*phew* that was a relief. I'm so happy that everything is okay, and they are ready to make a go of the relationship. The reworking of the shrieking shack was beautifully done. And no cliff hanger! (Are you feeling unwell?)

What a nice chapter.  I'm so happy they finally found each other.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Ok, I love this so far , but you are definity reaching with the glasses bit. LOL whatever works.

Wow, what great story! Update soon, please!gab

Too bad that Hermione is not allowed to have any stenuous activities for two weeks. Otherwise, they could consummate their marriage. I guess they could anyway, but it would probably be disobeying the healer's orders. I am happy to learn that Severus's last thought was of Hermione. I like how you turned Severus's looking at Harry into him actually looking at Hermione.Hopefully their won't be anymore rough patches between Severus and Hermione other than the normal ones that occur between people. Both of them deserve a little happiness in life, especially Severus.

Awww! I love how he took charge and went to her like that. That's a real man! I love that stuff! So fluff all you want. I'm so glad Hermione didn't lose the baby!I'll tell you something, the night DH came out, I was at Barnes and Noble at midnight to get my copy. I was pregnant, seven to eight weeks. I stayed up all night reading the book. I started bleeding a little, but blew it off since I had an exam earlier that day. When I read that Snape died I was so upset and I started to bleed badly and before I knew it, it was over. The baby was gone. For three days I was devestated. I was so angry at JKR for killing off Snape and felt so numb about my miscarriage, I couldn't even cry. So I watched Truly, Madly, Deeply and then The Search for John Gissing so I could laugh my ass off and cry my eyes out. It was great.I think that's why I started up with fanfiction, because I hate the ending of DH with a passion! And I think Snape should come back in as many ways we can think of in our stories.You have been telling a very original tale and I am loving it. I can't wait to see how you are going to wrap it up! Great work!Livvy

Hi,I like this story very much and I await the next chapter as I have await the firsts. But there is just a little thing that I would like to help you correct... You see, my first language is french and so the title of your french book should be  "Livre de formules magiques et potions" The word "épelle" that you use is a verb that translate in english by "to spell (a word)" and not exactly the sense I think you had wanted to give it... So, I hope if it is possible you can correct it and to see soon an all new chapter!!

No!! If anything happens to the baby, everybody will have a guilt-feast : Hermione will feel guilty because it's her baby, Harry will feel guilty because he always does (see canon), Severus will feel guilty because he's just has a row with Hermione. Please, I really think the bleeding should be a false alert, just enough to make Hermione and Severus realise how much they mean to each other.Update soon please, I enjoy this story so much.

Dude! You can't do this to us!!! Nooo!!!!! Next chapter STAT!!!!!!!!! Please.

Ah! A reflection in his lenses. Clever, clever!!!

Arggghhh!  Just when it seems a simple matter of getting them in the same room together while they both admit how they feel, we get an evil cliffhanger to complicate matters further!Ah, but it is still effervescent and beautifully written!  "When it comes to women, Severus, you are a dunderhead."  He is indeed, but such an endearing dunderhead.  Marvelous!

I love it!!!!

"Choke on that!"--Love it!  Ya get the feeling Hermione is used to dealing with dense males?  Alright! Enough with the cliffies already!

Evil Clifhanger.  I love watching Severus get chewed out by his mom.  Classic.

it's not nice to fool with my story!  Leaving cliff hangers and making me wait.  I suppose I will just have to wait for you to post the next chapter.  still, not nice.  all kidding aside, very good! 

Oh no!  Love this story and would hate to see anything happen to the baby.  Can't wait to read a new chapter soon.

Oh poor Hermione - the trauma of getting upset seems to have been too much on her. I hope that she does not lose the baby and I hope Severus makes it right quick enough. Good chapter.

Very good chapter!  I loved how Severus's mom verbally slapped him around a bit, and the cliffie is hard to bear, but I'm looking forward to what happens next!

You'd better post again soon! Oh my goodness, please don't let Hermione lose the baby! “That is not love, Severus. That is obsession.”Right in one! That was the whole premise of my fic "Possession". I don't think Severus really loved Lily, but that he had her on a pedestal and made her the perfect woman that she never was or could live up to.VERY good chapter! I LOVE this fic!Livvy

Well, I'm glad that Severus is not disappointed about being married to Hermione. I wonder how he'll show her that he does love her and is not disappointed. At least Hermione has already suspected he must care for her a little if he was upset about her being married to someone else.I look forward to learning what has happened to the baby. At least with Severus alive they can have another one, depending on the circumstance of the problem. It seems like there must be a lot of blood, which would be a problem. If there had only been a little blood, Harry probably would not have heard about it.I'm not sure what to think of Severus's confession to his mother. He seemed a little too open with someone he hasn't seen in a long time and one he didn't know very well. Perhaps it's the stress and the need to tell someone about his feelings.

Dear god, what is with you and cliffhangers? I was all queued up for the heart-breaking confession Severus was making to his mother, and I practically have a heart attack picturing Harry bursting through the door, slamming it against the wall. Update soon!

It better be VERY SOON!  Update! Loved this chapter!

Ahahaha... I love that his mother assumed Hermione was his daughter. That is just the sort of reaction most would have, but it is so comical here.

His mother? What a twist! I love it.

Oh, shit. Sorry, only word i could think of right then. XDIf he was so bothered by the thought of her having his child, then Snape is going to be pissed when he finds out that she married him.