I Saw Her Standing There
Chapter 2 of 20
HogwartsClassof91A challenge is issued.
ReviewedChapter 2: I Saw Her Standing There
Unwavering black eyes glared down at Hermione. She swallowed hard and watched Snape's familiar features darken with displeasure. "I didn't realise you were at the meeting," she said.
"I wasn't," he replied. She waited for an explanation as to why he was at this particular spot, and after a moment of lip-pursing silence, he added, "I had business with the Minister."
"Oh," she said. She'd heard rumours that he worked on 'special projects' for Kingsley, but she'd never seen him at the Ministry. It seemed very clandestine to be meeting in the middle of an empty field like this, but she refrained from mentioning it.
With an air of impatience, he said, "It's a simple Scourgify charm, Miss Granger. Or have you already forgotten everything you learnt in school?"
"Sorry," she replied in a rush. A blush stole across her checks when she realised how long she'd been staring at him, her wand still pointed ridiculously at his face.
"Don't bother." He waved aside her attempts to finish the charm and completed the task himself.
She looked down, embarrassment and frustration battling for supremacy inside her mind.
Just like old times.
She hadn't seen Snape since the first anniversary of the battle at Hogwarts, when he'd received an Order of Merlin, First Class. And although she'd attended the award ceremony as a fellow recipient, she hadn't spoken to him. No one had spoken to him...no one had possessed the forbearance to so much as approach him. Not since he'd taught Defence Against the Dark Arts in her sixth year had she exchanged any words with him. She supposed it was little wonder his presence made her feel as if she were sixteen years old again.
She gestured towards the broom and said, "If you're here for the Portkey, it's been deactivated."
"It matters not," he said.
She appraised the shabby broom with a raised eyebrow, calculating its ability to support two adult riders.
In a somewhat boastful tone, he said, "I hardly require a broom to fly, Miss Granger."
The memory of a Snape-shaped hole in a window at Hogwarts entered her mind as she recalled his departure before the battle. "Yes, I had forgotten: you can fly without a broom."
"That's right," he said, openly sneering at her.
Even on a good day, she really detested being sneered at. And today had not been a good day.
"Hooray for you," she said. "Although, I hear it's easier if you open the window first." She tried to mimic his sneer.
He stared at her, his jaw hanging open.
She expected him to hurl one of his usual insults and was therefore quite surprised when his mouth snapped shut and his lips twitched.
Perhaps he's mellowed since the war. Now that the initial shock of seeing him had passed, she took a moment to consider him closer. Certainly he looked a bit different: his hair was shorter and swept back from his forehead. His features, which had always been striking in their intensity, had changed somehow...his face no longer bore the ugliness of being so frequently twisted by malice and anger. Maybe the years have softened his hatred... Maybe his personality has improved with the passage of time.
"Are you quite done gawking, Miss Granger?" he asked.
Then again, maybe not.
She flushed again and fought the urge to look away. Ignoring his question, she tried not to sound defensive and asked, "Why are you here, if not for the Portkey?"
With more patience than she'd imagined him capable of, he explained, "I saw you walking in circles and muttering to yourself. From a distance, you appeared to have been Confunded. I had little choice but to investigate."
A smile tugged at her mouth when she pictured how ridiculous she must have looked. Tilting her head, she folded her arms and regarded him anew. She had never pictured him as the sort of man who'd offer assistance to random strangers.
"I was looking for the Portkey," she explained.
His gaze flicked to the broom lying in plain sight on the ground.
"Have you considered asking a Healer to examine your vision?" he asked, and although there was sarcasm in his tone, it was mild...almost teasing.
She couldn't suppress the grin that dimpled her cheeks. Rather than hide her naïveté, she replied with the truth.
"That broom just appeared...it had been Disillusioned. A practical joke by my co-workers..."
"I see," he said. His brows drew together as he scrutinized her. He seemed to be on the verge of speaking, and she was a bit disappointed when he remained silent. He walked to the broom and scooped it from the ground.
