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Hermione is forced to lead a double life when she agrees to Dumbledore's plan to protect Professor Snape. Inspired by the Marriage Law. Warning for student/teacher relationship, though Hermione is of age.
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The nice thing about law and jury trials is if you can present a lesser penalty sometimes the jury will go for it. For example: If a person trained in self defense kills a robber you may be able to get man one instead of murder. The most disturbing thing about this chapter is Severus has no hope what so ever. Of course this fits in perfectly with his character but it is depressing none the less.The wild card as usual was Harry himself, both from his direct action (demanding a trial of his own) and the situation beyond his control (Dumbledore's admission that he was willing to sacrifice Harry). The fact that Dumbledore was willing to sacrifice Harry would not sit well on the public. By contrast Harry's impromptu defense of Severus can only help him as public opinion of Harry is quite high. Harry's defense of Severus may have saved his life in my humble opinion. Kingsley's about face in competence was a interesting contrast in the trial. Lawyers who master showmanship make great trial attorneys, and let's face it cases aren't always won on law alone.The long wait for the verdict will be difficult for both of them.After my longer than usual ramblings I must admit that this chapter held my interest and was quite enjoyable for me. You may feel that you 'slaughtered' the law but the trial seems quite true to life.
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Sinbad, thank you. I'm glad that it gripped you, as I worried a lot about having to write scenes that were mostly retelling. I agree with you about Harry--and much as I hate it, I think that Dumbledore volunteering exactly what he had done, as you say, made a big difference. Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review.
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Sinbad, thank you. I'm glad that it gripped you, as I worried a lot about having to write scenes that were mostly retelling. I agree with you about Harry--and much as I hate it, I think that Dumbledore volunteering exactly what he had done, as you say, made a big difference. Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review.
BRILLANT what more can I say. YOU expained DH T so I can understand. Many thanks
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Thank you, Mummy. xoxoxoxo
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Thank you, Mummy. xoxoxoxo
I loved how Harry added his commit to the trail that he wanted to schedule is trail now because he used all three curses. Brilliant!!! As all ways.You have gotten very good at creating the most horrible, mean, and completely frustrating characters around. Ogden is a terrific example. You are truly talented!Can not wait for more.
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Ogden is rather dreadful, I agree. I'm sorry! :)I'm glad you liked Harry's big moment. Thank you!ps. I love that little emoticon.
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Ogden is rather dreadful, I agree. I'm sorry! :)I'm glad you liked Harry's big moment. Thank you!ps. I love that little emoticon.
I can not tell you how happy I am that you have written this story. It's so honest, well-written, and it just makes sense. It fits DH so well and just makes sense!!! If I was in love with Severus Snape before I read this story, it is nothing like what I feel for him now. Brilliant. Yes, I agree, Dumbledork did screw him quite thoroughly. I am anxious for the trial to be over so Hermione can screw him thoroughly. :P
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Bwahahahah! You have just given me a big smile. And don't tell my husband, but writing this story, I fell rather terribly in love with Snape myself. The sulky bastard.Thank you so much,
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! I'm so, so happy that you are enjoying it.
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Bwahahahah! You have just given me a big smile. And don't tell my husband, but writing this story, I fell rather terribly in love with Snape myself. The sulky bastard.Thank you so much,
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! I'm so, so happy that you are enjoying it.
Well, I truly hope you plan to let him off. He needs that. And Dumbledore's portrait should be set on fire.
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I agree wholeheartedly. Thank you so much for reviewing!
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I agree wholeheartedly. Thank you so much for reviewing!
You spelled the sequence of events out with such clarity. I never quite understood the Elder Wand mess, and I'm not sure where canon ends and Second Life begins, and what's more. I don't care. This is the way it should have been!
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Thank you, Mia! The Elder Wand stuff makes me want to beat myself over the head with a pot like Dobby or something. It's just so confusing and horrible to work with. I'm so glad you liked it, though! Thank you!
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Thank you, Mia! The Elder Wand stuff makes me want to beat myself over the head with a pot like Dobby or something. It's just so confusing and horrible to work with. I'm so glad you liked it, though! Thank you!
