Very enjoyable. Nice past time amoung the chaos of Thanksgiving today.

excuse me while I take a few deep breaths here

you have two complete plonkers here.  where is the nearest convent?

Love the 'picture' of Sev checking out his own arse!

Boy, that was a fast fall for Hermione.  She felt an attraction for Severus and did not pursue it?

Great.  Love the exotic setting.  Love Severus' understanding of Lily's failure to forgive and basing his own actions on it

I would love to see the back story of Severus bopping around the world and Hermione tracking him down.  Very good start

Love it!

Wonerful chapter, I really enjoyed the finally "coming" together.  This was a fine culmunation to every ones work.  Great work team.

LOL very short but really good and powerful visual scenes.

Kewl really a fun chapyer of Severus thoughts and self examination LOL

Like this one very much, looks like the start of somthing good :)

Good chapter, nice visual descriptions.  Very realistic Snape reactions.  I'm enjoying this RR.

"Too many parole violations in the last twelvemonth.” Is the last of this a mistake?

Interesting story look forward to more.

Very entertaining too bad it was all in their heads LOL. 

I agree with the general consensus of you stepping out of the expected "lust" scenes. Really good twist and use of parallels.

And also...

Sex toys=win. Always. I read fics where Good Little Hermione had never even looked at a vibrator and I go "Buuullshit." Good to see others spreading the buzz!

Hey, kittylefish!  What a great ending to a very interesting story!  I've enjoyed the ups and downs of this fic and you put a great ending on it!  Much Love ~ Brena

oh wow, i totally didn't realize that i hadn't reviewed this chapter yet!  congratulations for tying up all the loose ends, and for managing to bring in so many elements of previous chapters!

Hey, ASID.  You did an excellent job with this chapter!  I'm glad Severus & Hermione are thinking about eachother in such a way.  I'm going to go and read the finale of this story soon. Thanks for the great addition.  Much Love ~ Brena

Bwahahahaha! Only our beloved Hermione would hop out of Severus' bed to fetch a book! Although I must admit he has found the perfect path to her heart. I trust they will work hard for their happily ever after!

It may be the textual equivalent of a triple fried-egg chili chutney sandwich, but it definitely works, and in the end, proves to be quite good!

Someone asked me how I liked this chapter, and I said it was "a thing of beauty." I thought I should pass that on directly to you.  I loved the way they both decided to reconcile; her reaction to the book was priceless.  Their lovemaking was precious.

Well, that is HOT!  It's good to know that they're thinking of each other.

Oh, I just realized I hadn't reaviewed almost any of these since chapter 3.  This was a good transitional chapter with thoughts of Lily--I like that in a SS/HG fic.

I loved the theme of your teams story. The last chapter was a perfect ending.