Please Please Me
Chapter 6 of 20
HogwartsClassof91Severus explores new territory.
ReviewedChapter 6: Please Please Me
Notwithstanding the mid-air rescue, Severus had never before flown with another person. His experience whilst saving Hermione could hardly be relied upon as sufficient research, other than the fact it proved he could support both their weights quite easily. He hadn’t actually flown with her into the clearing; it had been a simple matter of landing her safely upon the ground. Any study he might have accomplished during the brief journey had been moot anyway. His attention had been unfairly diverted by the sight of her rather amazing arse and a pair of silky blue knickers. Therefore, he hadn’t quite known what to expect when he’d granted her request for transport to Fieldstone.
Snape’s Taxi Service, he thought. Always ready to assist the stranded witch in need.
The clinical, detached part of his mind contemplated a cause for the powerful, physical reaction he’d had the moment she’d wrapped her arms around his neck. A different part—the part he rarely listened to—acknowledged no other woman had ever made his body react so violently. She possessed a unique ability to stir his senses. The first part got to work formulating several excellent, precise reasons for his body’s sudden desire: scientific explanations involving pheromones; biological reasons regarding the laws of nature and the need to copulate; magical explanations like the power he channelled manifesting in new ways at her proximity. He’d even considered the fact that it had been quite some time since he’d pleasured himself with a woman. The hero title had made it easy to find a willing woman to bed, but he had quickly tired of shallow sex. Well… Perhaps not all that quickly, but he’d certainly become more selective. He rejected each of these possibilities, however, since none could account for his unique history with Hermione or things like admiration and respect.
Or those damn knickers.
He caressed her back, unwilling to accept the reality of how perfectly she fit into his embrace. He could feel her chest moving fast against his, rising and falling with each short, shallow gulp of air. He wondered if her fear of flying was to blame or if, perhaps, she was just as affected by their physical contact. The prospect of her responding with even half the force of what he felt caused the erection that had been steadily straining against his pants to surge upwards. He quickly shifted her higher. Her startled gasp made his body shake with need until he felt both incredibly strong and weak at the same time. Energy and desire coursed through his veins. His body burned everywhere she touched him. He searched the horizon for the rooftops of Fieldstone, desperate to set her down and do something—anything—to relieve this sudden ache.
At last he glimpsed small cottages and a tiny village. He scanned the area for a likely landing spot and chose a narrow, deserted lane behind the inn. His feet touched the ground close to the whitewashed stone building, and he stepped forward as her long, smooth legs uncoiled from his waist. By the time they stilled, he had manoeuvred them against the building, her back to the wall.
He drew away, just far enough to look down into her face. She seemed reluctant to remove her arms from his neck. He knew at once he had not imagined her state of arousal: her face was flushed; her eyes were enormous, the pupils enlarged to the point where very little light brown pigment remained. Her lips parted, full and soft and begging to be kissed. He watched her tongue swipe her lower lip as thoughts of how she would taste tortured him.
He looked into her eyes again, and although he’d given his body no command to move, his face lowered. She was breathing impossibly fast now, quick breaths fanning his face as he drew nearer. Her hands tightened behind his neck, as if urging him forward. His hands moved of their own accord, sliding from her back to the sides of her waist, drifting up over her ribs, until he felt the gentle swell of breasts against his palms. The sound of her breath catching in her throat had him stepping forward, pinning her body against the building with his chest.
Her arms moved, and he experienced a sudden flash of fear that she would push him away. But one hand trailed along his neck while the other sought his temple and delved into his hair. She seemed to be fascinated by her own movements. Then her eyes returned to his. The warm brown depths flashed with hints of gold. Her lids grew heavy when his hands moved to cup her breasts.
“Severus…” It was spoken like a plea, her voice rough.
Hearing his name on her lips broke him. He prided himself on control, but he could almost hear it snapping in two. He was barely aware of his mouth descending upon hers, feeling nothing but her lips. They were warm and lush, firm and yet impossibly yielding to his demands. She tasted sweet and young and perhaps just a little salty—like crisps—and the odd mixture heated his blood. Her mouth opened to him. He explored and devoured, unfiltered lust stabbing him when she captured his tongue in her mouth and alternately stroked and sucked it until he lost the power to think.