Wow. *sniffles* I'm just hoping that justice prevails despite the law. I was Legal Officer in my Navy unit at one time, and had occasion to tell someone, "I'm in charge of what's legal, not what's right." Maybe the reverse can play out here!
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Oh, dear! Yes, I was very sad when I learned that the law doesn't allow for doing the right thing here. But I believe that Kingsley has been deft in the way he handled the end of the trial, and I have hope.Thank you so much for reviewing!
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Oh, dear! Yes, I was very sad when I learned that the law doesn't allow for doing the right thing here. But I believe that Kingsley has been deft in the way he handled the end of the trial, and I have hope.Thank you so much for reviewing!
“July the twentieth, nineteen hundred and ninety-eight. The Ministry of Magic vs. Severus Snape.".."We will reconvene on the first of August, nineteen ninety-eight to hear the verdict." This will be twelve days of pure and unrelenting hell for Hermione and Severus. How will they cope from day to day? It is possible to drown in a tea cup, and I hope our lovers will be able to withstand the rising tide of emotional waters that will inevitably collect, drop by painful drop, in this their tea cup with each passing day.Kingsley's masterful questioning of Narcissa Malfoy established that her only intent was to help her son, having nothing to do with what would be in the best interests of either Severus or Dumbledore. By her own words, she demonstrated that Severus took the the Unbreakable Vow. She did not state that she believed Severus agreed with her assumptions.This was critically important, for in Kingsley's following interrogation of Severus, the wizard-on-trial was able to state that he did not make a vow to Narcissa to kill Albus Dumbledore. “I beg to differ,” Snape said smoothly. “Narcissa Malfoy testified that I made a vow to help her son, to protect him, and to take on his task if it seemed he would fail.”“His task was to kill the Headmaster,” Kingsley said, undeterred.“Indeed,” Snape said. “However, having already made a vow to Dumbledore that I would kill him, the vow to Narcissa seemed relatively innocuous.”A few minutes later Dumbledore confirmed to the court that he himself had insisted to Severus that he kill him. Through the further testimony of Draco, Albus, Ollivander, Harry and Minerva, the members of the Wizengamot learned of the scenario that Dumbledore had planned, how his plan had gone awry, and how Severus was able to snatch victory from the jaws of defeat by manipulating the goings on at Malfoy Manor so that Harry gained mastery of the Elder Wand.Minerva's testimony was especially riveting. “You do not ask a man to go through what Severus must have gone through--you do not make him an outlaw and a pariah among his friends and force him to… I’m sorry,” Minerva said, pausing to blot her eyes with her handkerchief. “You cannot ask him to do those things and then send him mercilessly to his death without even telling him. It is not… It is not decent.”*****The scene of Hermione and Severus back at Spinner's End was so bittersweet. Severus wanted to make certain that Hermione understood without any doubts that the sentence the Wizengamot would impose on him would not be due to any shortcomings on her part.When she assured him that she would not give up, that she would do whatever she had to in appeals, and that they would just "get on with it,” his response put his perspective of his life in the clearest terms possible, “I do not know how to get on with it,” he said so softly that she strained to make out the words. “I have spent my entire life in Voldemort’s shadow.”How could one man endure so much for so long and not succumb to the sadness of it all? In his declaration about his life he showed both the weariness of the man and the indomitable spirit within the wizard.I have to maintain hope.WONDERFUL WRITING!!! I wish the scale went to a thousand, for I would certainly award that many stars!Beth
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Oh, Beth. Thank you. You've picked my very favorite lines to comment on, which always feels so good. *Does a little dance*I think that Snape's weariness, his... not inability, I don't mean to sound as if I find him unimaginative.... but, I think he's trained himself so carefully not to consider his own needs, not to consider the future... so I think he is having trouble finding hope, imagining what life might be like on the other side. And I think that idea got lost somewhere along the way--overshadowed by the things Snape says he feels... which is not always what he really does feel, I think. And so I'm incredibly happy that you feel it's coming through again now. Thank you so much, Beth.
