Chapter Four
Chapter 4 of 36
sweetflagThe mystery surrounding Ophelia deepens, and the consequences of her decision twenty years ago comes to a terrible head.
Reviewed"And this, of course, is the classroom, with your office adjoining it just up those stairs." Minerva stepped aside to let Dolores Umbridge saunter into the classroom and watched with reined-in dislike as the stumpy woman surveyed the room. "Please feel free to alter the room as you see fit, just as all the other professors have before you."
"Oh, I shall," Umbridge responded breathlessly, her face splitting into an officious smile. "I so want the students to know that things are changing for the better."
Minerva bristled at the insinuation, but managed to summon a gracious smile. "I'm sure that the Ministry wants nothing more than to demonstrate that to the students." She smirked as she noted Umbridge's wide smile falter and her large eyes narrow. "Shall I show you the staffroom now, or would you prefer to settle in first?"
"The students will be arriving in just under an hour, so I shall set to work preparing the classroom and repairing the office."
"Very well." Minerva grabbed the handle and started to back out, but was stopped by a curious delicate sound.
"Hem hem."
"Yes, Professor Umbridge?"
"I would very much like to speak with all the teachers at some point during the evening."
"I don't see a problem with that; I'm sure the rest of the staff will be equally delighted to meet you."
"Thank you, Professor McGonagall. I think it's important that we all know where we stand with each other from the offset."
"Of course; I'm sure that the sentiment will be appreciated and duly reciprocated. Good evening, Professor Umbridge."
With the door shut behind her, Minerva exhaled slowly and eased the throbbing joints in her hand. She noted with some annoyance the groove on her palm where the door handle had bitten into the skin from her ever tightening grip in response to her rising anger. She had been shocked and dismayed when Dolores Jane Umbridge had walked into her office and presented herself as the Ministry's approved teacher. She recalled that Umbridge had been the Senior Undersecretary for the Minister, and had been one of those wizards present at Harry Potter's mockery of a trial who had sought a conviction. The few words of pleasantries shared between them had done nothing to ease Minerva's appalled disgust, but Dumbledore had insisted that the woman be treated cordially, and, therefore, Minerva would be nothing less than polite. The effort had left her with aching jaw muscles, a throbbing headache and lancing pains through her wrist. She grimaced at the prospect of working with Dolores Umbridge, wondering if Madam Pomfrey had sufficient supplies of Headease Potion, and was only mildly comforted by the fact that no Defence teacher had lasted more than a year in nearly two decades.
"I must pass on my respects to Onesiphorus for his foresight and quick actions," Dumbledore said solemnly.
"I've got Smith lookin' into things at the Ministry; no one better suited to go pokin' around."
Dumbledore nodded slowly and tapped his forefinger against his lips. "I wonder what is in her head, lost in the chaos, which could be so important as to cause such consternation. The paperwork alone should be enough to put off even the most stalwart keeper of secrets."
"Norwood was telling the truth about extractin' Ophelia Black on Ministry orders, and all the other Aurors involved in the abduction are now dead, so I can't check with 'em." He gave the tea a once-over and then took a large gulp. "He got little from her, even under Veritaserum and the Imperius Curse. He cast a Memory Modification Charm an' put her back on the train. All neat an' without fuss. Accordin' to him, the train was intact and even runnin' on time."
"What do you suspect?"
"It's a little too early to go guessin'." Moody glowered and drummed his fingers on the chair arm. "I checked out ol' Norwood and he was clean, no sign of memory tamperin' at all." He leant forward, and the firelight caught his eye. "I suggest someone being there when Ophelia wakes up...just in case."
"I'm thinking of asking Remus to assist Minerva."
"Lupin's no good for this," he scoffed gently. "You need someone who'll look for wrongness." He sat back and scratched idly at his chin. "Don't think I ain't takin' this pers'nal. It's my name on those reports sayin' she's dead, and it seems a bit too coincidental that my hairs should be placed at the murder of the only person around who may have been able to shed some light on the matter." He glared at Dumbledore, both eyes equally terrible as they blazed with indignant fury. "Someone used my good name to cover somethin' up back then and is using my bad reputation to incriminate me now."
