Chapter 4 - Severus’ New Room
Chapter 4 of 14
grugsterThe Ministry forces Severus to decide between getting de-aged or go to Azkaban. He chooses Azkaban, but Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall and Alastor Moody disagree with it. So he is a four-year-old now and lives with Albus and Minerva. Fluffy story!
ReviewedThanks a lot to my beta-readers, Duchess_Of_Arcadia and Pookah, for correcting my mistakes.
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters belong to J.K. Rowling, and I am not earning anything by writing this story.
I’m not a native speaker of English!
Chapter 4 - Severus’ New Room
When they stepped out of the fireplace, Severus looked around. They were standing in a cozy living room, which was painted in dark red and beige tones. It’s beautiful, Severus thought, awed, and it is so warm here. At home it was always cold, and our walls are gray.
At one side of the room stood a wooden coffee table and, around it, two large couches and two armchairs. Wow, how many people are living here? Severus was confused. On the other side of the room stood a big dining table with six chairs. “How many people live here?” Severus asked.
Albus followed Severus' gaze and smiled. “Only we three, Severus, but we often have many guests.”
Soon after Albus had stepped out of the fireplace with Severus in his arms, Minerva had followed. “I will go and get the house shoes for Severus.”
Albus walked over to the couch and sat Severus down. “We will show you your room now, but I'm sorry that you can't start to play, yet. Poppy said you have to eat regularly and need a lot of sleep.”
Severus’ bottom lip started to tremble when he heard that he wasn't allowed to play. “Not tired. Don't want to sleep.”
“You don't have to sleep, Sev,” Minerva said when she heard Severus’ comment while returning with the house shoes. We cannot show him all the toys and then refuse to let him to try them out, she thought.
She sat down bedside Severus and put the slippers on his feet. “We have to make them smaller,” she said. After a wave of her wand and another check to see if they fitted properly, Minerva was satisfied. “Albus meant that you have to eat and sleep regularly from now on. He didn't mean that you have to sleep right now.”
Severus was looking at her with big eyes. “No play?”
Minerva smiled at him and ruffled his hair. “I'm sure we can try out one or two of your toys before we have our afternoon snack.”
That conjured a smile on Severus’ face.
He has a breathtaking smile. I wish the adult Severus had smiled like this. Oh, Severus, I miss you so much, thought Minerva. Concentrating on the cute child in front of her, she couldn't resist a sad smile. I have to let go of the adult Severus to give little Sev the life he needs. He is such a darling child.
“Toys?” Severus asked when he realized that the nice lady didn’t seem to do anything except look dreamily at him.
That brought Minerva out of her thoughts, and she smiled warmly at him. “Of course, Sev. Let’s go to your room now.” She stood up and held out her hand for Severus to take.
Severus jumped from the couch and took the offered hand. It's crazy. At home nobody wants me to touch them. Not even Mum.
Minerva led Severus into the lounge.
Albus, who had followed closely, said, “Look, Severus, this is the main door. It leads directly into the lounge in front of my office. From there a moving spiral staircase leads to the halls of Hogwarts. But don't leave these rooms without us, Severus, okay?”
Severus nodded. I don't want to leave; I want to see my toys. That was the only thing Severus could think about. He had seen in books that his mother had shown him that other children had toys. Sometimes a friend of his father’s came by with his five-year-old girl, and she also had toys. She was very bored when she was visiting because Severus hadn't any toys, and so she brought some of hers afterwards. Severus didn't like the girl. She had always said bad things to him because he hadn't been as good at playing as she was, but the fun he'd had playing with her toys had made it worth the insults.
“This is Matilda, Severus,” Minerva explained while she pointed at a chubby woman in a portrait. “When you go through the hole that is behind her portrait you will get into my office. When I'm not here and you want to speak to me, you just have to ask her to let you through. She knows if I'm in my office and if you can come through. When I have a visitor, she will let me know that you want to speak with me, and I will tell her if she can let you through or if you have to wait for a while until I can come to you.”
“If you want to speak with me, Severus,” Albus said, “you can tell Phineas, here.” He pointed at another portrait. This one was of a scary looking man.
He looks a little like Father, Severus thought fearfully and hid a little behind Minerva.
“You don't have to be scared, Severus,” Minerva said and crouched down beside Severus. “Phineas was once a headmaster here. Now he is watching many places for Albus, and he has a portrait in Albus’ office. So you can ask him to see Albus when you need him, okay?”
Severus nodded, still frightened. The fact that Phineas was eying him skeptically didn't help.
“We can speak about all this later. I think this young man is more interested in seeing his new room, right?” Albus said when he saw that Severus was still frightened.
