Former Death Eaters and Best Buds
Chapter 5 of 24
ancientgirlSeverus emerges from his self imposed exile in the dungeons, and we find out a little of what he was really doing down there.
ReviewedI'm wondering if I should put this story in a general section. This is as much a Lucius/Ginny story as a Severus/Hermione story. But, I think it could easily work if I give both couples equal time though.
All canon characters belong to JKR.
Thanks to June for all of her help and suggestions.
Chapter 5 – Former Death Eaters and Best Buds
Harry observed Lucius speaking to Ginny. He felt uneasy as he noticed how much Ginny seemed to be enjoying her conversation with the elder Malfoy. So intent was he to eavesdrop that he didn’t realize Ron had won their match.
“Checkmate,” Ron was smiling. For a brief moment he had thought Harry would beat him, but since Lucius came into the room, his friend’s game began to suffer. Of course, being a fierce competitor, Ron took advantage. He looked up at Harry and realized the Boy Who Lived wasn’t even looking at the game board. Ron noticed Harry still looking towards his sister and Lucius.
“What’s wrong, Harry?”
“Huh?” Harry looked towards Ron. “Sorry, what did you say? Is it my move?”
“I just won. What’s the matter with you?” asked Ron.
“Nothing, I’m fine. I don’t feel much like playing anymore.” Harry stood and walked towards Ginny and Lucius.
For his part, Neville watched the two quietly. Even though Lucius had come to the side of the Order, there was always a dangerous quality about him that Neville felt uneasy about. The tall blond always seemed imposing to him.
“Lucius,” Harry said as he extended his hand and Lucius shook it.
“Harry, how nice to see you.” Lucius remembered that there were others in the room. “Neville, Ron.” He bowed his head slightly toward the others, then turned his attention back to Ginny.
At that moment, Hermione came into the room.
“Lucius, welcome.” Hermione welcomed her guest graciously, with a kiss on the cheek and a warm hug. “I’m so glad you came. Maybe now Severus will emerge from the Count’s labs and spend some time with the rest of us.”
“Well, you above all people should know that Severus loves tinkering with his potions. I’ll see what I can do, however, if you point me in the right direction.”
Hermione summoned Foofoo, the head house-elf, and asked him to take Lucius to the labs. Before he walked out of the room, Lucius took one last look back at Ginny. As he left the room, Ginny took hold of Hermione’s arm and let out a breath she didn’t even realize she was holding.
“I can’t believe he actually came,” said Ginny enthusiastically.
Harry, of course, didn’t notice the gleam in Ginny’s eyes, and thought she said it more in disbelief than anything.
“I didn’t know you invited Lucius to come along,” Neville said to his hostess.
“I hadn’t at first, but I thought Severus might like to have someone his own age around,” answered Hermione.
“Yeah, I’m sure they’re reliving the good old Death Eater days,” said Ron as he popped a small tea sandwich in his mouth. Blank faces met his gaze. “Oh, like I’m the only one who thought that.”
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Lucius was led to the dungeons of the castle, which were actually very undungeon-like. They were incredibly well-lit and decorated in bold colors.
“Master Snape is in this room, sir. Is there anything more?” Foofoo asked.
“No, thank you.” Another change in Lucius was that now he was quite gracious to house-elves. His own were free and very happy to be in his service.
Foofoo disappeared, and Lucius knocked on the wood door.
“Who is it?” called Severus.
“Lucius.” He waited a few moments, then heard footsteps approach. The door opened and he was pulled inside quickly.
Severus looked out into the hallway, first left, then right. He then closed the door.
Instead of finding several sets of cauldrons bubbling wildly, Lucius found what Draco called a media room. Lucius himself did not own a television, or any other type of Muggle electronic apparatus, save a laptop computer, which Draco insisted he have so that they could communicate easier and faster by Internet.
“I thought this was some potions lab,” said Lucius as he approached a fifty-inch plasma television.
“It is. But yesterday I went to that bookcase near the table to look for a book I needed. I noticed a book which seemed out of place, and when I went to take it out, the entire back half of the room transformed into this.”
