted by the odd noise she had emitted.
Hermione tried again. "My... endorsement?" she asked. "For what?"
Lucius darted another look about him and cleared his throat. "I am tired of being on the outside, Professor," he said. "I need to matter again in our world."
Hermione sat back in her chair. "And you think...?" she began.
"Professor Granger, it has been a long time since the end of the war. I saved what I could of my property and financial reserves through the transfer of money from the goblins," the sneer in his voice was unmistakable, "to Muggle bank accounts in Panama, Monaco, and the Seychelles... served my time in Rehabilitation... and then settled down to a life of peaceful obscurity and humble penance."
He twirled his cane again. The emerald eyes on the serpent's head glittered in the bright sunshine, catching her attention.
"But it was not enough," he continued. "Of course I enjoyed learning how to fit into Muggle society, attending their theatres and museums... I even learned to understand their financial institutions and their sporting obsessions. For a few months, it was a pleasant diversion. My wife even took up tennis." His face twisted slightly at that. "But for all the financial rewards I have achieved in Muggle society, for all the ways in which I have been able to contribute towards that society through charitable works and my financial patronage... I feel a terrible loss, Professor. A terrible loss."
His voice was carefully pitched, low and pitiable.
"And so I need your help. I want to return to our people, Professor." There was yearning in his voice.
"You said you wanted my forgiveness." Hermione said flatly, not taken in.
"Yes. Yessss, of course." Lucius hung his head a little. "What happened in my home. To you. Was... unfortunate. Despicable. I regret it deeply." He bowed his head even further... and waited.
Hermione looked at him suspiciously.
"Oh, he means it," offered Nott from beside her, still with that peculiar sting in his tone. "He has been bored for months. After all, there are only so many routines from Singin' in the Rain and Mary Poppins that you can learn, eh, Lucius? And," he leaned forward and wagged his finger, "he's also missing his missus, aren't you, sir?"
Lucius' lip pulled back, and the fingers on his cane tightened until she could see the white bone of his knuckles through the translucent flesh. "As you say, Mister Nott. I want my wife back." He lifted his head to level an unblinking stare again at Hermione. "And a public recommendation from one of the Golden Trio will undoubtedly go a long way towards raising my standing in wizarding society... which will no doubt prompt Narcissa to return...."
A public recommendation... So that's what the slimy bastard is after, she thought grimly.
"So that your Manor which you transferred into Narcissa's name immediately after The Fall to avoid its confiscation will once again recognise its legal owner, and the property will restore itself to its former glory," supplied Nott, again with an edge to his voice, "and with your endorsement, Hermione, Lucius will then be able to transfer all his holdings back into his name, fully resume his Gringotts account without fear of additional confiscation, be invited to all the best parties, stand for membership of the Wizengamot, become ever richer and more powerful, and live truly happily ever after...."
Lucius made a mocking little bow. "As you say, Theodore, happily ever after." He smiled tentatively again at Hermione, his face a perfect mixture of bashful entreaty and charming encouragement.
"No." Hermione said it quietly, but in the false silence of the Muffliato charm, the word was clearly audible. She cleared her throat. "No," she repeated, louder.
"Ahhhh," Lucius stroked the top of his cane again. "Draco thought that you might be a little reluctant to accept my entreaty. In that case, Professor Granger, may I propose... a trade?"
"Don't be ridiculous," Hermione scoffed. "You have nothing that I could possibly..."
Lucius held up a finger, effectively cutting her off. "On the contrary, Professor. I think that I have something that you do want, very much indeed."
Moving slowly, the long, pale finger gestured towards the two silent men sitting four rows below them, one as dark as nightshade, the other as pale as mistletoe.
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Severus could feel Draco's soothing fingertips on the sensitive skin above his collar. The pleasure was indescribable. Arousal skittered along his nerves. If he had been able to move, he would have arched into Draco's touch. "How could you ever have cared for that silly witch?" the boy asked him, close and breathy in his ear, "when you could have had me?
Not silly, he thought stubbornly. Beautiful. Intelligent.
Hermione... Hermione. He tried to think.
Draco's fingers stroked his skin again. Aaaah! The pleasure of it.... Severus shivered.
Draco was whispering to him again. "Another strawberry, Severus?"
I don't like them. I don't want it. No. He tried to pull away, but his body would not move.
The boy's fingers played across his flesh again, and Severus almost fainted from the delightful sensations that they brought.
