Say Goodbye, Tom
Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages
Chapter 17 of 19
ancientgirlThings come to a head, and Voldemort looses his fight.
ReviewedThank you once again to those of you who have taken the time to read this story and review it. I appreciate your words of encouragement.
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A big thank you to June for all of her help and suggestions.
Chapter 17 Say goodbye, Tom
Voldemort felt a cold stream of liquid hit the center of his forehead. He jerked back as he wiped the fluid from his face.
Severus immediately took several steps back.
"Severus, what have you done to yourself?" asked Voldemort, amused.
"If I were you, I would be worrying about what I've done to you." Severus smirked.
"Do you think that anything you have in your little Muggle toy will do anything to me?" hissed the Dark Lord. He lunged at Severus but stopped abruptly.
Severus looked on. He continued to back up slowly as he dropped the pistol.
Voldemort touched his forehead where Severus had hit him with the liquid. His skin felt like it was moving.
"What did you do!" yelled Voldemort.
Harry, who'd been knocked out previously, immediately sat up. He screamed. It felt as though his scar were being ripped open.
"Harry, what's wrong?" asked Hermione.
"It's like a vise in my head. Like something..." Harry began to breathe heavily. "Something is being pulled from me."
More Aurors began arriving as well as members of the Order. There were at least one hundred Death Eaters in the large ballroom, all of them too busy fighting Aurors to realize that Lucius was not helping Voldemort, and that Harry was now conscious. Arthur, Remus and Ron concentrated on stunning every Death Eater they came across. Tonks worked alongside Mad-Eye Moody and Shacklebolt.
Harry stood shakily. Severus ran to his side then.
"He's getting weaker. It's up to you now, Harry. You can either kill him or let him just..." Severus looked back at the swaying Voldemort. "...Fade away."
The walls of the room began to tremble. Behind the altar, Lucius held Ginny in his arms. He'd taken his wand and whispered into her ear.
"Ennervate."
Ginny's eyes finally fluttered open. She looked at Lucius' worried eyes.
"Lucius," his name rolled softly from her lips. "Hold me, don't let me go."
"I'm here, Ginny, and I've got you now." Lucius held her closely and looked around the altar. He needed to get her away from the estate. Something was happening. He felt the floor beneath him shaking; he feared that the entire structure was going to fall on top of them at any moment. He cast a Disillusionment Charm on them both and walked along the edge of the room. There were several moments when he had to stop to avoid getting them both killed.
Harry stood in front of Voldemort, who seemed to be withering away before their eyes. Voldemort was dragging himself up the steps, his eyes never leaving Harry's.
"I can't tell you how long I've waited for this day to come," said Harry.
Voldemort chuckled.
"Poor little Harry. Lost your mummy and daddy so long ago." As he spoke, Vodemort began to change. His appearance was slowly turning back to the person he used to be. Tom Riddle. "How long do you think you can play the sympathy card, eh, Harry?"
Harry stopped his advance and stared into his adversary's eyes.
"I hate you, Harry. I have killed you so many times in my dreams. I have tortured you, maimed you; I have taken you to the farthest depths of hell and back only to begin all over again when next I closed my eyes to dream."
Harry spread his arms.
"Well, here I am, then. Kill me now." Harry smiled wickedly, "You can't and you know it. That potion Snape hit you with is tearing your entire body structure apart." Harry crouched down on one knee.
Tom began to struggle for air. "You think you've suffered? You cannot imagine the demons I have had to struggle with in my life. Taunting me, taking bits and pieces of my soul every time I closed my eyes."
"And what have these demons of yours looked like, Tom?" Harry stood then raised his wand and pointed it at Tom's head.
Cold brown eyes looked into Harry's.
"They looked like you, Harry Potter. They looked like you."
"Avada Kedavra!" yelled Harry. A flash of green light illuminated from his wand and engulfed Tom's entire body. At that moment the room shook violently and the missing ceiling was restored, only to begin crumbling. Harry stood mesmerized as the body of his mortal enemy began to implode.
He felt a hand grab him by the arm, and he turned to see Albus' face.
"Harry, we must go now!" Albus pulled Harry along with him, as he took hold of Severus' hand. Severus held on to Hermione, and they all began running towards the door.
Outside there was already a crowd of Aurors holding all of the Death Eaters that had been in the mansion within an enchanted circle to keep them from escaping. The Aurors had evacuated their prisoners when they realized the house was falling.
Arthur and Ron paced, frantically looking toward the front doors of the house to see if they saw any sign of Ginny and Lucius. After several agonizing minutes they saw Lucius emerge with Ginny cradled in his arms.
"Lucius!" Arthur called and waved.
Lucius immediately ran to Arthur. He gently set Ginny down on the ground and wrapped his cloak around her.
"She's a bit shaken up, but she's fine," said Lucius. "Voldemort didn't complete the last spell, so her magical powers are safe. She should go to St. Mungos, just in case."
"Thank the gods." Arthur hugged his daughter, then looked at her rescuer. "Thank you, Lucius."
