They didn't go to hell for they sins, but are on their way to ... well, to whatever they will make their life togehter. Heaven or hell. Or both, alternativly.A very enjoyable team effort, Venus!

i would love to give you my vote, but i cant figure out how, so just so you know, my vote goes to "Deliver Us"

*squee!!!* I adore your writing style!

I like this one,  i wish i could get some of severus potions.. i know exactly what i would do with them...lol thumbs up on this story

Adorable!

Witty and hilarious!

Very intriguing, I especially love the last paragraph regarding forgiveness and his own experience with Lily's refusal to grant him the same.

Mwa ha ha, delicious snarky banter!

Oh Ron... It's a wonder he manages to breathe without assistance.And Snape? Ever been more blinded? At least he's expressing his anger this time (as wrong directed as it might be) instead of joining the next best evil association. ;PYelling in short lived anger at the one he loves...*sigh* Old habits die hard. -But,uh, and he developed. Managed to call her Muggle-born...

Bahaha. Full of lovely little things: his not so little bottom, he casually calling himself old man, Lavender Crabbe (please, that's a story that should be told!! Is she married to Crabbe senior or did Vincent survive his Fiendfyre? Epic.).And one last funny thing (funny to me at least). I did neither know sedulous nor zeal. So I grabbed my dictionary and it gave me the translation: 'Eifriger Eifer'. lol. Is it meant to be redundant? I hope so, would be a nice little joke.

Oooooooo so smexy!!!

Wow, now that's a sin of my taste.*wants a library all for herself, too*That was a nice chapter. And what I really liked was the silent step from Snape to Severus.And a very interesting reason to forgive her. Makes me wonder: There haven't been too many people asking his forgiveness then, right?Sad, would make me grumpy as hell as well.

:) Snape is gorgeous. Huffing and snorting and sneering and snapping and being not too pleasant at all - just how we love him.

I like the concept of the story, too. It's fresh and new (at least to me).

*fans self*  That was hot and very enjoyable.I guessed that the Hogwarts: A History was for Hermione and was delighted to see that I was right and that they are both willing to swallow their pride as necessary.It was nice to watch the two of them come to terms with what had happened and watch the progression from anger, belief that something must be wrong with the other person to trying to see it rationally and fix it.The in-the-arm carry and Hermione's amusement was awesome.Thanks for sharing.  ^_^

good work

He he he, good thing she decided to go after him instead of waiting for him to come to her!  Nicely done!

loved it.  Great collaboration on a great story!

I love it! You seamlessly discussed Hermione's hurt pride - the last of the sins - and touched on Severus' as well. You brought in elements from previous chapters, such as the Lao Tsu, and Hogwarts, A History, the perfect gift for her. And of course, they finally act upon their desires - in the same room no less - echoing the fantasies of the previous chapter.  This truly was a perfect, lemony ending, delivering them from the dreaded seven deadly sins.Yep. I love it. *mentally cursing my rapidly dwindling vocabulary*

I love the end. You couldn't havr made me more happy.

That was great. I loved how you used the seven sins as themes for each chapter. And the ending was perfect. 

That was quite delightful.  I love his exclamation as he saw himself in the mirror. 

I have had a great time following your story, really well done! Severus knew how to find the perfect gift; a first edition of Hogwarths a History, it couldn't be better:-))

I just love what you did with this chapter!  It was all tightly written and brought the story to a nice close without spelling everything out for the reader.  Kudos to you!Go Team Venus!

Oh, that was nice. Loved the post sex book squeal!