"A rather ineffective joke, seeing how they provided a mode of transportation," he told her, holding the broom out.
"Yes." She bit her lip. There weren't many things she hated quite as much as flying.
She reached for the offending mass of wood and straw, surprised when their fingertips brushed and sent a jolt of energy up her arm. She stood transfixed for a moment, staring at his hand, lost in the sight of long, elegant fingers. Jerking her gaze away, she looked up, only to be hit by an even more shocking sensation. Too late, she realised she should have kept her focus on his hands. Dark eyes pinned her with a raw intensity that turned breathing into a complex, daunting task. She opened her mouth, desperate for air.
His gaze dipped to her parted lips. She held her breath completely. Then he bowed his head and spun away so quickly, she could do nothing but blink over the snapping of black robes before her.
What the hell was that?
She drew a steadying breath and wondered if perhaps she had been Confunded after all. Perhaps Lavender had put something on the broom...some obscure aphrodisiac that caused men and women to suddenly become aware of each other on a more primitive level. Experimentally, she gripped the broom in both hands and raised it to her nose, carefully sniffing the handle for the telltale scent of potion ingredients.
Her nose was still firmly affixed to wood when Snape turned back around. He raised both eyebrows in an expression that clearly seemed to question whether she had, in fact, gone completely mad. Lowering the broom slowly, she cleared her throat and ignored the burning in her cheeks. She could only imagine how ridiculous she had looked, standing there snorting the broom handle.
Although she'd never wanted to get away so badly, she wasn't about to add to her embarrassment by trying to fly the broom in front of him. It had been many years since she'd ridden on a broom: she'd refused the transport ever since she and Ron had flown to the Chamber of Secrets for basilisk fangs. Everyone said it was easy to pick it up again...the phrase "just like flying a broom" was coined for a reason, after all...but it was not a theory she cared to test in present company.
"Well... it was nice seeing you again, Professor Snape," she said, hoping he'd take the hint and leave.
He watched her in silence and made no attempt to move.
She chewed her lip. "Have a pleasant journey ..." she said hopefully.
After several moments, he strolled closer, stopping only when his form filled her entire line of sight. The many buttons on his coat mesmerised her, until finally, she lifted her eyes to his. "Off you go, then," she whispered.
Amusement crossed his face, making him look more handsome than she'd ever remembered, and serving to confuse her further when that completely inappropriate realisation struck her.
"Are you attempting to dismiss me, Miss Granger?" he asked, arching one slim eyebrow while angling his chin down.
"Not at all," she lied. "I'm certain you have better things to do than be waylaid by a former student."
"Quite so," he agreed. "But I would be remiss to leave aforementioned former student alone. I'll ensure you're safely away before I leave."
"Oh, that's really not necessary," she assured him. "I'll be fine. You go ahead."
Leaning closer, he smiled and whispered, "Miss Granger, if I didn't know better, I'd say you were afraid of flying."
The mocking smile was almost comforting in its familiarity. Certainly it served as a far more accurate match to her other memories of him. Her reluctance to reply caused his smile to turn into a sneer, bringing about her almost automatic response to being challenged.
"I'm not afraid," she said, despising the petulance in her voice.
His face was smug, expectant. "Prove it."
"Right," she said and gritted her teeth. She stomped to the centre of the clearing and flung one leg over the broom, wishing she'd elected to wear trousers. At least her skirt was long and flowing. Combined with her robes, she shouldn't expose herself too badly. With a grimace, she kicked the ground and rose unsteadily into the air, hoping her pride wasn't about to kill her.
Many thanks to darling Karelia for fantastic beta skills!
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That was sweet and hot!
