Just a Little Bit
Melenka214 Reviews | 6.9/10 (214 Ratings, 0 Likes, 179 Favorites )
Hermione is stuck in a house with two difficult men, one bored cat, a hapless mouse - and a physics problem.
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Melenka
Member Since 2008 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 82 | 104 Reviews Written | 967 Review Responses
Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.
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Thats cruelty to animals leaving us here at this juncture!! You come back and update right now Missy!! ***my inner five year old is having a tantrum because there is so much going on here!! Be afraid, be very afraid!***
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
The next chapter is in queue already! Now, have a cookie and a little nap and the world will seem like a better place. And if not, at least you're full and well rested. :) Yeah, I'ma mom.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
The next chapter is in queue already! Now, have a cookie and a little nap and the world will seem like a better place. And if not, at least you're full and well rested. :) Yeah, I'ma mom.
Oh this is so an awesome chapter. i love that both men knows that Hermione needs them both that is excellent
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you. They are engaged in a complex dance, with each other as much as her, though left to their own devices, it would be a far more dangerous one.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you. They are engaged in a complex dance, with each other as much as her, though left to their own devices, it would be a far more dangerous one.
Now why didn't he get rid of that damned portrait any sooner? Otherwise I am confused... just what is she trying to do?
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I suppose he'd grown used to the portrait and hadn't thought much about it before that. What she is trying to do is hide Sirius' magical signature - from everyone but her.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I suppose he'd grown used to the portrait and hadn't thought much about it before that. What she is trying to do is hide Sirius' magical signature - from everyone but her.
*squee* I just love rounding numbers!Brilliant story. Brilliant chapter. I'm a bad, bad reviewer because I admin, I forget to review. Keep writing. Just, you know, write. Forget about life, okay? Kids and husbands really aren't that important.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Heee. Thanks for being my hundredth. And the kids and husbands ate pizza whilst I wrote what I thought would be the last chapter. I was wrong. Which means more admin work for you but also more time for me to spend with the characters. I'm sure I can figure out something for them to do...
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Heee. Thanks for being my hundredth. And the kids and husbands ate pizza whilst I wrote what I thought would be the last chapter. I was wrong. Which means more admin work for you but also more time for me to spend with the characters. I'm sure I can figure out something for them to do...
wow...great update. thanks
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Another is in queue (as usual...)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Another is in queue (as usual...)
If she hesitates too much between the two she can always choose the two. Or if she's afarid of breaking one heart, well I'd be more than happy to comfort the poor infortunate... 
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
How very kind of you! ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
How very kind of you! ;)
Very nice, the plot thickens and the tension builds. I love how you're weaving these characters together. Hermione's conflict is palpable and the men's energy is vibrant. I'm eager for more story! :D
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! There is more in queue, but I'll have to start writing really fast to keep up! :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! There is more in queue, but I'll have to start writing really fast to keep up! :)
Ooooh, the plot thickens. Very nice, indeed...
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I was instructed to write a bit of fluff, but the characters all insisted on plot... mach
Response from shefa (Reviewer)
*grinsThey are so bossy, aren't they? :D
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I was instructed to write a bit of fluff, but the characters all insisted on plot... mach
Response from shefa (Reviewer)
*grinsThey are so bossy, aren't they? :D
Intriguing beginning -- while I'm sorry that it took a while for me to start this, I'm not regretting that I get to read five chapters all in a row! Whoo hoo! :D
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Glad you like it! I tend to hold off reading until a few chapters are posted, so I can get a good, long read in. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Glad you like it! I tend to hold off reading until a few chapters are posted, so I can get a good, long read in. :)
LOL, trapped in a house with forty year old teenagers!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
That pretty much sums it up! LOL
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
That pretty much sums it up! LOL
this is my favorite chapter yet I really love this story I'm glad ladyinthecloak rec'd it to me you are a wonderful author
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you very much. She was kind to recommend it, and I appreciate you reading.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you very much. She was kind to recommend it, and I appreciate you reading.
its a game they are playing isn't i hope no one gets hurt
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
It is most definitely a game, and everyone has a stake in it. The risks just make it that much more interesting.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
It is most definitely a game, and everyone has a stake in it. The risks just make it that much more interesting.
