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More than Brushstrokes

1: Prologue

2: Chapter One

3: Chapter 2

4: Chapter 3

5: Chapter 4

6: Chapter 5

7: Chapter 6

8: Chapter 7

9: Chapter 8

10: Chapter 9

11: Chapter 10

12: Chapter 11

13: Chapter 12

14: Chapter 13

15: Chapter 14

16: Chapter 15

17: Chapter 16

18: Chapter 18: Epilogue

More than Brushstrokes

debjunk

157 Reviews   |   157 Ratings, 0 Likes, 20 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione, as Headmistress, commissions a portrait of Severus Snape. The results are more than she expected.

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Chapters (18)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Chapter One

Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Epilogue


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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)

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Elou

Oh what a lovely ending to a beautifully written piece.  Thank you so much for sharing~

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Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thank you,

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

!  I appreciate you following this story to it's end.

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Severus49

Aw! It was so nice to read about Annelise! What a wonderful story!!! The premise of Severus being inadvertantly stuck in the painting and being found by Hermione is one of the coolest I've ever read.  We always think of the two alive, but one alive and one half/not is so unusual and just - well, they're some of my favorite stories.  And this tale, was incredible! Thanks for the wonderful read!!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed this and thought it unique.  We are always trying to find something that 'hasn't been done' in this fandom, and I'm glad you found that in this tale.

10/10

indigo_rose

"You do realize you didn't have to become Headmistress to see us."  LOL!    That was vintage Snarky Severus, right there!  And the two of them going back to the pond and willow tree where it all began was the perfect ending to it all...  Thanks for giving us another lovely story about our favorite pair!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thank you once again!  I appreciate hearing from you and am tickled that you enjioy my stories.

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kimjo2

what a lovely update, my deb.  I do the same thing she does when i wake up and look over at my husband. *sigh* I love the romantic stuff you write.  thanks so much and mega mucho smoochies                                                

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

  Aww, how sweet.  You're most welcome.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  smoochies back!

10/10

sunny33

Love the way she took charge. :D

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

She's an in-charge kind of lady.

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Red_Garnet

omg! how SWEET! i was really hoping he hadn't blown it at all! it's adorable how much they luff each other! *squeals* Thank you SO much for the update! Great chapter!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Sweet definitely.  Glad you are enjoying it.

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Becky

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.......I LOVE IT!!!  You have made my day/night/day!! LOLOL!!!!  I'm glad she transported Severus to Hogwarts...good for her...and then set him in the chair with the binding spell..way to go Hermione!! LOL!!!  Hoorah..!!!!Excellent, excellent!!!  I am loving this story so much!!! WELL DONE!!!!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you have enjoyed it so far. 

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Becky

OH MY...I LOVE IT, Just where is he being transported to? Hmmmm....Interesting!!!   Sorry for the delay in getting this read and reviewed, my computer crashed on me...dratted thing!!!  I'm back and this update made my day!!!WELL DONE!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Well, I'm sorry you had computer problems.  I'm about to update again, so a two-fer!

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snitchette

AWWWWWWW! I'm so glad they're finally happy. ALso I've been wondering something. When Severus came back was he around forty or around sixty his "real age". Does the years gap between his death and resurrection count or did he just reappear like the image in the portrait he was coming from. Does that mean anyone, considering thay made a protrait of them young, could potentially come back at that age? I hope the question is clear enough 'cause I struggle a bit to translate that in english.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

He stayed at the same age, so they are the same age now.  I think that anyone who had died would come back at the age the portrait was painted. 

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snitchette

This is an absolutely perfect ending for them. Thank you so much for sharing that story.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thanks

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

, for this and every review.

10/10

Nessa

Yay!! Hmmm any babies??? hehe

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Well, there is an epilogue.