He knew better than to mock his friend; indeed, it was wiser to listen to him. "Come now, Alastor; they would have to have known a fair bit about your reasons for visiting Norwood in the first place to be able to successfully implicate you in his murder on the grounds of reasonable motive."
Moody shrugged indifferently and took another gulp of tea.
"And who would feel obliged to hold on to clippings of your hair for nearly twenty years on the off chance that you would visit with a prospective and propitious murder victim?" Dumbledore ignored Moody's scowl and smoothed down his beard. "However, as absurd as it sounds, I am inclined to believe you; too many other incidents have taken place over the last few months for me to comfortably dismiss anything at the moment."
"Smith says that things are happenin' within the Ministry as well, reassignments and old scrolls being shuffled around. Of course," he said slowly, "could be just them clearin' house in light of what you've said."
"Well, it is nice to think that my words have had some impact upon the Ministry," Dumbledore said with a wry smile.
Moody dragged his hand down his face and grimaced at the stubble scratching his palm; he needed to rest, but he sensed that clouds were gathering and that Ophelia Black was some desperate conductor to that ever-increasing power. His investigations had yielded little and what he had was contradictory. He had resigned himself to just finding her and leaving the pesky details until later... after she was suitably restrained and her possible threat diminished.
"Smith has a lead," he said quietly. "A wizard by the name of Smethwyck."
"Walter?" Dumbledore asked with some caution.
"The very same," Moody answered, nodding and studying the blank face before him. "Apparently, he was involved in some scheme to influence and blackmail high rankin' wizards. Of course, most of that is well known if not now forgotten, but Smith seems to think that he may have more information about Ophelia." He sat back and winced as both the chair and his spine creaked.
"Let us hope that the trail, as they say, does not dry up; we have so little to go on." Dumbledore dropped the hairs and fibres onto his saucer and waved a hand over them; the silver and black strands curled up, smoked a little, and then turned to barely visible ash. "How is your Muggle friend progressing?"
"He's sortin' through her past addresses." Moody gave a sudden harsh bark of a laugh and grinned bitterly. "She's moved round quite a bit, hasn't settled... flighty little thing. Anyone would think that she was either runnin' or been made to move on." He inhaled and grunted unhappily. "The proverbial needle wasn't as hard to find!" He leaned forward over the table and fixed Dumbledore with an intense glare. "There are other things that he's findin' an' all," he added firmly. He shook his head and grimaced. "A fair mystery is Ophelia!"
"We must solve this puzzle quickly," Dumbledore responded firmly. "Things are moving too quickly for this to be drawn out much longer."
"What he's found so far is pretty good, in a way. Apparently, she was put in isolation for attackin' another patient. She said that she was keepin' him safe from these demons that swept through the hospital."
"Now, that is interesting," Dumbledore said softly, his eyebrows shooting up in surprise. "Are you suggesting that she fought Dementors?"
"Accordin' to the doctor's report, she was screamin' and tryin' to drag the man off the bed. The nurse who witnessed it all said that it looked as if she were battlin' with somethin' at the side of the bed. O' course, the poor devil didn't add anythin' on account of him havin' been Kissed."
"How could she have withstood being that close to a Dementor?"
Moody shrugged his shoulders. "You can gain some tolerance to them if you have to and they aren't focused on you. She did spend a few weeks in the infirmary, however, recoverin' from the ordeal; had to be heavily sedated." Moody frowned and scratched the side of his nose thoughtfully. "In fact, that incident seemed to spark a spate of attacks and aggressive behaviour."
"It's not unrealistic to think that the presence of Dementors feeding off the other patients would have impacted upon her." Dumbledore shuddered slightly and wondered if Ophelia had been in such proximity to gorging Dementors that she had managed to tolerate them.
