Impulse
Chapter 10 of 16
MelenkaThe product of force and the time the force acts on it; impulse causes a change in momentum.
"What did you do?" Hermione whispered.
"I'm sorry."
She regarded Sirius, a sickening thought forming. "For what?" A hiccup robbed her tone of vehemence.
"You know what." He closed his eyes. "You can feel it."
Taking a deep breath, she stilled her thoughts. "You gave me your magic." Fear warred with excitement.
"I don't think it will work the same way, but you're welcome to try it."
"On what?" She sat up, unable to focus on anything save him.
"Anything. The trees, retrieving our clothing." He swallowed. "Punishing me."
"If you plan to act the martyr after giving me one of the most amazing experiences of my life, I may well do that. And if you remembered our encounter in the library, you wouldn't be so quick to suggest it." She worked herself into a good lather. "I know you "
"I remember every time you've spoken to me, everything you've said to others while in this house, your scent as you drew near, the way you felt under my hands. I remember everything, Hermione. I always will." He opened his eyes, still shining silver. "And none of that excuses what I just did to you."
Oh, good lord! She stared at him, then slowly shook her head. "What is it with men? You all have this absurd idea that you are the ones controlling things and that all I can do is react. And for some reason, both you and Severus seem to think I'm easily broken, despite all evidence to the contrary, laid out before you, leading to the screamingly obvious conclusion that I am quite capable of taking care of myself."
With a huff, she flicked her hand, intending to retrieve their clothes. Nothing happened. She reached down for her wand, wondering again why they never Vanished, even when tucked in pockets. She carefully cast the spell, though she supposed the worst that could happen was that their clothes would arrive with more force than necessary.
Which was exactly what did happen.
Hermione held up the remnants of her dress. Sirius' trousers were whole. Of course. The animagus gets clothes.
"You're stronger now, love. It will take some getting used to."
"I am also naked!" she fumed. The full meaning of that hit her, and her mouth fell open. She would have to return to the house completely bare. With her luck, Snape would choose that particular moment to come out of his room. She covered her face with her hands.
"I think you're lovely this way," he said.
She turned to glare at him just as he threw his shirt at her. She caught it full in the face.
"It was hanging on the tree. I took it off before working. And if I never wear another one, I'll be pleased."
She dropped the shirt over her head. It covered her enough for decency, if barely. "You'll stand out if you insist on going without a shirt, especially in winter."
"Then I shall have to move to the tropics," he said lightly.
The truth behind his words sank in. "You'll have to go, after," she said softly.
"Yes." He wrapped his arms around her, tentative at first. She laid her head on his chest. "If there is an after." He laughed as if not caring that he spoke of his possible death.
"That's not funny."
"After the lives I've had, almost everything is humorous." He kissed the top of her head. "Now let's see if I can sneak you into the house without alerting Severus. Unless, of course, you want to be seen like this?" He slipped his hand under the shirt and caressed her bottom.
She shoved him away. "No. I will be remaining in the area, which greatly increases my chance of running into him. He knows enough about me as it is." She flinched inwardly at the allusion and stared intently at her feet.
"He's a fool if he doesn't seek to know more," he said quietly.
Her head snapped up. "You want him to..." She couldn't finish.
"I don't think I've ever wished happiness on him, but it's all I want for you. I'll be glad if you find it, whether it comes in the classroom or someone else's arms, even his." He pulled him to her. "But I hope you find a bit of it in mine."
She didn't resist when he kissed her. The only magic came from his lips.
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Sirius entered the house first, motioning to Hermione when he found the kitchen empty. She had considered Apparating into her room until he reminded her that it might go badly. In time, she should adjust to the extra power, providing it didn't dissipate entirely. There was no telling what would happen. He cursed himself again for his weakness, despite her assurances that she was perfectly fine. It was best to let her think that, whether or not it was true. He took her hand, leading her into the abandoned hall.
A shriek rent the air, bloodcurdling, familiar. He flinched from his mother's voice. "Whore! Filthy, stinking whore! Defiler! Mudblood trollop!" The curses devolved from there.
