Chapter 9
Chapter 9 of 28
linlawlessDumbledore and Minerva are surprised by Severus's solicitous behavior, while Hermione worries about her mentor's health ...
ReviewedA/N: Another short chapter - I'm hoping to get the next one up in a couple of days. Thanks for continuing to review - I really appreciate each and every one!
As always, I really, really, really wish it were mine ... Alas, I am doomed to disappointment, as it is not and it never will be.
Finally, thanks to my friend Atuliel (a.k.a. dajem) for the very lovely poster she made me for this story!
Chapter 9
While they waited for Severus to return, Dumbledore supported Minerva's head as she sipped the tea he had brewed for her. He propped pillows behind her back and head to help her sit up, and, using his wand, he levitated her from the bed while a house-elf changed her sheets. Feeling mildly embarrassed - even though with magic, it shouldn't have seemed as personal as it did - he said, "We can also change your nightgown for you, if you like."
Something he had done must have helped, because her breathing sounded less labored than it had moments ago when she answered. "No, that's all right. How did you know to check on me?" The house-elf immediately disappeared, likely back to the kitchens.
"Hermione was worried and apparently mentioned it to Severus. He came to check on you, and when he got no answer, he came to see me."
She gave a wheezy chuckle. "I'm surprised he didn't just Floo me to see what I was doing. Or use a password or something."
"He didn't want to invade your privacy, he said."
She looked surprised. "When has rudeness ever stopped Severus before?" She paused to cough, then took a sip of her tea. "I thought rudeness was a point of pride for him."
"It is odd, isn't it?" Dumbledore mused thoughtfully. "I thought the same thing myself. And he seems genuinely concerned about you, as well."
"Well, in his own way, Severus considers me a friend."
"Yes, but he doesn't normally allow that to show, does he? And another thing since when does he consult me when he could just as easily take care of things himself?"
"As you say, Albus, it's odd." She took a deep breath, which triggered a coughing fit, and then sipped some more tea. "He's been spending a lot of time with Hermione lately, so perhaps her sweet nature is rubbing off on him."
"Do you think so?" Dumbledore asked. "I know they've been taking meals together, but I assumed that was just because he was tutoring her in something or other."
"I don't think so," Minerva replied. "Their demeanor doesn't suggest business. It's more like a friendship."
Any reply Dumbledore might have made was forestalled by the return of the wizard under discussion.
This time, he used the Floo network to enter the room. Brushing himself off, he said, "Forgive the method of entry. I didn't think you'd mind, since you were expecting me."
"No, that's all right," Minerva replied. "I appreciate your speed in returning."
He handed her a bottle. "Two tablespoons now and one tablespoon twice a day until the day after your symptoms are completely gone." He gave her what Dumbledore recognized as his most intimidating look. "Completely gone, Minerva. If that runs out before they're gone, you must either ask me for more or make more yourself."
"Yes, of course," Minerva replied. "Thank you, Severus." The men both watched while she took the two tablespoons and then set the bottle on her nightstand.
"And you will do nothing but rest for at least two days," Severus decreed, in a voice that brooked no argument, then frowned. "Perhaps you should go to the infirmary. Poppy will ensure that you don't overdo." Dumbledore had intended to demand the same thing; he was fascinated by the fact that Severus beat him to the punch. Had she been feeling herself, Dumbledore was sure Minerva would have protested Severus's highhandedness.
Now, though, all she said was, "No, no, that's not necessary," as forcefully as she could manage in her weakened state. "I already feel much better. I can conjure or summon anything I need."
Severus looked at her skeptically. "I realize the potion is magic, Minerva, but it's not quite that fast-acting." Dumbledore was shocked. Had Severus just made a joke a sarcastic one, perhaps, but he did seem to be trying to use humor ...?
Minerva waved a hand dismissively. "I'll be fine."
"Nevertheless," Dumbledore finally interjected. "You will stay on bed rest for at least two days more if you don't improve significantly in that time. Someone will be checking on you twice a day until you're back to full health. And if you don't answer a knock in a reasonable time, we will not hesitate to let ourselves in by any means expedient."
She nodded, acknowledging the necessity for such a proviso. After all, if they hadn't let themselves in today, she might well have died.
Dumbledore pushed himself to his feet, saying, "We'll leave you to rest, now, Minerva. We'll see you later."
