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The Snapes Go on Holiday Chapter 6: Severus Comes Out Of Exile
Chapters Menu
The Snapes Go on Holiday

1: The News

2: Settling In

3: A buddy for Severus

4: Lucius Arrives

5: Former Death Eaters and Best Buds

6: Severus Comes Out Of Exile

7: Christmas Fun

8: Ginny confesses love, Lucius eavesdrops and Severus is itchy

9: Severus freezes and Lucius makes his move

10: Anything You Ask.

11: Harry Get's A Rude Awakening.

12: Grasping at straws

13: The Truth About Lucius

14: Coming to terms

15: Decisions

16: Don't mess with Uncle Lucius

17: Did I just say that out loud?

18: Be afraid, be very afraid

19: What's with Harry's hair?

20: Chapter ? 20 ? A corset, a lesson and permission.

21: Revelations and preparations

22: It's time to move on

23: Chapter 23 - Midnight

24: The holiday comes to an end

Severus Comes Out Of Exile

The Snapes Go on Holiday

Chapter 6 of 24

ancientgirl

Severus is finally out of the dungeons.

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Thank you to June for all of her help and suggestions.

Chapter 6 – Severus Comes Out Of Exile

Severus and Lucius walked up from the dungeons together. Lucius was bringing his friend up-to-date on his son’s dealings.

“So it seems that you may be a grandfather soon, then?” asked Severus

“Yes. Can you imagine me, a grandfather?” Lucius laughed. It was certainly a hard thing to picture. The man who once dressed as a Death Eater in Voldemort’s ranks, would soon dress up as Father Christmas for his grandchildren. As odd as it sounded, Lucius found he liked the idea very much.

“I don’t even want to think about that yet,” Severus said, inwardly shuddering. “My children are too young for me to think of that.”

As they got to the main floor, they were met by Odin and Sage.

“Uncle Lucius! What did you bring us?” cried Sage as she ran to Lucius.

“Sage, that’s quite rude, young lady,” scowled Severus.

Lucius merely laughed. “It’s all right, Severus. As it happens, I did bring them a little something. But, they must promise to be patient, and I will let them have their gifts after dinner.”

Odin and Sage frowned. At age eight and seven, neither child was very patient, but it seemed that they had no choice.

“Oh, all right.” agreed Sage, as she hugged Lucius. Odin took his turn, then the two children ran off. They knew they would be able to talk Albus and Minerva into conjuring some pony for them to ride around the property.

“Um…Severus, I was thinking. Why were you watching a knitting show?” asked Lucius.

Severus smiled.

“Knitting keeps my fingers nimble,” Severus replied, quirking his eyebrows. “Women like nimble fingers.”

They both laughed and walked towards the large living room, where the rest of the gang was gathered.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

The evening passed quickly. Harry and Neville practically sprinted to the dining room behind Ginny, as both wanted to take a seat next to her. For his part, Lucius only smiled. He would have his moment with Ginny.

The Count’s dinner table was square, which allowed for easy conversation. Hermione was pleased to see Severus socializing again, as he happily argued with Lucius and Albus regarding new theories on how the Dark Arts could be used for good rather than evil purposes. Hermione and Minerva discussed new Tranfiguration articles they planned on writing together, and Ginny tried to keep herself from being split in two. Ron entertained Odin and Sage, telling them about Fred and George’s new product ideas they were developing to sell at Weasleys’ Wizard Wheezes.

After dinner, the group split up. Albus and Minerva took the Snape children and walked through the gardens, pointing out the constellations easily seen in the sky. Hermione and Severus disappeared with Lucius into the library for a nightly brandy, while poor Ginny was stuck with her brother and two would-be suitors. As Ginny longingly looked towards Lucius’ retreating form, she wondered if she would ever get a moment’s peace from Harry, Neville and Ron.

As the day grew late and everyone was in their respective rooms, Lucius began to formulate a plan. He’d been discussing with Severus ways to get Harry and Neville away from Ginny long enough for him to spend some time with her. Severus assured him he would help. Actually, Severus said that even if he had to place the two young men in a body bind and hang them upside down in a rather suspect room in the dungeon, Lucius would have time with Ginny. Lucius saw a glimmer in Severus’ eyes as he spoke. He knew Severus almost wished he could do just what he had said, even if it was a bit obvious for a Slytherin.

