Chapter Seven
Chapter 7 of 36
sweetflagWe learn a little more about the little, lost witch, and Moody's zeal rekindles while Dumbledore feels increasingly uncomfortable as the search continues.
ReviewedChapter Seven.
A fine drizzle bullied by a strong wind speckled his spectacles with distorting moisture and stung the exposed skin on his cheek and forehead. His beard glistened with ensnared droplets. He flicked up the collar on his raincoat, pulled down the brim of his fedora, and glanced along the street for his rendezvous...a glass fronted building with Milly's Café glued on the window in peeling letters. He had agreed to meet Moody there, a greasy spoon in a neglected part of Whitehaven. Wind-tossed plastic bags twirled and skittered down the pavement while sodden newspapers floundered weakly in the flooded gutter. A stray dog snatched a morsel of soggy food from a few fat pigeons, and starlings chattered shrilly as they pecked at some spilt chips littering the pavement.
Most of the buildings were industrial and derelict with smashed out windows and boarded up doorways, surrounded by twisted and rusted fences. Milly's Café and the newsagents next to it with their peeling paint and dull security glass seemed to be the only buildings in use. Here was a part of the city dying slowly, the industry already dead and the dilapidated housing erected during its heyday choking as vitality was drawn into the sleeker and healthier parts of the city. This place was home for those too weak, too poor or too stubborn to leave, the opportunistic scavenger and the ever-vigilant carrion eater. The place made him uncomfortable; so different from his school, which bustled and throbbed with frenetic and palpable energy, this was a place to die.
Milly's Café, however, lifted his spirits and shattered his vision of a depressed suburb in its dying throes. The smell of bacon and fresh coffee hit his nose, ridding him of the stench of urine-soaked doorways, and each surface glistened with a fastidious cleanliness to sting his eyes after the washed-out greys and browns of the outside. He quickly removed his hat and flashed a smile at the wizened and apron-clad lady behind the counter. He glanced around the long, rectangular room and saw a familiar grizzled face in the far corner watching him with a piercing blue eye and a ragged fringe of grey hair covering a black eye-patch.
Moody fidgeted and held a menu with the resolve and fervour a knight would employ to clutch his shield. Dumbledore made his way past the sparkling chairs, the pristine tables and the young mother feeding a baby in a high chair, who was too busy trying to grab the spoon to eat. Past an elderly woman in a tweed coat and paisley headscarf, sipping tea whilst holding her handbag on her lap and staring into times gone by. A young toddler watched his progress from the opposite side of the long room, but his awed study was interrupted by his mother's assurances that staring was impolite, whether it was at Gandalf or not. He smiled and winked over at the little boy with butter and toast crumbs clinging to his chin and cheek and gave his blushing mother a respectful and appreciative nod.
"Thank Merlin you're here," whispered Moody. "I almost had to order somethin'."
Dumbledore chuckled and plucked the torturous list of foods and drinks from his friend's fingers. "I think that the very worst thing that could happen here is a bout of indigestion from overindulgence." He subjected the menu to a thorough perusal until a shadow fell across the table and a young woman with short black hair and a collection of rings along the shell of her ear politely asked them if they were ready to order. Dumbledore smiled and ordered a pot of tea for two and a teacake.
A radio played somewhere just out of view, and faint strains of gentle music could be heard above the clatter of cutlery, the chink of crockery and the merry gurgles of children. Dumbledore relaxed into the sounds and thanked the waitress as she placed his order on the table. Once she had returned to the counter, Moody lifted a portfolio file from beneath the table and slid it across to him, and some of his tension returned; not the kind that had weighted him down, but the thrilling sensation one has before embarking on a challenge.
"Your friend discovered all this in a few weeks?"
"I'll say one thing for the Muggles; they know how to keep track of people."
"Remarkable." Dumbledore opened up the file and quickly scanned the first page. "I see that she was given the name Veronica Speedwell, approximate age as sixteen, height, weight, et cetera. Her details were put onto the missing persons database, but it yielded nothing."