Hermione stood, frozen, her face a crimson mask, gaze riveted on the staircase. Sirius transfigured the shirt to a dress, as similar to the one she had been wearing as he could manage. She shuddered before dashing into the library, her hands clapped to her ears.
"As if you ever cared what I did or with whom," he said to the portrait. He wrenched it off the wall and raced up the stairs, not stopping until he reached the attic. His mother screamed at him the entire time, filling the air with imagined details sicker things than he had ever envisioned shredding his choices, damning him as she had in life. He lit and silenced the room with a thought, striding over to the alcove made by the chimney.
"You deserve worse," he said to her as he hung her portrait in the darkest place in the entire house. "And I will tell the others that I am perfectly happy to remove any picture into which you wander." He stalked across the room. With a backward glance, he said the worst thing his mother could hear. "She is better than any Pureblood spawned of this house."
"You are no son of mine!" she howled as he closed the door, extinguishing the light.
"Thank all the stars in the heavens for that," he muttered. It was not until he reached the library door that he realized he'd cast two spells at once.
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Severus stood, clenching the back of the desk chair to keep from opening his door. Sirius pounded up the stairs, vitriol pouring from the harpy. The foul confirmation of his assumptions burned into his mind, accompanied by things he wished not to consider. Things he had tried to forget. All thought of the usefulness of their presumed tryst fled, leaving only rage. And the only one at whom he could direct it was himself.
The silence was a relief. He took a deep breath, then another. Mrs. Black's portrait had lied. It frequently did. He had heard it say worse things about, and to, Hermione. If she and Sirius had been intimate he ground his teeth at the thought it would have been nothing like the depraved ramblings of an insane picture. It would have been beautiful. A bitter taste filled his mouth at the admission.
He waited until Sirius' steps had faded. They would be in the library. He checked the hall to be certain, then slipped into Hermione's room to replace the notebook. Knowing he should not, he took one final look, revealing her most recent invisible entry.
The most remarkable thing has happened. Severus and I
He read no further. Letting the words fade away, he closed the notebook and put it under her mattress. He would not look at it again. When she was ready, she could tell him what she felt for him. No matter how long that took, it would be worth the wait.
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The gargoyle chair dwarfed her. She was bent over her research, her hair falling in tangles to brush the desk, dressed in jeans and a rumpled button down shirt with the sleeves rolled up. She had either transfigured the dress or, more likely, conjured the clothes from her room. Had she gone up, she would have run into Snape, just now returning to his quarters. Sirius considered using the secret passage to discover why but decided against it. He had nothing to gain.
She looked up as he approached, unconsciously tucking her hair behind her ear. He plucked a leaf from it, transforming it into a flower before laying it on the desk. She left it there. He sighed. This was not at all how he'd wanted things to go.
"Hermione, I..."
She cut him off. "Did you destroy it?"
"No. I left her in the dark she loved so well." More than she had loved him.
"Good." Her jaw was set as she slid a page over to him. "I think I've figured out the second part."
He looked down at the sketch. It meant nothing to him. It represented everything.
"Chaos. That's what it needed. And you gave it to me." She would not meet his eyes.
"I'm not following." He frowned.
"Your magic. In me, it's chaotic, unpredictable. This is how it manifests." She gestured to the page. "That sketch came out perfectly. I can do it again."
"But if the magic is chaotic, you can't be sure it will work the same way twice. Isn't that what you were arguing earlier?"
She shook her head. "This part is different. It's pure math Arithmancy, if you prefer. The chaos doesn't affect the component, it affects me. All I have to do is reproduce this piece, on the same page, and the spell is two-thirds done."
"Then why haven't you?" He kept his tone neutral.
"Because as soon as I do, you'll be one step closer to leaving." She looked up at him. "And this is not how I want it to end."
"You cannot want a repeat of this evening."
"Why can't I? Because it frightens you? Or because you'll want to keep me around if I can take it?"
He stepped away at the intensity of her gaze. "Because I don't know if I can control whatever it is I did to you."
"The magic, or the lovemaking?"
"They seem to be connected." This was dangerous ground. "I don't want to hurt you." He grimaced. She had heard that before.
"Which part of you leaving do you think will not cause me pain?" She stood slowly, leaning towards him, hands flat on the desk.
"You know I can't stay any more than you can leave," he said.
