Here Comes The Sun
Chapter 11 of 20
HogwartsClassof91Every girl needs a little black dress.
ReviewedChapter 11: Here Comes the Sun
Brisk autumn air barrelled through the city streets, whistling a tuneless melody as it roiled the fallen leaves. Severus pulled his cloak tighter. He donned his reading glasses and peered at the note in his hand, remembering the rather impatient owl that had delivered it precisely one week earlier.
Dear Severus,
The details of our joint attendance at the Ministry ball appear to have been overlooked during our previous meetings. Since you have failed to initiate any contact with me over the past few weeks, I have taken the liberty of sending the address of my flat to you. As you’ve demanded invited me to attend this event with you, gentlemanly behaviour would require your presence at my domicile prior to the gathering in order for you to properly escort me. As such, I will expect your arrival promptly at 1900.
Regards,
Hermione
He smirked and memorised the address before tucking the sheet back inside his pocket. He scanned the buildings for the appropriate number, mentally preparing himself to find the woman inside every bit as perturbed as the tone of the note.
In truth, he had considered contacting her several times since their flying lesson. His thoughts had drifted to her with ever-increasing frequency, but always at the most inappropriate of moments. She was becoming a distraction, and that simply could not be allowed.
Countless times since their last meeting, the image of her face would suddenly appear to him, and the sound of her laughter seemed to float on the breeze. There were days when everything seemed to remind him of her scent. He was continually turning his head in the middle of a crowd, certain he had seen her. Heard her. Smelled her. Of course, he had always been mistaken. The resulting sense of disappointment had ceased to surprise him. It still rankled, though.
To prove he was immune to such weakness, he had pushed away all desire to seek an audience with her. The letters he had penned had been torn to pieces, their residence in the kindling basket a far more appropriate employment. And although he had begun to meet with Kingsley at the Ministry, he had resisted the temptation of a diversion to Hermione’s office. If Kingsley had found his sudden, constant presence at the Ministry a bid odd, he had wisely refrained from commenting.
Locating the address from the note, Severus rang the bell and was immediately buzzed through to the foyer. He climbed several staircases and rapped on the door, only to find it slightly ajar.
“Come in, Severus,” she called from inside. “I’m almost ready.”
“I was ordered to be here promptly at seven,” he called back and closed the door behind him.
“Yes, yes, you’re very good,” she said from another room. “I’ll only be a minute. Make yourself at home.”
He removed his cloak and surveyed the small space with a critical gaze. It wasn’t much more than one large room, and ‘large’ was probably too generous. There were books and bookcases everywhere, severely outnumbering any other furnishings. A small sofa and chair had been arranged near the door, a sitting room in miniature. In the opposite corner was a small kitchen, and across from that, a section had been cordoned off with decorative, Oriental screens to function as a bedroom. She had filled the walls with art prints and seemed to favour one artist per room: Van Gogh in the kitchen, Monet over the bed, Gauguin above her desk. Turning back to the sitting area, he noted a bizarre mixture of Klimt and Vermeer.
Heels clicked on the wooden floor behind him, announcing her approach. “Your decorating scheme is rather eclectic in this room,” he said before he turned to face her. He was immensely glad he’d finished speaking, as her appearance forced the blood in his body to rush lower while his brain ceased all functions.
Her unruly curls were tamed into sleek waves that framed her face and caressed her shoulders. She had found a dress that exceeded his imagination, even with the astounding description she had previously promised. The clingy black material perfectly showcased her figure, hugging her waist before draping over her hips. A deep V-neckline drew his eyes and revealed a tantalising glimpse of creamy skin. Tiny, gem-encrusted straps trailed over her collarbone, rising up and over to tie behind her neck.
Her smile lit her face as she gazed at the pictures he had just referenced. “I was contemplating a change last night,” she explained while she grabbed her wand from an end table. She waved it at the wall. Inside the frames, the canvases shimmered and changed, until several more Klimt prints had joined the first. His gaze narrowed on the largest, a passionate depiction of a dark-haired man kissing a brown-haired woman. The obvious symbolism only tightened the pressure in his groin.
“Would you care for a drink before we leave?” she asked.
He nodded and managed to croak out, “Please.”
She crossed the room and stopped at a crystal decanter near the bookcase. A generous pour of whisky went into a glass, and after a brief pause, she snagged a second glass and filled it, as well.
He stared at the back of the dress, or rather, the lack thereof: it was even more mind-boggling than the front. The tiny straps were tied into a careless bow behind her neck. The ends of the long strings sported glittery beads that dangled and swung along her bare back with every movement. Other than the minuscule threads, there appeared to be nothing holding the dress up. He frowned in concentration, trying to fathom how the sides and bottom of the dress clung to her curves rather than gaping ridiculously.