"Hardly surprisin'," Moody mumbled tetchily. "No one actually knew her, and all those who did thought she was dead." His friend, armed with significant resources, had worked wonders on the computer, pulling up information about her employment history, her places of residence and the benefits she had claimed since coming of age in the Muggle world. By a few days later, every scrap of information held on a computer and attached to a phone line had been siphoned and printed off: medical history, police records and her file with the social services. On a collection of pages, he had the map of her life.
Dumbledore traced a finger down a list of addresses and frowned. "She didn't seem to settle well."
"I think," Moody responded neutrally, "that she didn't have any choice in that. It appears that several neighbours made complaints about her, and those responsible for her housing moved her to other areas."
"She was a troublemaker?"
"No." Moody shook his head and sighed softly. "Accordin' to the Housin' Offices, she was a model tenant. It seems that when her neighbours discovered that she had spent some time in a mental hospital, they panicked and reported her over the smallest infraction."
Due to her constant relocation, her employment record was just as erratic and consisted mainly of light industrial work and waiting tables. He remembered her Head of House extolling her intellect, and although the Muggle examinations she had undertaken had reflected her keen mind, she had been unable to make much of it. She had no police record, as such, other than a cautioning several years ago following an assault on a hiker. On reflection, a lonely woman living a life far short of the one she was inherently entitled to. He scratched the side of his nose and sucked thoughtfully on his teeth; would the wonders of the Wizarding world justify plucking her from such an ordinary and safe life, and would they outweigh the horrors of it?
Dumbledore flicked over several more pages and studied her medical history with solemnity. A total of five months spent in the hospital recovering from the injuries supposedly sustained in the train accident with an additional three months as an outpatient receiving physiotherapy. Shortly afterwards, she was readmitted as an outpatient to the psychiatric department, and thus began a spiral leading to her internment at a secure facility in Cumbria. He frowned and gently shook his head; there was no information regarding her stay in the institute, but he knew that such places were often a hunting ground for those Dementors that had slipped through Ministry control. He shuddered and swallowed rising bile at the thought of a child dealing with the horrors they inspired. His only hope was that her charm-addled mind was no lure to them in a place where they could glut themselves on the deranged.
Moody poured himself a cup of tea and ripped open two sachets of sugar. He stirred the sweet mixture while casting his trained eye over the café and its occupants. He wished that he could have charmed his magical eye invisible; the eye-patch was uncomfortable, but as the thing had a tendency to fall out, he opted that while in the Muggle world, some discomfort was preferable to hunting on hands and knees for something he could not see.
The baby had finished her yoghurt and was resisting, with surprising strength and determination, her mother's attempts to clean the excess from her face. The old lady still sat facing the window, and the other mother was crouched in front of her toddler, buttoning his coat and muttering softly to him as his pink face portrayed a picture of rapt and devoted attention beneath his blue bobble hat. Since his release from his wretched trunk, Moody had allowed himself to relax, lulled by the quiet and simple sounds of life.
"Have you been to her current address?" asked Dumbledore.
"Yes, but just to look." He watched Dumbledore take a bite from his teacake, butter glistening on his top lip and moustache. "It's a flat not far from here. An elderly woman lives in the downstairs flat, and Ophelia has the upstairs one. There are faint traces of structured magic around the property, but nothin' distinguishable as a specific charm. I cast a Location Charm, and the flat was empty."
Dumbledore wiped his mouth on a napkin and took a sip of tea. "Do you think that she's utilising immature wandless magic?"
"Yes, it has that feel."
"Astounding!" He popped the last of the teacake in his mouth and wiped crumbs from his fingers on a paper napkin. "Shall we go take a look?"
Dumbledore paid for his breakfast at the counter and joined Moody outside the door. The walk was brisk and dismal as the rain gathered momentum and fell in large, fat droplets. Soon, the large warehouses gave way to row upon row of terraced housing before they petered out into collections of shops, semi-detached houses and grand, aloof, detached houses. The streets became cleaner and broader, and traffic rumbled along them with increasing frequency.