Great! Congratulations =]
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
I love the humour throughout this -- and found your Lucius to be quite apt/sympathetic. :) Thank you for sharing!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Sweet read I love your writing style!!!!! well done! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Ok, I had to stop mid- read to tell you that chappie was funny!!! LOL "to be honest I'm not even sure she's a woman" I would have loved to read an interaction between the two"women"! Funny stuff! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
You're right. Your take on Lucius was a bit disturbing. I think if I hadn't read A Murder of Crows first it wouldn't have bothered me so much. But in your universe I find it hard to make Lucius anything but... mean and dangerous. I liked how this one worked out though. It's cute. Fluffy. IEE! Warm fuzzy feelings! Are you thinking of writing anymore stories? Just wondering. I haven't written anything in years (and had destroyed any evidence of such) so I understand the combination of family, real life stuff, lack of motivation, etc. But I do hope you write again sometime. I like your style. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
My beta (karelia) is a big fan of Lucius, so his character in this story was a quasi-apology for making her read evil!Lucius in A Murder of Crows. It was extremely disturbing to write him so differently here, I assure you! If not outright cruel, he will always remain cold and self-serving in my mind (even when he ends up differently in my stories). I might return to fan-fiction some day, but I doubt I will ever again write an epic. The idea of a one-shot here or there is fun to imagine, though. Right now, I am about 1/3 of the way through an original novel I began in mid-November,as part of NaNoWriMo (after finishing Crows). It took months to get through the first three chapters, but since then, I have managed slow but steady progress. It's nothing ground-breaking: a modern-day romance with some mystery and suspense thrown in. But the alpha readers who've seen it have spoiled me with mountains of praise (Little Beloved said the flirty, witty, snappy banter was so good it literally blew her away!), and I'm greatly encouraged by the feedback so far. Once this is done, I have ideas (too many ideas, probably) for several more original stories, so I will likely be focused on original fics for quite some time. I'm a big believer in "never say never," though, so you may yet see me around the fan-fic world in the future. Have you ever thought about writing again? Check out the book "The Artist's Way" if you've considered it and need a gentle push. Good luck!
Response from marilynnedayle (Reviewer)
When you get novel published, I'd love to have the info. :)
The 'wonderful, lovely, amazing books' line made me laugh. Of course, in times of stress, Hermione would cling to the idea of her books as an anchor to sanity. Poor dear...
I enjoyed this immensely. You had me laughing out loud almost every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your stories (SS/HG hopefully).
The 'their' in the note should be 'there'.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Please see the next line:“Excellent spelling, Lavender,” she said aloud, snorting at the mistaken use of ‘their’ instead of ‘there’. Couldn’t they make her the butt of their jokes without insulting the English language in the process?It was intentional! o.O
Hello, just exploring this site for the first time. I normally hang around at either ashwinder or ff.net(mostly the latter because i like to filter stories). I like the chapter title/Beatle reference!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much for leaving a review ... And welcome to TPP! I post on Ash and FFN, too, although my user ID on those sites is Hogwarts_91. I'm glad you like the Beatles references - I had great fun choosing all the chapter titles!!
What a suprise to come back from holiday! The story finished. I must say a brilliant ending. I've loved this from beginning to end. The banter between them was great plus the Lemons were amazing.
Feel free to write a sequel, because I wonder if those knickers could take the strain.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
But of course ... they're magic knickers! :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it and hoped it would be well-received (since it was my first attempt at humor). Thanks so much for the review and stars!
Lovely, simply lovely.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so very much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Lovely. I have enjoyed every single word of this lovely story of how Lavender's jealousy of Hermione had led to her being with the only man who could complete her, complement her, and make her and himself happy.Using the names of Beatles' songs as chapter titles was a fun way of hinting at what new revelation each new chapter held in store. Severus had taught her to fly in more ways than one, and seeing them come together this way was such a joy. I was really tickled to find out that Kingsley had given him the same "don't you dare break her heart" lecture that he had given Hermione.