In their bedroom, Hermione climbed into bed and suspiciously eyed her husband.

“Severus?” she asked as she lightly ran her finger across his chest.

Severus opened one eye and looked at her. ‘Don’t tell her anything, Severus, no matter what she does to you,’ he thought.

“Yes?”

“What were you and Lucius whispering about in the library earlier?”

“Oh, just wizard talk,” said Severus, as Hermione’s fingers traveled from his chest to his navel.

“What kind of wizard talk?” Hermione kissed Severus on his neck, just where she knew he liked it. She had told Ginny earlier that evening that she would try to get as much information about Lucius as she could. Hermione knew Lucius somewhat well, but she didn’t know what he would be looking for in a woman. Seeing Severus and Lucius earlier that evening, speaking in hushed toned, Hermione knew they had to have been talking about more than just Quidditch and Dark Arts.

‘Damn her,’ thought Severus. Hermione was sucking on his neck. If she kept that up he’d confess to being Voldemort’s wet nurse, just to keep her from stopping.

“Oh, you know. The usual. Quidditch and the Dark Arts.”

Hermione immediately stopped touching him.

“What did you stop for?” asked Severus.

“Severus Snape, you know very well you weren’t talking about that,” she said in a huffy tone.

Severus pushed himself up on his elbows and looked at her.

“Well, why is it so bloody important for you to know, woman?”

“It’s not important, I was just curious, that’s all.”

“All right then. What were you and Ginny whispering about before dinner?”

Hermione opened and shut her mouth several times, before she answered.

“Witch talk.”

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Not much going on in this chapter, nice and quiet. But there is more coming. Severus isn't out of the woods yet, and Lucius has his sights set on Ginny.

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Snapes Go on Holiday

111 Reviews  |  5.51/10 Average

10/10

jadecadence

you are so sympathetic!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, I hate drawing things out too much. 

10/10

jadecadence

you really know how to write! it feels like delicious snowflakes are falling on my face!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you so much!  I'm always hopeful that people who read my stories will also be able to envision things exactly the way I am thinking of them. 

10/10

jadecadence

didn't see the twist coming!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

That's a good thing. 

10/10

jadecadence

how awesome! u spared me all those cliched mills and boon plot-lines about them tip-toeing around each other trying to discover their feelings about each other with lucius hiding behind the suit of armour. u write like an amazing screenwriter!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you!  I've been a fanfic fan for a long time, and read many stories before deciding to pen my own.  I have tried to keep those things you mentioned out of my writing.  I don't have the patience for too much of that stuff myself. 

10/10

jadecadence

“All right then. What were you and Ginny whispering
about before dinner?”
Hermione opened and shut her mouth several times,
before she answered.
“Witch talk.”
~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Actually, Severus said that even if he had
to place the two young men in a body bind and hang
them upside down in a rather suspect room in the
dungeon, Lucius would have time with Ginny. Lucius
saw a glimmer in Severus’ eyes as he spoke. He knew
Severus almost wished he could do just what he had
said, even if it was a bit obvious for a Slytherin.

5 stars! for those two snippets!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I can't tell you how much I apprecaite you taking the time to read this.  I wrote all of these stories so long ago.  It's nice to know they are still being read and appreciated. 

10/10

jadecadence

yes, i definitely had enjoyed everything about this chapter, from the way u phrase the chats btw l and s to how u aren't regurgitating about crookshanks' 3xploits. it was spot on because that would have been clumsy.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you! :)

10/10

jadecadence

good instincts about what the next chappie should be about!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Yup! 

10/10

jadecadence

i love the suspense and building of trepidation and anticipation! i am so happy i have overlooked this story even though i have been devouring hgss ff for more than ten years!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm glad you came across this! 

10/10

jadecadence

you left me teetering, mischievous author!

10/10

musshel

Great story.  I loved reading it.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you for taking the time to read this.  I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

10/10

trampyone

this story rocks! i love all ur stories + am a huge fan of hermonie/snape-never stop writing!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Aha, you found your way to this one.  I had a lot of fun writing this one.