They negotiated the steady stream of bustling shoppers, Moody leading him towards the end of the high street and into one of the side streets branching from the arterial main road. They walked past a cluster of bungalows with thick, white handrails running along their paths to the pristine white doors, and past an infant's school where young children squealed and played in the concrete playground. Eventually, they reached a series of houses split into two flats, and Moody paused at the gate of an innocuous, brown, bricked building.
Dumbledore could feel tendrils of magic flickering over his exposed skin and burrowing into his beard so gently that it could be dismissed as the wind. He glanced up at the white voile hanging in the windows and then at the netting in the downstairs windows, seeing a flicker of movement from within.
"Have you spoken with the neighbour?"
"No, but she saw me earlier."
Dumbledore saw the netting twitch ever so slightly and reached over to lift the catch on the gate. Moody followed him up the path and into a narrow passageway from the front garden to the back and between the concrete sheds and the doors to the flats. Dumbledore rapped his knuckles against the blue door to the upstairs flat and waited for the neighbour's door to open.
"What do you want?" The neighbour, a petite woman with tightly curled, grey hair and a powdery, wrinkled face, stepped from her doorway, wrapped her shawl tightly around her shoulders and glared at them suspiciously. "I saw you snooping around earlier." She indicated Moody with a dignified nod of the head and sniffed disdainfully. "If you're here to cause trouble for her, then you can go to the council, and they can deal with you. People like you have given her enough of a hard time in the past." She stretched to her full height and glared up at Dumbledore, unimpressed as he towered over her. "I'm not standing for it: pestering her and whatnot. It shouldn't be allowed, you..." She paused in mid-flow as Dumbledore held up his hands.
"My dear lady," he affirmed gently, "we're not here to cause trouble; quite the contrary in fact."
"How's that then?"
"It's quite difficult to explain," he muttered softly. "It seems that I may have once been her headmaster, and when I came across her picture, the face of a young woman I had thought dead, it inspired me to find her." He reached into his jacket and withdrew two folded pictures; one was a copy of Ophelia's self-portrait, and the other was an old photograph of Ophelia with her cousins. The woman took them with deep distrust etched into her features and squinted at the images. "I came here to determine if she is the little girl we lost some twenty years ago before I involved her family." As he spoke and her eyes were focused on the pictures, he pulled out his wand and cast the Confundus charm.
---X---
Moody and Dumbledore sat together on the floral patterned sofa while Mrs Mathieson busied herself with the tea things. After a few moments, the table was laden with cups, saucers and biscuits. She smiled at the arrangement and, with a soft sigh, muttered about the milk jug and rapidly disappeared into the kitchen.
"Overdid the Confundus a bit, didn't we?" Moody muttered without rancour. "This rate, she'll be too busy playin' the hostess to answer any questions."
"Some things," Dumbledore countered calmly, "cannot be rushed."
Moody was about to retort when the door into the sitting room opened and the elderly lady backed into the room.
"I must say," she began breathlessly while pouring the tea, "that I have often hoped that someday someone would come forward and claim her. She's such a lovely girl." Her brow furrowed, and her wrinkled lips worked mutely.
"But she has a few faults?" Dumbledore supplied helpfully and without accusation.
She smiled gratefully, and her shoulders slumped with relief. "Yes," she said simply and handed him his tea. "She has a bad reputation around here; undeserved," she added quickly and fiercely, fixing them both with a glare daring them to contradict her.
"I'm sure that that is the case," Dumbledore said encouragingly.
She nodded once and filled a second cup. "Of course, she don't help herself," she admitted after some thought while pouring milk into her tea. "She don't make friends; that's not to say she's unfriendly..." Once again, her brow wrinkled. "She's willing enough to help if you ask for it, but she don't offer much of herself."