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Oh, Beth. Thank you. You've picked my very favorite lines to comment on, which always feels so good. *Does a little dance*I think that Snape's weariness, his... not inability, I don't mean to sound as if I find him unimaginative.... but, I think he's trained himself so carefully not to consider his own needs, not to consider the future... so I think he is having trouble finding hope, imagining what life might be like on the other side. And I think that idea got lost somewhere along the way--overshadowed by the things Snape says he feels... which is not always what he really does feel, I think. And so I'm incredibly happy that you feel it's coming through again now. Thank you so much, Beth.
And once again, you leave me breathless!Magnificently done!
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :) xoxox
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :) xoxox
Oh my, no words can describe what I'm feeling about your writing, Lariope.Its great great great great great.Fantastic chapter!!!!!!!!!
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*hugs
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and swings her around in a circle* Thank you! :)
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*hugs
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and swings her around in a circle* Thank you! :)
Can he be guilty, but with mitigating circumstances? I'll be interested to see how you handle this. You've already taken the idea of the trial in a new direction, or one I've not seen before. I really like how you recognize that there's no legal justification for anything Snape did, as much as there might be moral justification or simply "for the greater good." Lots of authors skim past that in their hurry to justify theor favorite character. I still don't think the outcome is in much doubt, but you've gone a lot closer to showing how it might be.Missing word here, I think, though: “I was informed by colleague, Minerva McGonagall.” Shouldn't it be "by my colleague"?Well done, as always.
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Thank you, Hobgoblinn! I hate typos. They drive me bats. I think that the only hope in a true trial for Snape would be mitigating circumstances and a reduction of the charge from murder to manslaughter or some such. Jury Nullification, I believe, is the only true hope for a not-guilty verdict. But that's all I'm going to say for now, because I don't want to spoil. ;)
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Thank you, Hobgoblinn! I hate typos. They drive me bats. I think that the only hope in a true trial for Snape would be mitigating circumstances and a reduction of the charge from murder to manslaughter or some such. Jury Nullification, I believe, is the only true hope for a not-guilty verdict. But that's all I'm going to say for now, because I don't want to spoil. ;)
The entire trial section of this fic is so brilliantly written and thought out, I'm beyond words to praise it. An outstanding chapter in an incredible story. Every single character was perfectly written; Minerva's testimony had me in tears. Your Severus continues to break my heart. Beautiful as always - thank you sincerely for this story.
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Veronica, thank you for this review. Truly, there's no greater happiness for me than that you are enjoying the story. I'm so glad you liked Minerva here. I cried as I wrote her. She's such a tough and brilliant ally. Thank you so much.
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Veronica, thank you for this review. Truly, there's no greater happiness for me than that you are enjoying the story. I'm so glad you liked Minerva here. I cried as I wrote her. She's such a tough and brilliant ally. Thank you so much.
Dumbledore is a complete and utter bastard! You'd think he would have kept something to help Severus... completely and utterly hidden unless it was needed. Something that would help him... though I guess, the very fact that he killed Dumbledore screwed him with or without evidence.*sighs*I look forward to your next chapter, and I hope that Severus is released! Hmmm, I keep waiting for Ogden to pull out his wand or something and try and kill Severus....but I guess I'm just going to have to sit here and wait it out to see what you do with the idiots who are against Severus!Update again soon, please!
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I completely agree. In fact, today someone asked me what brought on SL and it was totally that--I was horrified at the end of DH that there was no plan in place for Snape. Furious and horrified.More very soon! Thank you for reviewing!
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I completely agree. In fact, today someone asked me what brought on SL and it was totally that--I was horrified at the end of DH that there was no plan in place for Snape. Furious and horrified.More very soon! Thank you for reviewing!
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I could not more accurately sum things up than Aeron already did -- and I see that you've responded and we both agree. What a lovely, perfect review.
The very beginning -- I imagined that every time Minerva put her hand on Hermione, meaning to comfort or to "buck her up," I saw Hermione jumping. After the fifth time, I would think that Hermione would be like, okay, don't touch me, LOL
"I will do the noting. Thank you." First, hysterical. Second, I had instantaneously realized in the previous line, where Snape says, "and let it be noted," that my boy was back! That's right. He was coming out of his self-imposed prison of depression and self-loathing, and he was... Snape. For me, that remark by Snape was "the moment," in this chapter. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!
