Chapter 12 – Flying with Charlie and Ro
Chapter 12 of 14
grugsterThe Ministry forces Severus to decide between getting de-aged or go to Azkaban. He chooses Azkaban, but Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall and Alastor Moody disagree with it. So he is a four-year-old now and lives with Albus and Minerva. Fluffy story!
ReviewedThanks a lot to my beta-readers, Duchess_Of_Arcadia and Pookah, for correcting my mistakes.
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters belong to J.K. Rowling, and I am not earning anything by writing this story.
I’m not a native speaker of English!
Dear readers,
No drama this time, just a new character and watching Sev play. Hope it isn’t boring!
Sunny
Chapter 12 – Flying with Charlie and Ro
When the two came near the Quidditch pitch, they could see Rolanda Hooch busily rummaging in the broom shed.
“Hello, Madam Hooch!” Charlie greeted the busy woman.
The flying teacher turned around, without even looking at Charlie and Severus, and said, “Rolanda, Charlie, just Rolanda.” She dusted the filth from her robes and waved the spider webs out of her short, silver hair.
When she finally looked at her guests, Severus could see her odd yellow eyes. They were not only this crazy color but also seemed to have inflexible pupils that made them look hard and demanding. But something about her didn't make Severus scared. She looks like Mo, the hedgehog, in one of the books in my room. His eyes jumped from her eyes to her ruffled hair and back.
“If Alastor has sneaked that damn ‘Mo, the Hedgehog’ book in your room, I swear I will kill him,” she said, but when she saw that Severus was scared by this, she tried to smile. “Oh, my, you have to learn not to take everything I say so seriously, Severus. I'm not one of those crazy, cuddle-addicted women in this castle, but I also don't eat little children.”
“Yes, Severus, Madam Hooch is very cool, and she can fly like hell,” Charlie said admiringly.
“Rolanda, Charlie. What's so damn hard about it?” Rolanda said while handing Charlie one of the two broomsticks she had fetched from the broom shed.
Charlie reached for the broom. “Ah, a Firebolt. I didn't know you had one here.”
“It's one of my private brooms,” Rolanda said. “I still prefer the Nimbus 2000. It's more flexible,” she explained while gesturing towards the broom in her hand. “Minerva wouldn't forgive me if I let you fly with this tyke on a poor Cleansweep.”
“Arlie good flyer, Aunt Ro,” Severus tried to assure her because he feared that she wouldn’t let him fly if she thought Minerva didn’t approve. “Minwa says okay.”
“Aunt Ro? Oh, please don't call me that. Just Ro will do if Rolanda is too hard for you,” she said, amused.
Severus realized that she was really different from the other women. She didn't try to cuddle him, and she didn’t want him to call her aunt. There was nobody he could compare her with, but he thought it could be nice to play with her. It seemed she wouldn't be so easily worried. Maybe, she would even let him try to fly alone. “Me fly alone?” he asked while trying to make the expression the others liked so much.
Rolanda laughed. “Nice try, puppy, but that look won't work on me.” She playfully tapped her broom handle on his head.
She looked at Charlie again. “We don't want Minwa to have a heart attack, do we, Arlie?” she asked teasingly.
Charlie grinned at her. “Of course not, Rolanda.” He looked down at Severus and tried to cheer the slightly disappointed child up by saying, “I'm sure Rolanda will teach you how to fly before Bryanna and Kenneth are even allowed to climb on a broom with someone else. They are my brother Bill’s kids and are as old as you are.”
That really cheered Severus up. Being able to do something before other children his age were allowed to do it made him feel special, and he really liked to feel special. He smiled proudly at Rolanda.
“Yes, I will make a perfect little Quidditch star out of you,” Rolanda said and patted Severus’ head with her gloved hand. “And now, let's start.” With one fluid motion, she was on her broom, zooming away.
Severus stood open mouthed and looked after Rolanda, who still was flying near the ground, but very fast.
Charlie, meanwhile, had straddled his broom and grinned at the awed child. “Come on, Severus, let's see if you like flying.” He opened his arms and gestured for Severus to climb in front of him on the broom.
Rolanda was hovering a few meters away from them, two meters up in the air. “Let him sit as near as possible to you, Charlie, and hold him tight with one of your arms.” She went into full teacher mode and now addressed Severus, who had become a little nervous. “Everything okay, tyke? Grab the handle and relax. No, more forward, Severus. Yes, that's right.” She flew around them and came to a halt directly beside Charlie's broomstick. “Ready?”
Severus was biting his bottom lip, and he felt his heart beat in his chest. Please don't let him fly as fast as Ro did.
“What's going on, Severus? Don't want to fly anymore?” Rolanda asked worriedly.
Severus turned his head very slightly to look at Ro. “Don't know!”
“You don't have to worry. We will stop as soon as you want us to, okay?” Rolanda said to calm the child. She wasn't used to working with children of that age, but she had no problem with taking all the time Severus would need.
“’Kay,” Severus said uncertainly.
“Nice and easy then, Charlie.” With that she accelerated her broom, and Charlie followed.
