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A Better Childhood
grugster155 Reviews | 7.1/10 (155 Ratings, 0 Likes, 66 Favorites )
The Ministry forces Severus to decide between getting de-aged or go to Azkaban. He chooses Azkaban, but Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall and Alastor Moody disagree with it. So he is a four-year-old now and lives with Albus and Minerva. Fluffy story!
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Hi,
I absolutly love fanfiction but I never thought I would write one myself. But when Healer Pomfrey put up a contest I decided to write a stroy for it! The result was my story "Everything will be okay soon" !
I'm a social worker in a children shelter for abused, hard to educate and/or criminal girls.
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Reviews for A Better Childhood
Another interesting chapter. Poor little Severus.I'm a little confused by your author's note. Severus is not going to grow up into an adult again in this story?
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Yes, he is growing up, but just normally. He will not beturned back into his fromer adult self! I got flames about killing Severus Snape on another site and just wanted to make it perfect clear here what to await from this story before people start to flame me here as well. Severus wil grow up at Hogwarts with Minerva and Albus! I hope I didn't confuse you!
Response from slasher454 (Reviewer)
Aw, I'm sorry to hear you were flamed. I hope you paid them no mind. It takes a very nasty sort of person to take the time to write a review just to hurt someones feelings.I get what you meant now, and I'm glad he won't be re-aged via a potion or spell. It will be interesting to see what sort of person he will grow into without all the darkness and suffering.
This is definitely a different approach than I expected. Very interenting read :)
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
I'm glad you think it is interesting!
Very intersting premise. I look forward to more :)
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thanks!
This is fascinating! I do feel bad that the older Severus is gone in a way, but I'm eager to see a happy little boy. The things he said were just heartbreaking. Such a sad childhood. But he's young enough to not remember much of it in the future.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm glad you still like to read the story!
What a little darling!!! You've done a first rate job of making me feel for him as a child. If ever I'm in a cemetary and see graves marked with the surname 'Snape', I'll be hard put not to throw stones at them!! LOL Beautfiul. =]
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thanks for your kind words!
I adore the whole idea. ^_^ I can't wait to see what Severus becomes when he goes to Hogwarts. Will he go with the Potters and Weasleys' children when they go??
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Harry don't have childrens right now , but maybe I let him have some. But Sev will go to Hogwarts with the twins of Bill Weasley! They will be his grade. But it will need some time until that happens!Thanks for your review!
I am glad that the spell wont be reversed. I rather think all things considered that Severus deserves a happy childhood. Fluff is a-okay with me. Write on!
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
I'm very glad you like my story! Thank you for your review!
Oh, he is just so sweet! Hopefully this time around things will be different for Severus! Poor baby
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
It will definitely be different for him this time! Thanks for your review!
Hmm, a rather peculiar idea, but definitely worth reading. Please, don't make Severus a total little fluffpuff, let him keep some of his personality.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
No, he won't be a fluffpuff. He will learn very fast how to manipulate the adults and he won't be an 'easy' child to raise. But the first chapters he will be mainly just cute because the relationahip between him and the adults have to develop.
So, I take it he's lost all of his memories after age four, but remembers everything up until then. How sad that he has to remember even that much. I hoestly don't undersatnd how anyone could treat a four year old like that.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Yes, exactly! Thank you very much for your review!
I love the idea of Poppy scolding Albus and Minerva.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thank you very much for your review!
Poppy was a bit harsh.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
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He seems happy now.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thank you very much for your review!
I love 'Uncle Al'. I would never expect to see a side of him like this from canon.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
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I can so easily picture Sev' napping with Alastor, his thumb in his mouth and the other hand tucked under his head. That was worth the wait.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
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Awww little Severus is just too cute for words. I'm really enjoying this story very much and can not wait til you update again. Bravo!!!
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
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That was adorable. I'm glad most people are taking to him so well.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
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Praise be you have decided against Ron and Hermione as a couple. That can only be good news for this fangirl!
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thank you very much for your review!
What a great story. So heart breaking to realize that some little ones in the world suffer from such abuse. But your tale brings hope for new beginnings. Thank you for sharing.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thank you very much for your review!
What a sweet way to end the chapter. I believe she is right.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
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*sniff* every little joy seems to make me teary. thanks so much for giving him a happy childhood. he deserves it!
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
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It warms my heart to see Sev' so happy. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
I'm very glad that some people like. Thank you very much for your review!
I'm glad he enjoyed flying. But are you ever going to have him grow up? Getting tired of the three-year-old bit. Maybe have him go up a year or are you going to stretch this out?
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
No in this one he will stay like this. From chapter 17 on he will meet Harry and from then on he will help a very war-scared Harry to realize his problems and see the fun in his life again. Therefore the fluffy warning in the beginning. This story was written to soothe my nerves after a very stressful time at work. It's my therapy. I just posted it when I realized people like to read it. So I'm sorry to tell you that Severus will stay like this for the rest of the story. HE will become a bit moer independent and get's to know more people but that's all.
Sev is so cute. Great chapter.Truly
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
Thank you very much for your review!
Very sweet chapter. Thank you.
Response from grugster (Author of A Better Childhood)
I'm very glad that some people like. Thank you very much for your review!