Yessss....
He opened his mouth.
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Hermione stared at Lucius, then looked again at Severus bending into the touch of the fawning blonde beside him.
"What the hell do you mean?" she hissed angrily, her hand curling around the polished wood of her wand.
Malfoy purred, "Why, it's a simple exchange, Professor Granger. You scratch my back... and I will ensure that Severus is, ahhh, scratching yours again by the end of the day."
He giggled slightly as his own joke and sat back in his seat.
Hermione felt herself grow very cold.
She stared again at the two men sitting below her in the Royal Box. She watched Draco offer Severus another strawberry and the older man bite slowly into the fruit.
"I don't think it is a simple as that," Nott said.
Lucius flashed him an irritated look. "Draco will do as we agreed," he muttered flatly. "Severus is nothing to him. It was a temporary infatuation, nothing more. As you well know, Mister Nott."
"Oh, don't be so naive, Lucius," Nott spat bitterly. "It's never been about you, you arrogant prick. Draco wants Severus. He always has, and the Malfoys have a way of getting what they want."
"Draco's in love with Severus?" Hermione stammered.
"No. Gods, no." Nott laughed unhappily. "I'm not sure he knows the meaning of the word anymore."
Lucius' eyes darted between Nott's ruddy face and the pale perfection of his son's coiffure. Hermione could tell he was on edge.
"Wh-what are you implying?" Lucius blustered.
"Look, you were able to send me packing, you bastard, even though Draco and I were together." Nott blushed furiously. "But Draco wants something more in return for what Severus did to him after the war. That's why he developed Iago."
"What?" Hermione swivelled in her seat to fix Nott with a fierce glare. "What the hell is 'Iago'? What is going on, Theodore?"
Nott's face twisted into unhappiness, but whatever he was about to say died on his lips as his eyes widened.
The Muggle spectators around them were stretching and standing, their actions curiously silent thanks to the Muffliato Charm Hermione had cast. It was obviously another break in the play beneath them.
That was not the reason for Nott's tension and his silence.
Severus and Draco had turned around.
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A/N: Uh--oh.... just what has Draco got planned for them all...? How much does Theodore Nott know? Will Severus be able to withstand Iago long enough to save the day? And are Lucius' dancing days soon to be over...? All these questions will be answered in the final chapter of this tale which will be posted on New Year's Day....
Thank you to those of you who take the time to review!
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129 Reviews | 5.41/10 Average
"Drink Me, Professor" - I'm loving this! And I loved that little reflection to AiW. It was the perfect way to hint these two are abound to go down the rabbit hole!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Ha! Thank you for taking the time to review, Helen Rickman! I'm glad that this chapter amused you! Not so sure about the darker direction this story took as it grew... but I did enjoy getting the dancing Lucius in!Pxx
Chilling, Proulxes. So glad to see more of your writing!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Cheers,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! I really appreciated your bombing run this morning! I am working on the next story (much more in the style of Anima Mea then these shorter fics). It's coming along slowly, but I hope people will be patient as I will start posting very soon but there are going to be gaps between chapters! Best wishes, Pxx
Ooooooh. Very evil, Draco.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Oh yes. This time around, I fancied a truly nasty Draco - but he has good reason for it. Thank you for your review! Pxx
Really well written, thank you for sharing! :D
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Thank you,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
- I really appreciate you taking hte time to get in touch. Best wishes, Pxx
I'm sorry I've been slow to review! I'm very much enjoying this story, I've been hooked since the beginning. Thank goodness for Nott, finally expressing some of the hidden truths that have been hinted at! How will they get themselves out of this one? Will Severus be able to find some kind of resistance? Will Hermione save him? Will Nott help? I feel a bit sorry for Lucius, as he seems to have been manipulated rather neatly by Draco, which you set up and made clear from the beginning, but because Lucius' character upholds a kind of belief in his own power--despite everything--I can feel his own sense of losing control over what it was he really wanted.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi there,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
! Thank you for your review! You have hit a number of nails right on the head in your comments. I see Lucius essentially as you do - someone so used to exercising power that when it is taken away, really cannot function anymore. Draco is more sinister in this tale - and I very much enjoyed playing about with Nott. We don't know that much about Theodore, and so I was able to exploit that to my advantage. I did want you to get the sense of losing control, from a number of the characters, and hope that you enjoy the final installment on New Year's Day! Best wishes, Pxx
Oh and yeah, Severus, SNAP out of it!!!!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Tee hee!! Yeah, come ON Severus!! Pxx
Can't wait for the conclusion on New Year's Day...The suspense is killing meeeeee!!!!!