"It's not decent." I know I won't be the first or last to say, yes. And it brought tears to my eyes.
Kingsley, "...some ancient warrior king." Hell yes. Oh hell yes. God, I love Kingsley. Thank you, thank you, thank you -- this time, for giving us back "our" Kingsley, powerful sex god in the Coat of Many Colors. (cue Dolly Parton)
That is all. Wait. Where was the twincest? Dude...
Signed,
Worst Reviewer Ever, Le Vamp
Author's Response: Damn, I forgot the twincest!
I knew I'd left out something.
I'm glad you see Snape coming back, here. I've enjoyed the return of the snark just as much as you, I think.
And it wasn't decent. And I think I may have just written 225,000 words to say just that. Whoops.
Thank you, Lulabelle.
Thank you once more for a wonderful chapter full of suspense (I felt like watching a Hollywood movie). In case it helps you for the future: did you ever hear of the term "homicide on request"? This is usually what they plead when people with a terminal illness ask others to kill them because they can't stand the suffering any more.
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Hi
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! Yes, I wondered if there would be a way to use assisted suicide or "homicide upon request," as a defense, but it still seems to be a sort of "reduced charge" rather than an all out defense. But I thank you very, very much for thinking in practical terms about Snape's trial. It's hard, I think, when we all want so badly for the Wizengamot to see what we see so clearly.Thank you very much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.
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Hi
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! Yes, I wondered if there would be a way to use assisted suicide or "homicide upon request," as a defense, but it still seems to be a sort of "reduced charge" rather than an all out defense. But I thank you very, very much for thinking in practical terms about Snape's trial. It's hard, I think, when we all want so badly for the Wizengamot to see what we see so clearly.Thank you very much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for the update! The trial were brilliantly written! I am proud of Minerva and Harry, I hope te Wizengomot get the rigth decission, it is about time some justice are served for Severus!!!! (I am trilled that people now got to see just how manipulative and cruel Dumbledore could be)
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! I'm really glad you liked it. I was so proud of Minerva and Harry, too! I know that my opinion of Harry is unpopular, but I do find him honorable in his hotheaded way, and of course Minerva is the soul of decency. Thank you so much for reviewing, my dear!
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! I'm really glad you liked it. I was so proud of Minerva and Harry, too! I know that my opinion of Harry is unpopular, but I do find him honorable in his hotheaded way, and of course Minerva is the soul of decency. Thank you so much for reviewing, my dear!
Okay darling,I'm pretty confident you know how I feel about this chapter!!! ;)I think the entire trial was amazingly written. And thank you for Kingsley...xoxomoi
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Thank you,
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.And I have come to agree with you about Kingsley. I realized today as I wrote reviews that somethings aren't meant to be relived in fanfiction, and that sometimes our best impulses are the right ones--something you remind me of all the time.All my love.
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Thank you,
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.And I have come to agree with you about Kingsley. I realized today as I wrote reviews that somethings aren't meant to be relived in fanfiction, and that sometimes our best impulses are the right ones--something you remind me of all the time.All my love.
I remember the first time I worked through all of Dumbledore's convoluted plans and realised that had everything gone as he'd planned it, Harry would have been manipulated into killing Snape. I was grabbed by a fury so intense... I can truly relate to your McGonagall here!Severus, as written in canon, may be indefensible by common law, but in my opinion, Wizarding society owes him a Life Debt and the only way they can repay it fairly is to grant him life and freedom in return. Society, as a whole, sat back twice and let children conduct their battles for them. Those children's actions were molded, manipulated, and orchestrated by Dumbledore. Severus was one of those children in the First War and the keystone to Dumbledore's strategy in the Second.I feel that one of the main reasons Snape had to die in the series is due to the fact that JKR would have been forced to expose in clear prose, just what Dumbledore really was. She liked this character immensely and refused to have children dislike him in order to redeem Severus Snape - a character that she publicly denounces. To put Severus Snape on trial is to put Albus Dumbledore on trial, and that is something that she won't do.Because you are a much braver author and actually like Snape, you took a fabulous stab at the quandary and have made a convincing argument. Hopefully, your version of the Wizengamut agrees.
