Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages
ancientgirl251 Reviews | 6.43/10 (251 Ratings, 0 Likes, 189 Favorites )
COMPLETE - The gang is in their last year of the university and get a substitute teacher for their class one day. Ron hasn't been studying and is all nervous. Unfortunately for Severus and Hermione, they get stuck in the middle of the mess.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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thank you for a new chapter. wonderfully exciting.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thanks! There is a bit more excitement to come so hang on.
That was great I still have a smile on my face. Best wishes, love your writing.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you! I'm happy that I put a smile on your face. It makes me feel good if I write something that people remember and smile. I should hopefully have a new chapter up soon. I'm working on 8.
Thank you for a new chapter. The pillow fight was fun. Yes, she must keep a close eye on them. They are both too smart for their own good.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I've never had a pillow fight myself, so I thought it would be fun to let them have at each other.Harry and Ron are going to have to watch themselves too. I'll have a new chapter soon.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
I've got 2 kids and every chance the get the wack me with a pillow. They attempt that with hubby. They decide to get him when its time to wake up by their clocks. He can't win that way.
My youngest woke up extremely happy yesterday. I asked her why she was awake. She said because Jesus said Please wake up.
Kids can be so darn cute and then they act like a bunch of indians. then again they think they are cowgirls because grandma has a horse.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
LOL, that's cute. Kids can be very cute and the can also be little demons too. A happy medium is nice.You have two girls then? God, I would have loved a horse when I was little. Heck, I'd love one now. I've always thought horses were the most beautiful animal ever created.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
If you ever get one. Get a white horse. Maybe male. Mom has female. When there is a human male around the horse tries to flirt.
update soon
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm working on chapter 8. I'll get it up soon. Thanks for reading.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
cool ginny needs to get some from lucise
So wee-wee is OK and potty isn't (LOL). Love this fic, you write the children so well. Hopefully this bodes well for when they're cured? Love the Lucius / Ginny stuff as well.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
LOL, go figure! Wee-wee is the way to go for Severus. I"m glad you are enjoying this. I appreciate your comments. I sometimes wonder if I'm writing them right, since I don't really have any kids to observe on a dialy basis. I'm also glad you like the LM/GW thing. I started them in my last story and realized I enjoyed writing them as a potential couple, so its nice that other people like reading them too.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I just had to giggle at Severus and Hermione. They are so cute as children!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. I love writing them as kids. It's been fun and different. I'm glad you are enjoying this story so far. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Thank You!!!! This was great!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the next chapter. My boss stepped out so I figured I'd make my time useful.
The potty bit is just too funny.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thanks. I could just see his little face as he felt he was just given the worst possible insult.
This has fast become my most anticipated story. I am having a wonderful time. You write the "children" very well and I really like the growing attraction between Lucious and Ginny. Thanks. Looking forward to more soon. JoAnne
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
JoAnne, thank you. I don't have kids of my own, and only have my friends and relatives kids to go by, so your comment means a lot to me. I'm enjoying writing the Lucius/Ginny dynamic. I think its a bit similar to Severus and Hermione, but just different enough to be interesting and new.
I wonder what mischief the two little ones will get into next.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I can tell you Harry and Ron won't come away from their visit unscathed.
I love this story. Would you please hurry up and update!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Funny you should say that. It just happens that I sent chapter 7 to June my beta this afternoon. Hopefully if she send is back to me soon I can post it.Sorry its taking so long for me to update. But work has been insane.Thanks for reading this though. I'm very glad you are enjoying it.
Response from Amethyst (Reviewer)
I understand insanity; am currently full of in my life at the moment. Glad to hear the chapter will be soon!
If anything, if they get out of their miniature predicament, I hope this teaches Severus something valuable. His walls have definitely been brought down, and it would be wonderful if he didn't reconstruct all of them when - and if - he becomes an adult again.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
He's learned something that's for sure. You'll see when you get up to chapter 9.
So glad you've updated this, it's such a novel idea and really funny. Can't wait for more.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I wanted to upload a long chapter, since RL has me busy for a few days. Hopefully I can sit and write the next chapter and have it up soon.I'm glad you are enjoying this.
This is great. For some reason the idea of them eating grilled cheese sandwiches and potato chips really tickled me! Good job!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you like it. I don't have kids of my own, but I've got cousins and friends that do, and I know that grilled cheese and potato chips is pretty much a staple.I'm basing most of their behavior on what I've observed from my rent a kids.
thank you for a new chapter.
Keep Snape away from the Twins
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So how pissy will he be when he sees hermione fell asleep reading a book? Is it possible the book will help answer the dilema with the new attack planned?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
No twins in this one, LOL. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like it so far.
I dread to think what Hermione might stick together, and I have to worry about the warnings here ancientgirl, after all under age sleeping together is frowned upon. HaHa.Really enjoyable, many thanks, best wishes.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
All, come on, don't you think its a cute picutre them sleeping together like little angles. LOL.Thanks for reading. I hope you find what I have in store interesting.
Its just brilliant. Snape standing on Hermione's hair, and the snarry Yes Mother. Very clever chapter. Best wishes.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I pictured the entire scene in my head and thought it might be cute. He seems to be the type to do that to a girl. I see hair pulling coming.
Haha! I like this one. Snape is just as pissy in his little pint-sized body as in his big one. Good job. Muahahaha
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Yeah, don't you just want one?He's so cute.
Looks to be cute story. Cannot wait to see how the story turns out.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I think we need more cute stories out there don't you? I hope you enjoy the rest of this.Thanks for taking the time to review.
OMG!!!!! Sounds wonderfu;l!!!!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Oh thanks. I'm working on another chapter, so hopefully I'll have more up soon.I hope you continue to enjoy it.
oh this is going to be spectular... waiting for more.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I hope it will be at least close to spectacular.I will hopefully have more up this week.
hahaha! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
This is the idea I got when I was answering a review you left me for my last story.I hope you like the rest.
LOL what a brilliant idea. Can't wait to read more.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. I'm glad you like it so far.
An amusing idea. Like you, I've seen stories where characters get turned into babies or adults into teens, but this is a definitely different twist. I look forward to following your story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you like this so far. It's hard to think of something original after having read so many fics, but hopefully this is interesting enough to make it different.
good story is this the one you said base on what the kids said. what did the kids say anyway i can't recall what it was.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Yes this is. I had made a comment about thinking it was fun having two little Snapes running around causing havoc, then the idea hit me of having Severus and Hermione turn into 6 year olds.Thanks for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like it so far.