Dumbledore had devoted quite a large proportion of his free time to finding out about Ophelia Black. He had collated all her school reports and coursework and had pored over the treasured parchments. He had literally sifted through his memories, trying to build a picture of a rather demure and unremarkable witch. He was aggrieved to realise that although she had been in the school for five years, very little was known about her. It was just like a puzzle; he had pieces here and there, some were scattered across the table, and the rest were still in the box. It was made worse by the fact that he had no picture to follow... no real clues as to how they fitted together. What would the puzzle reveal? Would it be an accurate representation of the woman that she had become? Would it bolster his flagging hopes and reveal a woman ready to aid them, or crush him with an image of a viper?
"O' course not," Moody readily agreed. "I was just ponderin' her desire to protect the others. Don't really smack of being a vicious Muggle-hatin' Death Eater."
"No," Dumbledore said with a smile. "It doesn't."
"Now, don't go grinnin' on me!" warned Moody grimly. "Just because I may be thinkin' that she could be more than she seems don't mean that I believe it!"
Dumbledore chuckled amiably. "Alastor, have no fear; I still know that you're a cynic through and through."
Despite the humour between them and the faint hope of an ally, they were aware that this was only a lull in the storm. They sat in silence save for the tap dripping into the deep ceramic sink and the creaks and groans of the house settling. From upstairs came the muffled sound of hooves and claws scrabbling on the wooden floor as Buckbeak paced his attic prison. Lost in their thoughts, time carelessly moved on, measured by the regular drips and their own breaths, unceasingly leading them to an uncertain future.
His appetite had long withered. He ate because he knew that he had to. Sitting opposite, his wife chattered away about how the day had gone and would he mind if she went and had her hair done? He mumbled his approval while moving a piece of potato round his plate. When did this start? When did his life become so swamped and smothered? When did he start to doubt his own mind?
"What is it, dear?" she asked gently. She had watched him idly pushing food around and then eating with apparent gusto, only to look queasy and return to his playing. Her unease and concern had increased in intensity over the last week, and she had blamed the Ministry for his lacklustre outlook and diminished appetite. He was quiet and subdued, yet mumbled and muttered under his breath when he thought her out of ear-shot.
He looked up from his plate and into her concerned blue eyes. He was about to answer, to do as he always did and confide in her the woes of his job and the weight of his position. But tonight, he felt a vice round his throat and a stifling pressure in his head. It seemed that a thousand voices were screaming and shouting in his ears. He felt bowed and battered beneath the mental barrage. He wondered why she sat there, so quiet and still, while he trembled and struggled for breath. Couldn't she see that he was straining, that he was suffering, that each breath was a labour and each thought an agony?
"Nothing, dear," he finally managed to mutter. Run, my love, some deep part of him screamed. Get away! Get away before I do that terrible, disgusting thing to you again ...oh ... not again ... Who are you that do this to me?
She pursed her lips in annoyance; he was so listless and withdrawn lately. He sat morosely at the dinner table whenever he managed to come home in time to eat with her and seemed to stay seated out of politeness rather than desire. His simple yet staggering signs of affection that still stole her breath after twenty years of marriage had become more a thing of habit than need. She was at a loss for what to do. He was slipping away from her and she had no idea why, or more importantly, how to stop it.
He saw a flicker of pain and confusion cross her features, and then she smiled. He felt his lips twitch in weak mimicry and tried to eat a few more mouthfuls under her concerned scrutiny. The clock chimed and their cutlery clattered against crockery. He was aware of her curious glances, and was surprised at the rising wave of irritation he felt. To distract himself, he gathered up the dishes and carried them into the kitchen. In the solitude, he could hear the whispers that were now such a part of him that he couldn't remember what silence was.
She knows! She suspects! She is a threat to us!
We cannot allow her to interfere. She must not divert us. She must not stop us!
She daintily dabbed the corner of her mouth with a napkin and tried not to succumb to her nascent dread. She had never known him to be so closed, so reticent, and if his work meant that he had to be so withdrawn, he had always made it clear that he couldn't tell her. She disliked this wall, this barrier that had descended between them. She decided to wait; Brian always told her what was bothering him, and she would be there when he was ready.
