Come Together
Chapter 16 of 20
HogwartsClassof91Hermione gets a new dance partner.
ReviewedChapter 16: Come Together
Excited whispers spread through the crowd when Hermione stood immobile in the centre of the dance floor, staring at Ron and his date. Music rang forth from the orchestra, but she took no notice until Lucius stepped before her, blocking her view and effectively breaking her odd trance. In one swift move, he drew her back into position and deftly matched their steps to the new dance.
Her senses returned, chased back inside her brain by stark reality. Heat coloured her cheeks. She had likely just made quite a spectacle of herself, and for what? She cursed her foolishness and knew it was simply the shock of finding herself on the outside looking in. Seeing Ron alongside Harry and Ginny was so familiar, but now there was someone else in the place where she had once felt so comfortable. Not that she wanted the spot back. She had no interest in Ron and wondered what had ever possessed her to think they could be happy together. She didn't regret the loss. Having the details of their relationship bandied about in public had been harder to take than the break-up itself. She could understand...even sympathise with...drinking too much and confiding in the wrong person. But he had never once tried to set things right, and that was something she could not forgive. He remained, to this day, utterly clueless.
She chanced a glance at Lucius, dreading what she might find. But he wasn't even looking at her. Apparently, she wasn't the only one fascinated by Ron's date.
He tore his gaze away and frowned at Hermione. "Are her lips bleeding, or do you suppose she painted them like that on purpose?"
She hadn't noticed the garish, red rouge before, but a quick peek at the lips in question made her flinch.
He chuckled at her reaction.
"I'd assume it was intentional," she said. "I'm sure most men will be far too busy examining her chest to notice her mouth." The fact that Lucius didn't seem to be one of them shouldn't have mattered.
He cast another glance at Ron's date, then lifted his shoulders in a dismissive shrug. "Such women can be had for a Knut a scoop. Only a fool would choose something so cheap," he said with a nod towards Ron. His gaze returned to Hermione and lingered on her face. "Especially when he could have had beauty and intelligence."
"I think you're laying it on a bit thick now."
"I think you are being overly modest."
"Perhaps," she relented with a smile. "A little."
"Perhaps a great deal," he countered. "I do not say these things merely to flatter you, Miss Granger. I happen to be a connoisseur of women, and my opinion on such matters is unparalleled."
She chuckled. He seemed so serious, and her spirits were lifted more than she would have thought possible.
"This is hardly a laughing matter," he said. "I assure you, I recognise quality when I see it. You have it...she does not."
"Please ... no more," she said with a grin. "I officially forgive you."
He threw his head back and laughed, a deep, hearty sound, as rich as his vault at Gringotts. Several of their neighbours on the dance floor turned to stare.
"Don't think this means you get out of house-elf liberation, though," she clarified quickly.
"I would not dream of it," he said with apparent sincerity. "But this is excellent news!" He sobered quickly when he glanced at Severus. "And none too soon, it would seem. I believe your date might poison me, were I to continue manipulating your attention."
Her gaze found Severus, and she smiled. The scowl left his face when their eyes met and held. As the dance ended, Lucius ushered her to where he stood alone, his arms folded across his chest.
"I'm forgiven!" Lucius announced, somewhat boastful.
"You're losing your touch," Severus replied at once. "It took three dances to convince her."
Lucius leant in conspiratorially, but whispered loud enough for Hermione to hear. "Actually, she was completely charmed by the end of the second dance. The third was merely for my own enjoyment." He offered a cheeky wink to Hermione, who couldn't help but laugh.
"Are you quite done now?" asked Severus, unmoved by their mirth.
"Yes." Lucius rubbed his hands together slowly and looked as if he were reluctant to leave. "Where has Narcissa gone? I must inform her we are the new champions for house-elf equality."
Severus issued a loud bark of laughter. "You didn't?" He turned smiling eyes on Hermione.
Lucius raised an eyebrow, clearly not amused. "Your date is a more formidable negotiator than I had anticipated," he said. His look managed to convey equal amounts of exasperation and appreciation. Clapping Severus on the shoulder, he added, "I wish you the best of luck, my friend. You will likely need it."
Lucius took her hand and raised it to his lips. "Thank you for the charming company, Miss Granger. I look forward to our next meeting."
"As do I," she said, surprised to realise she meant it.
Lucius released her hand and stunned her by leaning forward to place a swift kiss upon her cheek. Then he strode away, undoubtedly to break the news regarding their servants to his wife.
"You'll want to watch yourself with that one," Severus said, jerking his head to indicate Lucius as he made his way through the crowd.
