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The Snapes Go on Holiday
ancientgirl111 Reviews | 5.51/10 (111 Ratings, 0 Likes, 59 Favorites )
*COMPLETE* Severus and Hermione celebrate their twelve years of marraige. Too bad for Severus she invites the gang to come along too.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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do you think you could do a prequal to this story about hermione and severus's early yrs. from the time they saw each other at the book store to the bith of there kids. i would love to see that be a story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
That sounds like a nice idea. I already have something in mind when I finish this story. Nothing related to it, but just an idea that formed from something I said about the kids.I'll be writing that next. If I get an idea about what you suggested, I'll be sure to write it.Thanks for the suggestions. I'm happy that you enjoyed what little I wrote about their meeting to want to hear more.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
i thought it sound so romantic for them to fall in love at frist sight in a bookstore
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
It is a romantic idea. Certainly worth a one shot. I started another story which I will post after I finish this one, but I may sit down and write something about them in the book store and post it before the other story.Thanks for the suggestion. I'll try to write something nice.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
cool hugs
I love the colour of the ring, I think Olive for slytherin and Lucius and dark orange for Ginny's hair. That was a beautiful chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was incredibly bored one day and did a search for colored diamonds, and saw those two colors on a webpage. They were absolutely beautiful. I thought they would work nicely for these two.Thank you for your support. I appreciate your reviews.
What a beautiful chapter. I always wanted my hubby to have done something like that, he just sent me a fiancee card on Valentines day. Pretty romantic I suppose but on top of a mountain with fireworks and coloured diamonds.Plus LUCIUS...dream time.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm sure if your hubby was a wizard he would have been able to manage something equally as spectacular.I'm glad you liked the chapter.Happy Chocolate Day!
wonderful story thank you.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read it.
Wonderful, you have a way with your writing that brings to life children and animals, I thought reading the title that Lucius was going to really go at Harry. No the children are going to do it for him.Brilliant. Thanks so much for all your wonderful stories.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Oh thank you! I love writing animals, and the kids are proving to be so much fun too. LOL, the kids have a little bit of a mean streak in them, so I figured I'd show it.Thank you for your wonderful comments.
What do those kids get up to. Can't wait to see what's in store for Harry next.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Harry is going to wish he'd left.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'll have the next one up soon. Thanks for taking the time to read this.
I'm so happy that Ginny & Lucius made up. You had it right at the end when chastised Harry.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I thought that Harry sees Albus as a father figure. Somebody has to get him thinking about what he's done. Thank you for taking the time to review. I appreciate your comments.
Sorry for reviewing in different places, it is where I find the update first. Oh, I am so happy for my Lucius. However, I feel so sorry for Harry, he is so sad, and I really do not think Albus does understand........My own readers would get to this point of a story, and would say...here it comes
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
’s triad, and it works and I enjoy them, I can also visualize Ginny/Harry/Lucius. However, this is your story and it needs you to complete it, without giving way to the obvious, which are only is obvious to me.Best wishes, for a still a beautiful story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I do the same thing. I check several sites sometimes for different stories and review when I see it come up first.I felt bad for Harry too, but I see him in this story as someone who just doesn't want to let go. I know a couple of men like that, and its not pretty. But I'll make Harry's future better than the people I know.And I don't think Lucius is willing to share LOL.
Luciu's dungeons, now there's an interesting thought. Lovely chapter and as usual can't wait for more.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Can you imagine what he would do? God I wish I was comfortable with writing smut, because it would be an interesting chapter. But, we can use our imagination.I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'll have a new one up in a couple of days.
OK if I were in Harry's shoes right now, I'd be worried. Very worried. Two pint sized Snapes on his case (trembles). Another great chapter and I am intrigued to see what they get up to.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, well they won't stop at just one thing you know. I gather they would have a bit of a mean streak. Especially since Harry has messed with Lucius who is going to take them to Disney World.
Such sneaky children! I will agree with them that Harry was a right prat to leave that report out for Ginny to read. I can't wait to see what the kids plan for him!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, Sage said it all, he was a butt.I'll be starting to write a bit more of them in the coming chapters, since they will have found a way to make Harry's life miserable.
lol... The kids are cute. Hermione should have said, "I'm the only Mudblood here." ahahaha I'm feeling fiesty today! I like how Snape handled it. :)
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Ruh roh, a fiesty SW on the loose.I like the kids. I like the thought of a minature Severus and Hermione.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
HEYs! I just gave myself an idea for a story!southern_witch_69's response: lol!! Woohoo! **rubs hands together in glee**
Ah, poor Lucius! Sabotage! LOL... Silly Harry. I felt sorry for Harry, too. What he did sucked, but then to get such a cold shoulder, even from Albus! Poor bloke. I hope Ginny can overcome her feelings on this.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Well Harry can be quite a butt sometimes. He's very selfish in this and doesn't realize it yet.
