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More than Brushstrokes

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One

3: Chapter 2

4: Chapter 3

5: Chapter 4

6: Chapter 5

7: Chapter 6

8: Chapter 7

9: Chapter 8

10: Chapter 9

11: Chapter 10

12: Chapter 11

13: Chapter 12

14: Chapter 13

15: Chapter 14

16: Chapter 15

17: Chapter 16

18: Chapter 18: Epilogue

More than Brushstrokes

debjunk

157 Reviews   |   157 Ratings, 0 Likes, 20 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione, as Headmistress, commissions a portrait of Severus Snape. The results are more than she expected.

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One

Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Epilogue


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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10/10

snitchette

I knew something went wrong with the spell giving life to the portrait. Let's just hope that if she can walk out of the portrait maybe there's a way he can too...

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

perhaps...

10/10

Becky

OMGosh..She is in the painting..with Severus..BRILLIANT!!! I LOVE THIS!  Ooooooo, I can't wait to see where you go with this, it's great!!!More soon PLEASE!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thank you, thank you!  I'm glad you're loving it.  Hopefully they don't kill each other before she can figure out what to do to get back to reality.

Response from Becky (Reviewer)

Well I HOPE she brings him back with her! LOL!!!!!

10/10

BellatrixLives

Ooooh.... Very intriguing story, I look forward to more :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

thank you!

10/10

sunny33

Oops. That wasn't supposed to happen! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Nope, sunny.  Definitely unexpected. 

0/10

moiramountain

The way RL is going for me these days, I'd relish a tree of my own and the time to sit under it with a virtual STACK of books - that would indeed be heaven.... and if a certain dark eyed gentleman happened to join me - well, bliss would be complete....

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Bliss indeed!  I think I'll go find a tree and wish that man over to me.  :)

10/10

snitchette

If Hermione ever learns about this she'll AK herself on the spot just to discover these lost texts.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

She would, wouldn't she?  LOL.  I suppose that the portraits can keep secrets, or she'd have somehow magicked herself into that portrait. 

10/10

sunny33

Well, at least something makes him happy! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Yes, finally!  Maybe he'll like his new life once he's read a  million books under that tree.  Hopefully not that long, though.

0/10

Javoher

This is exciting!  First 6 weeks to paint this portrait, then 3?  Spare no expense?  What will this wizard come up with, I wonder?

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Ay, sorry!  There was a typo that I missed.  It should be six weeks across the board.  Thanks, though.  :)

0/10

Athinae

I very much like the set up for the story and will be bookmarking it. I'd like to point out though (and as a Historian it is, I guess, my duty.. ;) ) that Victorian as a descreption of a dress would place the garment in question in the 19th century as that was when Queen Victoria ruled. :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Ah, thanks, that does make sense.  Glad this little tale has intrigued you.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

By the way, I uipdated that to 19th century.  :D

10/10

indigo_rose

I'm excited to see what Franco DiGregorio will create, as well!  It's a nice range of pictures that Hermione has, and portrays Severus in more of a range of emotion than simply the eternal scowl...  One wonders what the makers of the Chocolate Frog cards used to create their likeness of the old Headmaster, and if those sources would be of use to a portrait-maker also.I am eager to see what happens next, and if Phineas will finally be mollified!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

I think that once the portrait is hung, Phineas will be mollified, but only in that matter.  he seems a bit prickly if you ask me.  :) 

0/10

tenoh27

Looking forward to where you bring this story. Thank you.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thanks so much!  I hope you enjoy the ride.

10/10

indigo_rose

Good setup, and I'm definitely interested to see what happens next!  Harry and Ron without noses would be quite amusing...it should happen, even if only briefly.  I'm sure an unusually-created portriat like Severus' will be would be able to oblige, if Hermione's feeling too soft-hearted for it!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

LOL, that would truly be amusing.  We'll see what happens.  Next chapter is up.

10/10

mimmom

wooo!  That was fun!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

thank you!

0/10

Severus49

Love it love it love it! Squee!!!!! Do more! Pretty please???

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

LOL, more to come soon!  Thanks so much.  Glad you're having so much fun.

0/10

Elou

Lovely, indeed.  I just love how they feed off one another in a dance of witty banter. *giggle* Thank you for the smile it brought to me~

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Wow, thanks!  Glad you are enjoying it.  They do have a way with words, and actions, don't they?

10/10

PHONELADY

OHH THIS IS DELIGHTFUL TO READ, THIS GOES ON THE HARD DRIVE WHEN ITS DONE!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Why thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it so well.

10/10

Becky

Oh my, this is excellent!!!  I'm glad she can laugh at herself and that she lifted the hex from Severus. Lucky she has her wand...I do hope that they will become close during this time...Perhaps a bit of romance? maybe?I love this story...thank you for this update, you have made my day!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Well,

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

, this is a romance, so... They probably will hate each other until the end.  :)  Thanks, I'm glad you're loving it.

10/10

BellatrixLives

I agree with sunny33, why is she trying to get out? lol  Good chapter :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Yeah, she's nuts!  I'll take her place.

0/10

gurlimargrethe

very funny and sweet. That was a strange kind of magic

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Indeed it was!  And what more will come of it, is the quesiton.

10/10

snitchette

Now how will they get themselves out of this mess?Excactly what I was wondering! Will Hermione faint when she discovers the extended library? Or maybe she won't simply want to go back.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

She will definitely be impressed!  I think that will be one of the things that might make her not want to go back.

10/10

sunny33

Sounds like an enforced holiday to me... with Sev... Why is she trying to get out again? :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

One wonders!  I think it's her strong sense of duty, or else she'd just turn the keys over to Filius.

0/10

firewall

Love it; absolutely love it.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

:)  Thank you!

0/10

kimjo2

great jokes, my deb!  i understand the title of the story.  great stuff.  thanks and mega mucho smoochies

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

I thought they were clever.  And yes, we're dealing with a bit more than expected.   ~hugs!

0/10

sunny33

Heaven to hell. LOL Poor Herms. :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

LOL Poor Herms indeed.  She's going to have her hands full.

0/10

Elou

Oh my goodness, for a minute there I thought we were going to find out that Severus had not perished, and some how the spell had trapped his soul, taken it from his body. Let's see where you lead us...Thank you for sharing~

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Ooo, that would be scary!  More to come soon.

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