Get Back!
Chapter 18 of 20
HogwartsClassof91Hermione has a Monday.
ReviewedChapter 18: Get Back!
Midway through Monday morning, Hermione was wishing she’d broken her perfect attendance record and skived off work. Having stayed up so late after the ball on Saturday, she’d slept straight through to Sunday afternoon and still felt a bit disorientated. And sore. She thumbed through her house-elf liberation plan, intending to give it one final review before sending it to Lucius. It failed to hold her attention. She’d been staring at the same page, unseeingly, for the past hour. Her mind kept drifting back to Saturday night. The vision of passion-filled, black eyes interrupted her constantly, chasing away all other thoughts. She sighed wearily, knowing it was pointless to allow such distractions.
It had been an incredible night, but that’s all it would ever be—one amazing night. Severus had made no attempt to contact her, and she hadn’t expected him to. She couldn’t fault him—after all, she had been the one to suggest they spend the night together, without obligation for anything further. She had no reason to believe he would change his mind. Of course, that hadn’t stopped her from listening for a knock on her door or straining her ears for the faint tapping of an owl at the window. But it was utter folly, and it had to stop.
No more! she told herself.
Her self steadfastly ignored her when the door to the DRCMC offices opened. She looked up hopefully, longing to see a dark frame filling the door. Instead, an enormous vase of flowers entered, followed closely by a tiny wizard who navigated the rows of half-cubicles, looking a bit like a giant rat in a maze. She returned her attention to her desk, knowing the flowers weren’t for her.
“Hermione Granger?”
She turned to find the small wizard in her cubicle. “I’m Hermione Granger.”
“Delivery for you,” he said in a bored voice. His wand sent the flowers to her desk, along with a small box wrapped in silver paper. He pushed a clipboard at her, and she dutifully signed her name where he’d indicated.
After he’d left, she plucked an ornate card from the flowers—a magnificent assortment of red and gold roses—and opened it with curiosity. The enchanted paper played Pachelbel’s Canon while she read the elegant handwriting.
Dear Miss Granger,
Thank you for your delightful company at the Ministry ball, and for allowing me to manipulate your time on the dance floor. I look forward to our combined efforts in fostering a new form of unity within our society. If you are available on Tuesday next, I will be at the Ministry on other business and could accommodate a meeting at three o’clock to discuss the merits of your plan. (Merlin help me…)
With all sincerity,
Lucius Malfoy
She smiled at the flowers and pushed away the disappointment of them having come from the wrong man.
“Who sent you flowers?” asked a voice behind her.
She swivelled her chair and gazed at Lavender Brown.
“They’re from a business associate,” she explained. There had been times in the past when she’d almost felt sorry for Lavender and her questionable taste in men. Lavender had certainly attended the Ministry ball, and she had to have seen Ron and his new … friend. With a sense of goodwill—and a sudden sympathy for unrequited feelings—she chose to ignore the way Lavender snorted at her reply.
“Please, Hermione,” she said. “What sort of business associates would you have?”
“That’s confidential.” She felt the attempt at reconciliation sliding from her grasp.
“They’re from Professor Snape, aren’t they? Come on, you can tell me,” she wheedled. “You know I’ll find out eventually, anyway.”
“No, Lavender, the flowers are not from Severus.” Regret over the admission coloured her words with more anger than she’d intended.
“Oh, it’s Severus now, is it? I didn’t realise you knew him so … intimately.”
Despite her best efforts, she couldn’t stop the heat from creeping into her cheeks at the memory of just how intimately she now knew their former Potions master.
Lavender continued to smirk, then noticed the small package beside the flowers. “What’s in the box?” she asked.
Hermione shrugged, half dreading the discovery of its contents. She had no idea what Lucius might have sent her, but she knew Lavender would find a way to mock it. She snatched the box from her desk, before Lavender tried to open it for her. It was surprisingly light—almost as if it were empty—and thin, about the size of a Muggle music disc. An emerald-green bow adorned the top, and a tiny envelope peeked out from beneath. She opened the card and read:
H—
I’ll explain later…
—S
“It’s from Severus,” she whispered, too stunned to realise she shouldn’t have spoken aloud.
“It’s jewellery!” Lavender said and clapped her hands together. “That box is the perfect size for a necklace. Open it!” Her eyes shone with anticipation.
Hermione would later blame her decision on a lack of sleep and the extremely contagious nature of Lavender’s excitement. If she’d stopped to consider the wisdom of opening a gift from Severus in front of the Ministry’s biggest gossip, she would have certainly thought twice.
But she, too, was bursting to see what he had sent, so she ripped apart the pretty silver paper and opened the lid. Inside the box, tucked beneath a delicate sheet of tissue, sat four exquisite pairs of lacy silk knickers—two in sapphire blue, two in black.