They let themselves out, and Dumbledore couldn't resist prodding Severus, just a little. "I hear you've been spending time with Hermione Granger. Are you tutoring her?"
"Not tutoring, no," Severus said tersely, looking uncomfortable.
"No?" Dumbledore asked. "How delightful."
Severus frowned, looking nonplussed. "Delightful?" he echoed. "What's delightful about it?"
"It's delightful that you're developing a friendship with her. Her other friends are no longer here, you know," he added confidentially.
Severus's frown deepened. "She needs a higher quality of friends," he muttered darkly.
Dumbledore was fascinated to find that Severus's new attitude toward Hermione, and even toward Minerva and himself, did not appear to extend to Harry Potter or any of Harry's other friends.
"Well, it's nice that you're taking her under your wing," Dumbledore said.
"I haven't," Severus insisted, still looking uncomfortable. "She's just a tolerable mealtime companion, and she's a helpful recipe tester for my new text."
And with that, Severus stalked off toward his lab, effectively ending the discussion.
Hermione paced the lab, unable to focus on anything. Severus had hurried in, grabbed a potion, and then used the Floo network to leave, barely saying a word, beyond, "Minerva is ill and needs a potion. I'll be back shortly." She could only assume this meant he was seriously concerned about Minerva, and she restrained the urge to pepper him with questions about her mentor's condition.
Anyway, she wasn't yet comfortable enough to start digging through Severus's supplies to try to find the ingredients for the potion she was supposed to be making today. So she waited, she paced, and then she waited and paced some more. She thought about leaving it felt a little strange to be alone in Severus's lab, even with his explicit permission. But she didn't want to wait any longer than necessary to find out what was going on.
It seemed like forever before he finally returned, this time through the door. She asked, "Is Minerva all right?"
"She'll be fine, despite her foolishness." He didn't look at her he was too busy trying to brush the remainder of the ashes from his clothing. Which seemed strange, since his black clothing didn't really show dirt.
"Foolishness?" Hermione asked. She had never thought of Minerva as foolish.
"Yes, foolishness. She was ill already last night, but she didn't make or ask for a potion, and then she woke up too ill to do anything about it. If you hadn't sent me over there, the outcome might have been very unfortunate."
"You mean she might have died?" Hermione was horrified. She felt tears well up in her eyes. His tone had been so brusque that she somehow knew he was extremely worried. "What's wrong with her?"
"She seems to have some sort of flu, possibly with pneumonia." He glanced at her, saw a tear spill over. "Stop worrying. She'll be fine. She was already looking improved when I returned, and she's agreed to have someone check on her twice a day. She'll be fine," he reiterated.
Hermione hastily wiped her eyes. "I know. I was just thinking of what might have happened. I can't imagine Hogwarts without her."
He sighed. "Well, don't, then. She'll be fine. Now, what have you been doing while I've been gone?"
She felt a blush creep up her face, "Oh ... well, um ... if you want the truth ..."
He gave her a dark look. "Always," he said emphatically.
"Well ... mostly just pacing and worrying."
"Why?" he asked grumpily. "You said you trust me. We agreed that I would see to Minerva and I did. So why were you still worrying?"
She didn't want him to think she didn't trust him. "I do trust you, Severus." He looked at her skeptically. "I do," she said again. "It's just hard to not know what's happening. And what if you got there too late to do anything? And you seemed so worried when you came to get the potion."
"Still, the distraction of work would be welcome, I would think."
He sounded less annoyed, now, so she gave him a tiny grin. "Well, I don't know your thoughts on the matter, but I always thought it might be dangerous to brew potions without one's full attention. I suspect you might be a bit miffed if I blew up the lab or something."
His lip twitched, and she thought he might be just a little bit amused. "Well, perhaps it's best that you worry and pace, if that's the alternative."
Her grin widened. "Glad we're in agreement."
He glanced at the clock. "There's plenty of time, if you still want to make the Shielding Serum."
She said, "Sure. What ingredients do I need?"
He began gathering them, and this time, he didn't go back to his own work. Instead, they worked together, alternately chatting companionably and falling into comfortable silences, as they assembled the potion.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Witchy Woman
239 Reviews | 6.31/10 Average
I've just spent a wonderfully relaxed morning reading this - your con envy fics prompted me to check out/revisit your other fics. Anyway, next time it's my turn to post at one_bad_man, this is my rec. It's refreshing, once in a while, to have Hermione, her Severus and no mysteries, crises or Horcruxes to distract from the romance.
