Chapter 23 - Midnight
Chapter 23 of 24
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Thanks to June for all of her help and suggestions.
Chapter 23 - Midnight
As the afternoon slowly began to turn into evening, the Snape family returned from a successful picnic. They managed to have a beautiful afternoon, sans cat urine and poison ivy. As they walked back to the castle they saw a small car driving up. Hermione remembered Luna telling her she'd just discovered the fun of driving, as she saw the blond witch coming to a rather scary stop.
"Good lord, she almost ran into the fountain," gasped Severus as he held the children back.
"Well, she did say she only just finished driving lessons," said Hermione.
Severus looked down at her and quirked his brow.
"She apparently missed the stopping lessons."
Luna stepped out of her small blue Mini Cooper. She looked over at the Snape family walking towards her.
"Hello!" cried Luna.
Hermione hugged her friend and smiled.
"Luna, I'm so happy you could come and join us," Hermione backed away slightly and moved next to her children. "Odin, Sage, this is a friend of mine from when I went to Hogwarts. It's been many years since Luna has seen you."
Luna's eyes lit up.
"Hermione, they've grown so." Luna looked to Severus. "Hello, Professor."
"Seeing as I haven't been your professor in almost thirteen years, I think you can call me Severus," said the Potions master dryly.
Luna giggled.
"Oh, thanks, Prof... Severus. It does seem a little odd, doesn't it?"
Severus rolled his eyes and walked inside the castle with the children. Hermione and Luna walked behind them, talking.
Inside there was a flurry of activity. The house-elves had outdone themselves. The entire castle was sparkling, literally. It looked as if glitter had been spread over every item inside the castle, as well as in the gardens. Everything looked like one huge jewel.
Foofoo showed Luna to her room, which was across the hall from Harry's. All of the guests were in their rooms now, getting ready for the evening celebration. Severus and Hermione sent Odin and Sage to their rooms for their bath, giving the two adults a little time alone for a quick bath of their own.
Albus and Minerva were already celebrating in the gardens, as they were on hand when several owls delivered dozens of bottles of champagne, compliments of Count Heinrich.
Lucius was helping Ginny button her dress, again. It had taken them almost an hour to get Ginny's buttons all done, since her lace undergarments kept distracting Lucius.
Harry had been dressed for a while. He was standing outside his balcony. He'd seen Luna driving up. While he'd never thought much of her in school, he realized she'd grown into a beautiful woman. She still struck him as being a big loopy, and he reminded himself never to get into a car with her, but it might be nice to get to know her. She would certainly be different than any of the other women he usually dated.
At nine o'clock a chime rang out throughout the castle. Dinner was being served.
Odin and Sage ran out of their rooms and down the stairs. The house-elves had promised them their favorite food tonight, mashed potatoes topped with spicy chili; and their favorite dessert, brownies topped with chocolate ice cream, hot fudge and nuts.
The adults would have a more formal meal of prime rib, roasted vegetables, salad, soup, and several of the desserts the women had brought back from the village.
Severus and Hermione walked down the hall, and were met by Lucius and Ginny as they came out of their rooms. The two couples walked down the stairs together. Draco and Cho were already downstairs, talking with Albus and Minerva.
Harry walked out of his room at the same time as Luna walked out of hers. Luna smiled shyly. She wore a copper-colored dress with a tight bodice and a full skirt. They had all dressed formally that night. Harry smiled, something he didn't even realize he was doing.
"Hello, Luna. It's been a long time," he said as he approached her.
"Harry, it's wonderful to see you. You haven't changed," said Luna.
Harry chuckled.
"Actually, I have changed," Harry said. Luna looked confused. "Never mind. Come on, let's get the evening started, shall we?" Harry placed his hand on her shoulder and guided her towards the celebration.
After they all ate, Severus and Lucius lit a small bonfire where the group gathered to talk of old times. Albus and Minerva embarrassed Severus and Lucius by talking about them during their own time at Hogwarts.
"Severus," Albus said as carefully as he could, as he was now starting to slur his words, "who was it that you accidentally transfigured into a pink bunny in your second year and couldn't transfigure back?"
Everyone's eyes went wide. It was well known that the Potions master hated foolish wand-waving, but no one knew why. They all got the feeling this might be the clue.
"I think you might have me confused with Frank Longbottom, Albus," said Severus.
"Oh, Severus. Frank Longbottom was a wonderful Tranfiguration student," chimed Minerva. "I think it took us almost a week to get the poor student back to normal. Who was it?" wondered Minerva.
"I think you two have had a bit too much to drink, I don't recall doing anything of the sort," said Severus in his own defense.
Lucius laughed and looked to his friend.
"Oh, come on, Severus," said Lucius.
Severus was shocked as he looked to Lucius.
