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Potions Under Duress Fallen
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Fallen

1: Haunted

2: My Immortal

3: Tourniquet

4: Everybody’s Fool

5: Taking Over Me

6: Imaginary

7: Going Under

8: My Last Breath

9: Bring Me To Life

10: Hello

11: Whisper

Fallen

BrenaMarie

149 Reviews   |   149 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Action/Adventure Songfic Psychological Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 28,579 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Neville Longbottom Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Original Character Poppy Pomfrey

On her first day of teaching, Hermione Granger finds a hidden treasure in her office. What she doesn’t realize is how much this discovery will change her life.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Haunted

Chapter 2: My Immortal

Chapter 3: Tourniquet

Chapter 4: Everybody’s Fool

Chapter 5: Taking Over Me

Chapter 6: Imaginary

Chapter 7: Going Under

Chapter 8: My Last Breath

Chapter 9: Bring Me To Life

Chapter 10: Hello

Chapter 11: Whisper


About BrenaMarie

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BrenaMarie

Member Since 2006  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 48  |  536 Reviews Written  |  360 Review Responses

Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania.  Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.  


Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019.  I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.

Author Website
http://brenamarie.livejournal.com/
Also Archived At
Ashwinder, AO3

Reviews for Fallen

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0/10

Myst

Nicely done---and you finished this up not even a month post-partum?  Now THAT is crazy(cough)dedicated!  Best wishes with the Little Blessing and future writings.

10/10

cenicienta

Awesome story. Love it!

10/10

mikimoto

Your story was very cohesive and it flowed well from chapter to chapter.  Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.

10/10

HBAR

Well first things first, congrats on being a new mommy.  All things considered, I don't think you made us wait long at all for the final chapter.  This was a nice conclusion to an enjoyable story.  You can never go wrong with a happily ever after.  Nicely done.

10/10

pearl city princess

Delicious update, can't wait for more.

10/10

sunny33

His mind is certainly intact! :)

9/10

MsTree

Just one? Are you sure? Everytime I said that, my story would say "just one more". *grin* I like Severus' plotting and the description of Harry and Neville tumbling into the room. They sound just like puppies learning to walk. ^_^

10/10

pearl city princess

Adorable chapter, it was so sweet when he asked if he could hold her.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

0/10

Snarky Snape

oh oh oh!!! Now were gettin somewhere! UPDATE!! pleaase! Lovin it!

10/10

ylang_two

I hope his Patronus changed to--an otter (ha!), or a raptor, a snake, etc. anything ELSE except a doe. maybe a lion or gryphon??

0/10

marilynnedayle

At least you realize it's the cliff hanger of doom. :(  I've sped through this story, faithful as ever, just to end with this?!  The cruelty you have knows no bounds.  LOL.

I really like the first person perspective, sometimes it isn't written well but you are doing an excellent job.  I like the premise and the story and I can't wait to see what happens next!

10/10

mimmom

YAY!  I wonder what Snape will do when he's awake?  I wonder if he'll be annoyed.  LOL.

9/10

aurora borealis

So Dumbledore has let Snape stay in the equivalent of a magical coma for six years?  He couldn't have mentioned Snape to Minerva, or anyone else, in the hope they might help?  I think some magical paint thinner is in order!! (Loving the story - Dumbledore just irritates me, especially in the original books.)

0/10

Severus49

whew! that was like pulling teeth!

10/10

debjunk

Nasty cliffie of doom!  Bad cliffie.  At least Dumbledore was worth something.  LOL

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of Fallen)

You know Hermione's anger here is just me projecting.  I hate that man. 

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

I'm with ya, sistah

0/10

Elou

Aughh!!!!  Oh my goodness,oh my goodness!!

He's been so close the whole time. 
More please... this is fantastic.
Thank you for sharing~Elou

0/10

Severus49

I wonder if it's possible that somewhere Severus might have left a little of the original potion laying around? And then there's the little problem of finding his body! It will be interesting to see what Madam Pomfrey knows...

10/10

sunny33

Aha, Poppy is the answer! :)

10/10

mimmom

OMG!  I have to wait for the next chapter?!  AGG.  It's getting exciting here.  I can't wait to read more.

10/10

roughcut

Love this story, thanks :)

0/10

Elou

Thoroughly enjoying this... it seems we are coming closer to finding Severus. YAY!  Oh, and Harry was a true ass to send Neville in to spy. I hope he doesn't choke on the crow he's eating now. *giggle*

Thank you so much for sharing~Elou

0/10

lemmiwinks

wonderful story!  i can't wait for the big reveal and conclusion.  thanks for your hard work.

10/10

aurora borealis

"Scary but brilliant."  Heh, heh, isn't that how the boys described Hermione?  I do hope she has figured out where Severus might be.  I am really enjoying this!

10/10

debjunk

Yay, she's finally got a good clue!  I think she was too nice to Harry, though.  A good hex would have been great!

9/10

MsTree

So she thinks she solved the mystery, heh? We'll see, won't we. ^_^

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