Ron stepped forward and extended his hand towards Lucius.
"I'm sorry for what I said yesterday. I had no right."
Lucius nodded and accepted his handshake.
"They're still in there!" yelled Tonks from behind them. "Albus, Harry, Severus and Hermione are still inside. The house is falling."
Lucius looked at the crumbling Riddle Mansion. He ran towards the doors.
"Lucius!" Ginny saw Lucius running back to the house. "Daddy, stop him."
"I can't, Ginny." Arthur held Ginny back from running. The house was in a dangerous state; it wasn't safe for anyone to enter. He only hoped that Lucius would get to the others in time.
Lucius went inside. There were floorboards and debris falling all over him. He ran back into the ballroom, but didn't realize that as he went through the archway Albus, Harry, Severus and Hermione were coming out from the back part of the house. They had found a way out from the back of the ballroom. As they ran outside, they barely missed a large beam falling on them.
They ran towards the group of Order members and noticed immediately Lucius was missing.
"Where is Lucius?" asked Severus.
"He went back inside for you," said Ron.
Severus turned and ran as fast as he could back into the house.
"No!" Hermione tried to run after him but was grabbed by Harry. "Harry, let me go, please," she sobbed.
"Hermione, it's too dangerous," said Harry as he held her struggling six-year-old body. "There's nothing you can do."
Severus ran into the house. He went back towards the ballroom. The entire structure was going to come down any second.
"Lucius!" He called. "Lucius, are you here?" From behind a large wood beam he saw Lucius' blond mane. He ran towards it and saw Lucius struggling to get free. The beam had fallen on him, and Lucius had no wand.
"Are you all right?" asked Severus.
"Severus, get out of here!" yelled Lucius. "This is all coming down, please go!"
"I'm not leaving you here." Severus tried to push the beam off of Lucius, but as a six-year-old he didn't have the strength. He took his wand out, but again, his magic wasn't strong enough to move the beam. He threw the wand on the floor in disgust. "Dammit! What good is this!"
"Severus, it's no use. I can't move. I'm stuck here. You have to go." Lucius sighed and looked around him. He looked at the altar and saw the ever-growing vortex of energy beginning to suck everything into it. The altar was supposed to drain Ginny's magical powers and then transfer them to Voldemort; without Ginny, the altar simply began draining everything. If Lucius and Severus didn't get away soon, their powers as well as they themselves would be gone.
Severus pushed against the beam until his little arms were shaking.
"Lucius, you're the only family I've ever had." Severus felt the sting of tears in his eyes. "You're my brother, I'm not going to let you die here, at least not alone." Severus fell to his knees. Thoughts of Hermione filling his mind. How he would have loved to make her his wife. To have children with her someday. He loved her, that much he could finally admit to himself, but now it was too late.
"Wait," Lucius said. "I think my wand fell down in that crevice. Can you reach it?" He noticed Severus' hesitation. "Don't worry, I just saw Nagini go into that energy hole just before you ran in here."
Severus began to crawl into a small hole between the beam that was holding Lucius in and a hole in the floor. He was relieved to find out he wouldn't be leaving this world in the pit of the big snakes stomach. After a few very long seconds he came back up with Lucius' wand in his hand. He grabbed his own and put it in his coat. Then he handed Lucius his wand.
Lucius easily moved the beam, then stood and picked Severus up.
"Hold on my friend, let's hope we can Apparate out of here." With a loud pop they disappeared, and not a moment too soon.
Outside the crowd looked on in horror. The mansion that was once the home of the Riddle family was being sucked into a black hole of energy.
Hermione ran towards the hole but was pushed back by the explosion when it closed.
"NO!" cried Hermione.
Ginny walked towards Hermione and fell to her knees as she looked on in disbelief.
"It can't be," said Ginny softly. "He...can't be gone." Ginny fainted and fell to the ground.
Everyone stood motionless. No one believed what they had just seen.
Lucius and Severus Apparated to the spot where they were when they initially arrived. They saw the implosion from where they stood.
Severus saw Hermione running toward the deflating hole. He saw her fall to the ground and begin to cry. He didn't know how far or how fast he ran, but he found himself by her side at last. He took hold of her shoulders and tried to lift her towards him.
"He's gone, Harry," Hermione cried.
"What are you on about, you silly girl?" asked Severus.
Hermione's head jerked up and she smiled.
"Severus!" she threw herself on him so hard he fell on his back. Hermione straddled him and began pouring kisses all over his face. "Oh Severus! I was so afraid," she kissed his forehead, then his eyes, then his nose. "I thought you were dead! Don't you ever scare me like that again! I love you so much, I love you, I love you." She stopped kissing him when she didn't feel him respond, and looked at his face.
He smiled. "I love you too, although I will most probably spend the rest of my life at St. Mungo's for therapy after this."
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This isn't over yet. I've got maybe another two chapters to go I think. I hope you all enjoyed this one.
On a side note: Some of you might be wondering why Lucius didn't just take Severus wand to move the beam on top of him.