She turned, and his breath caught again. He barely registered her nervous smile as she walked to him. It took all his concentration to not ogle the flash of leg beneath the long slit running up one side of her dress.
He took the drink she pressed into his hand and clutched it like a lifeline.
“Do you like my dress?” she asked. Her eyes watched him over the rim of crystal glass, sparkling with untold secrets, the ancient mysteries of woman worshipped by man.
“Very much,” he replied, alarmed by how rough his voice sounded. “How… how does it stay up?”
“Magic,” she answered with a grin. She clinked her glass against his and said, “Cheers.”
“Indeed,” he replied, taking a welcome gulp of the fiery whisky.
She sipped her drink, then appraised him from head to toe. “You look quite dashing in formal wear,” she said.
“Naturally,” he replied. He smirked when she rolled her eyes. “And you look beautiful tonight.”
“Naturally,” she said with a laugh. She walked to the sofa and sat, legs crossed before her. He couldn’t help it now: his gaze was glued to the slit in her dress and the stocking-clad wonders revealed within. She beckoned him to join her, patting the sofa cushion in invitation when he hesitated.
He felt a compulsion to glance behind him, in case her gesture was meant for another. Everything seemed surreal, like he had stepped into someone else’s life and was watching a scene play out before him. Or perhaps he was just dreaming. One thing was certain: if this was nothing more than an elaborate dream, he would cause serious harm to whomever tried to awaken him.
Karelia provided beta services for this story. She rocks.
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That was sweet and hot!
Great! Congratulations =]
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
I love the humour throughout this -- and found your Lucius to be quite apt/sympathetic. :) Thank you for sharing!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Sweet read I love your writing style!!!!! well done! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Ok, I had to stop mid- read to tell you that chappie was funny!!! LOL "to be honest I'm not even sure she's a woman" I would have loved to read an interaction between the two"women"! Funny stuff! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
You're right. Your take on Lucius was a bit disturbing. I think if I hadn't read A Murder of Crows first it wouldn't have bothered me so much. But in your universe I find it hard to make Lucius anything but... mean and dangerous. I liked how this one worked out though. It's cute. Fluffy. IEE! Warm fuzzy feelings! Are you thinking of writing anymore stories? Just wondering. I haven't written anything in years (and had destroyed any evidence of such) so I understand the combination of family, real life stuff, lack of motivation, etc. But I do hope you write again sometime. I like your style. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
My beta (karelia) is a big fan of Lucius, so his character in this story was a quasi-apology for making her read evil!Lucius in A Murder of Crows. It was extremely disturbing to write him so differently here, I assure you! If not outright cruel, he will always remain cold and self-serving in my mind (even when he ends up differently in my stories). I might return to fan-fiction some day, but I doubt I will ever again write an epic. The idea of a one-shot here or there is fun to imagine, though. Right now, I am about 1/3 of the way through an original novel I began in mid-November,as part of NaNoWriMo (after finishing Crows). It took months to get through the first three chapters, but since then, I have managed slow but steady progress. It's nothing ground-breaking: a modern-day romance with some mystery and suspense thrown in. But the alpha readers who've seen it have spoiled me with mountains of praise (Little Beloved said the flirty, witty, snappy banter was so good it literally blew her away!), and I'm greatly encouraged by the feedback so far. Once this is done, I have ideas (too many ideas, probably) for several more original stories, so I will likely be focused on original fics for quite some time. I'm a big believer in "never say never," though, so you may yet see me around the fan-fic world in the future. Have you ever thought about writing again? Check out the book "The Artist's Way" if you've considered it and need a gentle push. Good luck!
Response from marilynnedayle (Reviewer)
When you get novel published, I'd love to have the info. :)
The 'wonderful, lovely, amazing books' line made me laugh. Of course, in times of stress, Hermione would cling to the idea of her books as an anchor to sanity. Poor dear...
I enjoyed this immensely. You had me laughing out loud almost every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your stories (SS/HG hopefully).
The 'their' in the note should be 'there'.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Please see the next line:“Excellent spelling, Lavender,” she said aloud, snorting at the mistaken use of ‘their’ instead of ‘there’. Couldn’t they make her the butt of their jokes without insulting the English language in the process?It was intentional! o.O
Hello, just exploring this site for the first time. I normally hang around at either ashwinder or ff.net(mostly the latter because i like to filter stories). I like the chapter title/Beatle reference!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much for leaving a review ... And welcome to TPP! I post on Ash and FFN, too, although my user ID on those sites is Hogwarts_91. I'm glad you like the Beatles references - I had great fun choosing all the chapter titles!!
What a suprise to come back from holiday! The story finished. I must say a brilliant ending. I've loved this from beginning to end. The banter between them was great plus the Lemons were amazing.