"I am not constrained, Sirius. I could disappear right now. My friends would worry, wonder what had happened to me, but they would move on. They have other things on their minds, if you'll recall."
"I won't be responsible for you leaving behind everything you care about."
"Not everything." She came around the desk to stand before him.
The magic stirred, reaching for her. He would have to be very careful. He took a deep breath and blew it out. The bench in the garden collapsed with a crash.
"Do you honestly believe that if we both disappeared at the same time, there would not be a hunt for us? The notorious Sirius Black, returned from the dead by who knows what dark machinations, making off in the night with Hogwarts' star pupil, one of the best friends of Harry Potter? They would not rest until you had been rescued from my evil clutches."
She stopped. "I... I hadn't thought of that."
"Why would you?" He reached for her hand, drawing her closer. "Were we both free, I would take you with me, show you such things as you can hardly imagine." He tilted her chin up and brushed a kiss over her lips.
"We are," she protested.
"No, love. You are free. I am a prisoner of expectations." He held her to him. Yours more than anyone else's. She would not see it.
"Then there's nothing for it." She spoke into his chest.
"Finish what you've started tonight," he said.
"If you will," she challenged.
He nodded. "You know where to find me." He kissed her and left the room.
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I will always know where to find you. She dared not say it aloud. When she heard the door close, she released the tension she had held since he'd taken her in the garden. The spell would work, but not as he thought. She only prayed he wouldn't notice until it was done.
She went back to the desk, dragging the awful chair closer, and invested hope in chaos.
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214 Reviews | 6.9/10 Average
Wow, what a tale. I have to admit, i stumbled onto this merely by accident and was swarn through each chapter like moth caught in the light of a candle. Some of it was too confusing, but the story itself held me. I truly think that Sirius had an unwordly understanding, insight that came from living twice. It's odd. this feels like an ending - but yet also like a beginning. I carve more and yet can see in my mind that Harry wins, Severus and Hermione unite, forever a couple. Thank you for this story and the imagery. I did enjoy it very much.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you so much for reading the story! It was confusing, but physics (and love) is often like that. Sirius did, at the last, prove his love - mostly by letting it go. If you want a wee bit of epilogue (and hope for the happy ending), you might read "Death Shall Have No Dominion", as it explains how Snape did, in fact, survive after the snake bite. :)
She sure bounced from one bed to another. I still feel that Severus recieved far more from her than Sirius did. Severus reached out in need and desire to fill her need, not to jsut use her. There is a beauty to his way, and I hope they don't trun away from this beginning.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Well, considering the strength of personality of both rather amazing men, I'm not surprised she took what was offered, and pushed for more. She does love them both, albeit differently. Severus stood aside for Sirius, and sent him to her, because she needed a summer fling that didn't leave her bitter. He plans for the long term, however unlikely he feels that may be. In his own way, he used Sirius to free Hermione so she might be able to accept him, and Sirius was fully aware of his part in that. His motives may have been good, but it was still a calculating thing to do. Doesn't change how much he loves her, protest though he might.
The spell, how it was cast, was beautiful and alarming. The tie shifting to Severus - I expected her to rage and fume over the interferance. I'm still unsure what exactly the spell did or is, BUt now she's done it can you every undo or go back as if it wasn't completed. It's in her and part of her. SHe'll remember. Even Severus might.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Oh, they will all remember. With any luck, no one will ever find out what she just did. It was meant to hide Sirius, to free him, and it did that. She tacked on the location spell as a way to ensure she could find him. Quite obviously, the men thought this a bad idea, and used her own theory to circumvent that part of the spell. Severus can find Sirius, which may be necessary if Sirius gets out of control. They think themselves clever. Silly men.Thank you for another delightful review!
