Chapter 15
Chapter 16 of 18
debjunkLife moves alomg, but it's not always smooth.
ReviewedChapter 15
Six months later:
Severus placed his newest product onto the shelf carefully. Hermione had taught him how to display an item to its best advantage, so he now arranged the product attractively as he mulled over the past several months.
It had taken two months to get everything started, but business had been steady from the opening of the shop. The store now brought in a modest profit, and both he and Hermione hoped business would increase exponentially as word of his products got out.
He stared at the tall thin bottles he was shelving, all with a slight curve to the right. The delicate decanter had been chosen by Hermione. Gazing down at the label, he smirked to himself. It had taken them quite a long time to settle upon this logo. Severus had insisted they use his original name of Dead Man's Secret, despite Hermione's protests. She had balked at it and at the picture he'd drawn up of a skeleton in a top hat, bent over a cauldron, brewing.
"Severus, this logo is hideous."
Severus walked over and looked at it. "I like it. It suits me."
Hermione shook her head. "It's ghastly."
"Would you prefer I use a giant bat instead of a skeleton?"
Hermione giggled. "Of course not. It's just that..." She looked up at him. "No woman in her right mind would purchase anything with such a terrorizing logo on it."
Severus studied the logo for a few minutes. "Perhaps if we put a wide grin on the skeleton?"
Hermione batted him with the drawing. "No skeletons!" she demanded sharply, softening her sharpness with a quick kiss on Severus' lips. "You want this to succeed, right?"
Severus nodded.
"Then trust me on this."
They'd eventually compromised and created the logo before him now. A handsome, wispy ghost now stirred the cauldron. His black hair...not unlike Severus'...was sleeked back, and his dark eyes studied the cauldron as he stirred it. The logo was enchanted so that the ghost looked up every now and then and winked at the customer. Severus had to admit that Hermione had done brilliantly. It never ceased to amaze him when a woman would squeal in delight as the handsome ghost winked at her. The products flew off the shelves. His male customers didn't seem to mind it either. Evidently, they felt they would become as handsome as the ghost in the logo if they used Severus' products.
He hoped that this new item would be just as popular. It was a 'do-it-all' for hair. Given Hermione's difficult mane and his lackluster locks, they'd both agreed that such a product was timely and definitely necessary. He placed the last bottle on the shelf when he heard another squeal of delight coming from a customer.
Straightening, he went over to find Madam Sondra Barton squealing again. She was a regular customer and could never get enough of the ghost winking at her. Severus had learned in the last few months that certain customers required certain handling. He sighed as he approached her because unfortunately, for this woman to remain his customer, he had to be extra nice and... somewhat flirty. The task always made him cringe, but she only came in once a month. He found it well worth his while to play nice because she always left with one of everything in the store.
"Ah, Madam Barton, a pleasure to see you again," he rumbled in his dark bass voice.
The woman turned to him, and her face lit up with a smile.
"Master Severus! Oh! I can't tell you how much I adore this picture on your products!" she cried.
"My lady, have you seen our latest item?" He eyed her hair. "Of course, with such beautiful hair as yours, you may find you are not in need of it." He cringed inwardly at his sugary tone. Thank heavens this only happened once a month.
He led her to the shelf with his new hair product on it. The woman took a bottle into her hand.
"Oh, it's lovely! What does it do?"
"It's a hair tonic, but not just any hair tonic. It's intelligent. It can sense any need your hair may have, and it fixes it. I'm wearing some myself." He motioned to his head.
"My, Master Snape, your hair does look most luxurious today." The woman reached out and ran her fingers through his hair. He closed his eyes in disgust, but she continued with her onslaught.
"It feels lovely. It makes me want to run my hands through your hair all day." She ran her hand through it again, closing her own eyes in satisfaction. Severus controlled the urge to pull away and hex the daylights out of her. Never hex the customers. Never hex the customers! He repeated the mantra over and over in his head until the desire to grab his wand subsided.
"Well," she sighed finally. "If it works so well on your hair, I'll have to try it for my own. And I'll take the usual assortment, too."
He gave her a slight bow as he gathered her purchases into his arms and took them to the register.
"You know, Severus... You don't mind if I call you Severus, do you? We really should get together sometime. Maybe have some dinner?"
Severus froze. This was the first time she'd gone so far as to ask him out. He cleared his throat nervously.
"Madam... I am currently involved with someone."