Feel free to write a sequel, because I wonder if those knickers could take the strain.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
But of course ... they're magic knickers! :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it and hoped it would be well-received (since it was my first attempt at humor). Thanks so much for the review and stars!
Lovely, simply lovely.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so very much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Lovely. I have enjoyed every single word of this lovely story of how Lavender's jealousy of Hermione had led to her being with the only man who could complete her, complement her, and make her and himself happy.Using the names of Beatles' songs as chapter titles was a fun way of hinting at what new revelation each new chapter held in store. Severus had taught her to fly in more ways than one, and seeing them come together this way was such a joy. I was really tickled to find out that Kingsley had given him the same "don't you dare break her heart" lecture that he had given Hermione.
Thank you for such a wonderful story, and I'll be on the look out for the next chapter of "A Murder of Crows," another one of my favorites from your pen.Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Beth. I had such fun writing this story that reading praise for it is like receiving a bonus. The Beatles tunes were a joy to pick from, but I confess I could have decreased the number of chapters if I hadn't been so eager to incorporate more titles. And I'm really glad you liked the dual lectures from Kingsley - I actually added/altered that after the Exchange, and I think it adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks again, Beth - you always spoil me!
what a delightfully delicious decoction! thank you so much for sharing your unique vision, time and talent. p.s. loved severus' deconstruction of lav-lav!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee ... That was rather fun to imagine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this tale - thanks so much for reading it!
Oh I did enjoy that!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the lovely stars!
Yay! Severus saves the day!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Always! :-)
ha ha!!! Oh that Lavender Brown makes me so MAD!!! Grr.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
She's rather nasty in this fic, isn't she? I wonder if I'd have written her different if I'd seen the sixth movie BEFORE writing this? Hmmm...
Ohhh, very nice.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you. They certainly thought so!
Wow, this is a wonderful story. All the sad, painful things they are discussing. I was so sad about the way DH ended and I longed for there to be something better for Snape. Someone who cared about Snape without him being useful to them in some way. Someone who would appreciate the good in him and not be scared off by the bad.Very very good.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I couldn't agree more! I had never even heard of fan-fiction when I read DH, but I discovered it last year and was soooo pleased to have a forum in which we can imagine different (better) endings for this character. He deserved so much more! Thank you for reading, and thank you for the lovely stars!
Lovely. All my favorite fanfics finish much too soon, however. But I somehow missed that you are the very same author who is currently in the process of writing A Murder of Crows, another favorite of mine, so I shan't be too disappointed ;)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you! I had to laugh when you said it finished 'too soon,' however. The Exchange had suggested 1500-word stories, so I was really kicking myself for writing a 30k behemoth (this was the first Exchange I've participated in). What a delight to imagine someone would want more rather than less! :-) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving the lovely stars. Oh - and I'm so glad you're enjoying 'A Murder of Crows,' too. (It's pretty much the same story as this, isn't it? Bwahaha.) The next chapter of 'Crows' has been sent for beta, so I should be posting it soon.
Thanks so much for such fun!! Keep up the good work!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are quite welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
the end?? love it... it's such a fun fic!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Yes, the end. It's probably a very good thing the Exchange had a deadline, otherwise I might have dragged this out for another 20 chapters! Thanks so much for reading - I'm delighted you liked it!
Nice story. Thank you for the good read :)The scene at the inn will hold in my memory for a while i think :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you so much for the lovely review. So glad I could provide something memorable. (I know I will never look at a little country inn quite the same way again.)
This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed every minute of it. An added bonus was the speed with which you posted. Talk about instant gratification! Will you write a sequel of their ongoing courtship? Hmm?
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are too kind ... I enjoyed every minute of reading your lovely reviews! I believe I will leave the sequel to your imagination (or a future Exchange prompt!). I haven't updated my WIP (A Murder of Crows) since March (eeep!), so I'll likely be begging the muse for inspiration on that before anything else. But I can't tell you how delighted I am that you'd even suggest it - you've made my day!!
Awwwwwwww...how sweet! I love the way in which Severus came to Hermione's rescue -- again! Lavender got what exactly was coming to her, if you ask me...what a nasty little specimen she is! Not to mention the fact that while she can dish it out, she apparently can't really swallow it herself. And then Severus got all jealous over the fact that Hermione's knickers were in Kingsley's desk (perhaps it wasn't the best idea to send them to her at work, hmmmm?)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Not the best idea, no ... but very much like a man, yes? :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. I was rather at a loss with the whole "rescue" prompt, as I'm not a particular fan of Hermione as a victim, but then I realized there are several ways in which someone can be rescued, and not all of them are demeaning. (Not that I spared her from demeaning acts in this fic, LOL!) Thanks again!