He placed the plates in the sink and turned on the tap to rinse the gravy and remains of potato away. He frowned and tried to block out the thoughts that had pestered and plagued him since he had heard a name that he had hoped would never be uttered by a wizard. He felt bile rush up, burning as it did; he realised that he had done everything that those whispered voices had asked.
You need to do these things; you know that they are important. One curse! One life! These are nothing to what will result, should you fail.
He turned off the tap and watched the last dirty dregs of water slip down the plughole. He swallowed as a wave of nausea rolled up, and he had to take a steadying breath to control the burgeoning desperation. He had done what he had had to do; he derived little comfort from the fact that fate had allowed him to walk away, knowing that he wasn't a killer. He shuddered and squeezed his eyes shut until the orbs hurt under the pressure.
He had held his wand against Norwood's temple, and the words had leapt to his lips. A frantic part of him had raged and screamed, while another smothered and made him carry out his grim duty. He had barely uttered the first syllable of the Killing Curse when Norwood had jerked and spluttered in his chair, his red eyes bulging as he clutched at his heart and reached out beseechingly. Ashen faced and pleading, Norwood had managed to stand and lunge towards him, his potential murderer now his only hope as he fought and struggled to live.
Stepping back, he had left the old man to fall heavily onto the rug. He had watched dispassionately as the dying man choked and gasped, shuddered and jerked. The little, frantic movements slowed, and then as Norwood gave his last sigh, his last rattling gasp, movement ceased. Viscous drool ran from the grotesque, gaping mouth and pooled by the flaccid and grey cheek. Breathing hard, he had cast the Killing Curse upon the still warm corpse and then had arranged the room to suit his purpose.
He knew that his efforts had not yielded everything that he had intended, but it was no matter, as he was in a position to have a great many things arranged. He smiled grimly and looked up and out of the window; his smile slipped when he saw his reflection in the glass. Who was it that looked back? Who was it that could do these things? He shivered and turned away; whoever it was, they were needed. For what dread purpose and till what end, he had no idea, and he found some comfort in the fact that he didn't have to look them in the eyes.
"Shall I wash, Brian?" Evelyn asked softly, almost tentatively, as if she feared her question would cause concern.
"Evelyn, my dear," Brian crooned gently, smiling and opening up his arms to her. He felt disgust and fear clash with triumph and glee as she smiled and stepped into his duplicitous embrace. "I have to do this!"
Evelyn stiffened in his arms at the tone he used; she inhaled slowly and her mouth went dry. The arms around her no longer seemed loving, but restricting. She tried to pull away, to look her husband in the eye.
"If there were any other way, I would take it, but I have no choice," he continued in the same light-hearted voice, so viciously paradoxical to the way he gripped and held her.
She sobbed, and for the first time in her life, she felt panicked in her husband's presence; the strength that once supported her now smothered her. "Please, Brian," she whispered breathlessly. "Whatever it is, we can fix it."
"No, my love," he responded firmly and without any trace of remorse or regret. "This is the only way."
Evelyn felt him shift his stance and his right arm slide away from her body. With a shriek, she felt the tip of something press into her ribs, and as she used all her strength to push him away, she saw a mad fire in his eyes as he smiled softly at her. Her wide, fear-stricken eyes searched his for any clue to his delusion and madness, and then to the steady wand aimed at her heart.
"Imperio!"
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48 Reviews | 2.29/10 Average
I'm so glad that the random story widget sent me to this story. I've barely put it down since I started reading yeaterday, forever wanting to see what little gem you'd reveal next. I love how you twisted things with varying viewpoints so that we never really know 'the truth' about the past until Ophelia/Veronica's memories are restored.I'd like to imagine that when Severus got up and walked out of the Shrieking shack, he Apparated straight to Whitehaven.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello. I am sorry about not replying sooner. Thank you for the review. This was my first fanfic, and I enjoyed writing it...and I'm glad you liked it.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello. I am sorry about not replying sooner. Thank you for the review. This was my first fanfic, and I enjoyed writing it...and I'm glad you liked it.