What is this spell she is tryiing to do? I don't get that part.I don' t know how I think about the way Sirius is using her. The way he stalks her. I think Severus is the better wizard in this one.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
The spell will be explained, I promise. It is very, very complex and she can't reveal what she hopes to do with it until the time is right.I don't think Sirius is stalking her. She came to him, after all, and made her decision of her own free will. What happened after that surprised him as much as her - hence, his apology. Inasmuch as he is capable of it, he does love her. Otherwise, he wouldn't have worried about transfiguring her clothes or dispensing with his mother's portrait. Considering that he has become a magical being unlike any that has existed to this point, he's still feeling his way around what he can, or should, do. It's why he knows he has to leave and not take her with him. He's too dangerous to be around for long.As for Severus, he has his own agenda, which will become more clear as the story progresses. While he, too, loves her, he is no more free to pursue a relationship with her than Sirius is. They are each stuck with the hand they've been dealt. The only thing to do is try to alter it - just a little bit. ;)
his discovery in the mirror was interesting. His taking advantage of her intriguing, especially since she let him, even encouraged him.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you for the thoughtful review and the shinies.I don't know if he took advantage of her so much as acted on a desire that came from having someone treat him as human after so long. The fact that she reacted to their physical closeness when he picked her up in the dark would not have escaped him, though he'd dismissed it. She was the one who pressed for more (and who could blame her, with his beauty returned?) and responded with open desire. Still, there was something cruel in his using her to upset Severus. Some habits die hard, I guess.
So she broke Severus down (a little) and got him to open up to her. I loved the tension you built into this chapter.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! I don't know who was more broken by the end of that, but I doubt either would complain! :)
I like the dichotomy of the gifts - Severus actually did something to protect her little mouse while Sirius left her with a keepsake of their time spent together. Says quite a bit about their personalities.Wordsmithing is an artform, so I was glad that Hermione was tickled during her conversation with Arthur. If she was previously incapable of telling a believeable lie, it was only because she hadn't learned to lie with the truth. A carefully delivered truth is always the best lie. Severus gave her another useful gift with that lesson.I have to agree with Ginny, the tat is cool. I really like the graphic of it in the last chapter.Finally, speaking of wordsmithing, I REALLY like the way you've incorporated the title within the dialogue of the characters. Each significant change, be it the spell or the interaction of the characters themselves, was done in the name of caring, protection, and ultimately - love. A little bit of each.Thank you for a wonderful tale, a missing moment of vast proportions, if you will.~
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you so much! You are very kind. Hermione's interaction with Arthur was more fun to write than I'd expected it to be. I think she learned a great deal from both of her housemates. You are right that they all acted out of love, albeit different sorts.I am glad you enjoyed the story.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you so much! You are very kind. Hermione's interaction with Arthur was more fun to write than I'd expected it to be. I think she learned a great deal from both of her housemates. You are right that they all acted out of love, albeit different sorts.I am glad you enjoyed the story.
I finally managed to read the last chap. It's somewhat anticlimatic for me. Do you consider a short sequel, giving us your version about the impact of the chaos-spell to the outcome of the war? You see I like to have it spelled out to me. Though I'm not really against open endings, they help to improve the imagination. Thanks a lot for this highly creative story.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks for the review and for reading through the whole thing. I know it was a bit convoluted. I purposely made the end of the story fit into DH. Since Harry was, ultimately, able to defeat Voldemort, the spell didn't come into play. That does leave it open, as Hermione still has it on her ankle and Sirius is still loose in the world. If I was to write a sequel, I think it would be a romp across the globe, with Sirius getting ever stronger and Severus having to chase him down. I don't think I'm ready to do that yet. But I appreciate the encouragement!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks for the review and for reading through the whole thing. I know it was a bit convoluted. I purposely made the end of the story fit into DH. Since Harry was, ultimately, able to defeat Voldemort, the spell didn't come into play. That does leave it open, as Hermione still has it on her ankle and Sirius is still loose in the world. If I was to write a sequel, I think it would be a romp across the globe, with Sirius getting ever stronger and Severus having to chase him down. I don't think I'm ready to do that yet. But I appreciate the encouragement!