First Severus felt awkward and his tummy started to tingle, but soon he got used to the feeling. After a few minutes, Severus was frantically shouting, “Faster, Arlie, faster.” He felt so good. Flying was great. “Get Ro! Get Ro!” His laughter and shouts surely could be heard at the highest tower of Hogwarts.
His laughter is so natural and fresh, Charlie thought and smiled because the laughter was so infectious.
When they finally stopped after half an hour of playing 'Catch Ro,' Severus was still giggling.
“Who would have thought Severus could laugh like this? It's really refreshing,” Rolanda said breathlessly. Her normally pale face now had more color, and she looked more relaxed.
“Already getting soft, Rolanda?” Charlie mocked her, grinning madly.
“Yeah, it really seems so, but if you tell anyone, Charlie Weasley, so help you God,” she said, but her tone was still too happy to worry Severus, and she couldn't impress Charlie with it either.
“Enough for today, Severus, but you can come back whenever you want, and we can have a fly. Maybe next time a little higher,” Rolanda promised.
“What did I tell you, Severus? She is really cool, isn't she?” Charlie asked Severus while placing the lad on his feet again to climb from the broom himself.
“Yeah, Ro cool,” Severus said, jumping around excitedly.
“Thanks, for lending us the broom and flying with us, Rolanda. We’ll visit Pomona now in the greenhouses, right, Sev?”
“Yes, Aunt Pommy nice,” Severus explained to Rolanda.
“Yes, I'm sure you like her. Has she already made you addicted to her homemade toffees?” Rolanda asked. “No?” she asked when she saw the confused look on Severus' face. “Then you should ask her for one.”
“Come on, Sev, let's go.” Charlie took Severus' hand. “See ya, Rolanda!”
“Sure, Charlie, you are always welcome, and I'm always up for a little race,” she said and winked at him.
“Bye, Ro,” Severus called and waved his free hand at her while Charlie led him towards the greenhouses.
“Bye bye, tyke!” she said and then turned, head shaking, to the broom shed. God, I'm getting soft over a miniature Snape. You would have a good laugh if you could see me now, Severus Snape, you old bugger. Then she had to grin. But you couldn't have laughed as breathtakingly as this little tyke.
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155 Reviews | 7.1/10 Average
awesome to have something like this to read whilst i am in bed with cough and cold. this is an excellent treatise on child management but it isn't completed. can you please write the last few chapters in and then collaborate with a beta or another author to finish this tale?
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
I completed this story a long time agon, but I no longer post on this page. I send my chapters to 3 different betas for uploading it here and even this effort was sometimes not enough. I got sick of it and quit posting here. If you are interested you can read my stories here:https://www.fanfiction.net/~grugsterIf this link doesn't show up, check my username on fanfiction(dot)netThanks for your reviews!Sunny
Response from jadecadence (Reviewer)
Thank you sunny! I recently read it again. And it is even better than I had remembered! You did admirably. :))
you wrote very well. and i loved your footnote explaining about how this could be considered character death to some ppl. just that, do children really think this way?
i liked this chapter better than the last. i don't really like overly sustained periods of forced cuteness.
I love this! it is so cute and easy to picture! i cant wait for the next piece!
you should add another flight but with charlie calling hooch aunt ro! haha, i had a dream about that last night after reading!
thanks for something to do when i am in the hospital
This is so, so cute. I enjoy reading this fic.
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*sniff* that was so touching. thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies
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Sevvy has to be one of the cutest children ever.I wonder what Grown-up Sev would say about himself if he could.
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what a delightful and charming young man he could have been, and is thanks to you! wonderful chapter, thanks muchly
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this is a sweet story.
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Severus makes such a cute kid!
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This story is so damn cute! I am really loving it.
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That's another good moment for ou little treasure.
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Another sweet addition to your great story. I really enjoyed the descriptions and the interactions of the characters. Also the understanding of a small child is (if I remeber my own child correctly) spot on.
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Someone is going to sleep well tonight!
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Loved how he enjoyed meeting Pomona and felt sorry for him wehn Peeves tormented him.
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Poor Sev, (I know Severus must be rolling in his grave... but as a kid...) he had a bad scare. Hopefully Peeves will have a headache out of this.
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I do love this story. I think Minerva is in character. I think that is exactly how she would act with a young child, strict but caring. Continue with the great story.
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Stupid ghost. Good for Filius, giving him the boot.
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I'm really enjoying this story. Everyone is so sweet. Thanks for updating.
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That was sweet.
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I so love this story! Sev is such a cute little four year I just wanted to hug him and protect him from that nasty Peeves. I agree with you on setting rules for a child to follow, I have an almost three year old little girl so I I can understan Minerva's and Albus concerns for Sev. I look forward to your next chapter. Well done!
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This story is too damn cute. I can't wait to read more.
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You can't imagine how much I love this litle child. He's such a sweetie that it always breaks my heart when he remembers how he was mistreated. I'm so happy for this second chance he got.
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I love this story. It reminds me of a friend of mine who adopted this little boy. He'd been beaten by his father (mother was dead). He said the boy would go into a room full of toys and only pick one. He'd go sit in the middle of the room and stay there for hours, just holding the toy. He was afraid if he moved, he'd be punished. Time Turner + castration = one less Tobias Snape.
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