"Oh, I fully anticipate a battle ahead," she said, "but I'm well prepared."
"I wasn't referring to your plans for his house-elves," he replied cryptically. "Lucius has been known to invite himself along on certain... activities.
What?
"Affairs you might prefer more private..."
She stared at him questioningly, not fully comprehending his meaning until he shifted closer to her, his gaze blatant...verging on lewd...as it raked over her features and lingered on her lips.
"Oh!" she exclaimed, cheeks burning. "I can barely handle one man ... I'd have no clue how to handle two."
"I daresay you underestimate your man-handling abilities," he whispered. He shifted even closer. The front of his robes brushed her dress and a smile played along his lips. "But should you need someone to practice them on ..."
"Ah, the humble male test subject, eh?" She angled her neck so she could watch his eyes and moved closer, already anticipating the feel of his lips.
"Hermione!" said a voice behind her, so loud she jumped. She turned to find Harry watching her, a look of concern on his familiar face. She mumbled a quick hello and tried not to be irritated when he butchered his greeting to Severus.
"Will you dance with me, Hermione?" he asked.
"Maybe later, Harry," she told him. "I still haven't had a chance to dance with my date yet."
His green eyes surveyed the crowd with curiosity. "Right. Where's your date, then?"
In perfect unison, both Hermione and Severus rolled their eyes and pointed to one another. Harry's obvious shock was enough to keep her annoyance at bay. He seemed incapable of forming words, so he resorted to a rather comical display where his mouth kept opening and closing, again and again, as if an appropriate response would spring forth at any moment.
Turning to Severus, she jerked her thumb in Harry's direction. "Would you mind terribly if I danced with fish-boy here?" She was in no mood to spare Harry's feelings, and he really did resemble nothing so much as a fish out of water.
"By all means," said Severus, his tone gracious despite the look of dislike marring his features.
She trudged back to the dance floor with Harry in tow. "I thought you didn't care for dancing," she said.
"I hate it," he confirmed as they began to move in time to the music. "But I saw how you were stuck dancing with Lucius Malfoy, and then I thought Snape was threatening you..."
She interrupted him with a derisive sigh. "Would you please stop trying to save everyone?"
"I swear I didn't realise Snape was your date. Are you angry?"
"Yes, I'm angry. I don't need to be rescued from evil Slytherins, Harry. And I certainly don't need to be rescued from my date and my date's friend."
"I'm sorry." He looked away and shook his head. "It's been a rough night. Ginny's about to murder Ron, and I'm buggered because I forgot to tell her he was bringing that awful woman to the ball."
The thought of Ginny's wrath warmed her almost as much as Harry's description of Ron's date.
"To be honest," he whispered, "I'm not even sure she's a woman."
Their dance had led them closer to Ron, Ginny, and the unnamed witch, and a surreptitious peek lent credence to Harry's words. Hermione smiled at last. It would be rather appropriate to see Ron's cluelessness bite him in the arse. Literally.
Harry seemed to accept her smile for a peace offering. They danced in companionable silence for a moment, then he said, "So ... you and Snape, huh?"
"Yes," she replied. "Do you have a problem with that?"
"No," he said instantly, sounded suitably repentant. "We owe him a lot, of course."
"Yes, we do."
"I have to admit I'm surprised, though. I guess I was still holding out hope for you and Ron."
"That's a waste of hope, Harry. It was a bad idea from the start."
He nodded. "I suppose it makes sense for you to be with an older guy. You're too smart for anyone our age. It's just... you know... weird... to see you and Snape together."
She scowled and said, "Well, it shouldn't be. We're not really a couple, after all...we just came to the ball together. After tonight, it's doubtful we'll ever see each other again." The thought soured her mood more than anything Harry had said or done.
"You really care for him!" he accused.
She looked into his eyes and contemplated the wisdom of denial. "Yes," she admitted finally.
"Then why do you seem so sad?" he asked. "Are you afraid he doesn't feel the same way about you?"
"I know he doesn't," she said. "He doesn't want a relationship. He's only interested in..." She trailed off, deep in thought.
When she left the ball, her life would return to the same old routine. No more flying lessons to anticipate, no more dances to plan. She would say goodbye to Severus Snape and somehow try to forget him.
Not so fast.
She was a grown woman, wasn't she? She was free to make whatever choices she wanted. And right now, she didn't at all feel like letting him slip through her fingers without first experiencing something... more.
Harry looked positively ill over the thought of what his former professor was actually interested in.