Beautiful ending, although I wish you'd left her relationship with Severus a little less open-ended! You imply plenty for me to assume what I want, though. ;) I'm glad you sort of split the difference. I think that was really her best option.I have to admit you've put me over a barrel, now. I'm working on a story where a potion called Lethe's Milk is going to be used. Perhaps I should rename it... or not, LOL. I could come up with another name that similar to something another author uses, too.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I am so thrilled that the ending was alright. I must admit to liking those scenes/stories that give you lots to think about... and I didn't want to set them up together cosy and secure... maybe in a sequel? Please don't rename the potion. I love creating new potions--my biochemistry heritage, methinks.I think the nail has been hit on the head there... I've come across names and places and things that are similar to what I've done or doing. My plan is to hope that no one notices... :P Thank you for staying with this to the bitter end... :)
Oh, what a choice! To face life on its terms or to go to a sterile environment where she wouldn't have any of the pain but would also miss some great joy as well. I don't envy her.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
What's better not knowing, eh? :DLast chapter coming up. I'm rather sad to be ending it, and I hope it doesn't do a disservice to your time and effort in reading it.
I had wondered how it was going to be possible to fool Sirius with Ophelia in the house. Now I understand. Poor everyone, dealing with so much pain. Hopefully, as Minerva noticed, now that everyone knows Voldemort is back, somthing better can happen.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I thought about writing some huge and inescapable series of events that meant Ophelia was out of the way and the house quiet, but, as I have experienced, one event can push us into being absent from our surroundings and those around us--we make it happen sometimes.Thank you for the review
Aw... Arthur and Molly can be so cute.Poor Dumbledore and Moody, though, forced to witness the unimaginable.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello :DThank you,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
.Three more chapters to go... and then the end.
Oh, poor Auror Smith. Somehow I think he got his pound of flesh, challenging Voldemort's very deepest-held phobias in front of his minions.And Ophelia finally finds herself in Severus's arms. Delicious.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Yes, I think Smith got more out of it than Voldemort.You liked that scene: Ophelia and Severus? I fretted and sweated about it. I don't generally write that kind of thing. I'm much happier writing about doom, gloom and angst.Thank you, and I hope you like how this ends.
I like watching her thoughts evolve. That Molly is pretty smart, but she's been through war, herself.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello. Thanks for the review... and still being here. Things are going terribly at the moment, and all I can offer is that this story will be finished; the when is open to debate. Molly, like so many of the women in the books, is a neglected character.
Finally, were are getting somewhere, somewhere where I want this story to be. I hope that Veronica will always be deep inside, gently guiding her thoughts and passions. Even more than Molly, I think that's what was the cayalyst in the kitchen that night that finally dropped the scales from their eyes.
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Hello
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
!I'm so thrilled you're still reading this; it has been an age since I was able to write anything. I'm so thankful. It has taken them a while... thank heavens for Molly!
A lot of things are coming together, here, between the canon and the story. If Sirius leaves the house to go to the Ministry battle, that will complicate matters with Ophelia, who wasn't supposed to be left in the house alone. Hmm... there are other complications there, too. I'm eager to see what you do with it all.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review and your thoughts. :)
I gather the the battle at the Ministry is imminent. I'll be glad to be rid of Sirius Black.I hope there will be lots more of Severus and Ophelia, it's about time time he has some joy and a sense of belonging to someone or something.You said this is HBP compliant, I can live with that. Is it DH compliant? I love it when someone rewrites JKR's ridiculous ending for Snape and has him survive. He deserved so much better than the end she gave him, the whole plot of the series ended up hinging on him and she wrote him as if he were a minor character who didn't deserve a future.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Your wish regarding Sirius shall be granted. It's all winding up for the end, yes.The story won't run right up to the end of HBP, so it's compliant to that point. DH is moot with regards to this tale.I agree, and no matter how many times I read the last three books, I can't shift the idea that JKR had to change pretty much most of what she had planned to pen.I've done three (I think :S) stories where he survives by various means, so I also find his death to be an annoyance. Thank you for the review and still being here :D It's much appreciated.