Thank you for such a wonderful story, and I'll be on the look out for the next chapter of "A Murder of Crows," another one of my favorites from your pen.Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Beth. I had such fun writing this story that reading praise for it is like receiving a bonus. The Beatles tunes were a joy to pick from, but I confess I could have decreased the number of chapters if I hadn't been so eager to incorporate more titles. And I'm really glad you liked the dual lectures from Kingsley - I actually added/altered that after the Exchange, and I think it adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks again, Beth - you always spoil me!
what a delightfully delicious decoction! thank you so much for sharing your unique vision, time and talent. p.s. loved severus' deconstruction of lav-lav!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee ... That was rather fun to imagine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this tale - thanks so much for reading it!
Oh I did enjoy that!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the lovely stars!
Yay! Severus saves the day!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Always! :-)
ha ha!!! Oh that Lavender Brown makes me so MAD!!! Grr.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
She's rather nasty in this fic, isn't she? I wonder if I'd have written her different if I'd seen the sixth movie BEFORE writing this? Hmmm...
Ohhh, very nice.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you. They certainly thought so!
Wow, this is a wonderful story. All the sad, painful things they are discussing. I was so sad about the way DH ended and I longed for there to be something better for Snape. Someone who cared about Snape without him being useful to them in some way. Someone who would appreciate the good in him and not be scared off by the bad.Very very good.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I couldn't agree more! I had never even heard of fan-fiction when I read DH, but I discovered it last year and was soooo pleased to have a forum in which we can imagine different (better) endings for this character. He deserved so much more! Thank you for reading, and thank you for the lovely stars!
Lovely. All my favorite fanfics finish much too soon, however. But I somehow missed that you are the very same author who is currently in the process of writing A Murder of Crows, another favorite of mine, so I shan't be too disappointed ;)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you! I had to laugh when you said it finished 'too soon,' however. The Exchange had suggested 1500-word stories, so I was really kicking myself for writing a 30k behemoth (this was the first Exchange I've participated in). What a delight to imagine someone would want more rather than less! :-) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving the lovely stars. Oh - and I'm so glad you're enjoying 'A Murder of Crows,' too. (It's pretty much the same story as this, isn't it? Bwahaha.) The next chapter of 'Crows' has been sent for beta, so I should be posting it soon.
Thanks so much for such fun!! Keep up the good work!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are quite welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
the end?? love it... it's such a fun fic!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Yes, the end. It's probably a very good thing the Exchange had a deadline, otherwise I might have dragged this out for another 20 chapters! Thanks so much for reading - I'm delighted you liked it!
Nice story. Thank you for the good read :)The scene at the inn will hold in my memory for a while i think :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you so much for the lovely review. So glad I could provide something memorable. (I know I will never look at a little country inn quite the same way again.)
This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed every minute of it. An added bonus was the speed with which you posted. Talk about instant gratification! Will you write a sequel of their ongoing courtship? Hmm?
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are too kind ... I enjoyed every minute of reading your lovely reviews! I believe I will leave the sequel to your imagination (or a future Exchange prompt!). I haven't updated my WIP (A Murder of Crows) since March (eeep!), so I'll likely be begging the muse for inspiration on that before anything else. But I can't tell you how delighted I am that you'd even suggest it - you've made my day!!
Awwwwwwww...how sweet! I love the way in which Severus came to Hermione's rescue -- again! Lavender got what exactly was coming to her, if you ask me...what a nasty little specimen she is! Not to mention the fact that while she can dish it out, she apparently can't really swallow it herself. And then Severus got all jealous over the fact that Hermione's knickers were in Kingsley's desk (perhaps it wasn't the best idea to send them to her at work, hmmmm?)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Not the best idea, no ... but very much like a man, yes? :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. I was rather at a loss with the whole "rescue" prompt, as I'm not a particular fan of Hermione as a victim, but then I realized there are several ways in which someone can be rescued, and not all of them are demeaning. (Not that I spared her from demeaning acts in this fic, LOL!) Thanks again!