Chapter 8
Chapter 9 of 18
debjunkHermione, as Headmistress, commissions a portrait of Severus Snape. The results are more than she expected.
ReviewedChapter 8
"Filius, have the students assemble in the Entrance Hall for the Hogsmeade weekend. Professor Dawson and Hagrid will chaperone, right?"
Filius nodded.
"You're sure you've found nothing about my condition out there?" Hermione asked in desperation.
Filius shook his head. "I'm sorry, Hermione. I've searched every possible book I could find. There's just no trace of this type of thing being documented."
Hermione folded her hands in front of her. "Well, that's going to be the first thing I do when I get out of here."
Filius smiled wanly and nodded. Excusing himself, he made his way out of her office. Hermione turned to Severus with a look of defeat.
"He's given up. He doesn't think I'll ever get out of here." She looked down, trying to hide the tears that were threatening to come.
"I'm about to give up, too," she whispered. "It's been three weeks, and we've found nothing. Nothing we try works." Her head came back up, and she frowned at Severus. "I'm stuck here, aren't I?"
Severus' lips thinned. "I don't know, Hermione. You're right, we've searched everything, but I can't believe that you must be consigned to such a fate. We're missing something."
She gave him a hopeless look. "But what is it?" she asked. Her shoulders sagged in defeat as she buried her head in her hands. "I can't run a school from a bloody portrait!"
She felt his arms surround her. She fell into him, the tears she'd tried so valiantly to hold back streaming down her face. "I should just accept it and resign my position," she wailed between sobs.
His hand was stroking her hair. His other arm was around her, comforting her. Despite her desire to get back to her life, she couldn't deny that a part of her was enthralled by his nearness.
"We'll figure this out, Hermione," he soothed.
She pulled back and looked at him. "What if we don't?" Her voice quavered with emotion.
"Then you will make this work."
A sharp breath escaped her. "How on earth will I do that?" she muttered.
"You are a resourceful witch. Look at what you've done all your life. From the time you entered the wizarding world, you have made a place for yourself. You have determination, and you succeed in everything you wish to achieve."
She blushed. "I just do what's expected of me," she said, trying to minimize her accomplishments.
"I have watched you work, and I have spoken to the other portraits about you. You far exceed what's expected of you, Hermione Granger. I know that whatever happens, you will rise to the occasion."
Hermione sighed. She reached up and wiped the tears from her eyes. "Of course you're right. I'll figure a way to make this work if there's nothing more I can do." She gave him a tentative look. "You'll still be my friend, right? I've grown accustomed to your grousing."
Severus arched an eyebrow, and she felt her stomach drop three feet. "As long as you keep your incessant babble to a minimum," he groused right back at her.
She shook her head and smiled. "Incorrigible..."
She'd gone back to her book search, but it didn't last long.
"You need a break," Severus told her. "You've done nothing but pore over books ever since you got here."
"If I don't..."
His raised hand stilled her.
"You need a break," he said sternly.
Hermione sighed and lowered the dusty tome she'd been studying. "What would you rather do, then?"
He rose and arched an eyebrow. "I'll be right back."
He walked to the willow tree and reached behind it. Pulling a picnic basket from it, he strode back to her and reached out for her hand. She smiled slyly at him and let him pull her up.
"How did you hide that from me?" she asked.
"As I said, you've had your nose in that book all day. You never noticed me leave or come back."
Hermione's eyebrows rose. "Maybe I do need a break," she muttered.
"Indeed..."
Severus motioned for her to follow him, and they made their way around the pond to the back part of the picture. He set the basket down and removed a blanket, spreading it on the grass. The two of them were soon settled on it and munching on sandwiches.
"Where did you find these?" Hermione asked.
"There's a painting of a village on the third floor. There was a restaurant in it, and I had them package it up for me."
Hermione nodded absently as Severus studied her sad face. Obviously she was still upset about her present dilemma. He didn't know what to do. Any conversation would lead her to thinking about the life she'd left behind and only make her more upset. He chose to remain silent, continuing to eat instead.
After what seemed like an eternity, Severus cleared his throat.
"You know, you can still be viable, even if you're trapped here."
Hermione looked at him with a sour expression. "How? You know our world. We don't pay much heed to paintings."
Severus frowned. "You can do research."
"I suppose," she said softly while looking to her lap.
Severus studied her, unsure of what to say next. He surprised himself by blurting out the one thing that had been on his mind ever since he'd pulled her into the picture.
"Despite your propensity for blathering on endlessly about whatever subject suits you, I will miss your constant presence when you find your way out of this."
He snapped his mouth shut and wished he could Disapparate away. He'd not planned on telling her that. He'd not planned on admitting that to himself, but it was the truth. The last weeks had been... fun. He enjoyed conversing and sparring with her on different topics, and he found that the usual solitude he craved in death seemed to pale in comparison to spending time with her. She was... intriguing... to say the least. Pretty, too.
His eyes narrowed. Don't go down this road. It can only lead to heartbreak. It always does.
Hermione's head snapped up, and her eyes met his. She searched his face, looking for deception in his last statement. Finally, she smiled. His heart was warmed by it.
"You'd really miss me? I thought you couldn't stand being around me."
"You improve with age," he said blandly while looking away, trying desperately to make less of what he'd said before. He didn't want her to know he was attracted to her. She would think him a fool.