“So while your family is upstairs enjoying their holiday, you are sitting down here moping watching that?” asked Lucius as he pointed to the television. There was a woman with an odd looking metal object that looked like a large needle. She was manipulating something that looked like yarn into a hat. Behind her was a sign – Knitting for Dummies.
“I tried to be part of the group, Merlin knows I tried. But the first day we were here, Weasley walked into my room and saw me naked.”
“Which Weasley?” asked Lucius.
“The one who flies for the same team.”
“Please tell me you don’t mean Ginny,” said Lucius.
“No!” yelled Severus as he rolled his eyes. “It was Ron. He thought my room was his. Then the day after that, Four-Eyes drank too much brandy after dinner and threw up all over my lap when I was wearing the new trousers Hermione purchased for me in Harrods. As though that in itself wasn’t bad enough, he tried to help me clean it up, and instead of saying Scourgify, he pointed his wand and said Stupefy. My penis wouldn’t work for two days. And you don’t even want to know what that furball cat did this afternoon.”
Lucius was laughing so hard he had tears running down his cheeks. Severus scowled at his friend.
“I’m sorry, Severus. It is quite funny. I don’t blame you for sequestering yourself, though. But you need to get out of here.”
“Hang on, what exactly are you doing here?” Severus finally realized how unexpected it was for Lucius to be present. “Not that I mind. It will be nice to have another Slytherin around.”
“Hermione invited me to spend the holiday with all of you. Draco and Cho are in America, so I thought why not. I’m glad I came. I had no idea that Miss Weasley had grown into such an attractive woman.”
Severus raised an ever-inquiring brow and smirked.
“Yes, she is quite pleasant to look at.”
“Oh, you think so? Does your wife know you think her best friend is pleasant-looking?” said Lucius playfully.
Severus chuckled. “I love my wife very much, and I think she is the most beautiful woman in the world. But I do still have eyes.” Severus noticed Lucius smiling as they spoke about Ginny.
“Are you perhaps interested?” asked Severus.
“Most definitely. But, I know she and Harry are an item. Besides, I may be too old for her taste.”
“Well, for one thing, I have it on good authority that she is not seeing anyone seriously, and that includes Harry. And two, said authority also states that Miss Ginevra Weasley may be looking for an older man.”
Lucius smiled, looking much like the cat that ate the canary.
“Really, now? I have a feeling this is going to be quite an interesting stay. No wonder Harry took such an interest in our conversation. I doubt very much he is going to like having competition.”
Now it was Severus’ turn to smile. Things were turning around for the Potions master. Watching Harry and Neville try to impress Ginny with Lucius around would be very entertaining.
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I hope you enjoyed this chapter.
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111 Reviews | 5.51/10 Average
you are so sympathetic!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, I hate drawing things out too much.
you really know how to write! it feels like delicious snowflakes are falling on my face!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you so much! I'm always hopeful that people who read my stories will also be able to envision things exactly the way I am thinking of them.
didn't see the twist coming!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
That's a good thing.
how awesome! u spared me all those cliched mills and boon plot-lines about them tip-toeing around each other trying to discover their feelings about each other with lucius hiding behind the suit of armour. u write like an amazing screenwriter!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you! I've been a fanfic fan for a long time, and read many stories before deciding to pen my own. I have tried to keep those things you mentioned out of my writing. I don't have the patience for too much of that stuff myself.
All right then. What were you and Ginny whispering
about before dinner?
Hermione opened and shut her mouth several times,
before she answered.
Witch talk.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Actually, Severus said that even if he had
to place the two young men in a body bind and hang
them upside down in a rather suspect room in the
dungeon, Lucius would have time with Ginny. Lucius
saw a glimmer in Severus eyes as he spoke. He knew
Severus almost wished he could do just what he had
said, even if it was a bit obvious for a Slytherin.
5 stars! for those two snippets!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I can't tell you how much I apprecaite you taking the time to read this. I wrote all of these stories so long ago. It's nice to know they are still being read and appreciated.
yes, i definitely had enjoyed everything about this chapter, from the way u phrase the chats btw l and s to how u aren't regurgitating about crookshanks' 3xploits. it was spot on because that would have been clumsy.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you! :)
good instincts about what the next chappie should be about!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yup!
i love the suspense and building of trepidation and anticipation! i am so happy i have overlooked this story even though i have been devouring hgss ff for more than ten years!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you came across this!
you left me teetering, mischievous author!
