New Chapter for The Snapes Go on Holiday

Haha... It's a soap! As the Wizarding World Turns.... gotta love it

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, it does indeed seem like that doesn't it?

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lol... Harry was funny... poor darling! teehee

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haha.. naughty kids

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Hey, nobody messes with Lucius!They've only just begun.

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I can't help but to feel sorry for Harry. I'm glad Ginny thought things through.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I feel sorry for Harry too. I see him as a man who doesn't want to let go of his youth. And unfortunately, I've known a few like that. Some wake up and realize its time to be an adult, while other's continue to make pitiful fools of themselves. Men, aren't they dumb sometimes?

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Oh poor Harry he is really getting isn't he?

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Yeah, I think he deserves it though. I won't make him suffer much longer though. I want to move on with the rest of the story.Thanks for reading this chapter.

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I wonder what the kids with dream up for Harry next? Funny chapter.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm glad you liked it. There will probably be one more chapter of Harry sufferage, then I'll go on with the rest of the story.

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June W

Heh! I think Uncle Lucius and Aunt Ginny should get married at Disney and buy the Snape kiddies an annual pass! Heck, maybe Lucius can just BUY them a Disney resort!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

There's a thought! They do deserve it don't they?

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Harry is going to get it in the next chappie isn't he. Draco & Ginny that was just great. The children are just trouble aren't they? ;)

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Yeah, I'm thinking the kids should have been named Smoke and Fire.I'm glad you liked the Draco & Ginny part. I wanted to do something special for both of them, sort of give them a past together.Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

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Oh he should have left, now he's going to get it! Lovely bit with Ginny and Draco.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, Harry certainly should have left.I'm glad you liked the Draco and Ginny bit. I thought it would be a nice thing to have had them date at one point.

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jessajohns

Yikes! Remind me to never get on the bad side of the Snape children! Harry should have gone home when he had the chance.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

You mess with Uncle Lucius and you have to pay the price. Them kids want to go to Disney dammit!Thanks for taking the time to read this.

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Hysterical and I just love the last bit! Don't let him off the hook yet, this could definitely run a bit longer (snigger).

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

You know it! I'm thinking the next punishment should be something a bit more physical.I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter.

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jessajohns

Oh my god! That was hillarious! If Harry hadn't been such a jerk already, I'd be feeling a little sorry for him. As it is, it's just funny!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hoped to get that kind of response. I also felt that had he not been such a prick, I would have felt bad. But as it is, this isn't the end for Harry's suffering.Thanks for taking the time to review.

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Donavon

Oh please that was perfect, just perfect. You really have to love out Lucius, when he goes into his Lord Malfoy persona, the line where he said "How fortunate you are constipated, otherwise I'm be serving it up myself. Priceless.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I loved that sentence for Lucius. I like making him a bit haughty. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for sticking with this.

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I do so love the way you have Severus and Lucius conive like the true slytherins they are. Great chapter. Are you going to give us Harry's reaction? Thanks again for your wonderful writing.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thanks. They are Slytherins after all, so they have to act like them.Yes, Harry's reaction will be written and I have a feeling Ginny may just give him a good dressing down.

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The last chapters were great. I can't wait to see what Lucius is up to.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thanks. I'm glad you have been enjoying this.I've begun the next chapter, but RL has been busy and annoying. Hopefully I can finish it some time today and send it of to my beta.

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usagistu

hahahahhaaa!! I love how poor Sev is being tormented! I love the comic relief in this story. Keep up the good work

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm very happy you are enjoying it. A little humor, a little romance, hey what more can you ask for.Sometimes I feel bad for all I'm putting Sev through, but its just too much fun doing it to him.

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Well Lucius should be feeling pretty smug and hopefully he'll do something about it now. Lucky Hermione, I'd rub Sev's salve in for him any day. Don't cut him too much of a break, it's so funny. Great chapter and am looking forward to more.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, no, I'm not done with Sev just yet. He's not out of the bad-luck woods. Never let it be said though, that a Slytherin doesn't know when to take advantage of a situation. Lucius is a smart cookie.I'm glad you are still enjoying this.

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I agree. Poor guy. LOL... So Ginny loves Lucy. Teehee And how does our friend feel about this?

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm not talkin'.

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My favourite type of smut, the romantic kind. I just love to think of both Slytherins having a morning knitting circle LOL.Maybe Lucius can take Ginny's mind off her hand?Great chapter, love this fic and can't wait to see what you make happen next.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm glad you are enjoying this. I had hoped the smut was okay. I don't like writing it. Not because I'm prude, but I just don't have an affinity for it. I"ve got something cute planned for Lucius and Ginny.And unfortunately for Severus, it doesn't stop here. He's got more to go through. I adore him, I SWEAR! But I just think its so funny for all of these things to happen to him.

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Lovely. Maybe our dear Lucy can help to heal her. Might have known that Harry would show up to bugger up things. LOL! good chapter

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Oh yes, you know Luscious isn't one to pass up an opportunity like this.

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hahha! witch talk.... Snicker

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hahaha... Lucius is such a doll... "REally now..." I can't wait!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Isn't he cute? I love writing Lucius and Severus as such good friends like this.

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notsosaintly

I laughed so hard when Severus said he should just allow the student to make that potion. This is an excellent beginning!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, can't you just see his mind working? Just standing back with this evil smirk, knowing that potion is just going to blow up in his face.I'm glad you like the beginning.

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Shella LaRoche

Go Lucius Go! Hi ancientgirl! Nice to read something new. I'd love to read how lusting Lucius and dominant Ginny rough up the Snape's Holidays. Greetings Shella

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Hey Shella!I'm glad you are enjoying this so far. Yeah, I sort of just fell into getting Lucius and Ginny together, and I'm having fun at it too.Thanks for taking time to review.

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