She laughed and abruptly ended their dance. "Thanks, Harry...I needed this conversation. Give my love to Ginny ... Tell her I'll owl her tomorrow."
She returned to Severus, unable to suppress the smile on her face.
"You look like you're up to something," he commented as she approached.
"I was thinking I'd had enough dancing."
He raised an eyebrow but said, "Ah, you've decided to spare yourself the humiliation of my two left feet."
"Actually, I was thinking I'd had enough of the ball entirely."
Disappointment raced across his face, gone so rapidly she'd have never seen it if she hadn't been paying attention.
"You wish to leave?" he asked.
"I do," she confirmed. "Will you escort me back to my flat?"
"Of course."
She slid her hand around his arm and ignored the hungry eyes watching them leave, the tongues that would soon be wagging. She supposed she could have timed their departure better...coming on the heels of Ron's arrival as it had would only increase the tittle-tattle. But for once, she really didn't care. Having made up her mind to seduce Severus tonight, she couldn't bear the thought of wasting another second at the ball. Her heart pounded as they entered the Apparition area. She could hardly wait to set her plan in motion.
A/N: My deepest thanks to Karelia for her fast beta of this story.
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That was sweet and hot!
Great! Congratulations =]
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
I love the humour throughout this -- and found your Lucius to be quite apt/sympathetic. :) Thank you for sharing!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Sweet read I love your writing style!!!!! well done! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Ok, I had to stop mid- read to tell you that chappie was funny!!! LOL "to be honest I'm not even sure she's a woman" I would have loved to read an interaction between the two"women"! Funny stuff! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
You're right. Your take on Lucius was a bit disturbing. I think if I hadn't read A Murder of Crows first it wouldn't have bothered me so much. But in your universe I find it hard to make Lucius anything but... mean and dangerous. I liked how this one worked out though. It's cute. Fluffy. IEE! Warm fuzzy feelings! Are you thinking of writing anymore stories? Just wondering. I haven't written anything in years (and had destroyed any evidence of such) so I understand the combination of family, real life stuff, lack of motivation, etc. But I do hope you write again sometime. I like your style. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
My beta (karelia) is a big fan of Lucius, so his character in this story was a quasi-apology for making her read evil!Lucius in A Murder of Crows. It was extremely disturbing to write him so differently here, I assure you! If not outright cruel, he will always remain cold and self-serving in my mind (even when he ends up differently in my stories). I might return to fan-fiction some day, but I doubt I will ever again write an epic. The idea of a one-shot here or there is fun to imagine, though. Right now, I am about 1/3 of the way through an original novel I began in mid-November,as part of NaNoWriMo (after finishing Crows). It took months to get through the first three chapters, but since then, I have managed slow but steady progress. It's nothing ground-breaking: a modern-day romance with some mystery and suspense thrown in. But the alpha readers who've seen it have spoiled me with mountains of praise (Little Beloved said the flirty, witty, snappy banter was so good it literally blew her away!), and I'm greatly encouraged by the feedback so far. Once this is done, I have ideas (too many ideas, probably) for several more original stories, so I will likely be focused on original fics for quite some time. I'm a big believer in "never say never," though, so you may yet see me around the fan-fic world in the future. Have you ever thought about writing again? Check out the book "The Artist's Way" if you've considered it and need a gentle push. Good luck!
Response from marilynnedayle (Reviewer)
When you get novel published, I'd love to have the info. :)
The 'wonderful, lovely, amazing books' line made me laugh. Of course, in times of stress, Hermione would cling to the idea of her books as an anchor to sanity. Poor dear...
I enjoyed this immensely. You had me laughing out loud almost every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your stories (SS/HG hopefully).
The 'their' in the note should be 'there'.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Please see the next line:“Excellent spelling, Lavender,” she said aloud, snorting at the mistaken use of ‘their’ instead of ‘there’. Couldn’t they make her the butt of their jokes without insulting the English language in the process?It was intentional! o.O
Hello, just exploring this site for the first time. I normally hang around at either ashwinder or ff.net(mostly the latter because i like to filter stories). I like the chapter title/Beatle reference!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much for leaving a review ... And welcome to TPP! I post on Ash and FFN, too, although my user ID on those sites is Hogwarts_91. I'm glad you like the Beatles references - I had great fun choosing all the chapter titles!!
What a suprise to come back from holiday! The story finished. I must say a brilliant ending. I've loved this from beginning to end. The banter between them was great plus the Lemons were amazing.
Feel free to write a sequel, because I wonder if those knickers could take the strain.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
But of course ... they're magic knickers! :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it and hoped it would be well-received (since it was my first attempt at humor). Thanks so much for the review and stars!