Although I have to tell you, I haven't written a fanfiction story in months.  My last one was A Tale of Two men.

0/10

moepi

Awww . As always wonderfullCheers Moepi AKA Michèle

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

moepi

Ok you are forgiven. You are crueler to Harry. But at least he deserves it. The git. Lucius and Ginny that's nice.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, yes Harry does get the brunt of the evil here.  Those Snape kids are ruthless.I like the combo of Lucius and an adult Ginny.  Just gives me something different from Severus and Hermione.

0/10

moepi

Erm Anciengirl do you hate poor Severus ? First catpiss-sandwiches, Potter + Weasley and now the itches on his behind. My my aren't you a cruel one. Yes I realy like your style.Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, I looooooove Severus.  But I just couldn't help myself having a laugh at his expense here.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.Thanks for all the reading you've been doing.  I'm very happy you are pleased with my fics.

9/10

Amethystique

Pure escapism at it's finest I think!  Captivating. 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Don't we all need to escape?  I'm glad it took you away for a while.

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

hahaha! I don't blame Severus one bit for not allowing them to join them again. Great tale, doll. cheers!You know, I was wondering if you thought of "Stinky" while writing about Harry's smell. Teehee!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.And yes, Stinky was floating in my mind, especially since his ass is so vocal these days.

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Sweet chapter!

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thanks.  I hoped not to make it too mushy.

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Love that Harry and Cho had that talk. Very nice touch, and muahahaha! Hermione is on to Snape, though she can't prove anything. Teehee

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I like the idea of them talking things out.  And Hermione will never get proof.  Severus is a Slytherin after all, no way will she get the good on him.

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

I'm glad Hermione took her kids to task. Sweet flashback with Snape / Hermione. Oh, and woohoo... Luna? teehee

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Yeah, she did.  But they did it for a good cause.  And hey, they aren't all bad.  They didn't throw their father under the bus.

0/10

Southern_Witch_69

Arthur caved in quick. I thought they'd get in a rumble. Poor Harry. LOL... Maybe the little pests will get theirs before the story is out. Sorry it's taken so long for me to catch up.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Nah, I figured Arthur had realized that Lucius had changed his ways.  He'd done lots of good after the war so I saw no reason why Arthur wouldn't accept him.Poor Harry?  Yeah, I know you love Harry, but I have no sympathy for him here.southern_witch_69's response: I didn't mean just for Lucius, for anyone. Daddy's only girl and all that rubbish. LOL

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

LOL, makes sense.  But after waiting for Harry to make his move, I also figured shit, they'd be happy ANYBODY married the girl.

0/10

KiraAlexia

It was great story. The last chapter was brillant. I loved the happy endings for everyone.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.  I always feel the need to give everyone a happy ending.  I think maybe because I'm so sure that JKR might not give us a happy ending for everybody.Thank you for taking the time to read this and reveiw it.  I appreciate your support.

10/10

pickles

tHANK YOU FOR A FUN STORY..  IT MADE ME LAUGH VERY MUCH.  WAITING FOR MORE STORIES

PATTY 

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm glad you liked it so much.  I like stories that make you laugh and cry. I'm working on another story now, that I got the idea from this story.Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer.  I always appreciate your comments.

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

oops sorry i didn't realise the caps lock was on...  still loved it.

0/10

Crimson Blue

Just lovely and happiness for everyone. Enjoyable tale that I am sure to visit more thance once

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

I'm glad you liked it.  I like to tie my stories up in a nice bow, and yes I love giving everyone a happy ending.  I know some authors don't like that, but they can write what they want.I appreciate you taking the time to read this and review.

10/10

MagicAlly

(sigh) perfect happy ending for everyone. A lovely, lovely story thank you.

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you.  I wanted to give everyone a happy ending.Thanks also for all of your support during this story.

0/10

Donavon

It was a perfect ending to a brilliant story.  Best wishes,

Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)

Thank you.  I didn't think it was necessary to drag it out any longer.  I wanted to end it on a good note.Thanks for all of your kind words throughout this story.  I appreciate the time you have taken to read this and review it.

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