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I wish I could give you a direct connection to my brain right now so you could see the absolute joy this review has brought me. Thank you, Aeron. You've sliced cleanly (more cleanly than I could) through the knot of canon and revealed the truth--to try Snape is to try Dumbledore. There's been a kind of sub-theme throughout the trial, and I guess throughout canon too, of whether the means justify the ends, for Snape, and I wonder if we think it does, if that means they did for Dumbledore, too?Thank you for your review. It really made my day.
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I wish I could give you a direct connection to my brain right now so you could see the absolute joy this review has brought me. Thank you, Aeron. You've sliced cleanly (more cleanly than I could) through the knot of canon and revealed the truth--to try Snape is to try Dumbledore. There's been a kind of sub-theme throughout the trial, and I guess throughout canon too, of whether the means justify the ends, for Snape, and I wonder if we think it does, if that means they did for Dumbledore, too?Thank you for your review. It really made my day.
I knew Kingsley was playing dumb. You've certainly donr your homework here though. I know very lttle about the law, so it all seems fine to me. I always like to think that the spirit of the law is more important than the letter of the law, but I'm a hopeless idealist like that. Awesome chapter. can't wait for more. :D
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I agree that the spirit of the law should be what matters, of course, and I too am a hopeless (or hopeful!) idealist. I'm glad the trial makes sense to you. That makes me very happy.Thank you so much! More as quickly as I can get it right! xoxox
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I agree that the spirit of the law should be what matters, of course, and I too am a hopeless (or hopeful!) idealist. I'm glad the trial makes sense to you. That makes me very happy.Thank you so much! More as quickly as I can get it right! xoxox
What a wonderful chapter:) About time Kingsley showed his true colors. And I am so glad that Severus is accepting Hermione's presence, and, though he would probably rather be shot than admit, he IS taking comfort from having her there. I can feel the peace between them, which is a very good thing.This story is magnificent:) I can't wait till you post the next chapter:){{hugs}}Fizzabella
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I'm so glad you liked it, Fizzabella! And I think Hermione has learned to read him well enough to know, now, what he feels even when he won't admit it. :) I'm delighted beyond words that you felt peace between them. More soon!*very tight hugs*
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I'm so glad you liked it, Fizzabella! And I think Hermione has learned to read him well enough to know, now, what he feels even when he won't admit it. :) I'm delighted beyond words that you felt peace between them. More soon!*very tight hugs*
Another riveting chapter. I am really looking forward to the next. I have become a huge fan of yours!!~*potterbra*~
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Thank you so much, Potterbrat! I really appreciate that! :)
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Thank you so much, Potterbrat! I really appreciate that! :)
Well done, Lariope. Kingsley did very well. Minerva's testimony was very heartfelt and summed up how unfair the horrible path Dumbledore set Severus on was. Curse Dumbledore, he really did screw Severus so thouroughly. The end of this chapter, back at Spinner's End, was the best. Severus is still lost, unsure. But Hermione is stronger than ever, showing how much they need each other now. I love this chapter.
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Thank you,
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! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And curse Dumbledore, indeed! I know that it probably won't change the wizarding world's opinion of Dumbledore too much, but I hope the people in the courtroom felt it. Severus cannot dare to hope, I don't think. What he knows is how to plan for the worst, how to avert disaster. I don't think he's had much practice in anything else. Thank you!
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Thank you,
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! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And curse Dumbledore, indeed! I know that it probably won't change the wizarding world's opinion of Dumbledore too much, but I hope the people in the courtroom felt it. Severus cannot dare to hope, I don't think. What he knows is how to plan for the worst, how to avert disaster. I don't think he's had much practice in anything else. Thank you!
How come you thought that through more thoroughly than the famous Ms Rowling herself? I think I said it before, but you managed to make things clear to me, something that didn't happen whilst I read book 7.Hugs, as usual, from Germany.