I feel like I am out of breath, I've just caught up with this story. I don't know why I waited so long to start it, this is fantastic. I do have to ask if you could clarify for me how Hermione feels about Sirius if she loves Severus (and apparently has for sometime) why was she so distruaght with what Sirius did? It seemed a bit overly emotional for just a friends with benefits relationship, and add seducing and telling Severus she loves him perhaps not less than a few hours later? Is it because she is so sensitive to his magic? I may have missed something in reading so quickly, so if you could help my poor feeble brain comprehend I would greatly appreciate it.I look forward to your next update!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks! I'm glad you decided to give it a try.Hermione loves both men, but very differently. She was upset with Sirius for taking her ability to find him, not because she is in love with him but because she thinks he needs her. (Okay, also because he's way hot, but she recently figured out that's not enough to make her happy.) She has proven she is a safe vessel for the overflow of his magic. The early morning tryst was an attempt to help him figure out how to control the magic, which was somewhat successful, but she worries he won't always be able to do that (control it, that is). Obviously, he's worried about that, too, but neither he nor Snape will tell her about their contingency plan if it turns out Sirius is unable to stabilize.Considering that she started out with a very secret schoolgirl crush on her professor, it's not surprising that her feelings for Severus run a little deeper. She told him she loves him because she does. She figured that she might not ever get the chance to be with him again, so seducing him (in her sweet and slightly inept way) seemed the thing to do.
Response from Isode (Reviewer)
Thanks for the clarification. I really did read this quickly, getting time on the computer in my house has become difficult lately and my only options are to read before heading to work or really late at night.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks! I'm glad you decided to give it a try.Hermione loves both men, but very differently. She was upset with Sirius for taking her ability to find him, not because she is in love with him but because she thinks he needs her. (Okay, also because he's way hot, but she recently figured out that's not enough to make her happy.) She has proven she is a safe vessel for the overflow of his magic. The early morning tryst was an attempt to help him figure out how to control the magic, which was somewhat successful, but she worries he won't always be able to do that (control it, that is). Obviously, he's worried about that, too, but neither he nor Snape will tell her about their contingency plan if it turns out Sirius is unable to stabilize.Considering that she started out with a very secret schoolgirl crush on her professor, it's not surprising that her feelings for Severus run a little deeper. She told him she loves him because she does. She figured that she might not ever get the chance to be with him again, so seducing him (in her sweet and slightly inept way) seemed the thing to do.
Response from Isode (Reviewer)
Thanks for the clarification. I really did read this quickly, getting time on the computer in my house has become difficult lately and my only options are to read before heading to work or really late at night.
How does he feel about her? Does she know? Are they going to risk being back at Hogwarts?
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I don't know that he'll tell her how he feels about her, but she does hope that he'll get around to it. As for the risks, neither of them is in a good place to be taking them, so I suppose it depends on who ends up where.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I don't know that he'll tell her how he feels about her, but she does hope that he'll get around to it. As for the risks, neither of them is in a good place to be taking them, so I suppose it depends on who ends up where.
Oh, that was mean of you. You supply them with a new quandary, which definitively shut down the sulks from his grumpiness and places Hermione at a higher level of danger - one that was supposed to have been avoided with Severus and Sirius' previous actions.And then you attempt to distract me from the fact with a rather lovely piece of 'interlude'.Not working... Wants details...*pouts*Just kidding. This was a great update and you just raised the tension level another notch. I'm thinking it may not be possible for her to stay and go back to Hogwarts as planned now. I'll be honest and say that I want the next installment, like oh, yesterday, LOL!Happy writing!~
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Darn. If that won't work to distract you, what will?? ;)I have to tweak the last bit, but it shouldn't take too long. And you are quite insightful and generally right.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Darn. If that won't work to distract you, what will?? ;)I have to tweak the last bit, but it shouldn't take too long. And you are quite insightful and generally right.
yay...finally. lovely coupling. thanks so much
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Quite welcome. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Quite welcome. :)
Okay, now Hermione has the ability to find Sirius, too? And why is this a deadly spell?
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
The spell is deadly because it allows the caster(s) to change the intent of another person's magic. It doesn't give her the ability to find Sirius. It gave him the ability to change HER intent in that moment. If three other people got together and did the spell, they could direct it outward (instead of at each other) and subtly change a spell being cast or an ongoing spell - such as the protections on Hogwarts. That was what Sirius warned her about in the library, and the reason Severus wanted the spell destroyed.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
The spell is deadly because it allows the caster(s) to change the intent of another person's magic. It doesn't give her the ability to find Sirius. It gave him the ability to change HER intent in that moment. If three other people got together and did the spell, they could direct it outward (instead of at each other) and subtly change a spell being cast or an ongoing spell - such as the protections on Hogwarts. That was what Sirius warned her about in the library, and the reason Severus wanted the spell destroyed.
