Ticket to Ride
Chapter 5 of 20
HogwartsClassof91Hermione takes an unusual ride.
ReviewedChapter 5: Ticket to Ride
Snape’s smile faded in direct proportion to the amount of time Hermione stood there, considering. When she saw the beginnings of a scowl, she swallowed her pride and gathered her courage. Her arms slid along the hard planes of his shoulders, hands entwining behind his neck.
I can do this. It’s just like embracing my father.
Only it wasn’t, of course. There was nothing patrimonial about the way her body came alive the second he wrapped his arms around her waist. He showed none of the hesitation that had plagued her: with one quick, hard move he brought her body against his fully, smirking at the involuntary gasp that escaped her throat.
Eyes as black as coal were lit with a sudden sparkle. She held her breath, helpless to slow the beats of her heart. She couldn’t think past the feel of his body pressed against hers. Could he feel her heartbeat slamming against his chest where they touched?
“Hold on,” he whispered.
She swallowed past the sudden dryness in her mouth and felt him crouch slightly. He lifted them into the air with enough speed to make her squeal. His deep chuckle was curtailed by the force of her arms around his neck as she clung to him, terrified. A quick glance down showed the ground rushing by, and she felt that packet of crisps threatening again as she tightened her hold.
“Can’t… breathe…” he croaked. His hand left her waist as he attempted to pry her arms from his neck.
“Eeeeee!” was all she could say when he tugged at her. All thoughts of propriety were abandoned when she felt herself slipping down his body. Clutching his shoulders, she scrambled higher and lifted her legs, wrapping them around his waist before hooking her ankles together. Only when she was certain her grip was secure did she allow her stranglehold on his neck to ease. He made an odd guttural noise, something between a moan and a growl, which she hoped was the result of being able to breathe once more. Deeply disconcerted by the position of their bodies, she ducked her head beneath his chin and buried her face into his chest.
After several minutes, she managed to breathe without hyperventilating. She relaxed ever so slightly. Anxiety subsided when she realised her absolute faith in his flying abilities. Unencumbered by fear, her mind drifted. She amused herself by taking deep breaths, drawing in the unique scent of the man she’d glued herself to. He was spicy and tropical, like cinnamon and sandalwood, and she wondered what potions he’d been brewing to achieve the rich smell. There was a trace of wood smoke, as well, as if he’d been sitting in front of a fireplace. Deep, earthy tones joined the others. She chuckled in recognition.
Mushrooms! He should have let me finish that Scourgify charm.
She sniffed again, unsatisfied. There was something else here—something familiar, something she knew intimately. Inhaling deeply, she pressed her nose further into his robes. Then it hit her. He smelled like books—wonderful, lovely, amazing books! She indulged in another whiff, nuzzling into his chest as she smiled in delight.
His arms tightened around her. She couldn’t remember the last time she had felt this… safe. She removed her nose from his robes and leant her temple against his chest. The ground below rushed by at a dizzying speed, but she was no longer afraid. Perhaps the strength of his embrace simply left no room for fright. Or maybe it was just the familiarity of his scent. Whatever the cause, she felt fearless. For the first time in her life, there was joy at being airborne. It was exhilarating.
She blinked against the wind slapping her face and focused on the tiny houses and trees passing far below their feet. Then she turned her head back against Snape’s chest and breathed a sigh of contentment. She’d always detested flying, but this was unlike anything she’d ever experienced before. If only she could fly the way Snape flew, she might always enjoy the sensation of flight. Perhaps he’d teach her, she mused, then wondered if she was mentally prepared to suffer the humiliation of being his student again.
Then again, they weren’t exactly treating each other the way they had at any time in the history of their student-teacher relationship. She couldn’t imagine herself wrapped around him this way when he’d been the Potions professor. Awareness made her body tingle, made her breathe too fast. She tried to dismiss thoughts of how hard and muscular his chest was, how strong his arms felt. She certainly didn’t need to be reminded of the way he had lifted one of his thighs so that it was, at this very moment, pressing quite firmly against her arse. She willed her mind to stop thinking of the way their bodies were fitted together. The way her legs were spread open wide, her most intimate parts pressed against his abdomen. What good was the knowledge a few inconsequential scraps of fabric was all that separated their flesh?