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Count with me... 48... 47... 46.... lol. Thanks for your review!! Pxx
Draco obviously has some sort of revenge planned out. I think Theodore knows everything that's going on, and I think Severus will push through Iago, once he sees Hermione. He was already starting to pull through in this chapter, until Draco fed him another strawberry. Whether or not Severus will be in time to save the day, is a different matter. But I'm sitting on pins and needles.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I hope the final chapter lives up to your expectations,
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
!! Thank you for taking the time to write to me. The end is nigh!!! Pxx
Sooo... Iago is a potion... and allows the user to manipulate anyone they can trick into ingesting it? And this is the way Draco intends to exact retribution from Severus for not defending him at trial... And Theo and Draco were an item until Lucius busted up the happy couple? That would have to be before they graduated from Hogwarts, wouldn't it?"Severus and Draco had turned around." OMG! Did both Draco and Severus hear Theo's statement that he and Draco had been a couple, and that Draco had developed the Iago Potion? Noooo, Hermione had cast the Muffliato Charm.I cannot imagine how you're going to conclude this story, but I hope Hermione and Severus will have the opportunity to get their poop in a group and kiss and make up. I can't wait for New Year's Day!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
HI braye! Lovely to hear from you again! I think you do know how I'm going to resolve it... ;) ... given that you guessed most of the story in one of your first reviews!!! Lol!! As you know I do love a good HEA.., so long as there is a little bit of angst and vulnerability on the way.... Best wishes, Pxx
One, two--three days until the New Year and can't wait for the next chapter!!! Enjoying the suspense and tension, and am eagerly waiting in *anticipation* But I must side with those who hope the Malfoys don't get away with their despicable plotting too easily... I know Hermione can be quite juidicious, but in the case, nah... let 'em have it (yes, I'm in a feisty mood this evening--hehe!)! xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi nag! I am so pleased you are enjoying the suspense in this story - it has driven me crazy to place our heroes in such a constrained position and keep things so tightly controlled... but I hope that the final chapter will offer a final showdown that is worthy, logical, and satisfying. Pxx
Yikes. Just... yikes. Now that Lucius' and Draco's motivations have (mostly) been exposed, I'm anxious to learn how Theodore figures into the equation.Well done, P!hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hello, hm88!! Ahhh - the answers are there, and they are coming fast! Shall Severus find a way to resist Iago? Will Hermione let rip at Wimbledon and blow the Statute of Secrecy right out of the water? Will Cliff Richard return and save the day? THANK YOU so much for reviewing! Pxx
All this for an endorsement? Not likely in the mood Hermione's in. I think Nott has feelings for Draco, which would explain why he reacted the way he did in the flashback. I wonder if Draco has feelings for Severus, which is what I thought from the same scene. I hope Severus makes the right choice. I'm surprised Hermione hasn't sent out those sparks of hers yet.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
I'm not sure that Severus can do much at the moment - because of the power that Draco is exerting over him... will Hermione realise what is going on, and what can she do about it without risking blowing the Statute of Secrecy out of Centre Court.... the story is now complete and I'll post the penultimate chapter on Sunday, with the final one on New Year's Eve - and all the questions will be answered... THANK YOU so much for taking the time to review again! Best wishes, Pxx
When Lucius announced that they were about to tee off I cracked up. He really has outdone himself in wrangling an invitation to Wimbledon! I had no idea Draco has been in love with Severus. So I guess Lucius is in love with Narcissa, and Narcissa is really in love with Luciuc, too. Severus and Hermione are really in love with each other. Is Theo is in love with Draco, or with Hermione? How long will it take Hermione to decide to rescue Severus? "Miss— Professor Granger... I want... to beg for your forgiveness... And ask for your endorsement."If Hermione is willing to sponsor Lucius' return to polite Wizarding society, perhaps he will return the favor and help her free Severus. Perhaps...Hope you had a wonderful Christmas.Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
It was lovely, thank you, Beth - and I finished this story too which was an added bonus! Mmmm. I'm not sure our Slytherin anti-heroes embrace the idea of 'love' in quite the same way as we might! The next two chapters will be up soon. I do hope you had a great Christmas - and thank you as ever for the review!! Pxx
