Can't Buy Me Love
Chapter 14 of 20
HogwartsClassof91Hermione receives an unexpected offer.
ReviewedChapter 14: Can’t Buy Me Love
The music built to a spirited crescendo and then faded as the dance ended. Hermione broke away from Lucius and stood beside him on the dance floor, applauding the orchestra. She turned to leave when the next song began, but he reached for her hand again. “One more dance, Miss Granger.”
“I’d rather not,” she said. Her tone was more honest than harsh.
“Please,” he said, grey eyes imploring. “I have a proposition for you.”
She wasn’t sure if it was his plea or her own curiosity, but she returned to his arms before her brain had fully approved. He swept her across the floor, moving in perfect rhythm to the strains of a Khachaturian waltz.
"How much?" His voice was suddenly business-like.
"Pardon me?"
“How much will it take before you are convinced of my sincerity?”
“How much of what?" she asked. "I'm afraid I don’t follow.”
He spoke each word slowly, as if he were addressing a child. “I’m asking you to forgive me.”
“Yes, I got that part.” She rolled her eyes.
“And I’m willing to compensate you handsomely for this one simple act of absolution.”
Severus would have been proud of the scowl she produced. “Money is irrelevant in this situation, Mr Malfoy.” He looked scandalised by the very thought, but she continued, “Forgiveness must be earned: it cannot be bought and sold like common property.”
“I was afraid you would say that.” He sighed, and although their bodies remained at a respectable distance, she could feel the weight of his shoulders as they dropped.
“That was your proposition?” she asked. “Did you really think you could buy my forgiveness?”
He offered a slight shrug. “I have achieved an adequate level of success with similar methods in the past.”
“So you’ve bribed others into exonerating your actions?”
“That’s a rather ugly way of saying it,” he chastised. “I was merely offering a value exchange. What you insist on calling bribery, I consider nothing more than a fair payment for services rendered.”
“Please. Spare me the lesson in semantics.”
“Very well,” he said tersely.
They danced in silence for several moments, twirling around the floor without thought to their surroundings.
“Are you aware that Malfoy Industries own the building in which you live?” he asked.
She paled. “Are you threatening to evict me if I don’t accept your apology?”
His overly dramatic sigh stirred her hair, while his gaze rose to the ceiling. “You are determined to believe the worst of me, aren’t you?”
“I have yet to be convinced I should believe otherwise.”
“That is because you are an incredibly stubborn woman who chooses to wilfully misunderstand me.”
“Mr Malfoy, if complimenting me didn’t convince me to forgive you, I hardly think insulting me is a better approach.”
“Then enlighten me, Miss Granger. What approach would work?”
“Oh, I don’t know,” she said, feeling the heat of frustration colour her cheeks. “How about the truth?”
“I’ve been honest with you tonight!”
“Perhaps,” she offered. “But tell me… Why now? It’s been several years since Voldemort’s demise—why the sudden need to apologise after all this time?”
“Should an apology be given less credence simply because it is long overdue?” he asked.
“Of course not,” she replied. “But that still doesn’t answer my question. Why now?”
“Miss Granger, it sounds as if you are questioning my motivation.”
“I should think so, Mr Malfoy, as that is precisely what I am doing. Now, are you going to answer my question, or shall we end the dance here?” She gave him the space of four heartbeats to respond, then came to an abrupt halt in the middle of the floor.
He tried to guide her back into the dance, but she wouldn’t budge. “Oh, very well,” he said when their lack of motion began to draw attention. “You win.”
She returned to his arms and resumed dancing, watching him expectantly.
After a moment of silence, he said, “Since it’s so terribly important to you, I will admit the reason I sought your forgiveness tonight, rather than several years ago, is because of Severus and, to a greater extent, because of Draco.”
She waited for him to explain, but he seemed reluctant. “Please elaborate,” she said.
He pursed his lips together. “I was recently informed of the events taking place inside Hogwarts during that last battle—how you and your friends saved Draco from fiendfyre.”
“In the Room of Requirement,” she said, nodding absently.
“Yes. Narcissa and I are indebted to you.”
“Not at all,” she replied instantly. “To leave him there would have been unconscionable.”
He ignored her protests. “We owe Severus a great deal, as well. He risked his life—and his soul—to protect Draco.”
“He’s a good man,” she whispered.
“The best.”
She frowned as his words sunk in. “But why would Severus’s actions have anything to do with me?” she asked. She struggled to connect these long-ago events to Lucius’s abrupt desire for forgiveness.
“I value Severus’s friendship,” he explained. “I have no wish to jeopardise it by having unresolved issues with someone he appears to care about.”
For the second time that evening, the room seemed to fade from view. “That’s very admirable of you,” she intoned without thinking. Her mind was far too busy processing this new information, wondering if Lucius was correct in his assessment.