Mrs Mathieson settled herself in her chair and took a sip of tea, seemingly unaware of the tension coiling within her guests. "She is very private, but comes out when she's needed; not long ago, she helped me with some nuisance when all the council would do was say that they'd look into it. Veronica went out and, well..." She shrugged nonchalantly. "... that was that!" She paused to sip again and nibble the edge of a biscuit. "I don't know what I would have done all these years without her," she mumbled softly, her eyes focused on some distant and troubling time. "Yes," she added quietly. "She's a loyal and caring girl, but..." She swallowed and her lips twitched. "... she sometimes gives me the idea that the whole of my life, with all its woes, has been nothing compared to hers and her suffering." She hastily gulped a mouthful of tea, the saucer quivering in her trembling hand. The crockery grated together, and she was obliged to lower the cup and saucer onto her lap. She turned her head and looked into Dumbledore's eyes, her face a picture of fearful and desperate concern. "You will look after her, won't you? You won't let whatever haunts her get her, will you?"
Dumbledore felt his heart clench, and his breath caught in his throat. For the first time in quite a while, he was speechless; Dark Lords, Ministerial officials and the Minister of Magic had failed to do what this generous lady had done. She had slipped under his armour, past his reasoning and strategy and crushed his heart and resolve. In that moment, he was tempted to stand and leave...to lose this advantage in order to maintain some sense that in a terrified world, the right thing could still be done as a matter of choice. He would have done it had not the pale face of an equally haunted boy drifted into his thoughts; it was a sad fact that in this conflict, no one was free to be protected from their ghosts until the battle was over.
"Where is Miss Speedwell at the moment?" Dumbledore asked gently.
She felt the ridiculous urge to refuse to answer, but quickly smothered it. These two kind gentlemen were here to help Veronica; it was so wonderfully obvious.
"She's on holiday," she said brightly. "She goes away once a year; I think that she's looking for her past, the poor dear." She lowered her cup and stared thoughtfully into the middle distance. "I have a postcard somewhere." She bustled off and disappeared through the door; they could hear her muttering to herself from the hallway.
"This has to be done," Moody said softly. Beside him, Dumbledore sagged and slowly placed his untouched tea on the table.
"I know," he replied firmly.
"Here it is," she cried out triumphantly and padded over to them, offering them the postcard with a beaming smile.
"Ah!" Dumbledore exclaimed appreciatively, removing the card from the woman's fingers. He read the card dispassionately; there was no return address, and the picture on the front, a glorious sunset reflected in a lake, was remarkably unspecific. He checked the postmark on the stamp and noted that it was from the northwest, the Peak District, and that it had been posted three days ago. "Do you happen to know where she is staying?"
He watched with some concern as her features hardened and her frame stiffened, and then the charm took over once more and she relaxed into it. "She's staying in a rented cottage in Kendall," she said quickly. "I think the address is in my notebook; she always tells me where she's going in case I need her." She balanced the cup and saucer on the chair arm and moved to fetch the address book.
"And when will she return here?" Dumbledore asked quietly, watching her rummage through her handbag and trying to ignore the uneasiness in his stomach.
"Oh, not till the end of next week," she said consolingly, unaware that they would not be waiting. "Ah, here it is!" She pushed her glasses further up her nose and opened the small book, carefully turning the small pages. "Number 12, Holbourne Lane."
---X---
Dumbledore cleaned and banished the tea things back to their places while the old lady slept in her chair. Moody replaced the postcard amongst the rest of the post on the small table in the hallway and slid the address book in amongst the other objects within the woman's purse.
Dumbledore had cast the Obliviate curse as soon as she divulged Ophelia Black's location and negated any inquiries by using a Soporific charm to encourage her to nap in her chair. When she woke, they would be gone, and she would have no recollection of her unwitting betrayal. They gave the room one last look and saw themselves out.
Dumbledore slowed his pace when he felt a hand grab his elbow and turned enquiringly to the wizard next to him.
"I'll go and check out the cottage; if it's secluded enough, we could do it there."
Dumbledore nodded and turned his head slightly to avoid the worst of the rain. "It would nullify some of the problems if it could be so." Dumbledore tapped Moody lightly on the arm and pointed to a shadowed gap leading to a narrow footpath. They crossed the road and eased their way past drooping, waterlogged nettles and onto the path. Concealed by large overhanging trees and burgeoning shrubs, they Disapparated back to Grimmauld Place and began to plan.
