Chapter 2
Chapter 3 of 18
debjunkHermione, as Headmistress, commissions a portrait of Severus Snape. The results are more than she expected.
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Franco DiGregorio was a master. He'd been painting for over one hundred years now, and he understood what it meant to bring a portrait to life. He gazed at the photo of Severus Snape, which continued to frown at him. Looking back at his own work, he added a brush stroke to Snape's rather prominent nose. Moving back a little, he nodded in approval. The portrait was nearly finished. Severus Snape, with his jet black hair and brooding eyes, was now staring back at him. It had taken six weeks to get to this point, and finally just a few more brush strokes and the painting itself would be complete. Once done, Franco could cast the spell that would instill the portrait with movement.
His eyes went back to the frowning photo of Snape. He frowned a little to himself.
"Look, Professore" he told the picture in his flowing Italian accent. "You'll have to do more than frown if you want me to get you right in this portrait. I need to see all of your emotions, not just the negative ones."
Snape huffed and folded his arms in front of him.
Franco shrugged. "It's up to you. If you want this portrait to really reflect who you are, then you will have to show me who you are. Otherwise the magic will only conjure up a poor representation. You don't want that, now do you, Professore?"
Severus motioned up to his face, which was still frowning.
"Yes, I know. You didn't smile in real life. I also know you were a spy and probably couldn't smile or you'd be killed. Ay! Just because you show me a smile and some other positive emotions doesn't mean that your portrait will be happy all the time. It just helps to give a more complete view of who you really are... I mean were."
Snape scowled at him for another moment, then his lips curled up in what Franco assumed was a smile. It looked tense and forced.
"Well, that's a start. How about a laugh?"
Severus scowled again.
"I'll tell you a joke. Why did Professore Snape stand in the road?"
Severus' eyes narrowed.
"So no one could tell which side he was on."
This elicited an actual smile from Severus Snape.
"Ah, very good. Here's another one. What do you call a Hufflepuff with one brain cell?"
Severus raised his eyebrow in question.
"Gifted!"
This time the joke worked, and Franco saw Severus Snape actually break into a silent belly laugh. He was amazed at how the act lightened the man's face. Franco immediately began adding little touches to his work.
Half an hour later, the artist sat back again and looked at the portrait. His eyes went back and forth from photo to painting. He flipped to another photo and compared. When he'd done that with all four photographs, he nodded to himself.
"It is done."
He rose and went over to his bookshelf, pulling a thin book from it. The spell to give simulated life to a portrait was intricate and had to be done exactly right. Franco quoted it straight from the book each time he enchanted a painting. The results had always been spectacular.
Even though he'd performed this spell hundreds of times, he took the time to read through the entire section once again.
To enchant a painting, one must be very precise with the incantation. Even the slightest error in inflection could cause the spell to fail. Practice the spell carefully to ensure success.
Dare vita at non cor ad hic effigies宥ive life but not soul to this portrait.
Franco pulled out his wand and made the wand movements silently, practicing them several times before he was ready. He looked to the portrait of Snape.
"Are you ready, signore?" he asked in his heavy Italian accent. "Well, you must be, for I am ready."
Lifting his wand, he began the movements and started to say the spell.
"Dare vita at..."
At that moment, an owl flew into his back room, startling him. His wand movements hesitated as he lost his train of thought. It only took him an instant to recover, and he completed the spell.
"Cor ad hic effigies!" he cried and cast the spell. Golden light flew from his wand and covered the painting. Franco frowned as he lowered his wand. He knew better than to leave the door to his private studio open when he was enchanting a portrait. The owl had distracted him, and he hoped beyond hope that the spell had been correct. If not, he'd have to begin another painting: for once the spell was ruined, the portrait could never be enchanted.
Walking up to the portrait, he gazed upon it with trepidation. The magic of the spell was still surrounding the picture, slowly seeping into the colors on the canvas. Finally, all the golden light was absorbed, and Severus' eyes moved. Then his head looked from side to side.
"What's going on?" he said slowly.
"Ah! I thought I had made an error, Professore! It looks like everything is as it should be though! Welcome back to the wizarding world!"
Severus' eyes narrowed. "What is the meaning of this?"
"I have painted you. You are a portrait to be hung in the Headmistress' office at Hogwarts."
"But... I was just under a tree... reading. What did you do?"
Franco looked at the portrait curiously. Never before had a painting expressed knowledge of the time after death.
"I cast the Enchantment Spell upon you to give you life. You say you were under a tree? Perhaps that's a memory from your previous life?"
Severus narrowed his eyes. "No, you dimwit. I was just reading under a tree. I've been doing that since I died. It's amazingly relaxing, not having to deal with anyone. Now you've brought me here where I'll have to... speak... with people."
Franco looked at the painting with concern. Perhaps something had happened when he'd cast the spell耀ome odd combination of factors that gave this portrait a bit more awareness than others he'd created. Still, the painting was doing what it was supposed to do, mirroring what Severus Snape would normally do.
"A bit of extra self-awareness probably won't hurt," he muttered to himself.
"Send me back," Snape demanded.
"I am sorry, Professore. I can't do that. Once the elements of your personality are in the portrait, they cannot be removed."
Severus balled his hands into fists. "Do you mean to tell me I'm stuck in this tiny frame forever?"
"Well, it's not really tiny. It's three feet by four..."
"I don't care how big it is, you sorry excuse for an artist. I want to get out of it!"