“Am I forgiven, then?” He raised his eyebrows hopefully.
She forced her brain away from thoughts of Severus’s feelings for her and focused on their conversation. “I was merely confessing my admiration for your sentiments, Mr Malfoy. Nothing more.”
“I believe you will find Gryffindors are not the only ones capable of loyalty, Miss Granger.”
And Slytherins haven’t cornered the market on cunning, she thought. She pasted a sweet smile on her face while a wicked idea formed in her mind.
Karelia + beta = awesome. Just sayin’.
A/N: I’m posting the chapters with Lucius in rapid succession, so don’t despair if you’re not a Malfoy fan—Severus will soon return. Believe me, I was quite surprised when Lucius showed up in this story, and if you’re familiar with my writing, you’ll know this is a fairly different take on his character for me. I’m not sure how it happened, but somehow I’m sure it’s all Karelia’s fault.
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294 Reviews | 7.78/10 Average
That was sweet and hot!
Great! Congratulations =]
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
I love the humour throughout this -- and found your Lucius to be quite apt/sympathetic. :) Thank you for sharing!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you for reading! I'm delighted you found the story humorous ... I had great fun writing it!
Sweet read I love your writing style!!!!! well done! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much - this story was great fun to write. Thanks for the shiny stars!
Ok, I had to stop mid- read to tell you that chappie was funny!!! LOL "to be honest I'm not even sure she's a woman" I would have loved to read an interaction between the two"women"! Funny stuff! hugs~dee
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee. That would be an awesomely fun little one-shot to write!
You're right. Your take on Lucius was a bit disturbing. I think if I hadn't read A Murder of Crows first it wouldn't have bothered me so much. But in your universe I find it hard to make Lucius anything but... mean and dangerous. I liked how this one worked out though. It's cute. Fluffy. IEE! Warm fuzzy feelings! Are you thinking of writing anymore stories? Just wondering. I haven't written anything in years (and had destroyed any evidence of such) so I understand the combination of family, real life stuff, lack of motivation, etc. But I do hope you write again sometime. I like your style. :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
My beta (karelia) is a big fan of Lucius, so his character in this story was a quasi-apology for making her read evil!Lucius in A Murder of Crows. It was extremely disturbing to write him so differently here, I assure you! If not outright cruel, he will always remain cold and self-serving in my mind (even when he ends up differently in my stories). I might return to fan-fiction some day, but I doubt I will ever again write an epic. The idea of a one-shot here or there is fun to imagine, though. Right now, I am about 1/3 of the way through an original novel I began in mid-November,as part of NaNoWriMo (after finishing Crows). It took months to get through the first three chapters, but since then, I have managed slow but steady progress. It's nothing ground-breaking: a modern-day romance with some mystery and suspense thrown in. But the alpha readers who've seen it have spoiled me with mountains of praise (Little Beloved said the flirty, witty, snappy banter was so good it literally blew her away!), and I'm greatly encouraged by the feedback so far. Once this is done, I have ideas (too many ideas, probably) for several more original stories, so I will likely be focused on original fics for quite some time. I'm a big believer in "never say never," though, so you may yet see me around the fan-fic world in the future. Have you ever thought about writing again? Check out the book "The Artist's Way" if you've considered it and need a gentle push. Good luck!
Response from marilynnedayle (Reviewer)
When you get novel published, I'd love to have the info. :)
The 'wonderful, lovely, amazing books' line made me laugh. Of course, in times of stress, Hermione would cling to the idea of her books as an anchor to sanity. Poor dear...
I enjoyed this immensely. You had me laughing out loud almost every chapter. I can't wait to read more of your stories (SS/HG hopefully).
The 'their' in the note should be 'there'.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Please see the next line:“Excellent spelling, Lavender,” she said aloud, snorting at the mistaken use of ‘their’ instead of ‘there’. Couldn’t they make her the butt of their jokes without insulting the English language in the process?It was intentional! o.O
Hello, just exploring this site for the first time. I normally hang around at either ashwinder or ff.net(mostly the latter because i like to filter stories). I like the chapter title/Beatle reference!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thanks so much for leaving a review ... And welcome to TPP! I post on Ash and FFN, too, although my user ID on those sites is Hogwarts_91. I'm glad you like the Beatles references - I had great fun choosing all the chapter titles!!
What a suprise to come back from holiday! The story finished. I must say a brilliant ending. I've loved this from beginning to end. The banter between them was great plus the Lemons were amazing.
Feel free to write a sequel, because I wonder if those knickers could take the strain.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
But of course ... they're magic knickers! :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. I had great fun writing it and hoped it would be well-received (since it was my first attempt at humor). Thanks so much for the review and stars!
Lovely, simply lovely.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so very much - I'm delighted you enjoyed it!
