I am in the process of rereading most of the stories in this archive, on memory lane looking out for "old friends". I started with the Z- and found this one at Y, and I must say it brought me some hours of joy to read this wonderful story all over again:-))

Still so good upon reread.  *happy sigh*

Brilliant. Loved it. And how awesome are you to address the prompts in such a clever, funny & enthralling read. Extremely well done!

OMG!!'"Oh, shit! You don’t even have eyebrows! You can’t scowl! I broke your scowl!" she cried in horror.'
Best. Ever. Hahaha
I haven't even read the whole chapter yet. That line wrecked me completely! Laughing so hard!! Thankyou. 

This story was great. I absolutely LOVED how you wrote Snape perfectly with using only his eyes. THAT is writing talent right there. I loved your Hermione. She was compassionate, headstrong and intelligent. I thought Snape's and Hermione's relationship growth was absolutely beautiful.

Honestly, the demon plot point threw me for a loop because your beautiful, heart-felt story took an unexpected dark and creepy turn. I didn't really care for that part as much as the rest of the story, honestly. However, the resolution from the encounter was great. It completely broke my heart and I have the tissue here to prove it! I am so glad they found a solution in the end because I would've been crushed otherwise. Thanks for writing.

This was amazing.  I was riveted through the entire thing.
Bravo, bravo, bravo!  And now I have to figure out how to navigate the banality of everyday life with the aftershocks of your incredible tale rumbling in my brain....

What a splendid achievement! You covered all the prompts and then some. You made me cry for the last 45 minutes too. I woke my husband up blowing my nose and typing. Thank you for the happy ending. Now it is 2:40 AM and I must get some sleep before I must go on with real life. It I remembered Hermione would lose her sight as it went along, but didn't remember how they resolved things until I read them. It is the only fun part of memory problems. Thank you for a great story, again. I might read it again for the first time in a year or so. : )

I love liking Lavender, you hardly ever do in these stories. I'm so sorry for Draco, but I think between Lavender, Hermione and Severus he will have a family. And I'm so happy he knows his parents are not suffering in Hell forever. Especially with the guilt that his mother would be there forever because of him. Severus is loyal to the end. No Gryffindor in the world is more loyal than that Slytherin. If she thinks about it, she is worth more than 50 Lily Potters, and look what he did for her even after she spurned him.  If one must be blind, they may as well be a witch. Magic is wonderful! 

I think I remember what Hermione pays. It would be worth it to me, if it's what I'm thinking. BTW-Is your note above regarding readers for podcasts? I don't know how long ago that was posted. 

I'm fascinated. There. I hope you're happy! I shouldn't still be up. 

It's too emotional to speak about and it's getting late. I have to get to the next chapter. bye

Expletives galore!!!!!! Bldie Fck! F ing Hll! Merlin's dick in a sling!!!  That was Lucius!  No no no. This cannot happen to Severus. She won't let it. She thinks faster than I do. I'm glad she had the presence of mind to get him out of there before the Aurors figure out what's next. 

So sad....Hasn't Hermione looked at those pages on the floor yet? I refuse to believe there is no hope. 

Wow, isn't magic amazing! I can totally picture those pages tempting her to read them. Snape's kiss on her hand is crushing. I have confidence you won't let him die. He deserves to be happy now. He has paid he debt.  I bet Draco knows something that might help Snape. Hopefully he's willing to talk to her.

Blast and Damn!  

Hermione will fix it, though!  She'll figure it out.  She always does. And now my demented memory has started stirring. I've read this story before. The only good thing about memory loss is that you can read the same books over and over. You have an idea where they are going, but you are still surprised. Yey, i guess. I must have liked the ending or I would have remembered that. I don't do sad endings. However, I have no idea how this ends. I'm assuming it ends with Severus and Hermione together or I wouldn't even be here. Well, on I go. The adventure is still to unfold. Other than I think Hermione figures out how to save Snape, I'm a blank. Wish me luck!

Damned New Paper idiots!  She should give them a good hexing. I think Severus would actually like to hear how she is doing. I think he's grown fond of her. Caring for another person's problems gives you a reason to go on. He'll wish he could help her, I'm sure. He is one of the good guys after all, and he gave more for the war than even Harry did. Maybe she should take Lavender up on her offer. What about Order Headquarters? I bet if Kingsly knew she needed a place to live he'd have connections. She could even talk to Mr. Weasely. I'll bet he has connections in the Ministry. Helping others makes him happy too. I suppose there's always Hogwartz. I highly doubt Minerva would send her away. Does Harry know she's moving out? He has the ability to help her financially, but she'd probably never let him. 

F Ron!  Bless poor Severus! And, bless Hermione!

Indeed! It was beyond cruel to let him die thinking they all hated him! I'm happy Hermione is here to finally protect him.  Sometimes people in health care forget it isn't just another day at work for the patient. I work with new parents. Nothing makes a better pediatrician or OB/Gyn than recently having a baby.  I'm sorry for Ron and his family but not as sorry as I am for Severus Snape. Too bad Ron won't come down there and get some perspective. I hope Hermione gets rid of him soon.  She deserves more than Ronald Weasely can ever offer. 

Outstanding first chapter.  You literally made be laugh out loud with Hermione's comment about how he looked with no hair and "You can’t scowl! I broke your scowl"

Having spent more time than I would like in hospital rooms I think you painted a realistic picture of an over-worked hospital staff and while most I'm sure are wonderful people you do occasional find one who should find another field to work in.

Great job!

I know this story was written some time ago but I am just now learning about how to review on this site.  I just wanted you to know I very much enjoyed this story and often re read it.  The characters are wonderfully written and this story started my interest in reading more fanfic.  After having read quite a few now I have to say this one remains as a favorite. 

wow, that was awesome

Love it!!! I am glad you didn't skimp out and make everything peachy with Hermione's deal with the demon. The hearing loss was a good (bad?) surprise.Excellent writing and creative response to the prompt!

LOVED it!

What an absolutely fabulous story you have written. It is not only orginal, but your writing style is captivating and fresh.Thanking you ever so much.Love Sonia :)

Your story is so beautiful it made me cried. I get throw off easily by badly written stories that I would not continue to read them no matter how good the content may be. The fact that I finished this chapter alone speaks for itself. There just seem to be something about the way you write about their expressions like when Snape's in bed that just seemed so human, so real that it got me attached deeper than normal reading materials and I also found the whole daemon idea brilliantly delivered. It's not easy pulling that off with ace from all SSHG I've read and I've practically read all of them (that's
completed at least.)