New Chapter for Fallen
Fallen
BrenaMarie149 Reviews | 7.46/10 (149 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )
On her first day of teaching, Hermione Granger finds a hidden treasure in her office. What she doesn’t realize is how much this discovery will change her life.
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BrenaMarie
Member Since 2006 | 21 Stories | Favorited by 48 | 536 Reviews Written | 360 Review Responses
Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.
Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019. I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.
Reviews for Fallen
Nicely done---and you finished this up not even a month post-partum? Now THAT is crazy(cough)dedicated! Best wishes with the Little Blessing and future writings.
Awesome story. Love it!
Your story was very cohesive and it flowed well from chapter to chapter. Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.
Well first things first, congrats on being a new mommy. All things considered, I don't think you made us wait long at all for the final chapter. This was a nice conclusion to an enjoyable story. You can never go wrong with a happily ever after. Nicely done.
Delicious update, can't wait for more.
His mind is certainly intact! :)
Just one? Are you sure? Everytime I said that, my story would say "just one more". *grin* I like Severus' plotting and the description of Harry and Neville tumbling into the room. They sound just like puppies learning to walk. ^_^
Adorable chapter, it was so sweet when he asked if he could hold her. I can't wait for the next chapter.
oh oh oh!!! Now were gettin somewhere! UPDATE!! pleaase! Lovin it!
I hope his Patronus changed to--an otter (ha!), or a raptor, a snake, etc. anything ELSE except a doe. maybe a lion or gryphon??
At least you realize it's the cliff hanger of doom. :( I've sped through this story, faithful as ever, just to end with this?! The cruelty you have knows no bounds. LOL.
I really like the first person perspective, sometimes it isn't written well but you are doing an excellent job. I like the premise and the story and I can't wait to see what happens next!
YAY! I wonder what Snape will do when he's awake? I wonder if he'll be annoyed. LOL.
So Dumbledore has let Snape stay in the equivalent of a magical coma for six years? He couldn't have mentioned Snape to Minerva, or anyone else, in the hope they might help? I think some magical paint thinner is in order!! (Loving the story - Dumbledore just irritates me, especially in the original books.)
whew! that was like pulling teeth!
Nasty cliffie of doom! Bad cliffie. At least Dumbledore was worth something. LOL
Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Fallen)
You know Hermione's anger here is just me projecting. I hate that man.
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
I'm with ya, sistah
Aughh!!!! Oh my goodness,oh my goodness!!
He's been so close the whole time.
More please... this is fantastic.
Thank you for sharing~Elou
I wonder if it's possible that somewhere Severus might have left a little of the original potion laying around? And then there's the little problem of finding his body! It will be interesting to see what Madam Pomfrey knows...
Aha, Poppy is the answer! :)
OMG! I have to wait for the next chapter?! AGG. It's getting exciting here. I can't wait to read more.
Love this story, thanks :)
Thoroughly enjoying this... it seems we are coming closer to finding Severus. YAY! Oh, and Harry was a true ass to send Neville in to spy. I hope he doesn't choke on the crow he's eating now. *giggle*
Thank you so much for sharing~Elou
wonderful story! i can't wait for the big reveal and conclusion. thanks for your hard work.
"Scary but brilliant." Heh, heh, isn't that how the boys described Hermione? I do hope she has figured out where Severus might be. I am really enjoying this!
Yay, she's finally got a good clue! I think she was too nice to Harry, though. A good hex would have been great!
So she thinks she solved the mystery, heh? We'll see, won't we. ^_^