Almost as if he could sense her thoughts, he shifted his hold. His arms moved across her back, soft and caressing. With sudden speed, his body jerked and straightened, causing the many buttons of his long coat to drag upwards. If she hadn’t already been so aroused—so hyperaware—she might have been able to dismiss the dozens of tiny metal buttons creating a unique sort of friction in an area already too sensitive from being so near him. But there seemed to be no escaping such sensation today: she gasped and tried to stifle a moan. Burying her face into his robes once more, she prayed he hadn’t heard her. Her nipples tightened into hard little buds, straining forward as if seeking his touch. Sensing a distinct lack of control over her body’s reactions, she focused on her breathing, forcing steady, even exhalations from her lungs. It worked for all of two minutes. His entire body seemed to be vibrating beneath her, as if there was tangible power coursing through it. The feeling only intensified as their journey continued, until her body trembled in response. With her forehead pressed to his chest, she closed her eyes and abandoned the battle, chalking it off as yet another strange thing that had happened to her on this strangest of days.
As always, I owe huge thanks to Karelia for her patience and extraordinary beta skills.
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That was sweet and hot!
Great! Congratulations =]
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
I love the humour throughout this -- and found your Lucius to be quite apt/sympathetic. :) Thank you for sharing!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Sweet read I love your writing style!!!!! well done! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Ok, I had to stop mid- read to tell you that chappie was funny!!! LOL "to be honest I'm not even sure she's a woman" I would have loved to read an interaction between the two"women"! Funny stuff! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
You're right. Your take on Lucius was a bit disturbing. I think if I hadn't read A Murder of Crows first it wouldn't have bothered me so much. But in your universe I find it hard to make Lucius anything but... mean and dangerous. I liked how this one worked out though. It's cute. Fluffy. IEE! Warm fuzzy feelings! Are you thinking of writing anymore stories? Just wondering. I haven't written anything in years (and had destroyed any evidence of such) so I understand the combination of family, real life stuff, lack of motivation, etc. But I do hope you write again sometime. I like your style. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
My beta (karelia) is a big fan of Lucius, so his character in this story was a quasi-apology for making her read evil!Lucius in A Murder of Crows. It was extremely disturbing to write him so differently here, I assure you! If not outright cruel, he will always remain cold and self-serving in my mind (even when he ends up differently in my stories). I might return to fan-fiction some day, but I doubt I will ever again write an epic. The idea of a one-shot here or there is fun to imagine, though. Right now, I am about 1/3 of the way through an original novel I began in mid-November,as part of NaNoWriMo (after finishing Crows). It took months to get through the first three chapters, but since then, I have managed slow but steady progress. It's nothing ground-breaking: a modern-day romance with some mystery and suspense thrown in. But the alpha readers who've seen it have spoiled me with mountains of praise (Little Beloved said the flirty, witty, snappy banter was so good it literally blew her away!), and I'm greatly encouraged by the feedback so far. Once this is done, I have ideas (too many ideas, probably) for several more original stories, so I will likely be focused on original fics for quite some time. I'm a big believer in "never say never," though, so you may yet see me around the fan-fic world in the future. Have you ever thought about writing again? Check out the book "The Artist's Way" if you've considered it and need a gentle push. Good luck!
Response from marilynnedayle (Reviewer)
When you get novel published, I'd love to have the info. :)
The 'wonderful, lovely, amazing books' line made me laugh. Of course, in times of stress, Hermione would cling to the idea of her books as an anchor to sanity. Poor dear...
I enjoyed this immensely. You had me laughing out loud almost every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your stories (SS/HG hopefully).
The 'their' in the note should be 'there'.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Please see the next line:“Excellent spelling, Lavender,” she said aloud, snorting at the mistaken use of ‘their’ instead of ‘there’. Couldn’t they make her the butt of their jokes without insulting the English language in the process?It was intentional! o.O
Hello, just exploring this site for the first time. I normally hang around at either ashwinder or ff.net(mostly the latter because i like to filter stories). I like the chapter title/Beatle reference!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much for leaving a review ... And welcome to TPP! I post on Ash and FFN, too, although my user ID on those sites is Hogwarts_91. I'm glad you like the Beatles references - I had great fun choosing all the chapter titles!!
What a suprise to come back from holiday! The story finished. I must say a brilliant ending. I've loved this from beginning to end. The banter between them was great plus the Lemons were amazing.
Feel free to write a sequel, because I wonder if those knickers could take the strain.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
But of course ... they're magic knickers! :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it and hoped it would be well-received (since it was my first attempt at humor). Thanks so much for the review and stars!