Her endorsement? Oooh, can't wait for Hermione's response! And can't wait for things to explode, off the court that is--or for *someone* to help Severus escape the *paws*, clutches, of Draco and what he may have planned... I'll never look at strawberries the same again--Can't wait for more!xx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hello nag!! Hope you had a lovely Christmas. The end is nigh -- and Severus will face a terrible choice. Da da da duuuuuuuummmmmm! Pxx
Oooh, okay, I'm officially in a tizzy about Narcissa, and Nott--but thank Merlin, Hermione is registering that Severus is not himself... Ooooh, please, please, please--forget Christmas and get the next chapter posted as soon as possible--lol! Seriously-as soon as possible! Eagerly awaiting more!xxx
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
You have your wish, nag!! The next chapter is now posted.. and I have also (thanks to the holidays) completely finished it! The final two chapters are now awaiting the attentions of the fabulous Clairvoyant. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Pxx
The subtle menacing air threatening to be unleashed by Lucius on Hermione is palpable, as is the dubious (?) reuniting of mother and son in the Narcissa and Draco scene--and Severus! What else has Draco done and how long will the effects last, and does Narcissa have any buried loyalty to Severus to help him out in a time of need? Must read on! Thank you for a thrilling, plot-thickening chapter--can't wait for things to *explode*--one way or another!:-D
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Aaaahhh, yes... Narcissa will survive, no doubt. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the chapter. This story has been a tough one to write because I have made myself stick to fewer than 2,000 words per chapter.... ;) Pxx
Oh, P... What on earth do you have in store for our heroes?Holding my breath in anticipation--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Bad things. Baaad things...! But you know me... there will be a resolution... and some redemption... and the rest would be telling! More coming soon! Pxx
I do think Nott knows whats going on...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
*whispers* I think he does too!! Pxx
I must admit that I am completely bewildered by the turns this story takes, besides being intrigued. I am looking forward to more from Severus, Lucius and even Cliff Richard...
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Answers are on the way, believe me! Each Slytherin has his or her own agenda and the climax of the story sees all of them laid bare. Thank you so much for sticking with me on this tricky, tricky tale....! Pxx
This was really exciting.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Thank you! More to come soon! Pxx
Ah ha! Hermione is finally reaching the limit of her tolerance for BS and is starting to issue her own demands: "Stop messing me around, and answer the bloody question, you supercilious cow!" she hissed in the woman's ear. "Where the hell is Severus? What have you done with my– him?" This cracked me up.I'm glad that Severus realizes that he has been drugged, but I can't imagine what he can do to free himself from Draco's influence... so I think it's going to fall on Hermione's shoulders to "kick a little arse." What was Lucius about to say he wanted from Hermione. Why does touching her wrist seem to have a numbing/calming effect on her... or at least momentarily divert her attention?What does Theo know that no one else seems to be aware of? It seems that Draco is driving the behavior of everyone of interest here, and I hope Hermione snaps out of her "wondering phase" and starts "kicking arse." I'm really looking forward to the next update!!!Beth
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Hi Beth! It's on its way - chapter 11 will take a few days to beat into shape.. and we are definitely on the spiral towards the climax of the tale. With your customary insight you are picking up the clues in the chapter....! Pxx
I'm glad Severus realizes he's drugged, and now Hermione knows something's not right. Was it me, or did Theodore try to signal Hermione about the situation. It seemed that he was going to tell her what's happening. I hope she can get to Severus before anything else goes on. The implied Draco/Severus is sort of skeeving me out a bit.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Sorry for the skeeve -- but thank you so much for letting me know what you think. We are nearing the endgame... And yes, do keep an eye on Nott. Two Slytherin's have betrayed their intentions... Two to go. And when will Hermione realise what is happening to Severus? Pxx
How will he do it, indeed?There is so much more going on here than meets the eye. Looking forward to seeing how it all unfolds.Thank you for posting--hm88
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
Mmmmm! There are plots within plots here... Draco wants something just as his parents do... And I wonder what Theodore Nott is up to...? Thank you so much for sticking with me over this story... It's a bit of a departure for me, and I do love a challenge! Pxx
Draco is really, really creeping me out.
Response from Proulxes (Author of The Iago Complex)
*Twiddles imaginary moustache and giggles evilly*.... I do live an evil Draco....! Pxx