Time seemed to move in slow-motion as she lunged forward with the lid, frantic to cover the gift before Lavender could see. But it was too late. The wretched girl snaked her hand into the folds of paper and withdrew a blue pair, waving it over her head and quickly dancing out of Hermione’s reach.
“Look, everyone!” She laughed as she skipped through the office. “Look at Hermione’s special delivery!”
Hermione raced after her. She fought the urge to rip the material from Lavender’s hand. The thin fabric would be torn to shreds if she wasn’t careful—a lesson she had learnt twice, thanks to Severus. She didn’t care to risk the destruction of something so lovely simply to spare her own embarrassment. It was probably too late for that, anyway. She reached out her hand and gently pulled at the knickers.
“Let go, Lavender,” she ordered.
“Make me,” she taunted, tugging until the poor garment was stretched taut.
Opting to save the fabric, Hermione released her end. But Lavender seemed to have the same thought, albeit a fraction of a second later. The knickers went sailing through the air at a remarkable velocity—and smacked soundly onto the face of a wizard who had just entered the office. It was eerily similar to the day she’d sent the giant puffball mushroom at Severus, several weeks ago. Except this time, it was her knickers rather than fungus. And instead of landing on Severus, who might have found it humorous, the lingerie was slowly pulled from the face of Kingsley Shacklebolt, who clearly wasn’t amused.
“My office, Hermione. Now,” he barked before turning his back and marching away.
Bugger. She definitely should have stayed home today.
A/N: Hugs to Karelia for her beta work on this story! I loved reading the reviews for the last chapter and the guesses on what sort of shop Severus was looking for, and what sort of purchase he intended to make. It’s nice to see so many romantic hearts out there!!
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That was sweet and hot!
Great! Congratulations =]
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
I love the humour throughout this -- and found your Lucius to be quite apt/sympathetic. :) Thank you for sharing!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Sweet read I love your writing style!!!!! well done! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Ok, I had to stop mid- read to tell you that chappie was funny!!! LOL "to be honest I'm not even sure she's a woman" I would have loved to read an interaction between the two"women"! Funny stuff! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
You're right. Your take on Lucius was a bit disturbing. I think if I hadn't read A Murder of Crows first it wouldn't have bothered me so much. But in your universe I find it hard to make Lucius anything but... mean and dangerous. I liked how this one worked out though. It's cute. Fluffy. IEE! Warm fuzzy feelings! Are you thinking of writing anymore stories? Just wondering. I haven't written anything in years (and had destroyed any evidence of such) so I understand the combination of family, real life stuff, lack of motivation, etc. But I do hope you write again sometime. I like your style. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
My beta (karelia) is a big fan of Lucius, so his character in this story was a quasi-apology for making her read evil!Lucius in A Murder of Crows. It was extremely disturbing to write him so differently here, I assure you! If not outright cruel, he will always remain cold and self-serving in my mind (even when he ends up differently in my stories). I might return to fan-fiction some day, but I doubt I will ever again write an epic. The idea of a one-shot here or there is fun to imagine, though. Right now, I am about 1/3 of the way through an original novel I began in mid-November,as part of NaNoWriMo (after finishing Crows). It took months to get through the first three chapters, but since then, I have managed slow but steady progress. It's nothing ground-breaking: a modern-day romance with some mystery and suspense thrown in. But the alpha readers who've seen it have spoiled me with mountains of praise (Little Beloved said the flirty, witty, snappy banter was so good it literally blew her away!), and I'm greatly encouraged by the feedback so far. Once this is done, I have ideas (too many ideas, probably) for several more original stories, so I will likely be focused on original fics for quite some time. I'm a big believer in "never say never," though, so you may yet see me around the fan-fic world in the future. Have you ever thought about writing again? Check out the book "The Artist's Way" if you've considered it and need a gentle push. Good luck!
Response from marilynnedayle (Reviewer)
When you get novel published, I'd love to have the info. :)
The 'wonderful, lovely, amazing books' line made me laugh. Of course, in times of stress, Hermione would cling to the idea of her books as an anchor to sanity. Poor dear...
I enjoyed this immensely. You had me laughing out loud almost every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your stories (SS/HG hopefully).
The 'their' in the note should be 'there'.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Please see the next line:“Excellent spelling, Lavender,” she said aloud, snorting at the mistaken use of ‘their’ instead of ‘there’. Couldn’t they make her the butt of their jokes without insulting the English language in the process?It was intentional! o.O
Hello, just exploring this site for the first time. I normally hang around at either ashwinder or ff.net(mostly the latter because i like to filter stories). I like the chapter title/Beatle reference!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much for leaving a review ... And welcome to TPP! I post on Ash and FFN, too, although my user ID on those sites is Hogwarts_91. I'm glad you like the Beatles references - I had great fun choosing all the chapter titles!!