Nice chapter, although Severus having the ability to track Sirius gives me the shivers.Somehow I wonder if Sirius will be back for a daring Gryffindor moment...
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks! I think Sirius knew what he was about. I'm fairly sure Severus won't go after him unless it becomes absolutely necessary. I would imagine Sirius would do what he could in the war effort but I don't know that he'd show his face to do it at this point.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks! I think Sirius knew what he was about. I'm fairly sure Severus won't go after him unless it becomes absolutely necessary. I would imagine Sirius would do what he could in the war effort but I don't know that he'd show his face to do it at this point.
You are such a talented storyteller!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you very much! That means so much to me.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you very much! That means so much to me.
This is a very powerful chapter. I wish Sirius wasn't gone. Brilliant as always.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! He had to go away, for so many reasons. With any luck, he'll find a way to be happy. And, knowing him, he'll find his way back eventually.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! He had to go away, for so many reasons. With any luck, he'll find a way to be happy. And, knowing him, he'll find his way back eventually.
wow...that left me breathless. i am all agog to see where this is going. thanks so much.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks! I hope you are breathing normally again - though I won't promise that will continue when the next one posts... It's in the queue.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thanks! I hope you are breathing normally again - though I won't promise that will continue when the next one posts... It's in the queue.
Oh that was just stunning. I really enjoyed every moment. There was something subtle and gentle about the whole thing and just made it lovely to read. I like that Severus and Sirius made a certain peace with each other, and I love the interactions between all three of them. What a lovely read. :) Thank you for sharing it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you so much! I am glad you're enjoying it. I tried to keep them true to character, with all the complexities that would entail. I'm pleased it works for you. :)There's a bit more to come, so stay tuned!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you so much! I am glad you're enjoying it. I tried to keep them true to character, with all the complexities that would entail. I'm pleased it works for you. :)There's a bit more to come, so stay tuned!
So, the spell is complete and our divine Puck is loosed upon the world, free to make benevolent mischief with Snape as his fail-safe.Sirius has held Severus to his word and guaranteed that he will be able to locate him if needed, to stop him if necessary, by taking over and turning the one component of the spell that would have allowed Hermione to recognise and know where he was at any time. This was his gift to her and Severus - removing the burden of knowledge from her and providing Severus a clear opportunity to have Hermione to himself. Poor Hermione is not happy with being the recipient of Sirius' gift from the look of things.And to complicate matters, she insists on walking where angels fear to tread by pushing Severus with that question, possibly jeopardising their budding relationship.Mercy! Just a little bit, indeed...I have absolutely enjoyed the interaction of these three. I'd have never thought to put them together because any combination of these canon characters is a bit volatile if they are kept in character.You have managed this task masterfully, dear author. This story is a treat. I look forward to the next update. Until then, happy writing!~
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Wow. Thank you! Yes, to eveyrthing you said about what happened. I will refer any questions about this chapter to your review! LOL. I am glad you are enjoying the story. It was difficult to find a way to keep Sirius and Severus close enough to do what needed to be done yet far enough apart to not kill each other. Obviously, Hermione is the catalyst for their ability to be civil with one another, if barely.Stay tuned for the aftermath. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Wow. Thank you! Yes, to eveyrthing you said about what happened. I will refer any questions about this chapter to your review! LOL. I am glad you are enjoying the story. It was difficult to find a way to keep Sirius and Severus close enough to do what needed to be done yet far enough apart to not kill each other. Obviously, Hermione is the catalyst for their ability to be civil with one another, if barely.Stay tuned for the aftermath. ;)
Powerful stuff. And even though he answered her question honestly, he did it in a way that if taken out of context it would not seem to be a lie or truth.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! Snape is very good at telling the truth and revealing nothing, a skill Hermione might find useful, all things considered.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Thank you! Snape is very good at telling the truth and revealing nothing, a skill Hermione might find useful, all things considered.