Severus was pretty evil there, but it was a calculated risk and it seems to have worked, at least somewhat. I can't believe Rookwood got the drop on Smith like that. Smith should have looked for whatever Rookwood was searching for and gotten it from him. Life is going to get harder for Moody, now, I bet.I could clobber Sirius, but it's too soon for Severus and Ophelia, anyway. They need to wait until they don't need her information so much any more.I love your descriptions of the action. I always feel like I am in a Pensieve with you.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review :) Even the best get caught out. Moody will suffer as a result of this.Yeah... I could clobber Sirius, but JKR got to him first. To be fair, he is trying to be fair and decent.Thank you for the lovely compliment... it's like the ultimate caffeine boost. If only it could get all my real life work done for me. Oh well.
Severus's method was harsh, but it was probably the only way to sucessfully help her. Ironically she had to be blind to find her way out. I'm glad he was able to get through to her.Where does an a-- h--- like Sirius get the right to tell Severus to take his hands off her? What a jerk! He can't get past his own problems to help her, but Severus could add helping her to all the other responsibilities on his shoulders. I hope that Severus and Ophelia can find more thanfriendly solace in one another. I also hope that you plan this to be canon compliant through the battle at the Ministry and non compliant at the end of the Battle at Hogwarts.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I just couldn't imagine Snape being anything else. I tried the sympathetic and caring approach, and I was grimacing as I wrote it. Snape is harsh, and to be honest, I think that Ophelia appreciated his method--she wouldn't have accepted kindness from him.Well... I guess that Sirius is losing so much that he's feeling more possessive and territorial than ever. This is HBP compliant--obviously with some additions--so you know some of the outcomes of this story already.Thanks again for reading my saga :)
I can't remember which was the last chapter you sent me and many of the things i had saved were lost when my computer was fried in a power outage power surgelast spring and didn't make it to the new computer, so I will pick up from here.Sirius is far to selfish and self centered to ever be of help to her, he always has been that way.Dumbledore is a control freak and his ego makes him feel that only he can save the wizarding world, even after death. He has gotten himself to the point where he's fooling himself if he thinks he even has the capacity to really care about anyone except for how they can be used by him to further his plan.He is right though, Severus is the only one who can really help Ophelia. As Moody said, she has no frame of reference and Severus can provide her with that and a lot more, I hope.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Hello
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
:) I can't rememeber what I sent either; my computer met a nasty end too, and I'm reconstructing chapters and adding in new ones.Odd, isn't it? But Sirius and Dumbledore are set up as the good guys?! This story is going very slowly at the minute, and I'm hoping that in the new year things will be easier.Thanks for staying with the story and the review :)
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Oh, hurrah! So great to see this fic still going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's going slowly at the minute... but it will be finished. This story brought me here... lol... and taught me grammar :D
Thank you for the review and the boost.
Severus had to at least have guessed more than he's been letting on in the present day. Gruesome as it was, I'm sure all those order people probably approved of what she did.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I apologise for the lull in this story. This will be finished, but not until some things are resolved at this end.Thank you for reading the story and all the reviews :)
Well there goes my guess about who her father was. Interesting thoughts about what made Regulus go "bad".
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I'm sorry about the long gap between posts. My computer went 'technical', and I lost a significant amount of work. This chapter was constructed from various emails and handwritten notes.May I ask who you thought her father was?Thank you so much for staying with this story, and thanks for the review :)
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
I had originally thought her father would turn out to be "Uncle Tom". since I couldn't think of a reason he would be so affectionate toward her.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Once I'd logged out, I had the idea that Uncle Tom would be the number one suspect.Tom has his reasons for his affection.Thanks for reading and staying with this story :)
She's thirteen at this point? Quite precocious. I take it these are memories that Ophelia is showing Veronica?