Severus looked hopefully at Albus and was glad when Minerva stood up and started to lead him further into their quarters.
From the lounge they went up a staircase to the second floor of the quarters. Minerva pointed at a door on the left side and said that it was Albus' and her bedroom. Opposite to it was another door to which Minerva led him. “And this is your room, Severus.” She opened the room and gently encouraged Severus to enter.
Wow, Severus thought, awed. The room was painted in a warm light orange; it had a big window and was, therefore, very bright and friendly. In the left corner of the room stood a bed with a bedspread, which had little birds and fairies on it. On top of it sat a plushy stork. At the left wall stood a big cupboard and a fireplace. Beside the door were a few small cupboards. But the right side of the room was what Severus liked most. Near the window was standing a small round table with three chairs. On the table were a lot of pens and sheets for drawing. Beside the table was a big carpet on which some toy cars and a little train were standing. At the right wall were several shelves with books and more toys. Severus looked up at the two adults, who were smiling at him. “All for me?”
Minerva and Albus enjoyed seeing the child stare open-mouthed at the room. Maybe we have over done it a little, but it was definitely worth to see this expression on him. “All for you, Sev,” Minerva said warmly.
They must have confused me with another child. This cannot be for me. Father said I'm not worth toys. There are so many toys that they must belong to many children. But the urge to try the toys out topped the skeptical thoughts, and so Severus let go of Minerva's hand and ran to the train.
Minerva and Albus conjured two chairs to observe the child while playing. Albus took Minerva's hand in his and kissed her. “It was the right decision.”
“Yes, it was.” She smiled at her husband and then watched her new charge playing.
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awesome to have something like this to read whilst i am in bed with cough and cold. this is an excellent treatise on child management but it isn't completed. can you please write the last few chapters in and then collaborate with a beta or another author to finish this tale?
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I completed this story a long time agon, but I no longer post on this page. I send my chapters to 3 different betas for uploading it here and even this effort was sometimes not enough. I got sick of it and quit posting here. If you are interested you can read my stories here:https://www.fanfiction.net/~grugsterIf this link doesn't show up, check my username on fanfiction(dot)netThanks for your reviews!Sunny
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Thank you sunny! I recently read it again. And it is even better than I had remembered! You did admirably. :))
you wrote very well. and i loved your footnote explaining about how this could be considered character death to some ppl. just that, do children really think this way?
i liked this chapter better than the last. i don't really like overly sustained periods of forced cuteness.
I love this! it is so cute and easy to picture! i cant wait for the next piece!
you should add another flight but with charlie calling hooch aunt ro! haha, i had a dream about that last night after reading!
thanks for something to do when i am in the hospital
This is so, so cute. I enjoy reading this fic.
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*sniff* that was so touching. thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies
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Sevvy has to be one of the cutest children ever.I wonder what Grown-up Sev would say about himself if he could.
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what a delightful and charming young man he could have been, and is thanks to you! wonderful chapter, thanks muchly
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this is a sweet story.
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Severus makes such a cute kid!
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This story is so damn cute! I am really loving it.
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That's another good moment for ou little treasure.
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Another sweet addition to your great story. I really enjoyed the descriptions and the interactions of the characters. Also the understanding of a small child is (if I remeber my own child correctly) spot on.
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Someone is going to sleep well tonight!
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Loved how he enjoyed meeting Pomona and felt sorry for him wehn Peeves tormented him.
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Poor Sev, (I know Severus must be rolling in his grave... but as a kid...) he had a bad scare. Hopefully Peeves will have a headache out of this.
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I do love this story. I think Minerva is in character. I think that is exactly how she would act with a young child, strict but caring. Continue with the great story.
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Stupid ghost. Good for Filius, giving him the boot.
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I'm really enjoying this story. Everyone is so sweet. Thanks for updating.
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That was sweet.
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I so love this story! Sev is such a cute little four year I just wanted to hug him and protect him from that nasty Peeves. I agree with you on setting rules for a child to follow, I have an almost three year old little girl so I I can understan Minerva's and Albus concerns for Sev. I look forward to your next chapter. Well done!
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This story is too damn cute. I can't wait to read more.
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You can't imagine how much I love this litle child. He's such a sweetie that it always breaks my heart when he remembers how he was mistreated. I'm so happy for this second chance he got.
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I love this story. It reminds me of a friend of mine who adopted this little boy. He'd been beaten by his father (mother was dead). He said the boy would go into a room full of toys and only pick one. He'd go sit in the middle of the room and stay there for hours, just holding the toy. He was afraid if he moved, he'd be punished. Time Turner + castration = one less Tobias Snape.
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