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The Snapes Go on Holiday
ancientgirl111 Reviews | 5.51/10 (111 Ratings, 0 Likes, 59 Favorites )
*COMPLETE* Severus and Hermione celebrate their twelve years of marraige. Too bad for Severus she invites the gang to come along too.
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Just another SS/HG shipper wanting to make the world a Snapey place.
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Great couple of chapters. Must remember not to print them out, read them on the train, laugh out loud, get strange looks etc.I've just got three other things to say - Lucius! Lucius! Lucius!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Hey, I wouldn't want to find out you've been put away in a "special" place for your sanity.I'm glad you liked the chapters. I've got chapter 4 already sent to June for her perousal. Lucius makes his appearance.Thanks for all of the support you've shown me with my stories. I appreciate your wonderful comments.Have a wonderful New Year.
I'm glad that Lucius is gonna show up. Muahahaha! That makes it better. I wish Snape would have been harder on her though. (What am I saying? I've gone mad.) She should have known better than to invite all those "pesky dunderheads" if she wanted to make him happy. Glad she got rid of Crooks.So... Ginny has an infatuation, eh? **wicked grin** This should prove interesting.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, Sev could have been harder on her, but he decided he just wanted to pout, thus making her feel worse.I'm thinking Lucius will make for some interesting fun, in as far as the "boys" trying to compete with his lusciousness.I'll be writing Lucius' parts tonight.
I don't know who I feel sorrier for - Severus for biting a mouthful of sandwich with cat pee on it, or Ron for having to be Obliviated after seeing Snape naked. Come to think of it, it's probably a tie...
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, I think its the cat pee for me. Blech!Thanks for taking the time to review.
Hahaha! Yeah, I thought of that show too when I read it. Now, I have their damn music in my head (not that I mind). Hahaha! I wanted to tell you that my friend's daughter is named Sage. Cute. Only two places I've heard it. :)On another note, poor Severus. I feel so sorry for him. Ruddy "intruders" and all that. Snicker
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I almost used Saffron, but I used it in another story. Plus I like Sage. Yeah, poor Sev is forever suffering because of those damned Gryffindors.
Poor Snape. I wonder why Hermione invited the others without consulting with her husband first? Good start, and I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Poor Hermione just wants to have all of her loved ones by her side. She should know better though. Sev likes his privacy.I'll have more soon. I'm glad you liked the first chapter.
Ooh, this has got potential: humor, drama, interesting and maybe mysterious setting with our favourite and diverse characters. Can't wait to see what you do with it all. Favourite quote from this chappie "only Ron would compare having children to making food". Brilliant.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you see you enjoyed this chapter. Yep, a bit of humor is on the way, as well as a bit of competition between the least likely of people.
awwww... lol Poor guy. What a raggedy anniversary gift, Hermione! (in his mind). I'm glad to see that you started a new story. :) I'll like it of course. teehee.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Poor Sev. He always seems to get the raw end of the deal doesn't he? I don't know why I put him in these situations, but its fun.I hope you do like it. I think I'm slowly getting out of my rut.
I absolutely love this chapter. I have tears in my eyes from laughing. Especially mummy making cute bum bum all better.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm so glad you are enjoying my other stories. I hope you continue to read the others. My two favorites are The Ghost and Mrs. Krum and A Tale of Two Men.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm so glad you are enjoying my other stories. I hope you continue to read the others. My two favorites are The Ghost and Mrs. Krum and A Tale of Two Men.
Crooks is so disgusting! I'm rolling with laughter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, can you tell I'd recently watched National Lampoon's Vacation before I wrote this?
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, can you tell I'd recently watched National Lampoon's Vacation before I wrote this?
Hahaha this was an amazing story! Filled with enough humour, romance and general drama, it really draws the reader in and keeps their attention. Great work on all those alternate pairings - they were all strange, but you made them work.
I loved it, i really really did. I mean wow, that was so funny, it had a wonderful plot, and the ending was lovely, I'm actually speechless, which doesn't happen a lot, but I am, I wish I could read more, I'm hooked on it!! I'll have to read all your other stories, which I'm sure are also really good. Thanks for an amazing story *hugs*, review you soon!! Lol. *hugs*
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Hey there, thanks!I'm glad you enjoyed this so much. I had such a good time writing it. I wanted to do something to get my mood up, since RL was driving me nuts.I hope you enjoy my other stories if you do wind up reading some of them.