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thanks for the review. She's thirteen at this point, yes. These memories are those that are resurfacing as Ophelia is answering Dumbledore's questions. They're really to provide some background information, tie in some canon information, and bring everyone up to date with the present day.
I'm very confused now.Why does Dumbledore accuse her of being a Death Eater at the beginning of the chapter and why was he acting so contemptuously? She doesn't seem to me to be a Death Eater. She is now willing to tell him everything she knows about Horcruxes, that doesn't sound like a loyal Death Eater to me.When is Snape going to make another appearance?
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I'm sorry to confuse you.They really don't know anything about her; their investigations yielded a very vague and contradictory image of Ophelia/Veronica. In short, they have to think that she's a Death Eater while hoping that she's not.You know what Ophelia is like, but they have not seen or understood the battle that she's had while coming together. Also, it's a way to get the rest of the story out :D, and there is a lot yet to say about Ophelia. She did allow people to die to gain her freedom from everything--why?Dumbledore has been very keen to give Ophelia the benefit of the doubt, and he's just testing the waters, and I think that after so many years, he'd be better at seeing what was in front of him rather than relying solely upon Legilimency.In this instance, trust Dumbledore. Would she, after everything, trust the friendly, open hand? Or would the harsh and bitter reality of everything be more acceptable?I just thought, I never sent this chapter to you, did I? Eeek! I was so busy with the run-up to Christmas that it went right out of my head... my apologies for that.Snape will make another appearance. I'll send a summary of the remaining chapters.
That wasn't a direction I expected to go, but now it seems so obvious. Dealing with the Horcruxes is more important than anything else, really.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
The books suggest that the concept of Horcruxes had bothered Dumbledore since the end of 'Chamber of Secrets'. The idea prompted him to seek out Horcruxes in the six week holiday between years five and six, i.e. after this story which runs up to the end of OoTP.It's the most prominent starting point for them as far as Dumbledore is concerned.. the rest will be dealt with later.Thank you for reviewing :)
I see nososaintly felt the same as I did. That's why I told you I may have missed something when I read it through the second time. What was going on was too compelling to bother about grammar or anything else. You achieved exactly what you set out to do in that passage with Sirius. I'm glad I'm not prone to nightmares, if I were that would have given me a humdinger of a nightmare.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I never thought of that! I wonder... Write that well that I could pass myself of as being decent with grammar by bamboozling with a distracting plot.... hmmm. I feel so warm and fuzzy about the wonderful reviews; I feel all spurred on and encouraged--I can't thank people enough for their effort and kind thoughts. This fanfic was my very first, and for some reason, I worry and fret, panic and suffer with it.The whole site has been nurturing... *sniffles*Thanks for the review,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
... I'm off to conjure up chapter twenty!
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
I never thought of that! I wonder... Write that well that I could pass myself of as being decent with grammar by bamboozling with a distracting plot.... hmmm. I feel so warm and fuzzy about the wonderful reviews; I feel all spurred on and encouraged--I can't thank people enough for their effort and kind thoughts. This fanfic was my very first, and for some reason, I worry and fret, panic and suffer with it.The whole site has been nurturing... *sniffles*Thanks for the review,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
... I'm off to conjure up chapter twenty!