Great story. I loved reading it.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you for taking the time to read this. I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
this story rocks! i love all ur stories + am a huge fan of hermonie/snape-never stop writing!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Aha, you found your way to this one. I had a lot of fun writing this one.
Although I have to tell you, I haven't written a fanfiction story in months. My last one was A Tale of Two men.
Awww . As always wonderfullCheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Ok you are forgiven. You are crueler to Harry. But at least he deserves it. The git. Lucius and Ginny that's nice.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, yes Harry does get the brunt of the evil here. Those Snape kids are ruthless.I like the combo of Lucius and an adult Ginny. Just gives me something different from Severus and Hermione.
Erm Anciengirl do you hate poor Severus ? First catpiss-sandwiches, Potter + Weasley and now the itches on his behind. My my aren't you a cruel one. Yes I realy like your style.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, I looooooove Severus. But I just couldn't help myself having a laugh at his expense here. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.Thanks for all the reading you've been doing. I'm very happy you are pleased with my fics.
Pure escapism at it's finest I think! Captivating.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Don't we all need to escape? I'm glad it took you away for a while.
hahaha! I don't blame Severus one bit for not allowing them to join them again. Great tale, doll. cheers!You know, I was wondering if you thought of "Stinky" while writing about Harry's smell. Teehee!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.And yes, Stinky was floating in my mind, especially since his ass is so vocal these days.
Sweet chapter!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thanks. I hoped not to make it too mushy.
Love that Harry and Cho had that talk. Very nice touch, and muahahaha! Hermione is on to Snape, though she can't prove anything. Teehee
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I like the idea of them talking things out. And Hermione will never get proof. Severus is a Slytherin after all, no way will she get the good on him.
I'm glad Hermione took her kids to task. Sweet flashback with Snape / Hermione. Oh, and woohoo... Luna? teehee
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, she did. But they did it for a good cause. And hey, they aren't all bad. They didn't throw their father under the bus.
Arthur caved in quick. I thought they'd get in a rumble. Poor Harry. LOL... Maybe the little pests will get theirs before the story is out. Sorry it's taken so long for me to catch up.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Nah, I figured Arthur had realized that Lucius had changed his ways. He'd done lots of good after the war so I saw no reason why Arthur wouldn't accept him.Poor Harry? Yeah, I know you love Harry, but I have no sympathy for him here.southern_witch_69's response: I didn't mean just for Lucius, for anyone. Daddy's only girl and all that rubbish. LOL
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, makes sense. But after waiting for Harry to make his move, I also figured shit, they'd be happy ANYBODY married the girl.
It was great story. The last chapter was brillant. I loved the happy endings for everyone.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I always feel the need to give everyone a happy ending. I think maybe because I'm so sure that JKR might not give us a happy ending for everybody.Thank you for taking the time to read this and reveiw it. I appreciate your support.
tHANK YOU FOR A FUN STORY.. IT MADE ME LAUGH VERY MUCH. WAITING FOR MORE STORIES
PATTY
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you liked it so much. I like stories that make you laugh and cry. I'm working on another story now, that I got the idea from this story.Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer. I always appreciate your comments.
Response from pickles (Reviewer)
oops sorry i didn't realise the caps lock was on... still loved it.
Just lovely and happiness for everyone. Enjoyable tale that I am sure to visit more thance once
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you liked it. I like to tie my stories up in a nice bow, and yes I love giving everyone a happy ending. I know some authors don't like that, but they can write what they want.I appreciate you taking the time to read this and review.
(sigh) perfect happy ending for everyone. A lovely, lovely story thank you.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I wanted to give everyone a happy ending.Thanks also for all of your support during this story.
It was a perfect ending to a brilliant story. Best wishes,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I didn't think it was necessary to drag it out any longer. I wanted to end it on a good note.Thanks for all of your kind words throughout this story. I appreciate the time you have taken to read this and review it.