"I would think you of all people would rather I forgot that particular faux pas on my part."
"Why is that?" asked Draco curiously.
"Because I was the one he transfigured," said Lucius. Everyone started to laugh. "They had to keep me in a cage for a week so that I wouldn't hop away. I daresay I was the cutest fluffiest pink rabbit in all of Hogwarts." Lucius beamed.
"You were the only pink rabbit in Hogwarts," said Severus as he drank down the contents of his wine glass.
Time sped by and it was now just fifteen minutes before midnight.
As the group walked closer to the lake near the end of the garden area, Lucius and Ginny fell behind.
"I have an idea," said Lucius. "Why don't we watch the fireworks from that mountain up there?"
Ginny smiled.
"I think that would be wonderful. Shall we invite the others?" she asked.
"No, it is you I want to take to the top of the mountain tonight, love; no one else." He kissed her and held her tightly to him. They Apparated to the mountain area just across the lake. The castle and the gardens could be seen clearly in the distance. Lucius took his cape off, transfigured it into a large fur blanket, and spread it over the light snow. They sat down holding each other as the fireworks display began.
"What time is it?" asked Ginny.
"We have a little over five minutes." Lucius smiled. He'd asked Severus to add to the final explosion of fireworks a huge golden sprinkle of light that would reach the mountains. As midnight approached, the fireworks began to go off in a number pattern in the sky.
Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one, and finally midnight.
A huge golden fire filled the sky, and soon it looked as though sparkling chunks of gold were falling on them. Ginny and Lucius stood and looked up into the sky. The sparkling fire came down just ahead of them
"That's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen!" cried Ginny. She smiled as she looked at the ground covered with the golden light that began disappearing, except for one spot. She noticed a gleaming light coming from a patch of ground. "There's something over there," said Ginny as she moved towards the shining object.
Lucius followed her.
As she got closer she began to wonder what could be glittering so brightly in the light of the moon. She reached the spot and bent down to retrieve the object. She picked it up and saw that it was a ring. There between her thumb and index finger she held a platinum band, with a dark stone surrounded by several other stones. It was too dark, even with the bright moonlight, to tell what colors the stones were. She looked behind her at Lucius.
"Olive the center stone is olive in color, and it is surrounded by dark orange stones." Lucius walked towards her slowly. "The ring belonged to my grandmother. She never wore it, though. She said her hands were too ugly to do such a thing of beauty justice. When I married Narcissa, my grandmother gave it to me in private. She told me that someday I would want to give this to someone who wasn't chosen for me. I didn't understand her at the time, but I do now. My grandmother was a seer. But she used her gift rarely. That was the only time she used it with me." Lucius got down on one knee and took the ring from Ginny. He looked at it then took her left hand. "You have beautiful hands."
"Marry me?" he asked hopefully, as he held the ring poised at the tip of her finger.
Ginny's eyes sparkled with unshed tears.
"How could you ask me that and not know the answer?" she said as she fell to her knees and kissed him.
Lucius pushed the ring onto her finger and felt Ginny's arms embrace him.
"I will, I will, I will marry you!" she cried.
Back at the castle Severus watched the sky for Lucius' signal but saw nothing. He smiled as he realized what happened upon the final display: his friend had gotten a positive answer.
"What are you smiling about?" asked Hermione.
He whispered in her ear and felt her smile against his cheek.
"Oh, Severus, how lovely that must have been," she said as a tear fell from her eye.
Severus frowned and wiped the tear from her cheek.
"Do you wish I had done something lovely like that for you?" he wondered sadly.
Hermione smiled.
"You did, my love, you did."
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The stone colors I picked for Ginny's ring don't have any major significance. I love colored diamonds, olive green and dark orange in particular. I thought it would be a nice change from the emerald and rubies we are used to reading about.
I hope you enjoyed this chapter. I think there will probably be maybe one more then an epilogue.
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111 Reviews | 5.51/10 Average
you are so sympathetic!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, I hate drawing things out too much.
you really know how to write! it feels like delicious snowflakes are falling on my face!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you so much! I'm always hopeful that people who read my stories will also be able to envision things exactly the way I am thinking of them.
didn't see the twist coming!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
That's a good thing.
how awesome! u spared me all those cliched mills and boon plot-lines about them tip-toeing around each other trying to discover their feelings about each other with lucius hiding behind the suit of armour. u write like an amazing screenwriter!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you! I've been a fanfic fan for a long time, and read many stories before deciding to pen my own. I have tried to keep those things you mentioned out of my writing. I don't have the patience for too much of that stuff myself.
All right then. What were you and Ginny whispering
about before dinner?
Hermione opened and shut her mouth several times,
before she answered.
Witch talk.