Sondra Barton straightened up and pulled on the edge of her suit coat. "Well, I wasn't proposing marriage! It was just dinner."
He cleared his throat again. "I understand that, Madam, but I must decline."
The woman gave him a crusty look. Severus decided he'd had enough of playing nice with her.
"Indeed, Madam Barton, even if I wasn't involved, I would decline. I am not the rogue you believe me to be. Are you not married yourself? I would imagine that your husband might find it untoward if we were to engage in such activities."
Madam Barton lifted her nose in the air and walked out, leaving her unpaid purchases on the counter. Severus scowled to himself as he picked up the large number of bottles and began to put them back onto their appointed shelves.
Hermione bustled in at that moment, carrying a box. She went directly into the back room. Severus put down the items he was shelving and followed her in. By the time he'd gotten to the doorway, she was already on her way out. She gave him a peck on the cheek as she whizzed by.
"I'm sorry I can't stay," she called over her shoulder. "I've got an important meeting with the Board of Governors in ten minutes."
With that declaration, she spun around and Disapparated. Severus frowned after her. Their time together had been waning in the last weeks. Her position as Headmistress had taken up the majority of her time, and Severus was feeling a bit neglected. He tried to shrug it off...after all, she had a job to do...but he couldn't help feeling slighted as she went about her business, only taking time out to peck him on the cheek or give him a compulsory hug now and again. It was beginning to bother him, and he wondered if perhaps she'd grown tired of him.
Later that day, Severus looked out the window and found Hermione standing in front of the shop talking animatedly with Ronald Weasley. She had a huge smile on her face...the one she usually saved for him. Severus felt anger and jealousy well up within him. Suddenly, Hermione threw her arms around Weasley and hugged him furiously. Pulling away, she said something else, then kissed him on the cheek, much like she'd done to Severus earlier.
So, that's how it is, then... he thought as his jealousy took over his senses. Her heart has returned to that buffoon.
Hermione burst into the shop only a few seconds later. Severus scowled at her.
"I have no need of your services today, Professor Granger," he said sharply.
Hermione frowned immediately. "Severus? What's wrong?"
"Nothing is wrong; I just do not need your help today."
"But I..."
"Go!" he demanded, glowering at her.
She seemed upset. The treacherous wench also seemed to care for me, too.
"I just..." she tried again.
"Get... Out."
Hermione looked hurt, but spun around and quickly departed. He watched her go, hoping that his harshness would make him feel better about the situation. It only made him feel worse. His heart sank at what he'd done.
What is wrong with me? I know she's friends with Weasley; it was probably only a friendly sign of affection. Why am I so upset?
Stalking up to the door, he locked it and flipped the sign to closed. His customers would have to wait until tomorrow to get their coveted potions. He was in no mood to deal with them.
Turning, he stalked into the back of the shop and up to his room where he slammed the door behind him, stalked to his bedroom, and flopped onto the bed. Staring at the ceiling with his arms behind his head, he grumbled to himself for some time, finally getting around to thinking about what Hermione Granger truly meant to him.
I am in love with her.... I have known that for months now. Love... Who would have thought I'd have found it again? Who would have thought I'd have once again let it slip through my fingers?
...
I should have known it was too good to be true... She is too good to be true. Nothing good ever stays with me for long.
...
A new chance at life... bah... This is the same life, only more miserable because now I have lost what I treasure the most.
He sat up then, with a look of determination on his face.
"You are a Slytherin, surely you will not let her go without a fight?" he said aloud.
He got out of the bed and went over to his closet to grab his cloak. As he put it around his shoulders, he heard an owl tapping on his window. Looking out, he saw it was Hermione's owl. He rushed to the window, took the missive from the bird, and threw it an owl treat. Looking down at the envelope his Slytherin cunning left him and a deep-seated fear replaced it. There was something oddly shaped in the envelope. It wasn't a note, but something small and bulky.
He opened the envelope tentatively and peered within. Her locket was nestled there...the locket he'd given her as a sign of his affection. His heart sank as he gazed upon it. The locket was broken, the front part with her picture was missing, leaving only the part with him secretly smiling at her lying within the envelope. It was a bit battered because she'd evidently ripped the front from it. His heart sank. This message was one he couldn't ignore. He'd upset her, and she wanted nothing more to do with him. Once again he'd driven the woman he loved far from him, and, once again, he knew he would remain unforgiven.