Lovely, simply lovely.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so very much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Lovely. I have enjoyed every single word of this lovely story of how Lavender's jealousy of Hermione had led to her being with the only man who could complete her, complement her, and make her and himself happy.Using the names of Beatles' songs as chapter titles was a fun way of hinting at what new revelation each new chapter held in store. Severus had taught her to fly in more ways than one, and seeing them come together this way was such a joy. I was really tickled to find out that Kingsley had given him the same "don't you dare break her heart" lecture that he had given Hermione.
Thank you for such a wonderful story, and I'll be on the look out for the next chapter of "A Murder of Crows," another one of my favorites from your pen.Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Beth. I had such fun writing this story that reading praise for it is like receiving a bonus. The Beatles tunes were a joy to pick from, but I confess I could have decreased the number of chapters if I hadn't been so eager to incorporate more titles. And I'm really glad you liked the dual lectures from Kingsley - I actually added/altered that after the Exchange, and I think it adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks again, Beth - you always spoil me!
what a delightfully delicious decoction! thank you so much for sharing your unique vision, time and talent. p.s. loved severus' deconstruction of lav-lav!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee ... That was rather fun to imagine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this tale - thanks so much for reading it!
Oh I did enjoy that!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the lovely stars!
Yay! Severus saves the day!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Always! :-)
ha ha!!! Oh that Lavender Brown makes me so MAD!!! Grr.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
She's rather nasty in this fic, isn't she? I wonder if I'd have written her different if I'd seen the sixth movie BEFORE writing this? Hmmm...
Ohhh, very nice.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you. They certainly thought so!
Wow, this is a wonderful story. All the sad, painful things they are discussing. I was so sad about the way DH ended and I longed for there to be something better for Snape. Someone who cared about Snape without him being useful to them in some way. Someone who would appreciate the good in him and not be scared off by the bad.Very very good.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I couldn't agree more! I had never even heard of fan-fiction when I read DH, but I discovered it last year and was soooo pleased to have a forum in which we can imagine different (better) endings for this character. He deserved so much more! Thank you for reading, and thank you for the lovely stars!
Lovely. All my favorite fanfics finish much too soon, however. But I somehow missed that you are the very same author who is currently in the process of writing A Murder of Crows, another favorite of mine, so I shan't be too disappointed ;)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you! I had to laugh when you said it finished 'too soon,' however. The Exchange had suggested 1500-word stories, so I was really kicking myself for writing a 30k behemoth (this was the first Exchange I've participated in). What a delight to imagine someone would want more rather than less! :-) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving the lovely stars. Oh - and I'm so glad you're enjoying 'A Murder of Crows,' too. (It's pretty much the same story as this, isn't it? Bwahaha.) The next chapter of 'Crows' has been sent for beta, so I should be posting it soon.
Thanks so much for such fun!! Keep up the good work!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are quite welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
the end?? love it... it's such a fun fic!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Yes, the end. It's probably a very good thing the Exchange had a deadline, otherwise I might have dragged this out for another 20 chapters! Thanks so much for reading - I'm delighted you liked it!
Nice story. Thank you for the good read :)The scene at the inn will hold in my memory for a while i think :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you so much for the lovely review. So glad I could provide something memorable. (I know I will never look at a little country inn quite the same way again.)
This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed every minute of it. An added bonus was the speed with which you posted. Talk about instant gratification! Will you write a sequel of their ongoing courtship? Hmm?
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are too kind ... I enjoyed every minute of reading your lovely reviews! I believe I will leave the sequel to your imagination (or a future Exchange prompt!). I haven't updated my WIP (A Murder of Crows) since March (eeep!), so I'll likely be begging the muse for inspiration on that before anything else. But I can't tell you how delighted I am that you'd even suggest it - you've made my day!!
Awwwwwwww...how sweet! I love the way in which Severus came to Hermione's rescue -- again! Lavender got what exactly was coming to her, if you ask me...what a nasty little specimen she is! Not to mention the fact that while she can dish it out, she apparently can't really swallow it herself. And then Severus got all jealous over the fact that Hermione's knickers were in Kingsley's desk (perhaps it wasn't the best idea to send them to her at work, hmmmm?)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Not the best idea, no ... but very much like a man, yes? :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. I was rather at a loss with the whole "rescue" prompt, as I'm not a particular fan of Hermione as a victim, but then I realized there are several ways in which someone can be rescued, and not all of them are demeaning. (Not that I spared her from demeaning acts in this fic, LOL!) Thanks again!