She laughed lightly and muttered about how incorrigible he was. Severus was horrified to feel himself blush. This really wasn't leading in the right direction at all.
"I... I mean..." he stammered.
Her hand came over to his, and she stilled him with a squeeze. "I know what you mean. I've learned to appreciate your dry wit and caustic mannerisms."
He glanced up at her. She was smirking. He frowned and pulled his hand from hers.
"If I am that disagreeable, perhaps you should find somewhere else to dwell."
She cocked her head at him, and he secretly found it alluring. "See, there's an example of those mannerisms. I was joking, Severus. You don't need to fly off the handle at every word."
Her hand came back and gripped his a bit more firmly. "As I said before, I want us to remain friends. I find I enjoy our time together."
He removed his hand a bit slower this time, enjoying the contact with her and not wanting it to end quite so suddenly.
"I suppose I enjoy your friendship as well."
She beamed at him. "See, that wasn't so hard to admit, was it?"
Ignoring her, he fiddled around in the basket, pretending to look for something he could stuff in his mouth. He found a large chocolate chip cookie, which he proceeded to devour with gusto.
Hermione turned away, but not before he heard her mutter "Incorrigible," under her breath. He couldn't help but smirk as he chewed.
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This was one of the sweetest stories with this pairing that I've read! I really enjoy seeing SSHG when they are both the same age, well done!
This should be... interesting, looking forward to more.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
I had fun with it, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing.
A lovely read. Thank you for sharing!
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Aww, thanks! I'm truly honored you enjoyed it.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Aww, thanks! I'm truly honored you enjoyed it.
Nice begining, can't wait untill the portrait is painted, and the fun begins.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, you know it!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, you know it!
A truely lovely ending, to a wonderful story. Thank you.
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Aww, thanks. I loved writing this, and am glad you enjoyed it.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Aww, thanks. I loved writing this, and am glad you enjoyed it.
GO HERMIONE! kidnap him, stick him to the chair, and kiss him into submission. All's well ,that ends well.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
And we can't have a bad ending. Hermione kicking some butt in a loving way is what we want here.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
And we can't have a bad ending. Hermione kicking some butt in a loving way is what we want here.
HELL, trust Severus,to hex himself in the foot.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He never knows when to stop.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He never knows when to stop.
The world has been lifted of his sholders, now he can live, at last.
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I know, awesome, isn't it?
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
I know, awesome, isn't it?
WOW! Never let it be said, that Severus Snape doesn't know how to make an enterance.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He is the king of entrances! And we adore him for that.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He is the king of entrances! And we adore him for that.
There is quite a bit of Griffindor in that man, OH MERLIN, what did I say? please don't tell him I said that. I'm loveing this story, on to next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, he will never admit it, though.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, he will never admit it, though.
I took the opportunity to read your story through in a oner, so haven't left any other reviews. I've really enjoyed seeing the relationship between them develop from Snape's anger at being dragged from his afterlife, via a few hitches (I particularly liked tre encounter with the giant fruit), through to their longlasting love. So glad you didn't leave Severus in the portrait with Hermione in the real world. It would have been too sad. Well done, lass. It's been a great read.
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:) Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Those one-throughs can be a lot of fun if you have the time.This was really a fun story to write. I really wanted it light and fun, and I think that came across.
yay! what a terrific ending to a terrific story! you totally rule and reign, my dearest deb. thanks and mega mucho smoochies
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Awwwww, you are always so wonderful. Mega smoochies and flowers to you, my kimjo!
Wonderful ending! Like the way you finished it with them being a portrait again. Really enjoyed this unique story.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so well.
Amazing! That's all I have to say. Your story was great, I just loved the whole story! Bringing Severus back to life through portrait was brilliant! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.
He's dead, but he's still a man. Hallelujah!
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ROFL He is, of course!
Pity Hermione can't get out, but it does make it fun. What a delightful romp.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
It does give them some time to get to know one another while being... well basically... on the same level.
I adore the banter. They are a pair.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Awesome! Thank you. I do love when they're snarky with one another.
Yay! He pulled her into the painting. What a wonderful plot development. Very imaginative.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thanks! Yep, who knew! She certainly wasn't expecting that.
He just might make her life miserable. I don't know who to feel sorry for. Wonderful start.
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LOL, I think I feel sorry for both of them. They're both out of their element with the other.
Hufflepuff jokes - groans. Well now that his soul is here, let's see what develops. This should be good. Thanks deb!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
YW! Yep, he has a soul. Who would have guessed.
*snickers* Severus as a Chocolate Frog. What a tribute.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Evidently! He and Dumbly can duel with each other if you place them face to face. LOL
Ooh, a wonderful debjunk story. This will be good.
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:) Thanks AV!
What a nice ending for them! I have enjoyed this story from your first posting - apologies for not reviewing before, but I do try to get a review done when a story finishes. It's been a nice easy-to-read story, no agony(hurray) well written, novel idea and updated regularly. BRILLIANT!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thank you! Yep, left the agony out of this one. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I have enjoyed the story immensely. Beautifully written from start to finish. I loved the ending especially. Thank you so much for sharing. I do love happy endings and I find ones that deal with a Severus who died but then is brought back especially interesting. So well done and Brava!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thank you, Kitty! Glad you enjoyed it. Severus needs to live, even if it's 20 years after the fact.