that lucky bent i would love to have either man to hell with that I want bothMan I love his sense of smell its hot
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
His enhanced senses are very useful.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
His enhanced senses are very useful.
i love when Crookshanks in a ficthese two Severus and Hermione love to bait each otherwhat happened to Sirius he sure is being a git
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
They argue to cover up how they feel, and since Severus is no longer her teacher, Hermione can finally be who she really is with him. Sirius has always been clever. Snape and Sirius have never gotten along, so it's not surprising that Sirius would find Snape's discomfort amusing.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
They argue to cover up how they feel, and since Severus is no longer her teacher, Hermione can finally be who she really is with him. Sirius has always been clever. Snape and Sirius have never gotten along, so it's not surprising that Sirius would find Snape's discomfort amusing.
Poor didn't have a clue I'm glad he still has his looksYummy hehe the two arguing over her what every woman wants
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
All that was done to him in prison has been erased - except the memories. Yummy is a good word for his restored youth. I don't know if she understands Snape's reaction. Yet. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
All that was done to him in prison has been erased - except the memories. Yummy is a good word for his restored youth. I don't know if she understands Snape's reaction. Yet. ;)
Hmm I wonder what Hermione will do with the information she recieved this chapter...
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Hermione with information is a dangerous creature...
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Hermione with information is a dangerous creature...
Loving it.. !!I hope she chooses severus tho..
Can't wait for more.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
It is all about choices with Hermione. And her cup runneth over in this case.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
It is all about choices with Hermione. And her cup runneth over in this case.
Great story. I read the first five chapters today and can't wait for more. Your descriptions are fantastic.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. More is on the way soon!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. More is on the way soon!
whoa...this story is so hot and interestingly intriguing. love that ust! hope it gets r! thanks so much and i look forward to more. 
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I solemnly swear I am up to no good. Something will get resolved. Soon, I would imagine.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I solemnly swear I am up to no good. Something will get resolved. Soon, I would imagine.
Oh tension is getting high.This story is really starting to grow on me. Thank you
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I am glad you're finding it interesting. Thanks for coming along for the ride.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I am glad you're finding it interesting. Thanks for coming along for the ride.
Oh God I want them to pounce on each other!! American football style. ;) Great story, the tension builds.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you. Don't worry, I doubt they can go on much longer without someone pouncing. Either that, or the house will explode.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you. Don't worry, I doubt they can go on much longer without someone pouncing. Either that, or the house will explode.
Ah, things grow more interesting so quickly! I'm really enjoying this story - thanks for sharing ~
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I am so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reading.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I am so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reading.
Oh my goodness, I am completely, irrevocably hooked on this fabulous story. Sirius's line about glee being more satisfying was classic! And, oh, what a perfect image you painted of her in that nightgown... poor Severus; he's quite lost, isn't he?!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I have always thought old fashioned nightgowns could be quite sexy. Apparently, Severus does, too. :) Glad you're enjoying this!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I have always thought old fashioned nightgowns could be quite sexy. Apparently, Severus does, too. :) Glad you're enjoying this!
What I wouldn't give to have Severus and SIrius fighting over me! LOL!Excellent work.Livvy
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
They are quite the pair, aren't they? Like bookends from hell. ;) Thank you for your review!
Response from livvy6 (Reviewer)
LOL! THey are the pair. If only Snape had an animagus form then they could just go at it and kick the crap out of each other!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
They are quite the pair, aren't they? Like bookends from hell. ;) Thank you for your review!
Response from livvy6 (Reviewer)
LOL! THey are the pair. If only Snape had an animagus form then they could just go at it and kick the crap out of each other!
Poor Hermione, she should be able to compose a essay though. Let's hope (or not) that Severus sees right through it.I like the little mouse, it gives a bit of comic relief and it amused me seeing Hermione communicate with it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Who's leaking you copies of the next chapter?? ;)I also like the mouse, who was supposed to appear only in the first chapter but insists on helping out.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
No leaks, but a friend tells me I creep her out. I have a knack of knowing things ahead of time, it's 'uncanny' as she puts it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Who's leaking you copies of the next chapter?? ;)I also like the mouse, who was supposed to appear only in the first chapter but insists on helping out.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
No leaks, but a friend tells me I creep her out. I have a knack of knowing things ahead of time, it's 'uncanny' as she puts it.