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48 Reviews | 2.29/10 Average
I'm so glad that the random story widget sent me to this story. I've barely put it down since I started reading yeaterday, forever wanting to see what little gem you'd reveal next. I love how you twisted things with varying viewpoints so that we never really know 'the truth' about the past until Ophelia/Veronica's memories are restored.I'd like to imagine that when Severus got up and walked out of the Shrieking shack, he Apparated straight to Whitehaven.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello. I am sorry about not replying sooner. Thank you for the review. This was my first fanfic, and I enjoyed writing it...and I'm glad you liked it.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello. I am sorry about not replying sooner. Thank you for the review. This was my first fanfic, and I enjoyed writing it...and I'm glad you liked it.
Beautiful ending, although I wish you'd left her relationship with Severus a little less open-ended! You imply plenty for me to assume what I want, though. ;) I'm glad you sort of split the difference. I think that was really her best option.I have to admit you've put me over a barrel, now. I'm working on a story where a potion called Lethe's Milk is going to be used. Perhaps I should rename it... or not, LOL. I could come up with another name that similar to something another author uses, too.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I am so thrilled that the ending was alright. I must admit to liking those scenes/stories that give you lots to think about... and I didn't want to set them up together cosy and secure... maybe in a sequel? Please don't rename the potion. I love creating new potions--my biochemistry heritage, methinks.I think the nail has been hit on the head there... I've come across names and places and things that are similar to what I've done or doing. My plan is to hope that no one notices... :P Thank you for staying with this to the bitter end... :)
Oh, what a choice! To face life on its terms or to go to a sterile environment where she wouldn't have any of the pain but would also miss some great joy as well. I don't envy her.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
What's better not knowing, eh? :DLast chapter coming up. I'm rather sad to be ending it, and I hope it doesn't do a disservice to your time and effort in reading it.
I had wondered how it was going to be possible to fool Sirius with Ophelia in the house. Now I understand. Poor everyone, dealing with so much pain. Hopefully, as Minerva noticed, now that everyone knows Voldemort is back, somthing better can happen.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I thought about writing some huge and inescapable series of events that meant Ophelia was out of the way and the house quiet, but, as I have experienced, one event can push us into being absent from our surroundings and those around us--we make it happen sometimes.Thank you for the review
Aw... Arthur and Molly can be so cute.Poor Dumbledore and Moody, though, forced to witness the unimaginable.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello :DThank you,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
.Three more chapters to go... and then the end.
Oh, poor Auror Smith. Somehow I think he got his pound of flesh, challenging Voldemort's very deepest-held phobias in front of his minions.And Ophelia finally finds herself in Severus's arms. Delicious.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Yes, I think Smith got more out of it than Voldemort.You liked that scene: Ophelia and Severus? I fretted and sweated about it. I don't generally write that kind of thing. I'm much happier writing about doom, gloom and angst.Thank you, and I hope you like how this ends.
I like watching her thoughts evolve. That Molly is pretty smart, but she's been through war, herself.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello. Thanks for the review... and still being here. Things are going terribly at the moment, and all I can offer is that this story will be finished; the when is open to debate. Molly, like so many of the women in the books, is a neglected character.
Finally, were are getting somewhere, somewhere where I want this story to be. I hope that Veronica will always be deep inside, gently guiding her thoughts and passions. Even more than Molly, I think that's what was the cayalyst in the kitchen that night that finally dropped the scales from their eyes.
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Hello
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
!I'm so thrilled you're still reading this; it has been an age since I was able to write anything. I'm so thankful. It has taken them a while... thank heavens for Molly!