Franco smiled then. "Oh, once I've hung you in your rightful place at Hogwarts, you'll be able to wander throughout the castle from portrait to portrait."
"Will I be able to read under a tree?" Severus asked caustically.
Franco shrugged. "I'm sure you can find a tree in one of the paintings, and there are books too. There are lots of paintings with bookshelves. And there's the painting of the library in the library."
"I am not interested in imaginary books! I want to read real books."
Franco shrugged again. "They'll be real to you. You'll be able to remove and read them just as if they were real."
Severus seemed slightly appeased. "How long since I died?" he asked.
"It's been twenty years, Professore."
Severus' eyes narrowed. "Twenty years?" he spat. "McGonagall is just getting around to having me commissioned now, after twenty years?"
"The Headmistress isn't Professore McGonagall, signore."
"Who is it then?" he ground through his clenched teeth. His hand came up, and he pinched the bridge of his nose, seemingly awaiting bad news.
"It's Hermione Granger, signore."
Severus shook his head, all the while squeezing his nose tighter and tighter. "You've brought me from heaven to hell," he muttered at last.
Disclaimer: All jokes cited above were taken from a Harry Potter joke website: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090605192745AAoUwtY
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157 Reviews | 6.74/10 Average
This was one of the sweetest stories with this pairing that I've read! I really enjoy seeing SSHG when they are both the same age, well done!
This should be... interesting, looking forward to more.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
I had fun with it, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing.
A lovely read. Thank you for sharing!
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Aww, thanks! I'm truly honored you enjoyed it.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Aww, thanks! I'm truly honored you enjoyed it.
Nice begining, can't wait untill the portrait is painted, and the fun begins.
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Haha, you know it!
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Haha, you know it!
A truely lovely ending, to a wonderful story. Thank you.
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Aww, thanks. I loved writing this, and am glad you enjoyed it.
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Aww, thanks. I loved writing this, and am glad you enjoyed it.
GO HERMIONE! kidnap him, stick him to the chair, and kiss him into submission. All's well ,that ends well.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
And we can't have a bad ending. Hermione kicking some butt in a loving way is what we want here.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
And we can't have a bad ending. Hermione kicking some butt in a loving way is what we want here.
HELL, trust Severus,to hex himself in the foot.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He never knows when to stop.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He never knows when to stop.
The world has been lifted of his sholders, now he can live, at last.
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I know, awesome, isn't it?
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I know, awesome, isn't it?
WOW! Never let it be said, that Severus Snape doesn't know how to make an enterance.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He is the king of entrances! And we adore him for that.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He is the king of entrances! And we adore him for that.
There is quite a bit of Griffindor in that man, OH MERLIN, what did I say? please don't tell him I said that. I'm loveing this story, on to next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, he will never admit it, though.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, he will never admit it, though.
I took the opportunity to read your story through in a oner, so haven't left any other reviews. I've really enjoyed seeing the relationship between them develop from Snape's anger at being dragged from his afterlife, via a few hitches (I particularly liked tre encounter with the giant fruit), through to their longlasting love. So glad you didn't leave Severus in the portrait with Hermione in the real world. It would have been too sad. Well done, lass. It's been a great read.
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:) Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Those one-throughs can be a lot of fun if you have the time.This was really a fun story to write. I really wanted it light and fun, and I think that came across.
yay! what a terrific ending to a terrific story! you totally rule and reign, my dearest deb. thanks and mega mucho smoochies
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Awwwww, you are always so wonderful. Mega smoochies and flowers to you, my kimjo!
Wonderful ending! Like the way you finished it with them being a portrait again. Really enjoyed this unique story.
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so well.
Amazing! That's all I have to say. Your story was great, I just loved the whole story! Bringing Severus back to life through portrait was brilliant! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.
He's dead, but he's still a man. Hallelujah!
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ROFL He is, of course!
Pity Hermione can't get out, but it does make it fun. What a delightful romp.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
It does give them some time to get to know one another while being... well basically... on the same level.
I adore the banter. They are a pair.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Awesome! Thank you. I do love when they're snarky with one another.
Yay! He pulled her into the painting. What a wonderful plot development. Very imaginative.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thanks! Yep, who knew! She certainly wasn't expecting that.
He just might make her life miserable. I don't know who to feel sorry for. Wonderful start.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
LOL, I think I feel sorry for both of them. They're both out of their element with the other.
Hufflepuff jokes - groans. Well now that his soul is here, let's see what develops. This should be good. Thanks deb!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
YW! Yep, he has a soul. Who would have guessed.
*snickers* Severus as a Chocolate Frog. What a tribute.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Evidently! He and Dumbly can duel with each other if you place them face to face. LOL
Ooh, a wonderful debjunk story. This will be good.
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:) Thanks AV!
What a nice ending for them! I have enjoyed this story from your first posting - apologies for not reviewing before, but I do try to get a review done when a story finishes. It's been a nice easy-to-read story, no agony(hurray) well written, novel idea and updated regularly. BRILLIANT!
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Thank you! Yep, left the agony out of this one. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I have enjoyed the story immensely. Beautifully written from start to finish. I loved the ending especially. Thank you so much for sharing. I do love happy endings and I find ones that deal with a Severus who died but then is brought back especially interesting. So well done and Brava!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thank you, Kitty! Glad you enjoyed it. Severus needs to live, even if it's 20 years after the fact.