I don't believe its as easy as using another persons wand. In Sorcerer's Stone Harry tried a few wands with disastrous results, until his wand found him. If it were a matter of people being able to borrow another's wand then why didn't Ron just borrow someone else's wand in Transfiguration class in Prisoner of Azkaban?
Minerva told him to replace it. The wand is an extension of the user, and I believe its part of him/her. I don't one person's wand would work properly for anyone else.
That's my thinking on it and that's why I wrote it that way.
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251 Reviews | 6.43/10 Average
Wonderful story. I've read lots of yours but nevver saw this one. Its wo derful what randome serches reap.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you for taking the time to read this one as well as the others! I'm glad you liked my other stories enough to give this one a read.
A very exciting chapter, Voldermort is gone , for good this time, Severus and Lucius are safe , and as soon as Ginny comes to all will be well.
LOVED this fic!! Lemons were perfect! Missy
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Oh wow, you read the whole thing in one shot? LOL, thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I tried to have a little bit of everything in this one.
Boring? No. Adorable? YES!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Great Story. I loved it
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Another great story. Some parts were extremely sad but the story flowed so well. I absolutely loved 6-year-old Severus!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Six year old Severus was really interesting to write. I thought Hermione complimented him really well here.
that was a truly wonderful story. i'm always torn between evil!lucius and redeemed!lucius but your lucius was the best. thanks so much
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I like writing redeemed Lucius. JKR can have her evil Lucius. :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I like writing redeemed Lucius. JKR can have her evil Lucius. :)
Good story, mostly light and fun. I enjoyed it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. I tried to make it fun with as little angst as possible.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. I tried to make it fun with as little angst as possible.
Very cute funny and some great touching scenes. I don't think I've read any stories where Lucius turned into a good guy. I like it :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you like it so far. I have several stories with Lucius as the good guy. I'd always hoped JKR would surprise us at the end and make him good.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you like it so far. I have several stories with Lucius as the good guy. I'd always hoped JKR would surprise us at the end and make him good.
Definitely not boring. I'm very curious about what will happen next.
Oh this sounds quite fun. I am intrigued so will move on to the next chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I hope you enjoy it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I hope you enjoy it.
I love this story its my fav.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I loved this story, it was a great stoy, you made the pairing of Ginny and Lucius actually acceptable, and real. I like the way you ended it too, because it makes the whole story go in a circle. It's a good story.
Wonderful story, very enjoyable read. Little Sev and Hermione behaved just like 6 yr olds , bossy, impertinent and oh so cute ( I have one of my own so I know!) Ron and Harry holding hands.. snuck that one in didn't you. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us all
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. While I was writing this, I had hoped I was getting the 6 year old attitude correct. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
This story was soooo cute!!!... I loved the mini-Snape and Hermione!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
lmao that was awesome! i loved lil Severus and lil Hermione lol and drunk lil Severus and lil Lucius
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thought little drunk Severus and Lucius would be fun.
This is a very sweet story, but Sorcerer's Stone? Surely Harry & Ron would refer to it as the Philosopher's Stone; they are, after all, British.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
At the time I wrote this, I was watching Sorcerer's Stone on DVD, and it is referred to them in that movie as Sorcerer's Stone, so I just wrote it like that.
Severus...and Potty!
oh it's just too funny.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for taking the time to review.
I like your story... but I really think you need to put a non-consensual sex warning on it (even though it's mild, it's still there.)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Hmm...I don't believe there was any non-consencual sex here. I wrote this a while ago, can you tell me which scene you felt it was?
I thought this was a great story and found myself laughing almost through the whole thing. I've enjoyed reading all your stories and hope you continue the great work.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a wonderful time writing this. It was fun turning Severus and Hermione into kids.
Thank you for taking the time to read this and leave me a review.
Well these small packages contained a lot of fun, no literature Nobel-prize, but aching abs for laughter!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Aching abs are just what I was looking for when I wrote this.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I had a wonderful time writing this.
Your story was original and adorable and a fun place to take the characters. It didn't squick me - and it was very well thought out. Great job!Big Thumbs Up!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I appreciate you leaving me such a wonderful review.
I had fun writing this story.
lol at all of them running wild around Hogwarts!!!! I really liked this story
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
Thanks. I wanted to end things on a high note. And I couldn't resist a little Lucius running around causing havoc with his little buddy.
Oh I like Wyatt Snape or is it Severus Earp the gunslinging Potionsmaster from hell.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
LOL, I'd been watching Tombstone and if you look at Kurt Russel's costume as Wyatt Earp, its quite Snapish. So I just had to add that element in here.I'm glad you enjoyed it.Thanks taking so much of your time and reading all of these.
Oooooooooooh cute cute ickle Sevvie has to wee-wee. Awww, but ickle potions masters don't go potty. Nuh nuh.This is so sweet, I think I burst a muscle laughing at this.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of Sometimes the Best Things Come in Small Packages)
This was such a fun story to write. I'm glad you are enjoying it.