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Hugs from America, right back at you! :)I don't pretend that I thought through it anymore clearly than JKR, who created a world and characters that stand up remarkably well. She was just unwilling, I think, to validate Snape at the expense of Dumbledore. Maybe it comes down to who you love more--or maybe, as readers have such incredibly different reactions to Dumbledore in these chapters--maybe it has to do with the choice that an individual would make--would you rather save the world, or the person you love, who is your world, maybe. I don't know. Rambling again, as usual! Thank you for reviewing, my friend!
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I totally agree with you, dear, but that's not what I meant. When I read book 7 I couldn't grasp what she wanted to tell - where the flaw in the plan was - and I doubted then and still do now that her explanation for everything (Elder Wand/Draco/Ownership/Snape/Snape's death) totally fits. It seems all a bit hurried, and that has nothing to do with the fact that I like Snape. I am a big fan of old Dumbly and cried bitterly when she killed him. She is remarkable, and her world is a masterpiece. Still, I prefer your explanation simply because it makes more sense ;-)Ramble as much as you like. I am always here to answer *g*
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Hugs from America, right back at you! :)I don't pretend that I thought through it anymore clearly than JKR, who created a world and characters that stand up remarkably well. She was just unwilling, I think, to validate Snape at the expense of Dumbledore. Maybe it comes down to who you love more--or maybe, as readers have such incredibly different reactions to Dumbledore in these chapters--maybe it has to do with the choice that an individual would make--would you rather save the world, or the person you love, who is your world, maybe. I don't know. Rambling again, as usual! Thank you for reviewing, my friend!
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I totally agree with you, dear, but that's not what I meant. When I read book 7 I couldn't grasp what she wanted to tell - where the flaw in the plan was - and I doubted then and still do now that her explanation for everything (Elder Wand/Draco/Ownership/Snape/Snape's death) totally fits. It seems all a bit hurried, and that has nothing to do with the fact that I like Snape. I am a big fan of old Dumbly and cried bitterly when she killed him. She is remarkable, and her world is a masterpiece. Still, I prefer your explanation simply because it makes more sense ;-)Ramble as much as you like. I am always here to answer *g*
“You do not ask a man to go through what Severus must have gone through--you do not make him an outlaw and a pariah among his friends and force him to… I’m sorry,” Minerva said, pausing to blot her eyes with her handkerchief. “You cannot ask him to do those things and then send him mercilessly to his death without even telling him. It is not… It is not decent.”Bravo! This is a perfect summation of the morality that was, unfortunately missing from JKR's conclusion. The simplistic and ambiguous themes she ended up with irritated me quite a lot! (And her treatment of Snape was not the only example of this.) I am glad that you have brought forth the complex dimensions of morality and humanity that such an involved story deserves. It just goes to show that the length of a work is not necessarily a gauge of its depth.
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Thank you,
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! Those lines were so important to me, and I'm so glad that you liked them. It's hard for me to process the end of DH, to figure out exactly what JKR was trying to say, what the moral of her tale was, so to speak. She did such an amazing job raising so many different themes over the course of such a long work, and then, I think, things got very simple at the end, which was confusing. Really, I've chosen only one of the major themes--I can't be too hard on her. But thank you so, so much for such a lovely review. xoxox
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Thank you,
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! Those lines were so important to me, and I'm so glad that you liked them. It's hard for me to process the end of DH, to figure out exactly what JKR was trying to say, what the moral of her tale was, so to speak. She did such an amazing job raising so many different themes over the course of such a long work, and then, I think, things got very simple at the end, which was confusing. Really, I've chosen only one of the major themes--I can't be too hard on her. But thank you so, so much for such a lovely review. xoxox
*wow*I know this is a SS/HG paring but I was most struck by your depiction of Albus, Minerva and Kingsley in this stupendous update.It seems that since book seven came out Dumbledore has been one of the most distained characters because of his manipulation of Harry, Severus and everyone else in the series. Yet with two lines you have managed to restore him to his place of honor in my mind.