A lot of things are coming together, here, between the canon and the story. If Sirius leaves the house to go to the Ministry battle, that will complicate matters with Ophelia, who wasn't supposed to be left in the house alone. Hmm... there are other complications there, too. I'm eager to see what you do with it all.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review and your thoughts. :)
I gather the the battle at the Ministry is imminent. I'll be glad to be rid of Sirius Black.I hope there will be lots more of Severus and Ophelia, it's about time time he has some joy and a sense of belonging to someone or something.You said this is HBP compliant, I can live with that. Is it DH compliant? I love it when someone rewrites JKR's ridiculous ending for Snape and has him survive. He deserved so much better than the end she gave him, the whole plot of the series ended up hinging on him and she wrote him as if he were a minor character who didn't deserve a future.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Your wish regarding Sirius shall be granted. It's all winding up for the end, yes.The story won't run right up to the end of HBP, so it's compliant to that point. DH is moot with regards to this tale.I agree, and no matter how many times I read the last three books, I can't shift the idea that JKR had to change pretty much most of what she had planned to pen.I've done three (I think :S) stories where he survives by various means, so I also find his death to be an annoyance. Thank you for the review and still being here :D It's much appreciated.
Severus was pretty evil there, but it was a calculated risk and it seems to have worked, at least somewhat. I can't believe Rookwood got the drop on Smith like that. Smith should have looked for whatever Rookwood was searching for and gotten it from him. Life is going to get harder for Moody, now, I bet.I could clobber Sirius, but it's too soon for Severus and Ophelia, anyway. They need to wait until they don't need her information so much any more.I love your descriptions of the action. I always feel like I am in a Pensieve with you.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review :) Even the best get caught out. Moody will suffer as a result of this.Yeah... I could clobber Sirius, but JKR got to him first. To be fair, he is trying to be fair and decent.Thank you for the lovely compliment... it's like the ultimate caffeine boost. If only it could get all my real life work done for me. Oh well.
Severus's method was harsh, but it was probably the only way to sucessfully help her. Ironically she had to be blind to find her way out. I'm glad he was able to get through to her.Where does an a-- h--- like Sirius get the right to tell Severus to take his hands off her? What a jerk! He can't get past his own problems to help her, but Severus could add helping her to all the other responsibilities on his shoulders. I hope that Severus and Ophelia can find more thanfriendly solace in one another. I also hope that you plan this to be canon compliant through the battle at the Ministry and non compliant at the end of the Battle at Hogwarts.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I just couldn't imagine Snape being anything else. I tried the sympathetic and caring approach, and I was grimacing as I wrote it. Snape is harsh, and to be honest, I think that Ophelia appreciated his method--she wouldn't have accepted kindness from him.Well... I guess that Sirius is losing so much that he's feeling more possessive and territorial than ever. This is HBP compliant--obviously with some additions--so you know some of the outcomes of this story already.Thanks again for reading my saga :)
I can't remember which was the last chapter you sent me and many of the things i had saved were lost when my computer was fried in a power outage power surgelast spring and didn't make it to the new computer, so I will pick up from here.Sirius is far to selfish and self centered to ever be of help to her, he always has been that way.Dumbledore is a control freak and his ego makes him feel that only he can save the wizarding world, even after death. He has gotten himself to the point where he's fooling himself if he thinks he even has the capacity to really care about anyone except for how they can be used by him to further his plan.He is right though, Severus is the only one who can really help Ophelia. As Moody said, she has no frame of reference and Severus can provide her with that and a lot more, I hope.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
:) I can't rememeber what I sent either; my computer met a nasty end too, and I'm reconstructing chapters and adding in new ones.Odd, isn't it? But Sirius and Dumbledore are set up as the good guys?! This story is going very slowly at the minute, and I'm hoping that in the new year things will be easier.Thanks for staying with the story and the review :)
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Oh, hurrah! So great to see this fic still going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's going slowly at the minute... but it will be finished. This story brought me here... lol... and taught me grammar :D
Thank you for the review and the boost.
Severus had to at least have guessed more than he's been letting on in the present day. Gruesome as it was, I'm sure all those order people probably approved of what she did.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I apologise for the lull in this story. This will be finished, but not until some things are resolved at this end.Thank you for reading the story and all the reviews :)
Well there goes my guess about who her father was. Interesting thoughts about what made Regulus go "bad".