Lovely, simply lovely.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so very much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Lovely. I have enjoyed every single word of this lovely story of how Lavender's jealousy of Hermione had led to her being with the only man who could complete her, complement her, and make her and himself happy.Using the names of Beatles' songs as chapter titles was a fun way of hinting at what new revelation each new chapter held in store. Severus had taught her to fly in more ways than one, and seeing them come together this way was such a joy. I was really tickled to find out that Kingsley had given him the same "don't you dare break her heart" lecture that he had given Hermione.
Thank you for such a wonderful story, and I'll be on the look out for the next chapter of "A Murder of Crows," another one of my favorites from your pen.Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Beth. I had such fun writing this story that reading praise for it is like receiving a bonus. The Beatles tunes were a joy to pick from, but I confess I could have decreased the number of chapters if I hadn't been so eager to incorporate more titles. And I'm really glad you liked the dual lectures from Kingsley - I actually added/altered that after the Exchange, and I think it adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks again, Beth - you always spoil me!
what a delightfully delicious decoction! thank you so much for sharing your unique vision, time and talent. p.s. loved severus' deconstruction of lav-lav!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee ... That was rather fun to imagine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this tale - thanks so much for reading it!
Oh I did enjoy that!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the lovely stars!
Yay! Severus saves the day!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Always! :-)
ha ha!!! Oh that Lavender Brown makes me so MAD!!! Grr.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
She's rather nasty in this fic, isn't she? I wonder if I'd have written her different if I'd seen the sixth movie BEFORE writing this? Hmmm...
Ohhh, very nice.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you. They certainly thought so!
Wow, this is a wonderful story. All the sad, painful things they are discussing. I was so sad about the way DH ended and I longed for there to be something better for Snape. Someone who cared about Snape without him being useful to them in some way. Someone who would appreciate the good in him and not be scared off by the bad.Very very good.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I couldn't agree more! I had never even heard of fan-fiction when I read DH, but I discovered it last year and was soooo pleased to have a forum in which we can imagine different (better) endings for this character. He deserved so much more! Thank you for reading, and thank you for the lovely stars!
Lovely. All my favorite fanfics finish much too soon, however. But I somehow missed that you are the very same author who is currently in the process of writing A Murder of Crows, another favorite of mine, so I shan't be too disappointed ;)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you! I had to laugh when you said it finished 'too soon,' however. The Exchange had suggested 1500-word stories, so I was really kicking myself for writing a 30k behemoth (this was the first Exchange I've participated in). What a delight to imagine someone would want more rather than less! :-) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving the lovely stars. Oh - and I'm so glad you're enjoying 'A Murder of Crows,' too. (It's pretty much the same story as this, isn't it? Bwahaha.) The next chapter of 'Crows' has been sent for beta, so I should be posting it soon.
Thanks so much for such fun!! Keep up the good work!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are quite welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
the end?? love it... it's such a fun fic!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Yes, the end. It's probably a very good thing the Exchange had a deadline, otherwise I might have dragged this out for another 20 chapters! Thanks so much for reading - I'm delighted you liked it!
Nice story. Thank you for the good read :)The scene at the inn will hold in my memory for a while i think :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you so much for the lovely review. So glad I could provide something memorable. (I know I will never look at a little country inn quite the same way again.)
This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed every minute of it. An added bonus was the speed with which you posted. Talk about instant gratification! Will you write a sequel of their ongoing courtship? Hmm?
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are too kind ... I enjoyed every minute of reading your lovely reviews! I believe I will leave the sequel to your imagination (or a future Exchange prompt!). I haven't updated my WIP (A Murder of Crows) since March (eeep!), so I'll likely be begging the muse for inspiration on that before anything else. But I can't tell you how delighted I am that you'd even suggest it - you've made my day!!
Awwwwwwww...how sweet! I love the way in which Severus came to Hermione's rescue -- again! Lavender got what exactly was coming to her, if you ask me...what a nasty little specimen she is! Not to mention the fact that while she can dish it out, she apparently can't really swallow it herself. And then Severus got all jealous over the fact that Hermione's knickers were in Kingsley's desk (perhaps it wasn't the best idea to send them to her at work, hmmmm?)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Not the best idea, no ... but very much like a man, yes? :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. I was rather at a loss with the whole "rescue" prompt, as I'm not a particular fan of Hermione as a victim, but then I realized there are several ways in which someone can be rescued, and not all of them are demeaning. (Not that I spared her from demeaning acts in this fic, LOL!) Thanks again!