"Forgive me Harry," and "But Harry Potter is but one man. The war endangerd all of wizarding society as we know it. Surely you can see how vital it was that Voldemort not come into possession of an unbeatable wand."It takes someone who is strong enough in their convictions to be willing to make some unhappy choices. I don't think he ever treated Harry and Snape's circumstances casually.Minerva, not only did you keep her dignified and intelligent but allowed her to show remorse and her true feeling toward Snape. I laughed at the line "We head rival houses. Our relationship has necessarily been one of competion. And, yet I like to think we have found enjoyment in our rspective roles." She just can't bring herself to admit that she likes him, I'm sure Severus is appreciative of her discretion. I firmly believe that we all have roles to fulfill in the grand scheme of life and it looks like your Kingsley will replace Dumbledore. Talk about a master of manipulation, your characterization has given him all the authority and power added with a hefty dose of misdirection.
Last but not least your imagery as always lets this story come alive. Kingsley standing in front of the Wizengmont in his multicolored robes like some ancient warrior king, Minerva's posture stiff, and her bun so severe that is seemed to be holding her face in a permanent expression of extream displeasure. Narcissia entering the courtroom as if escorted on the arms of her admires rather than Aurors, and finally Severus kneeling in repose at the fire looking very much like a muggle. What more can I say then well done as always Lariope.
Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)
Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)
, I can hardly respond to this because it makes my heart so full. It thrills me beyond believe that you see Dumbledore as vindicated here--that his choices were justified in some way. I have such a hard time with Dumbledore. I know what he did and I think I know why, and yet, I can't stop being angry. I feel, as Minerva said, that it just wasn't decent. But as you say, maybe decency wasn't the point. Dumbledore says in chapter 33 I believe that he had to do what he did because someone had to. I respect that, but I admit that I don't like it. Not at all. But I'm happy that both things are coming through. And I'm happy that you liked the imagery. The Snape at the end is my favorite--it gives me great hope, and I'm glad you liked it too.Thank you so, so much,
Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)
. You've made my day.
Response from Isode (Reviewer)
I understand it is hard to see how Dumbledore was justified. I graduated with a degree in political science and have worked with local politicians, and while I am no expert seeing politics in action gives you a whole new awareness of what our leaders local or national go through. Often working for the public is a balancing act, trying to meet individual needs with the greater good in the long run, and more often than not these come into conflict. To put it simply I quote Spock from the Star Trek movie "The needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few." This is often the case and to be the one who has to look at all the angles and make the decision to deny a petition or do something as drastic as send soldiers to war is not as easily done as most people think. It is usually done with much forethought and a heavy heart. Of course this only applies to the "good guys." Thank you for such a wonderful story it's been the highlight of my ff reading.
Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)
Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)
, I can hardly respond to this because it makes my heart so full. It thrills me beyond believe that you see Dumbledore as vindicated here--that his choices were justified in some way. I have such a hard time with Dumbledore. I know what he did and I think I know why, and yet, I can't stop being angry. I feel, as Minerva said, that it just wasn't decent. But as you say, maybe decency wasn't the point. Dumbledore says in chapter 33 I believe that he had to do what he did because someone had to. I respect that, but I admit that I don't like it. Not at all. But I'm happy that both things are coming through. And I'm happy that you liked the imagery. The Snape at the end is my favorite--it gives me great hope, and I'm glad you liked it too.Thank you so, so much,
Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)
. You've made my day.
Response from Isode (Reviewer)
I understand it is hard to see how Dumbledore was justified. I graduated with a degree in political science and have worked with local politicians, and while I am no expert seeing politics in action gives you a whole new awareness of what our leaders local or national go through. Often working for the public is a balancing act, trying to meet individual needs with the greater good in the long run, and more often than not these come into conflict. To put it simply I quote Spock from the Star Trek movie "The needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few." This is often the case and to be the one who has to look at all the angles and make the decision to deny a petition or do something as drastic as send soldiers to war is not as easily done as most people think. It is usually done with much forethought and a heavy heart. Of course this only applies to the "good guys." Thank you for such a wonderful story it's been the highlight of my ff reading.