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I'm sorry about the long gap between posts. My computer went 'technical', and I lost a significant amount of work. This chapter was constructed from various emails and handwritten notes.May I ask who you thought her father was?Thank you so much for staying with this story, and thanks for the review :)
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
I had originally thought her father would turn out to be "Uncle Tom". since I couldn't think of a reason he would be so affectionate toward her.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Once I'd logged out, I had the idea that Uncle Tom would be the number one suspect.Tom has his reasons for his affection.Thanks for reading and staying with this story :)
She's thirteen at this point? Quite precocious. I take it these are memories that Ophelia is showing Veronica?
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thanks for the review. She's thirteen at this point, yes. These memories are those that are resurfacing as Ophelia is answering Dumbledore's questions. They're really to provide some background information, tie in some canon information, and bring everyone up to date with the present day.
I'm very confused now.Why does Dumbledore accuse her of being a Death Eater at the beginning of the chapter and why was he acting so contemptuously? She doesn't seem to me to be a Death Eater. She is now willing to tell him everything she knows about Horcruxes, that doesn't sound like a loyal Death Eater to me.When is Snape going to make another appearance?
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I'm sorry to confuse you.They really don't know anything about her; their investigations yielded a very vague and contradictory image of Ophelia/Veronica. In short, they have to think that she's a Death Eater while hoping that she's not.You know what Ophelia is like, but they have not seen or understood the battle that she's had while coming together. Also, it's a way to get the rest of the story out :D, and there is a lot yet to say about Ophelia. She did allow people to die to gain her freedom from everything--why?Dumbledore has been very keen to give Ophelia the benefit of the doubt, and he's just testing the waters, and I think that after so many years, he'd be better at seeing what was in front of him rather than relying solely upon Legilimency.In this instance, trust Dumbledore. Would she, after everything, trust the friendly, open hand? Or would the harsh and bitter reality of everything be more acceptable?I just thought, I never sent this chapter to you, did I? Eeek! I was so busy with the run-up to Christmas that it went right out of my head... my apologies for that.Snape will make another appearance. I'll send a summary of the remaining chapters.
That wasn't a direction I expected to go, but now it seems so obvious. Dealing with the Horcruxes is more important than anything else, really.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
The books suggest that the concept of Horcruxes had bothered Dumbledore since the end of 'Chamber of Secrets'. The idea prompted him to seek out Horcruxes in the six week holiday between years five and six, i.e. after this story which runs up to the end of OoTP.It's the most prominent starting point for them as far as Dumbledore is concerned.. the rest will be dealt with later.Thank you for reviewing :)
I see nososaintly felt the same as I did. That's why I told you I may have missed something when I read it through the second time. What was going on was too compelling to bother about grammar or anything else. You achieved exactly what you set out to do in that passage with Sirius. I'm glad I'm not prone to nightmares, if I were that would have given me a humdinger of a nightmare.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I never thought of that! I wonder... Write that well that I could pass myself of as being decent with grammar by bamboozling with a distracting plot.... hmmm. I feel so warm and fuzzy about the wonderful reviews; I feel all spurred on and encouraged--I can't thank people enough for their effort and kind thoughts. This fanfic was my very first, and for some reason, I worry and fret, panic and suffer with it.The whole site has been nurturing... *sniffles*Thanks for the review,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
... I'm off to conjure up chapter twenty!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I never thought of that! I wonder... Write that well that I could pass myself of as being decent with grammar by bamboozling with a distracting plot.... hmmm. I feel so warm and fuzzy about the wonderful reviews; I feel all spurred on and encouraged--I can't thank people enough for their effort and kind thoughts. This fanfic was my very first, and for some reason, I worry and fret, panic and suffer with it.The whole site has been nurturing... *sniffles*Thanks for the review,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
... I'm off to conjure up chapter twenty!