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Actually, Severus said that even if he had
to place the two young men in a body bind and hang
them upside down in a rather suspect room in the
dungeon, Lucius would have time with Ginny. Lucius
saw a glimmer in Severus eyes as he spoke. He knew
Severus almost wished he could do just what he had
said, even if it was a bit obvious for a Slytherin.
5 stars! for those two snippets!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I can't tell you how much I apprecaite you taking the time to read this. I wrote all of these stories so long ago. It's nice to know they are still being read and appreciated.
yes, i definitely had enjoyed everything about this chapter, from the way u phrase the chats btw l and s to how u aren't regurgitating about crookshanks' 3xploits. it was spot on because that would have been clumsy.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you! :)
good instincts about what the next chappie should be about!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yup!
i love the suspense and building of trepidation and anticipation! i am so happy i have overlooked this story even though i have been devouring hgss ff for more than ten years!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you came across this!
you left me teetering, mischievous author!
Great story. I loved reading it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you for taking the time to read this. I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
this story rocks! i love all ur stories + am a huge fan of hermonie/snape-never stop writing!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Aha, you found your way to this one. I had a lot of fun writing this one.
Although I have to tell you, I haven't written a fanfiction story in months. My last one was A Tale of Two men.
Awww . As always wonderfullCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Ok you are forgiven. You are crueler to Harry. But at least he deserves it. The git. Lucius and Ginny that's nice.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, yes Harry does get the brunt of the evil here. Those Snape kids are ruthless.I like the combo of Lucius and an adult Ginny. Just gives me something different from Severus and Hermione.
Erm Anciengirl do you hate poor Severus ? First catpiss-sandwiches, Potter + Weasley and now the itches on his behind. My my aren't you a cruel one. Yes I realy like your style.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, I looooooove Severus. But I just couldn't help myself having a laugh at his expense here. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.Thanks for all the reading you've been doing. I'm very happy you are pleased with my fics.
Pure escapism at it's finest I think! Captivating.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Don't we all need to escape? I'm glad it took you away for a while.
hahaha! I don't blame Severus one bit for not allowing them to join them again. Great tale, doll. cheers!You know, I was wondering if you thought of "Stinky" while writing about Harry's smell. Teehee!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.And yes, Stinky was floating in my mind, especially since his ass is so vocal these days.
Sweet chapter!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thanks. I hoped not to make it too mushy.
Love that Harry and Cho had that talk. Very nice touch, and muahahaha! Hermione is on to Snape, though she can't prove anything. Teehee
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I like the idea of them talking things out. And Hermione will never get proof. Severus is a Slytherin after all, no way will she get the good on him.
I'm glad Hermione took her kids to task. Sweet flashback with Snape / Hermione. Oh, and woohoo... Luna? teehee
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, she did. But they did it for a good cause. And hey, they aren't all bad. They didn't throw their father under the bus.
Arthur caved in quick. I thought they'd get in a rumble. Poor Harry. LOL... Maybe the little pests will get theirs before the story is out. Sorry it's taken so long for me to catch up.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Nah, I figured Arthur had realized that Lucius had changed his ways. He'd done lots of good after the war so I saw no reason why Arthur wouldn't accept him.Poor Harry? Yeah, I know you love Harry, but I have no sympathy for him here.southern_witch_69's response: I didn't mean just for Lucius, for anyone. Daddy's only girl and all that rubbish. LOL
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, makes sense. But after waiting for Harry to make his move, I also figured shit, they'd be happy ANYBODY married the girl.
It was great story. The last chapter was brillant. I loved the happy endings for everyone.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I always feel the need to give everyone a happy ending. I think maybe because I'm so sure that JKR might not give us a happy ending for everybody.Thank you for taking the time to read this and reveiw it. I appreciate your support.
tHANK YOU FOR A FUN STORY.. IT MADE ME LAUGH VERY MUCH. WAITING FOR MORE STORIES
PATTY
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you liked it so much. I like stories that make you laugh and cry. I'm working on another story now, that I got the idea from this story.Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. I always appreciate your comments.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
oops sorry i didn't realise the caps lock was on... still loved it.
Just lovely and happiness for everyone. Enjoyable tale that I am sure to visit more thance once
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you liked it. I like to tie my stories up in a nice bow, and yes I love giving everyone a happy ending. I know some authors don't like that, but they can write what they want.I appreciate you taking the time to read this and review.
(sigh) perfect happy ending for everyone. A lovely, lovely story thank you.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I wanted to give everyone a happy ending.Thanks also for all of your support during this story.
It was a perfect ending to a brilliant story. Best wishes,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I didn't think it was necessary to drag it out any longer. I wanted to end it on a good note.Thanks for all of your kind words throughout this story. I appreciate the time you have taken to read this and review it.