You've already had all my comments and know what I think about this chapter, so I won't repear them except to tell you that I thought this chapter was excellently written and that I was happy to look it over for you before it was posted.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thanks for that,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
. Altering the story has been both thrilling and terrifying, and as such, I'm happy and relieved that it's been all for the good of the story. It's opened new avenues of thought and challenging concepts--I just hope that I can do the plot justice now! Thank you for your advice and guidance :)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thanks for that,
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
. Altering the story has been both thrilling and terrifying, and as such, I'm happy and relieved that it's been all for the good of the story. It's opened new avenues of thought and challenging concepts--I just hope that I can do the plot justice now! Thank you for your advice and guidance :)
I liked the conflict between her two sides. I showed that Veronica has a very controlling personality and that the unknown side of Ophelia may be the good side. She Imperiused Topliss and had himfake her death and hide her identity to get away from Voldemort so there must be some good in her.Oddly, I only just picked up on the name Veronica Speedwell. It never struck me while the earlier creeping speedwell was blooming, but now that my other types of veronica are blooming or about to come into bloom I finally caught on.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review :) It was difficult for me to try to formalise some logic behind the situation... Ophelia had been, for want of a better term, 'put on hold' while the new personality of Veronica was allowed to develop, so they sort of existed side by side. When Ophelia was summoned via the potion, it seemed reasonable that there would be two distinct minds left to squabble. I'm not a psychologist, the only thing I know is how to spell it, and the theory may be so off track as to be laughable, but I enjoyed the disparity and the scenes that it engendered... that's my reason and I'm sticking to it!It means a great deal that the name has been discovered... I had Veronica from the start, and it was when I was sipping coffee, just over a year ago, that 'speedwell' caught my eye--it was the flower decorating my mug. Odd how that happens, eh? I was left wondering just how much was down to coincidence... after that, I spent more time thinking about the other names... had so much fun on 'Babies' names' websites... lol.I am so glad that you're still with the story, thank you.I'm working on a Snape chapter, a new chapter eighteen, and it ain't 'arf givin' me grief... lol. When this was first written, I was so intent on finishing it, but now that the pressures have gone and I am more comfortable, I want to fill it out and add the little touches that will hopefully make it more appealing. There was a scene involving Onesiphorus that was removed to keep this from escalating into some huge beast, but I will write it now... ... ooops! I ramble, sorry. Thank you again :)
I was going to say that this reminded me of 'The Exorcist', but then I figured that this is an exocism in and of itself and Voldemort is the demon who must be cast out of her mind body and soul.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review. It's interesting how another viewpoint can make you just stop and stare... I hadn't seen it quite like that before. Thank you, again :)
There's not much that can be said about this chapter. The only thing I can do is just what they are doing, just wait and see how it all works out.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for the review. I hope that I'm not slipping... *looks worried* I do find writing certain scenes/genres to be quite tough at times... if you think that the chapter needs some more work, then I'd love any comments. Having the reviews helps me to improve, and as this was my first fanfic, I can appreciate that it may be quite rough. The next chapters are being beta read; I hope to upload pretty soon. Thank you for sticking with the story :)
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Sorry, but as an aside... your reviews seem to be duplicated... I'm not sure why they're being duplicated, some glitch, perhaps? :D
Response from Trickie Woo (Reviewer)
I tried to respond to you about an hour and a half ago and I see my response didn't make it through.First, there was no problem with the writing or the content of the chapter. I was expressing my emotional reaction to what Dumbledore had to do. Obviously it had to be done and there is nothing I, or any of your characters, can do about it, so I will just have to sit back and wait to see how things work themselves out.Second, I had problems posting reviews on TPP last night. The one I wrote after I wrote this one didn't show up at all, I had to go back this afternoon and rewrite it and it finally did show up. I have no idea what happened that caused my review to become duplicated. I figured that TPP was working on the system and they must still be since the first response I wrote didn't show up.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for that :D I guess that I'm still a very nervous writer.I had no idea the pains you were going to to review this; I am so humbled. I mentioned in an earlier response that I was thinking of writing more Snape-centric chapters... consider that a given, as a thanks for your efforts. Thank you :)
That's an intersting theory about the dark mark and how it keeps him in tune with all his death Eaters. It sounds quite logical to me.As for the rest of the chapter, the plot still has too many convolutions for me to figure anything out yet, but given time I'm sure I will.
Response from sweetflag (Author of Better Not Knowing)
Thank you for reviewing. Logical and rather nasty in my opinion *shudders* imgaine not even being allowed to keep your emotions and deepest thoughts private. I hope that you continue to enjoy it :)