Grief stricken, he reached into the envelope, gathering the necklace in his hand...and felt the strong pull of a Portkey transporting him out of his room.
A/N: Thanks again to beta slytherinlaurel for her beta work. Thank you, reader, for your reviews and love for this story.
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157 Reviews | 6.74/10 Average
This was one of the sweetest stories with this pairing that I've read! I really enjoy seeing SSHG when they are both the same age, well done!
This should be... interesting, looking forward to more.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
I had fun with it, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing.
A lovely read. Thank you for sharing!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Aww, thanks! I'm truly honored you enjoyed it.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Aww, thanks! I'm truly honored you enjoyed it.
Nice begining, can't wait untill the portrait is painted, and the fun begins.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, you know it!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, you know it!
A truely lovely ending, to a wonderful story. Thank you.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Aww, thanks. I loved writing this, and am glad you enjoyed it.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Aww, thanks. I loved writing this, and am glad you enjoyed it.
GO HERMIONE! kidnap him, stick him to the chair, and kiss him into submission. All's well ,that ends well.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
And we can't have a bad ending. Hermione kicking some butt in a loving way is what we want here.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
And we can't have a bad ending. Hermione kicking some butt in a loving way is what we want here.
HELL, trust Severus,to hex himself in the foot.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He never knows when to stop.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He never knows when to stop.
The world has been lifted of his sholders, now he can live, at last.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
I know, awesome, isn't it?
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
I know, awesome, isn't it?
WOW! Never let it be said, that Severus Snape doesn't know how to make an enterance.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He is the king of entrances! And we adore him for that.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
He is the king of entrances! And we adore him for that.
There is quite a bit of Griffindor in that man, OH MERLIN, what did I say? please don't tell him I said that. I'm loveing this story, on to next chapter.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, he will never admit it, though.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Haha, he will never admit it, though.
I took the opportunity to read your story through in a oner, so haven't left any other reviews. I've really enjoyed seeing the relationship between them develop from Snape's anger at being dragged from his afterlife, via a few hitches (I particularly liked tre encounter with the giant fruit), through to their longlasting love. So glad you didn't leave Severus in the portrait with Hermione in the real world. It would have been too sad. Well done, lass. It's been a great read.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
:) Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Those one-throughs can be a lot of fun if you have the time.This was really a fun story to write. I really wanted it light and fun, and I think that came across.
yay! what a terrific ending to a terrific story! you totally rule and reign, my dearest deb. thanks and mega mucho smoochies
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Awwwww, you are always so wonderful. Mega smoochies and flowers to you, my kimjo!
Wonderful ending! Like the way you finished it with them being a portrait again. Really enjoyed this unique story.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so well.
Amazing! That's all I have to say. Your story was great, I just loved the whole story! Bringing Severus back to life through portrait was brilliant! Keep up the good work!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one.
He's dead, but he's still a man. Hallelujah!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
ROFL He is, of course!
Pity Hermione can't get out, but it does make it fun. What a delightful romp.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
It does give them some time to get to know one another while being... well basically... on the same level.
I adore the banter. They are a pair.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Awesome! Thank you. I do love when they're snarky with one another.
Yay! He pulled her into the painting. What a wonderful plot development. Very imaginative.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thanks! Yep, who knew! She certainly wasn't expecting that.
He just might make her life miserable. I don't know who to feel sorry for. Wonderful start.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
LOL, I think I feel sorry for both of them. They're both out of their element with the other.
Hufflepuff jokes - groans. Well now that his soul is here, let's see what develops. This should be good. Thanks deb!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
YW! Yep, he has a soul. Who would have guessed.
*snickers* Severus as a Chocolate Frog. What a tribute.
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Evidently! He and Dumbly can duel with each other if you place them face to face. LOL
Ooh, a wonderful debjunk story. This will be good.
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:) Thanks AV!
What a nice ending for them! I have enjoyed this story from your first posting - apologies for not reviewing before, but I do try to get a review done when a story finishes. It's been a nice easy-to-read story, no agony(hurray) well written, novel idea and updated regularly. BRILLIANT!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thank you! Yep, left the agony out of this one. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I have enjoyed the story immensely. Beautifully written from start to finish. I loved the ending especially. Thank you so much for sharing. I do love happy endings and I find ones that deal with a Severus who died but then is brought back especially interesting. So well done and Brava!
Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)
Thank you, Kitty! Glad you enjoyed it. Severus needs to live, even if it's 20 years after the fact.