I just read the last 3 chappies. I really enjoyed them. Harry is such an idiot though. I wonder what Odin & Sage are up to.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, Harry isn't being very nice, but he'll see the error of his ways.Odin and Sage will be teaching Harry a lesson soon.
Well Harry's definitely gone too far, he forgot that Severus and Hermione were once in the same position that Ginny and Lucius are now. I'm sure that Ginny will forgive him but I really feel for Lucius at the moment thinking that he may have lost the girl he loves. Great story and the writing is so absorbing, thank you.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yes, Harry really was a total jerk here. I wanted for the readers to see how badly Lucius felt at the thought of almost losing Ginny. So much so that he threatened Harry in front of witnesses LOL.He's even forgotten that Lucius and Ginny's situation mirrors Severus and Hermione. But Harry has a lot more eye opening things ahead of him. There is going to be a guest coming in soon that will set him straight and really make him realize just what an ass he's been all these years.Thank you so much for always taking the time to review my chapters. I really appreciate it.
Response from MagicAlly (Reviewer)
It is my absolute pleasure, afterall you take the time to write them and keep me engaged and entertained.
Oh bummer. My friend works for a company who is now beginning their quarter end stuff, so since she works in financials she's also working late and tired. I hope you get some time off soon.I'm glad you are still enjoying this.I'm also happy you found a beta. Hopefully you won't have any problems getting your story up. I'll keep my fingers crossed for you.
Harry - get over it! But I am interested in what the document says about Lucius. Looking forwards to the next installment.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, Harry needs a good sound dose of reality. I'm going to sit down and begin the next chapter this evening. Hopefully I can have it up before the end of the week.Thanks for still sticking wtih this.
Hi, Didn't want you to think that I wasn't still reading. I am, and its once again a beautifully written love story with a twist.January is tax time in Britain, and I am accountant, that actually works nights for the tax office. Needless to say I am at the moment very tired.I managed to get a beta, however I have to see how well she does, because I have, Been there and got the t.shirt!"Best wishes,Eileen,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
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Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Oh for fucks sake. Can you believe that instead of responding to you, I responded as a review? LOL, my response to you is now a review for this chapter.I feel like a total dork now. Well, here is what I responded to you:Oh bummer. My friend works for a company who is now beginning their quarter end stuff, so since she works in financials she's also working late and tired. I hope you get some time off soon.I'm glad you are still enjoying this.I'm also happy you found a beta. Hopefully you won't have any problems getting your story up. I'll keep my fingers crossed for you.
haha.... slick!Severus! loved this chapter... lovely ginny/lucius interlude
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Mmmm....any interlude with Lucius is a good interlude. You know, even though I write SS/HG, I adore Lucius. I hate writing him as the bad guy. I'm happy to see some new stuff from other writers coming out with him. I think that's due to Goblet. We got to see a good bit of him, more than in Chamber.
Fantastic ! Great chapter and worth waiting for. Lucky Ginny. I'm sure Harry will get over his hurt pride, afterall it's not like he loved her. Obviously I nearly wet myself when I read the last bit (nuff said).
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, do I need to send you some Depends? I just can't help it. It's so much fun making Ron have questionable sexual orientation, and its fun having Severus suspicious about it.Yeah, Harry never loved her and he will soon realize that. Thanks for waiting for the chapter. I'll try to sit down and write a bit this weekend. Hopefully I'll have another chapter early next week.
What a great chapter, so romantic and funny. Both my favourite boys in one - heaven. Thanks for the wonderful story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thanks! I wanted this to be a romantic chapter. I'm glad you liked it.
You write so beautifully, the tenderness shines through in your descriptive writing.A lovely chapter, thank you.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I wrote that last bit when I came home the other night. I was listening to a song by Peter Murphy called "Marlene Dietrich's Favorite Poem." That song just touches me so much. It's sad and haunting. When I finished I got this chapter. I'm so happy I was able to reflect what I wanted them to feel.
Lovely chappie.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Oh Crooks is such a pain... Fun chapter
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, he is a nasty little cat.I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading.