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A Better Childhood
grugster155 Reviews | 7.1/10 (155 Ratings, 0 Likes, 66 Favorites )
The Ministry forces Severus to decide between getting de-aged or go to Azkaban. He chooses Azkaban, but Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall and Alastor Moody disagree with it. So he is a four-year-old now and lives with Albus and Minerva. Fluffy story!
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grugster
Member Since 2005 | 6 Stories | Favorited by 17 | 7 Reviews Written | 472 Review Responses
Hi,
I absolutly love fanfiction but I never thought I would write one myself. But when Healer Pomfrey put up a contest I decided to write a stroy for it! The result was my story "Everything will be okay soon" !
I'm a social worker in a children shelter for abused, hard to educate and/or criminal girls.
Bye Sunny
Reviews for A Better Childhood
awesome to have something like this to read whilst i am in bed with cough and cold. this is an excellent treatise on child management but it isn't completed. can you please write the last few chapters in and then collaborate with a beta or another author to finish this tale?
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
I completed this story a long time agon, but I no longer post on this page. I send my chapters to 3 different betas for uploading it here and even this effort was sometimes not enough. I got sick of it and quit posting here. If you are interested you can read my stories here:https://www.fanfiction.net/~grugsterIf this link doesn't show up, check my username on fanfiction(dot)netThanks for your reviews!Sunny
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
Thank you sunny! I recently read it again. And it is even better than I had remembered! You did admirably. :))
you wrote very well. and i loved your footnote explaining about how this could be considered character death to some ppl. just that, do children really think this way?
i liked this chapter better than the last. i don't really like overly sustained periods of forced cuteness.
I love this! it is so cute and easy to picture! i cant wait for the next piece!
you should add another flight but with charlie calling hooch aunt ro! haha, i had a dream about that last night after reading!
thanks for something to do when i am in the hospital
This is so, so cute. I enjoy reading this fic.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thank you very much for your review!
*sniff* that was so touching. thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies
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Sevvy has to be one of the cutest children ever.I wonder what Grown-up Sev would say about himself if he could.
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:D Thank you very much for your review!
what a delightful and charming young man he could have been, and is thanks to you! wonderful chapter, thanks muchly
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this is a sweet story.
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Severus makes such a cute kid!
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This story is so damn cute! I am really loving it.
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That's another good moment for ou little treasure.
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Another sweet addition to your great story. I really enjoyed the descriptions and the interactions of the characters. Also the understanding of a small child is (if I remeber my own child correctly) spot on.
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Someone is going to sleep well tonight!
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Loved how he enjoyed meeting Pomona and felt sorry for him wehn Peeves tormented him.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
I'm very glad that some people like. Thank you very much for your review!
Poor Sev, (I know Severus must be rolling in his grave... but as a kid...) he had a bad scare. Hopefully Peeves will have a headache out of this.
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I'm very glad that some people like. Thank you very much for your review!
I do love this story. I think Minerva is in character. I think that is exactly how she would act with a young child, strict but caring. Continue with the great story.
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I'm very glad you like it! Thank you very much for your review!
Stupid ghost. Good for Filius, giving him the boot.
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I'm really enjoying this story. Everyone is so sweet. Thanks for updating.
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That was sweet.
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I so love this story! Sev is such a cute little four year I just wanted to hug him and protect him from that nasty Peeves. I agree with you on setting rules for a child to follow, I have an almost three year old little girl so I I can understan Minerva's and Albus concerns for Sev. I look forward to your next chapter. Well done!
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This story is too damn cute. I can't wait to read more.
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You can't imagine how much I love this litle child. He's such a sweetie that it always breaks my heart when he remembers how he was mistreated. I'm so happy for this second chance he got.
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I love this story. It reminds me of a friend of mine who adopted this little boy. He'd been beaten by his father (mother was dead). He said the boy would go into a room full of toys and only pick one. He'd go sit in the middle of the room and stay there for hours, just holding the toy. He was afraid if he moved, he'd be punished. Time Turner + castration = one less Tobias Snape.
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gosh, i'm loving this story (or have i said that already?) thanks so much
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