Hahahahahahaha! Such a funny story! Keep them coming! :)
That was really beautiful. What I love about you're writing is that you can make me laugh and then make me sigh. Best wishes,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Thanks! I like to give my stories an even balance of everything. If you make someone cry, you should try to give them a laugh at some point.I'll have more up soon.
i'm glad i finally decided to read your story. sorry it took me so long. Its wonderful. the chapters are the right length. will tell hubby to check out this story. a very funny story. thank you.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far. I think I've got maybe one or two more chapters to go on this before its done.I tried to make it have a little bit of everything, drama, romance, humor. Thanks taking some time to read it.
i thought that's where the scene was fun. i'm just rolling with laughter. will tell hubby to read this story.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Hey, there. I haven't seen you around in a while. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I hope hubby likes it too.
Wow...Harry grows up. Wonders will never cease. LOL...looking forward to that next part.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, I couldn't keep making him suffer. Heck, even I was beginning to feel sorry for him. I'll have more up soon. Thanks for reading.
I'm glad Harry is turning around. Hide and seek (smirk) I'd have a tendancy to want to be found with Lucuius doing the hunting. Great chapter. Can't wait for new years eve.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Yeah, that's not much of a challenge. I'd make sure Lucius found me then go hide with him.I'm glad you liked this chapter. I thought it was time for Harry to get his act tobether. I'll have more up soon.
Lucius and Ginny in Flourish and Blotts maybe? Harry and Luna? I'm just an old romantic at heart. Glad the kids didn't take Severus down with them. Great chapter.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I've got something, hopefully, very romantic planned for Lucius and Ginny. I wasn't sure who I should try to get Harry with, but then Whimbley said she always liked Luna and Harry together, so I figured, why not.Those kids are loyal. They won't give up their dad.Thanks for reviewing.
That was a lovely chapter. I loved the flashback to the bookshop. Beautifully written. Is Harry going to get with Luna? That would be nice. I feel sorry for the twins, and Severus got away scot free, I wonder what punishment Hermione would have given him??Best wishes,
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Well, the twins did it to themselves I figured. They will have to apologize. And yes, Severus got away free, but he really didn't have much to do with their planning other than show them that last spell. He's such a good father. I hadn't thought of what Hermione would have done to him, since I never planned on him getting caught. He's too whiley for her.Now, I can't tell you if Harry will end up with Luna, but It is interesting that she will be spending the New Year with them all, and Harry is the only one not paired off, so...
Oh, poor Harry! I'm feeling so bad for him. What he did was terrible, but diarrhea at dinner? That goes too far! *lol*
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Too far? Nah. I did start to feel a bit sorry for him myself, so I had to end his torture. Besides, I think he's learned his lesson. And of course the kids will have to apologize, so everyone won't think he's totally nuts.Thanks for reading this chapter. I hope you did enjoy it despite Harry's um...affliction. LOL.
Another humourous & fun chappie. Also Lucius getting permission to marry Ginny that was just sweet.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
I thought Lucius would do things a bit differently this time around.I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.Thank you for taking the time to review.
oh that is sweet wonder what Arthur thinks of having a Son in law the same age as he is roughly
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, sure Lucius' money cushions the blow regarding the age factor fro Arthur.
Frank-n-Harry! I just lurve that image. Can't wait for Lucius to ask Ginny. Great chapter and brilliant writing as always.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, yeah, he must look a fright. I'll begin typing that up soon. I'm trying to figure out something special.Thanks for your wonderful comments. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Severus and Lucius are not the Death Eaters in this story.Odin and Sage are, and they are beating Harry Potter.That's scary!!Still enjoying, and you make it as long as you like. That will suit me fine.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
LOL, they are doing a job on Harry aren't they? I'll have another chapter up probably this evening.Thanks for sticking with this.
It's funny. Very. I still feel sorry for Harry. Me and my ruddy soft spots. I wish he would say to Draco, "Yeah, I just shagged Cho last week." That would teach the ferret a thing or two. hahaha
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Snapes Go on Holiday)
Well, see I find people tend to feel too sorry for Harry.Don't get me wrong, he hasn't had the best life in the world, but he's not the only person in the wizarding world to have it hard.In my story I saw him more as a person who instead of moving on and taking advantage of his opportunities to do something really good for himself and others, he's just allowed himself to become stagnant. He's been really shitty in his past, going from woman to woman. In the next chapter he'll find out that his actions have led him to where he is right now, so he's pretty much done this to himself, but is blaming the rest of the world.But, don't lose hope, I do have something nice planned for him.