Desire turned the edges of his vision red. His ears rang with the sound of rushing blood. He used his chest to hold her against the wall while he grabbed her thighs, yanking her legs back up and around him. She pulled her mouth away, her frantic gasp echoing in the quiet alley. Her head turned and exposed the creamy skin of her neck. He feasted on the delicate expanse, his lips possessive as they trailed down her throat. He was only vaguely aware of his hips grinding against her in a rhythm older than time. Skilled fingers travelled along her thighs, wending beneath her skirt. Soon he encountered the little blue knickers: his hands cupped and squeezed the fine arse he’d glimpsed earlier in perfect timing to the rocking of his hips. Her pure, female moan of pleasure wrapped around him, spurring him on while demanding fulfilment. She was his, and he had to claim her as such. He had to have her. Now. His fingers tugged at silk, his teeth scraped her neck. He was going to fuck her. Right here. Broad daylight, completely exposed, against a wall—he didn’t care. All that mattered was losing himself inside her. The sound of fabric tearing heralded his success. Nothing could stop him now.
Nothing, that is, except the back door of the inn slamming open and one very large, very irate innkeeper screaming at them. Hermione shrieked and scrambled away, clawing to climb up and over him like a cat about to be skinned.
“What the devil do you think you’re doing?” shouted the innkeeper.
Severus held up his hands in a placating fashion, but he had difficulty grasping what had just happened. His mind and body were far more focused on protesting the loss of the woman than worrying about the man lumbering closer. From the corner of his eye, he caught sight of her fleeing around the side of the building. He snorted.
So much for Gryffindor bravery.
“You think this is funny?” asked the innkeeper. “What’s the matter with you, eh? There are children inside!”
He muttered a hasty apology and headed in the direction he’d last seen Hermione. More than likely, she had already Apparated far away. He rounded the corner and searched anyway.
A/N: Karelia was especially kind and never once complained about having to beta 90 pages of Exchange fic with two days of lead-time. I don't deserve her!
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294 Reviews | 7.78/10 Average
That was sweet and hot!
Great! Congratulations =]
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
I love the humour throughout this -- and found your Lucius to be quite apt/sympathetic. :) Thank you for sharing!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Sweet read I love your writing style!!!!! well done! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Ok, I had to stop mid- read to tell you that chappie was funny!!! LOL "to be honest I'm not even sure she's a woman" I would have loved to read an interaction between the two"women"! Funny stuff! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
You're right. Your take on Lucius was a bit disturbing. I think if I hadn't read A Murder of Crows first it wouldn't have bothered me so much. But in your universe I find it hard to make Lucius anything but... mean and dangerous. I liked how this one worked out though. It's cute. Fluffy. IEE! Warm fuzzy feelings! Are you thinking of writing anymore stories? Just wondering. I haven't written anything in years (and had destroyed any evidence of such) so I understand the combination of family, real life stuff, lack of motivation, etc. But I do hope you write again sometime. I like your style. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
My beta (karelia) is a big fan of Lucius, so his character in this story was a quasi-apology for making her read evil!Lucius in A Murder of Crows. It was extremely disturbing to write him so differently here, I assure you! If not outright cruel, he will always remain cold and self-serving in my mind (even when he ends up differently in my stories). I might return to fan-fiction some day, but I doubt I will ever again write an epic. The idea of a one-shot here or there is fun to imagine, though. Right now, I am about 1/3 of the way through an original novel I began in mid-November,as part of NaNoWriMo (after finishing Crows). It took months to get through the first three chapters, but since then, I have managed slow but steady progress. It's nothing ground-breaking: a modern-day romance with some mystery and suspense thrown in. But the alpha readers who've seen it have spoiled me with mountains of praise (Little Beloved said the flirty, witty, snappy banter was so good it literally blew her away!), and I'm greatly encouraged by the feedback so far. Once this is done, I have ideas (too many ideas, probably) for several more original stories, so I will likely be focused on original fics for quite some time. I'm a big believer in "never say never," though, so you may yet see me around the fan-fic world in the future. Have you ever thought about writing again? Check out the book "The Artist's Way" if you've considered it and need a gentle push. Good luck!
Response from marilynnedayle (Reviewer)
When you get novel published, I'd love to have the info. :)
The 'wonderful, lovely, amazing books' line made me laugh. Of course, in times of stress, Hermione would cling to the idea of her books as an anchor to sanity. Poor dear...
I enjoyed this immensely. You had me laughing out loud almost every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your stories (SS/HG hopefully).
The 'their' in the note should be 'there'.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Please see the next line:“Excellent spelling, Lavender,” she said aloud, snorting at the mistaken use of ‘their’ instead of ‘there’. Couldn’t they make her the butt of their jokes without insulting the English language in the process?It was intentional! o.O
Hello, just exploring this site for the first time. I normally hang around at either ashwinder or ff.net(mostly the latter because i like to filter stories). I like the chapter title/Beatle reference!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much for leaving a review ... And welcome to TPP! I post on Ash and FFN, too, although my user ID on those sites is Hogwarts_91. I'm glad you like the Beatles references - I had great fun choosing all the chapter titles!!
What a suprise to come back from holiday! The story finished. I must say a brilliant ending. I've loved this from beginning to end. The banter between them was great plus the Lemons were amazing.