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indigo_rose

Another great chapter--we have a mature Harry, Severus getting himself a shop and flat combo, the possibility of secrets being uncovered about the windowless room--loads of great stuff!  Glad Hermione was able to get him to agree to allow her to pay for part of the shop; I know she would have preferred to halve all the costs, but backing down regarding the flat let him think he had a victory and allowed him to bend a little in return.  I'm very excited to see what happens next in Severus' life and where you continue to take this...

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

You're right about her backing down on the flat.  It gives Severus that feel that he's being useful and making his own way, yet she can help and be a part of it.

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Elou

Brilliant!  Thanks ever so much for the update.  I truly enjoy reading their story.  It's exciting for Severus to be able to start anew with out even a scowl from Harry Potter.*giggle*Thank you for sharing~

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Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Harry may have scowled after he left the room, but he has grown up and will give all of this a chance.

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Severus49

Aw, man! Teach ME some of that Slytherin cunning! I could really make use of it in this one-income family of mine!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

I hear ya, hon!

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Becky

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......An Update!!! You have made my day!!!  I am so happy that they purchased the store...Is there a secret to the room upstairs with no windows? Perhaps a hidden door or something?? Will Severus find something there that no one knows about...Ooooooo!!!! LOL!!  Thank you for the update, I adore this story...Im glad Harry approved of the relationship between Hermione and Severus...LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!   WELL DONE, and I can't wait for more!!!! WHOOHOOOOO!!!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thank you!  The room as of now, is just a room, perfect for brewing.  Some secrets never get revealed, I guess, and Madam Puddifoot's tea is one of those secrets!

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snitchette

It's really more than nice of him to propose to step back not to interfere with Harry and Hermione's relationship. Stupid, but sweet. And I think she should have payed a part of the flat too as she will be living here at least part of the time...

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

He can definitely be sweet in that snarky way of his. 

10/10

sunny33

Nothing like a spot of bargaining! :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Slytherin bargaining to boot!

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Severus49

Aw! I was hoping that was going to happen!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Ah, you must be a mind reader!

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Red_Garnet

aww! how sweet! thank you soo much for the update, this was a wonderful chapter. 

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

And thank you so much for reviewing!  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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kimjo2

what a perfect idea!  and i just love the name dead man's secret!  wonderful stuff, my deb as always.  mucho smoochies                                                            

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

  Major smoochies back!  Thanks so much.  Severus needs something to keep him occupied other than Hermione.

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Severus49

I LOVE this chapter! The self-assuredness that only comes with age is SOooooo wonderful to see! And I love the banter and the sexiness between the two.  This is how I wish every story was! Unfortunately, with the differences between age and experience in the regular books, that's why I think they wouldn't have worked.   This, THIS STORY  though, is the exception to the rule and it shows the EXACT way it would have in the perfect situation!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Wow, thanks so much!  I do find the age gap a bit of a stumbling block.  (Obviously not a huge one as this is my couple of choice.)  But yes, the chance to get them to be the same age was too much to pass up for this. 

10/10

Becky

LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!  So glad Severus is more relaxed and open...This is the BEST story ever! I can't wait to see what happens next...Whoohoooooo!!!!!! WELL DONE!I especially loved it when the student caught them making out in the hallway!! Priceless!!!  TeeHee!!!!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thanks,

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

!  I loved the student's reaction too.  Poor thing, traumatized like that!  the only thing worse may have been Hagrid and Trelawney.  Oh, I think I just threw up a bit in my mouth. 

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mimmom

  I like it!

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thank you!

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snitchette

I am pleasantly surprised to notice he can communicate to resolve issues instead of brooding on his own. Death has definitely change him for the best.

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

Thanks!  He has learned a bit sitting under his tree. 

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sunny33

I think he's turned into an exhibitionist! Nice to see him embarrassing her with PDAs rather than the other way around. :)

Response from debjunk (Author of More than Brushstrokes)

I think so too.  I think he's loving the attention, not just from Hermione, but the shocked looks of the students. 

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