You've already had all my comments and know what I think about this chapter, so I won't repear them except to tell you that I thought this chapter was excellently written and that I was happy to look it over for you before it was posted.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thanks for that,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
. Altering the story has been both thrilling and terrifying, and as such, I'm happy and relieved that it's been all for the good of the story. It's opened new avenues of thought and challenging concepts--I just hope that I can do the plot justice now! Thank you for your advice and guidance :)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thanks for that,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
. Altering the story has been both thrilling and terrifying, and as such, I'm happy and relieved that it's been all for the good of the story. It's opened new avenues of thought and challenging concepts--I just hope that I can do the plot justice now! Thank you for your advice and guidance :)
I liked the conflict between her two sides. I showed that Veronica has a very controlling personality and that the unknown side of Ophelia may be the good side. She Imperiused Topliss and had himfake her death and hide her identity to get away from Voldemort so there must be some good in her.Oddly, I only just picked up on the name Veronica Speedwell. It never struck me while the earlier creeping speedwell was blooming, but now that my other types of veronica are blooming or about to come into bloom I finally caught on.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review :) It was difficult for me to try to formalise some logic behind the situation... Ophelia had been, for want of a better term, 'put on hold' while the new personality of Veronica was allowed to develop, so they sort of existed side by side. When Ophelia was summoned via the potion, it seemed reasonable that there would be two distinct minds left to squabble. I'm not a psychologist, the only thing I know is how to spell it, and the theory may be so off track as to be laughable, but I enjoyed the disparity and the scenes that it engendered... that's my reason and I'm sticking to it!It means a great deal that the name has been discovered... I had Veronica from the start, and it was when I was sipping coffee, just over a year ago, that 'speedwell' caught my eye--it was the flower decorating my mug. Odd how that happens, eh? I was left wondering just how much was down to coincidence... after that, I spent more time thinking about the other names... had so much fun on 'Babies' names' websites... lol.I am so glad that you're still with the story, thank you.I'm working on a Snape chapter, a new chapter eighteen, and it ain't 'arf givin' me grief... lol. When this was first written, I was so intent on finishing it, but now that the pressures have gone and I am more comfortable, I want to fill it out and add the little touches that will hopefully make it more appealing. There was a scene involving Onesiphorus that was removed to keep this from escalating into some huge beast, but I will write it now... ... ooops! I ramble, sorry. Thank you again :)
I was going to say that this reminded me of 'The Exorcist', but then I figured that this is an exocism in and of itself and Voldemort is the demon who must be cast out of her mind body and soul.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review. It's interesting how another viewpoint can make you just stop and stare... I hadn't seen it quite like that before. Thank you, again :)
There's not much that can be said about this chapter. The only thing I can do is just what they are doing, just wait and see how it all works out.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review. I hope that I'm not slipping... *looks worried* I do find writing certain scenes/genres to be quite tough at times... if you think that the chapter needs some more work, then I'd love any comments. Having the reviews helps me to improve, and as this was my first fanfic, I can appreciate that it may be quite rough. The next chapters are being beta read; I hope to upload pretty soon. Thank you for sticking with the story :)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Sorry, but as an aside... your reviews seem to be duplicated... I'm not sure why they're being duplicated, some glitch, perhaps? :D
Response from Trickie Woo (Reviewer)
I tried to respond to you about an hour and a half ago and I see my response didn't make it through.First, there was no problem with the writing or the content of the chapter. I was expressing my emotional reaction to what Dumbledore had to do. Obviously it had to be done and there is nothing I, or any of your characters, can do about it, so I will just have to sit back and wait to see how things work themselves out.Second, I had problems posting reviews on TPP last night. The one I wrote after I wrote this one didn't show up at all, I had to go back this afternoon and rewrite it and it finally did show up. I have no idea what happened that caused my review to become duplicated. I figured that TPP was working on the system and they must still be since the first response I wrote didn't show up.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for that :D I guess that I'm still a very nervous writer.I had no idea the pains you were going to to review this; I am so humbled. I mentioned in an earlier response that I was thinking of writing more Snape-centric chapters... consider that a given, as a thanks for your efforts. Thank you :)
That's an intersting theory about the dark mark and how it keeps him in tune with all his death Eaters. It sounds quite logical to me.As for the rest of the chapter, the plot still has too many convolutions for me to figure anything out yet, but given time I'm sure I will.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for reviewing. Logical and rather nasty in my opinion *shudders* imgaine not even being allowed to keep your emotions and deepest thoughts private. I hope that you continue to enjoy it :)