Great story, although I'm no longer sure what is happening.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
A common thread, for which I apologize. I've edited the chapter in hopes of making it clearer. At the end of the spell, Sirius' magic was hidden from everyone, including Hermione, and Snape had the ability to find Sirius wherever he might be.
Response from makaem (Reviewer)
I should have clarified, I need to go back and reread the story. A couple of months ago, I decided I wouldn't start any new stories until the other ones I was reading wrapped up-- that lasted about 48 hours. But it means I sometimes don't give stories the full attention they deserve. Some stories are less predictable than others and require a more active role on the part of the reader, this is one of those stories. Plus, I don't mind being confused, it increases my enjoyment for the moment things all come together.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
A common thread, for which I apologize. I've edited the chapter in hopes of making it clearer. At the end of the spell, Sirius' magic was hidden from everyone, including Hermione, and Snape had the ability to find Sirius wherever he might be.
Response from makaem (Reviewer)
I should have clarified, I need to go back and reread the story. A couple of months ago, I decided I wouldn't start any new stories until the other ones I was reading wrapped up-- that lasted about 48 hours. But it means I sometimes don't give stories the full attention they deserve. Some stories are less predictable than others and require a more active role on the part of the reader, this is one of those stories. Plus, I don't mind being confused, it increases my enjoyment for the moment things all come together.
You're way above my head, girl. But I trust that I will get it eventually!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
You weren't alone! I apparently failed to explain it well enough throughout the story. I've gone back and edited the explanations for the individual spells, which I hope will help. Basically, Snape hid Sirius' magic and Sirius counteracted Hermione's spell to locate him, giving that ability to Snape instead.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
You weren't alone! I apparently failed to explain it well enough throughout the story. I've gone back and edited the explanations for the individual spells, which I hope will help. Basically, Snape hid Sirius' magic and Sirius counteracted Hermione's spell to locate him, giving that ability to Snape instead.
I may have to re-read this, but I must admit that I don't really understand what they did.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I have added the explanations in text. They did what they all had promised. Snape hid Sirius' magic. Hermione tried to ensure she could find Sirius, and Sirius perverted that intention and gave the ability to Snape instead. I hope that helps!
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
I have added the explanations in text. They did what they all had promised. Snape hid Sirius' magic. Hermione tried to ensure she could find Sirius, and Sirius perverted that intention and gave the ability to Snape instead. I hope that helps!
I don't get it. The online translator I used for the spells said: Fieri One for Hermione's (is that even in English?), Hide Footsteps for Snape's spell, Place Eternal for Hermione's, Punish Objection for Sirius's and One Upon Trio for Hermione's. What happened there? I hope we will find out in chapters to come.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Make One. - the three part of the spell melded.Hide Traces - Snape cloaked Sirius' magic.Find Forever - Hermione's attempt to keep track of Sirius.Contradict - Sirius' removed Hermione's ability to find him.One into Three - to end the spell so the parts were separate.I went back and added the explanations, as it was apparently not as clear in print as it was in my head. Apologies for that.
Response from nata (Reviewer)
Thank you for that. Now it certainly makes sense.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Make One. - the three part of the spell melded.Hide Traces - Snape cloaked Sirius' magic.Find Forever - Hermione's attempt to keep track of Sirius.Contradict - Sirius' removed Hermione's ability to find him.One into Three - to end the spell so the parts were separate.I went back and added the explanations, as it was apparently not as clear in print as it was in my head. Apologies for that.
Response from nata (Reviewer)
Thank you for that. Now it certainly makes sense.
You will have to forgive me? Does Snape now have Sirrius' magic? or just the ability to track him?Nicely done. Nice twist on the question.
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Just the ability to track him. Forever. Just thinking about Severus with that sort of power makes me shiver.Thank you. I was going for a particularly Snape-ish answer and consulted with experts on the wording. If Snape was a Muggle, he'd make a good lawyer. Or a bad one, depending on your perspective. ;)
Response from Melenka (Author of Just a Little Bit)
Just the ability to track him. Forever. Just thinking about Severus with that sort of power makes me shiver.Thank you. I was going for a particularly Snape-ish answer and consulted with experts on the wording. If Snape was a Muggle, he'd make a good lawyer. Or a bad one, depending on your perspective. ;)