What a suprise to come back from holiday! The story finished. I must say a brilliant ending. I've loved this from beginning to end. The banter between them was great plus the Lemons were amazing.
Feel free to write a sequel, because I wonder if those knickers could take the strain.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
But of course ... they're magic knickers! :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it and hoped it would be well-received (since it was my first attempt at humor). Thanks so much for the review and stars!
Lovely, simply lovely.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so very much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Lovely. I have enjoyed every single word of this lovely story of how Lavender's jealousy of Hermione had led to her being with the only man who could complete her, complement her, and make her and himself happy.Using the names of Beatles' songs as chapter titles was a fun way of hinting at what new revelation each new chapter held in store. Severus had taught her to fly in more ways than one, and seeing them come together this way was such a joy. I was really tickled to find out that Kingsley had given him the same "don't you dare break her heart" lecture that he had given Hermione.
Thank you for such a wonderful story, and I'll be on the look out for the next chapter of "A Murder of Crows," another one of my favorites from your pen.Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Beth. I had such fun writing this story that reading praise for it is like receiving a bonus. The Beatles tunes were a joy to pick from, but I confess I could have decreased the number of chapters if I hadn't been so eager to incorporate more titles. And I'm really glad you liked the dual lectures from Kingsley - I actually added/altered that after the Exchange, and I think it adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks again, Beth - you always spoil me!
what a delightfully delicious decoction! thank you so much for sharing your unique vision, time and talent. p.s. loved severus' deconstruction of lav-lav!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee ... That was rather fun to imagine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this tale - thanks so much for reading it!
Oh I did enjoy that!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the lovely stars!
Yay! Severus saves the day!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Always! :-)
ha ha!!! Oh that Lavender Brown makes me so MAD!!! Grr.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
She's rather nasty in this fic, isn't she? I wonder if I'd have written her different if I'd seen the sixth movie BEFORE writing this? Hmmm...
Ohhh, very nice.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you. They certainly thought so!
Wow, this is a wonderful story. All the sad, painful things they are discussing. I was so sad about the way DH ended and I longed for there to be something better for Snape. Someone who cared about Snape without him being useful to them in some way. Someone who would appreciate the good in him and not be scared off by the bad.Very very good.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I couldn't agree more! I had never even heard of fan-fiction when I read DH, but I discovered it last year and was soooo pleased to have a forum in which we can imagine different (better) endings for this character. He deserved so much more! Thank you for reading, and thank you for the lovely stars!
Lovely. All my favorite fanfics finish much too soon, however. But I somehow missed that you are the very same author who is currently in the process of writing A Murder of Crows, another favorite of mine, so I shan't be too disappointed ;)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you! I had to laugh when you said it finished 'too soon,' however. The Exchange had suggested 1500-word stories, so I was really kicking myself for writing a 30k behemoth (this was the first Exchange I've participated in). What a delight to imagine someone would want more rather than less! :-) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving the lovely stars. Oh - and I'm so glad you're enjoying 'A Murder of Crows,' too. (It's pretty much the same story as this, isn't it? Bwahaha.) The next chapter of 'Crows' has been sent for beta, so I should be posting it soon.
Thanks so much for such fun!! Keep up the good work!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are quite welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
the end?? love it... it's such a fun fic!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Yes, the end. It's probably a very good thing the Exchange had a deadline, otherwise I might have dragged this out for another 20 chapters! Thanks so much for reading - I'm delighted you liked it!
Nice story. Thank you for the good read :)The scene at the inn will hold in my memory for a while i think :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you so much for the lovely review. So glad I could provide something memorable. (I know I will never look at a little country inn quite the same way again.)
This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed every minute of it. An added bonus was the speed with which you posted. Talk about instant gratification! Will you write a sequel of their ongoing courtship? Hmm?
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are too kind ... I enjoyed every minute of reading your lovely reviews! I believe I will leave the sequel to your imagination (or a future Exchange prompt!). I haven't updated my WIP (A Murder of Crows) since March (eeep!), so I'll likely be begging the muse for inspiration on that before anything else. But I can't tell you how delighted I am that you'd even suggest it - you've made my day!!
Awwwwwwww...how sweet! I love the way in which Severus came to Hermione's rescue -- again! Lavender got what exactly was coming to her, if you ask me...what a nasty little specimen she is! Not to mention the fact that while she can dish it out, she apparently can't really swallow it herself. And then Severus got all jealous over the fact that Hermione's knickers were in Kingsley's desk (perhaps it wasn't the best idea to send them to her at work, hmmmm?)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Not the best idea, no ... but very much like a man, yes? :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. I was rather at a loss with the whole "rescue" prompt, as I'm not a particular fan of Hermione as a victim, but then I realized there are several ways in which someone can be rescued, and not all of them are demeaning. (Not that I spared her from demeaning acts in this fic, LOL!) Thanks again!