Lovely. I have enjoyed every single word of this lovely story of how Lavender's jealousy of Hermione had led to her being with the only man who could complete her, complement her, and make her and himself happy.Using the names of Beatles' songs as chapter titles was a fun way of hinting at what new revelation each new chapter held in store. Severus had taught her to fly in more ways than one, and seeing them come together this way was such a joy. I was really tickled to find out that Kingsley had given him the same "don't you dare break her heart" lecture that he had given Hermione.
Thank you for such a wonderful story, and I'll be on the look out for the next chapter of "A Murder of Crows," another one of my favorites from your pen.Beth
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Thank you so much for the lovely review, Beth. I had such fun writing this story that reading praise for it is like receiving a bonus. The Beatles tunes were a joy to pick from, but I confess I could have decreased the number of chapters if I hadn't been so eager to incorporate more titles. And I'm really glad you liked the dual lectures from Kingsley - I actually added/altered that after the Exchange, and I think it adds a nice touch to the story. Thanks again, Beth - you always spoil me!
what a delightfully delicious decoction! thank you so much for sharing your unique vision, time and talent. p.s. loved severus' deconstruction of lav-lav!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Tee hee ... That was rather fun to imagine. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this tale - thanks so much for reading it!
Oh I did enjoy that!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I'm so glad to hear it! Thanks for reading, and thanks for the lovely stars!
Yay! Severus saves the day!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Always! :-)
ha ha!!! Oh that Lavender Brown makes me so MAD!!! Grr.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
She's rather nasty in this fic, isn't she? I wonder if I'd have written her different if I'd seen the sixth movie BEFORE writing this? Hmmm...
Ohhh, very nice.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you. They certainly thought so!
Wow, this is a wonderful story. All the sad, painful things they are discussing. I was so sad about the way DH ended and I longed for there to be something better for Snape. Someone who cared about Snape without him being useful to them in some way. Someone who would appreciate the good in him and not be scared off by the bad.Very very good.
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
I couldn't agree more! I had never even heard of fan-fiction when I read DH, but I discovered it last year and was soooo pleased to have a forum in which we can imagine different (better) endings for this character. He deserved so much more! Thank you for reading, and thank you for the lovely stars!
Lovely. All my favorite fanfics finish much too soon, however. But I somehow missed that you are the very same author who is currently in the process of writing A Murder of Crows, another favorite of mine, so I shan't be too disappointed ;)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Why, thank you! I had to laugh when you said it finished 'too soon,' however. The Exchange had suggested 1500-word stories, so I was really kicking myself for writing a 30k behemoth (this was the first Exchange I've participated in). What a delight to imagine someone would want more rather than less! :-) Thank you so much for reading and for leaving the lovely stars. Oh - and I'm so glad you're enjoying 'A Murder of Crows,' too. (It's pretty much the same story as this, isn't it? Bwahaha.) The next chapter of 'Crows' has been sent for beta, so I should be posting it soon.
Thanks so much for such fun!! Keep up the good work!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are quite welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
the end?? love it... it's such a fun fic!
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Yes, the end. It's probably a very good thing the Exchange had a deadline, otherwise I might have dragged this out for another 20 chapters! Thanks so much for reading - I'm delighted you liked it!
Nice story. Thank you for the good read :)The scene at the inn will hold in my memory for a while i think :)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
And thank you so much for the lovely review. So glad I could provide something memorable. (I know I will never look at a little country inn quite the same way again.)
This was absolutely fabulous. I enjoyed every minute of it. An added bonus was the speed with which you posted. Talk about instant gratification! Will you write a sequel of their ongoing courtship? Hmm?
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
You are too kind ... I enjoyed every minute of reading your lovely reviews! I believe I will leave the sequel to your imagination (or a future Exchange prompt!). I haven't updated my WIP (A Murder of Crows) since March (eeep!), so I'll likely be begging the muse for inspiration on that before anything else. But I can't tell you how delighted I am that you'd even suggest it - you've made my day!!
Awwwwwwww...how sweet! I love the way in which Severus came to Hermione's rescue -- again! Lavender got what exactly was coming to her, if you ask me...what a nasty little specimen she is! Not to mention the fact that while she can dish it out, she apparently can't really swallow it herself. And then Severus got all jealous over the fact that Hermione's knickers were in Kingsley's desk (perhaps it wasn't the best idea to send them to her at work, hmmmm?)
Response from HogwartsClassof91 (Author of All You Need Is Love)
Not the best idea, no ... but very much like a man, yes? :-) I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. I was rather at a loss with the whole "rescue" prompt, as I'm not a particular fan of Hermione as a victim, but then I realized there are several ways in which someone can be rescued, and not all of them are demeaning. (Not that I spared her from demeaning acts in this fic, LOL!) Thanks again!