Feel free to write a sequel, because I wonder if those knickers could take the strain.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
But of course ... they're magic knickers! :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it and hoped it would be well-received (since it was my first attempt at humor). Thanks so much for the review and stars!
Lovely, simply lovely.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so very much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Lovely. I have enjoyed every single word of this lovely story of how Lavender's jealousy of Hermione had led to her being with the only man who could complete her, complement her, and make her and himself happy.Using the names of Beatles' songs as chapter titles was a fun way of hinting at what new revelation each new chapter held in store. Severus had taught her to fly in more ways than one, and seeing them come together this way was such a joy. I was really tickled to find out that Kingsley had given him the same "don't you dare break her heart" lecture that he had given Hermione.
Thank you for such a wonderful story, and I'll be on the look out for the next chapter of "A Murder of Crows," another one of my favorites from your pen.Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Beth. I had such fun writing this story that reading praise for it is like receiving a bonus. The Beatles tunes were a joy to pick from, but I confess I could have decreased the number of chapters if I hadn't been so eager to incorporate more titles. And I'm really glad you liked the dual lectures from Kingsley - I actually added/altered that after the Exchange, and I think it adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks again, Beth - you always spoil me!
what a delightfully delicious decoction! thank you so much for sharing your unique vision, time and talent. p.s. loved severus' deconstruction of lav-lav!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee ... That was rather fun to imagine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this tale - thanks so much for reading it!
Oh I did enjoy that!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the lovely stars!
Yay! Severus saves the day!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Always! :-)
ha ha!!! Oh that Lavender Brown makes me so MAD!!! Grr.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
She's rather nasty in this fic, isn't she? I wonder if I'd have written her different if I'd seen the sixth movie BEFORE writing this? Hmmm...
Ohhh, very nice.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you. They certainly thought so!
Wow, this is a wonderful story. All the sad, painful things they are discussing. I was so sad about the way DH ended and I longed for there to be something better for Snape. Someone who cared about Snape without him being useful to them in some way. Someone who would appreciate the good in him and not be scared off by the bad.Very very good.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I couldn't agree more! I had never even heard of fan-fiction when I read DH, but I discovered it last year and was soooo pleased to have a forum in which we can imagine different (better) endings for this character. He deserved so much more! Thank you for reading, and thank you for the lovely stars!
Lovely. All my favorite fanfics finish much too soon, however. But I somehow missed that you are the very same author who is currently in the process of writing A Murder of Crows, another favorite of mine, so I shan't be too disappointed ;)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you! I had to laugh when you said it finished 'too soon,' however. The Exchange had suggested 1500-word stories, so I was really kicking myself for writing a 30k behemoth (this was the first Exchange I've participated in). What a delight to imagine someone would want more rather than less! :-) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving the lovely stars. Oh - and I'm so glad you're enjoying 'A Murder of Crows,' too. (It's pretty much the same story as this, isn't it? Bwahaha.) The next chapter of 'Crows' has been sent for beta, so I should be posting it soon.
Thanks so much for such fun!! Keep up the good work!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are quite welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
the end?? love it... it's such a fun fic!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Yes, the end. It's probably a very good thing the Exchange had a deadline, otherwise I might have dragged this out for another 20 chapters! Thanks so much for reading - I'm delighted you liked it!
Nice story. Thank you for the good read :)The scene at the inn will hold in my memory for a while i think :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you so much for the lovely review. So glad I could provide something memorable. (I know I will never look at a little country inn quite the same way again.)
This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed every minute of it. An added bonus was the speed with which you posted. Talk about instant gratification! Will you write a sequel of their ongoing courtship? Hmm?
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are too kind ... I enjoyed every minute of reading your lovely reviews! I believe I will leave the sequel to your imagination (or a future Exchange prompt!). I haven't updated my WIP (A Murder of Crows) since March (eeep!), so I'll likely be begging the muse for inspiration on that before anything else. But I can't tell you how delighted I am that you'd even suggest it - you've made my day!!
Awwwwwwww...how sweet! I love the way in which Severus came to Hermione's rescue -- again! Lavender got what exactly was coming to her, if you ask me...what a nasty little specimen she is! Not to mention the fact that while she can dish it out, she apparently can't really swallow it herself. And then Severus got all jealous over the fact that Hermione's knickers were in Kingsley's desk (perhaps it wasn't the best idea to send them to her at work, hmmmm?)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Not the best idea, no ... but very much like a man, yes? :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. I was rather at a loss with the whole "rescue" prompt, as I'm not a particular fan of Hermione as a victim, but then I realized there are several ways in which someone can be rescued, and not all of them are demeaning. (Not that I spared her from demeaning acts in this fic, LOL!) Thanks again!