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Potions Under Duress Fallen
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Fallen

1: Haunted

2: My Immortal

3: Tourniquet

4: Everybody’s Fool

5: Taking Over Me

6: Imaginary

7: Going Under

8: My Last Breath

9: Bring Me To Life

10: Hello

11: Whisper

Fallen

BrenaMarie

149 Reviews   |   149 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Action/Adventure Songfic Psychological Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 28,579 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Neville Longbottom Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Original Character Poppy Pomfrey

On her first day of teaching, Hermione Granger finds a hidden treasure in her office. What she doesn’t realize is how much this discovery will change her life.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Haunted

Chapter 2: My Immortal

Chapter 3: Tourniquet

Chapter 4: Everybody’s Fool

Chapter 5: Taking Over Me

Chapter 6: Imaginary

Chapter 7: Going Under

Chapter 8: My Last Breath

Chapter 9: Bring Me To Life

Chapter 10: Hello

Chapter 11: Whisper


About BrenaMarie

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BrenaMarie

Member Since 2006  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 48  |  536 Reviews Written  |  360 Review Responses

Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania.  Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.  


Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019.  I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.

Author Website
http://brenamarie.livejournal.com/
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Reviews for Fallen

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10/10

sunny33

I suppose he has had six years to comes to terms with his feelings about Lily. :)

10/10

gifarlme

what will the patronus be?  Can't wait to find out!

10/10

HBAR

She's making progress, just like he knew she would.  Apparently his inspiration is having the desired effect.  I like the idea of the Juliet Curse and hope it worked the way he planned.

10/10

HBAR

You know, when she grabbed the student potion, I had a moment of thinking she was crazy, but then I reasoned that she would know the difference between a Hermione level potion and a Neville level potion.  It didn't bother me. 

I can see why Harry is concerned about Hermione.  She does seem a little too guilt-ridden or obsessed, but I would hope that if he knew the basis for her thinking that Professor Snape may still be alive, he would be a little more open to the idea.  We'll see...

10/10

pearl city princess

Oh I hope you have an update for us soon, I can't wait to see how she awakens him.  This is getting very exciting.

10/10

pearl city princess

Very exciting chapter, I love the way Hermione called Professor Dumbledore "Albus"  you could tell she was not in a mood to be messed with.

10/10

pearl city princess

Bless Neville, he is such a good friend, Harry too, sometimes.

0/10

sunny33

Love the way she handled Dumbles! :)

0/10

foofie

would the song be BRING ME TO LIFE

Foofie

0/10

Jewels812

Yeah!!  Great story, can't wait for more!

10/10

JIMBOPATTERSON

GREAT STORY GOING HERE, LOVE IT SO FAR. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. MUCH CHOCOLATE FOR YOU!!

10/10

ClayPotter

Wow! What a cliffy! I hope she looks up to see his open eyes upon her, and that, just as in her dreams, his eyes are full of love. Please don't make us wait too long to find out.

10/10

HBAR

Her dream was interesting.  She will no doubt spend her whole day trying to work out what it means.  The part where Snape is enjoying what will probably be his last sunrise and his last meal was sad.  Especially the fact that he is just so resigned to his fate.  I do hope she is able to find him and help him.  You do a nice job of making me really want more at the end of each chapter without making them super cliffhanger endinigs.  This continues to be an enjoyabie story!

10/10

HBAR

Ugh!  Hermione has such will power.  She has an early morning so even though she is enjoying her read, she puts it away.  I find myself in the same position, but I don't have the sense to stop.  On to chapter three...

10/10

HBAR

Well, I am joining this party late in the game, but I am sufficiently intrigued.  The beauty of it is, I don't have to wait for the next chapter.  Nice start.

10/10

debjunk

Mwahahaha.  Evil author!  I do love this part, though.  I love how her emotions all pour out.  And I wonder just how much Severus heard!

0/10

Elou

Their mutual torment of themselves makes them an alluring match. So similar in many, many ways. But joined would be more whole, complete even.  
I am anxious to see where his response leads. Is he actually awake? This is exciting, and I long to see it progress.

thank you for sharing~Elou

0/10

Severus49

Love, isn't it? That's why Juliet killed herself - to be with her presumed-dead Romeo, and why Romeo killed himself after finding Juliet.  Perhaps it's actually what Severus has been hoping to find all along.

10/10

debjunk

This was such a lovely chapter.  She made great headway and had that awesome dream about Severus.  Mmm, mmm

9/10

MsTree

Sounds like a reversed 'Sleeping Beauty' kind of story the way you're leading us on. Keep up the good work. ^_^

10/10

stellium

I wonder if he'll be as mad as a log when he wakes up? Or maybe he'll have forgotten Lily (we can only hope!) - is that how removing memories works?

Blimey, this is good stuff!

10/10

pearl city princess

Wonderful chapter.  This just keeps getting better and better.   can't wait for the next update.

0/10

drmonica

I've been kind of casually following this, reading when I happen to notice a new chapter added just because I like Evanescence. But this chapter got me hooked! You can now count me among the ranks of rabid fans, salivating for the next chappie.

9/10

ShilohDarke

OOOOHHH... I love this story so much! The tension is mounting! I hope there will be an update SOON! LOVED IT!!!

0/10

ClayPotter

Very interesting tale. At this point, it sounds as though the hardest thing will be to figure out where his body is.

If her dreams are any indication, he no longer has a fascination with Lily. Things should be fine when he wakes up, as long as she is there.

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