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Thanks for the lovely review and the rec! This was my first foray into the HP world, and while I now see things I might have done differently if I were writing it now, I still have a certain fondness for it. :) Thanks again!
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Thanks for the lovely review and the rec! This was my first foray into the HP world, and while I now see things I might have done differently if I were writing it now, I still have a certain fondness for it. :) Thanks again!
This story is flawless! Every chapter was realistic and endearing, not to mention extremely well-written. Thank you!!! I really enjoyed every minute of it and I cant wait to see more of your work! ^_^
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Thank you very much! That's a lovely compliment. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I really appreciate the review! :D
Its Muggle magic, Severus!thank you, linlawless for a wonderful read!!
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
LOL, yes, it *is* Muggle magic! Thank you for reviewing! :D
Nice to see Sev and Harry as friends. :D
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Thanks! And I really appreciate all the reviews you left along the way! :D
LOL. Wonder what he really thought? :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Hehehehe ... good thoughts, of course! ;)
They'd better be careful they don't make things worse. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Always a risk when they start plotting and using spells ... ;)
If he's not careful, it will become a self-fulfilling prophecy! :0
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Yes, too bad he doesn't seem to realize that! :)
Now everyone will be watching them! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
So true! :)
Severus is such a two year old, not wanting to share his new toy. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Yeah, especially not with a Potter! He's had bad experiences with that, hasn't he? ;)
Thanks for a fun story. You took several different approaches on both Hermione and Severus that I found quite interesting. Well written and fun. Thanks for sharing, JoAnne
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Thank you very much -- I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate you letting me know! :)
Well, first things first, I somehow got behind in reading this so had several chapters to read all at once. So the lack of reviews for the others have nothing to do with their quality, and everything to do with my impatience to see this tale to the end.Fluff is what an epilogue is all about, and you did not disappoint. They totally deserved their happy ending. I liked that we got enough info about the wedding to know how it all played out, but not so many details that it was tedious. And Harry as best man ... have my favorite boys both finally matured enough to discover they can be friends? Everyone wins here. Except maybe Minerva. She still has to deal with meddling Dumbledore :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Oh, I'm glad you liked the remaining chapters and the epilogue! I'm glad you liked the wedding scene. I often find myself skipping over the really detailed ones people write (though I know some people love that, so I'm not knocking it -- I just couldn't make myself write it that way). I like to think that Hermione would refuse to allow Harry and Severus to continue hating one another, so they'd eventually bond in self-defense. ;) And yes, poor Minerva -- who knows what pies Dumbledore will be sticiking his fingers in now?!Thanks so much for all your thoughtful, lovely reviews along the way. I hope you'll like my next stories just as much. :)
Well, it could have been worse... Ron could have been there too. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Right. Or Neville, who would likely have fainted and required medical attention. ;)
Guess what, Harry? It's not all about you! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Hehehe -- well, Harry *is* a teenage boy, so he hasn't figured that out yet (plus, he's got a whole series of books named after him!);)
Oops, the post-coital jitters raise their ugly head. :0
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Yep, good description of it ... I'll have to use that sometime. ;)
Principles or not, the man's daft! :D
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Yes, isn't he? Such a stick-in-the-mud sometimes! ;)
Ooo, she's scary when she's all riled up! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
LOL, definitely! Severus never knew! :)
LOL.Tricked into admitting it! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
LOL, yes! Trickery is fun. :)
Albus is absolutely hopeless. He needs his hand smacked. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
He really does! :) And since I've been lax about saying it -- thanks bunches for all the reviews!
Nosy old bugger, ain't he? :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
He surely is! And he's got nothing much to keep him occupied -- a dangerous situation indeed! ;)
Uh oh. With Minerva and Dumbledore on their case they won't get a moment's peace. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
No kidding! They'd be better off with just about anyone else curious ... :)
Dumbledore will want to know more. Poor Severus. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Dumbledore *always* wants to know more! ;) And yes, poor Severus!
They're so cute. At least they're being more honest now. :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
Hehehe, yes, there is that! :)
LOL. Now's he's just confusing himself by overanalysing! :)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
He's really good at that, isn't he? :)
He's going to start pulling her pigtails soon... ;)
Response from linlawless (Author of Witchy Woman)
LOL, that would be something to see! ;)