New Chapter for Out of the Depths
Out of the Depths
laurielove446 Reviews | 6.2/10 (446 Ratings, 0 Likes, 108 Favorites )
Hermione has returned to Hogwarts for one term to take her NEWTs and finds herself once again being taught by a man who had only ever tormented her. Can she cope with her life as it is now? Or with him?
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Member Since 2010 | 22 Stories | Favorited by 394 | 8 Reviews Written | 642 Review Responses
Welcome to my world of (largely) erotic exploration of the human condition. (Well, that's one way of putting it anyway ...)
My writing is largely rated NC-17 and, as you will see, contains a lot of explicit detail. But I cannot write without developing believable characters, largely in canon (at least as a starting point), whose behaviour is established through dialogue and tangible situations. I adore these characters and tend to write from the inside out, getting inside their heads and simply letting them talk (and act ...). Yes, there is a lot of sex, but I hope my characters' sexuality enables them, and us, to discover deeper aspects of their personalities.
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My favourite pairings are Hermione/Lucius and Hermione/Severus, but I have written for various other couples and situations.
I have recently started writing original works which have, fortunately, been picked up by publishers. If you are interested in my original work, my penname is Demelza Hart.
I love establishing a dialogue with my readers. Please feel free to contact me with comments, suggestions, criticism, anything. I look forward to hearing from you!
In the meantime ... enjoy!
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Reviews for Out of the Depths
Who needs a freeking ball anyway. Realy, the only main advantage is that you are pretty sure were most every one else is, so that Severus and Hermione can have wild monkey sex anywhere they want. the ball is the perfect ruse so that people who are exibitionist in tendency, can skirt the edges of safety and have sex in places you could be caught but propaby won't be.. How fun is that!!!! That's what I'm talking about right there boys and girls. I love the clothes you have had them wear. So far it's much better than I though it would go. But there's still the next chapert for something to happen, like some misunderstanding between Lawrence and Hermione. We'll just have to see.
They aren't being extremely carful. The stars must be aligned in their favor because I'm surprised no one has caught them making hot animal love in side corridors complete with moaning, begging and filthy words. Not the least of the sound of flesh on flesh as he fucks her harder and faster. Has one of them taken a dose of Felix Felicis?
Great chapter. :)
Fantastic chapter once again. Nice to know Minerva is still happy for them. :)
I was wondering when they would be discovered completely, it's kind of nice to finally have it out and in the open. I must say, I rather hate Filmore! Great chapter!
Another great chapter! So fantastic! Well done once again!
Favorite chapter, right there. That was fantastic, I love that he took the final lesson to speak with them directly, kindly. That was a great touch and probably one of my favorite moments in your story so far. Very nicely done. I loved it. :)
Another fantastic chapter, amazing. Everything just flows together so well, you've really done a remarkable job with this story so far! Well done!! :)
Awe! \severus finally said it! Fantastic chapter, I'm enjoying the deeper look into Severus. Well done!
Fantastic chapter, It was interesting to see Hermione with the control instead of Severus. Well done! I really enjoyed it.
One of the best Severus?Hermione fics I have ever read, once again. I really, really enjoyed this story, you did incredibly well with it! The plot was fantastic, your writing superb. You ended it in the perfect way. Absolutely wonderful! This story has been favorited, I look forward to reading it again.. and again! :)
Response from laurielove (Author of Out of the Depths)
Thank you so much for your incredibly thorough reviewing of my story. So glad you enjoyed it. It's been a while since I wrote it now, I can't quite believe where the time has gone. I have, since, moved onto original writing and have had some work published which is rapidly expanding. But it all started with my fan fiction, so thanks for appreciating it so much. LLx
Response from laurielove (Author of Out of the Depths)
Thank you so much for your incredibly thorough reviewing of my story. So glad you enjoyed it. It's been a while since I wrote it now, I can't quite believe where the time has gone. I have, since, moved onto original writing and have had some work published which is rapidly expanding. But it all started with my fan fiction, so thanks for appreciating it so much. LLx
I was wondering when the L word was going to come out into the open! Perfect timing too in my opinion! Well done!
Yay! Harry is accepting! That makes me rather pleased! Great chapter!
I should have been in bed a long time ago, I can't tear my eyes away! Such an amazing chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it! I love the fact that Ginny is supportive of her relationship with Severus, I feel like that would be exactly how she really would have acted. Great job!
Great chapter. :)
Excellent chapter!
I was wondering if someone was going to notice those two stealing glances at each other, I wonder how Ginny will react. Wonderful chapter, I really enjoyed it.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm sure I'm probably sounding pretty repetetive through these reviews but this story is AMAZING!
Great chapter. :)
Severus has always been my favorite character and I love what you've done with his character. It's nice to see him begin to open up more and more to Hermione. Both characters are extremely well written, it really pulls the reader in. Well done!
Wonderful chapter! It's nice being able to take a look inside Snapes head so to speak. Quite enjoyable. Well done! :)
I am addicted to this story. Well done! :)
I think this is probably my favorite chapter so far, I loved how oblivious Minerva was, it really made for an interesting moment. Another fantastic chapter! :)
Another fantastic chapter!
I don't know how you do it, I;ve tried writing erotica before and well.. it doesn't work. You make it seem easy, everything just flows together so well! This is something that I would actually pay to read, it's really just that good. You've done such an excellent job so far, I'm completely enthralled. On to the next chapter I go! Wonderful, wonderful job!