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Their Death-Marked Love
_Levicorpus_328 Reviews | 7.33/10 (328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 229 Favorites )
Sixteen-year-old Hermione Granger has come back to school for her sixth year, having acquired a few curves and a few more worries over the summer. But in Potions class, the Amortentia potion makes her realize an unusual desire. When the scent continues to crop up in her daily life, especially when she is helping Professor Snape after class, life takes a turn for confusion…
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Reviews for Their Death-Marked Love
I like the way you use that last sentence. ANd it makes me realise that I should probably re-read HBP before the next one cause there are some details I can't well remember. So thanks for the thinking.
What a shock and good surprise ! I didn't expect that but that makes things really more interesting for the next.
Ahh well, I liked that sentance better in your story (I did mention I like happy endings?).
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Is that a hint?? :)
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Heck yes!!!!! LOL
OMG. Well, that is an unexpected surprise. I guess this is where you veer from canon. Wow. I was expecting angst, but this is a little beyond that. Thanks for the update!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Oh the angst will come, and the canon will continue.... BUAHAHAHAHAAAAA
AAHHH!! Please update! soon
That was great!...I hope you can hurry and post the next chapter I'm dying to know what happens next!...I'll tell you this...You've got a fan of this story now!...Keep them coming!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Wow, thank you! I'll post chapter thirteen as soon as my beta's done with it. I'm glad you like this story, it has taken so many unexpected turns by now. It was originally going to be a one-shot, then the vision kept growing!! :)
Response from immortaldragonfly (Reviewer)
i'm glad it wasn't only a one-shot!...It would've been a loss to have left it at only that!...I can't wait to read the next one!
What a cliff hanger! LOL Keep these chapters coming!
Oh man, when it rains it pours. At least Hermione seemed to come around when she saw that Severus was being summoned to a meeting. Now doom/war is on the horizon along with what could have been happy news. Severus seems to be in an impossible situation as he does not know what Draco's mission is or when it will take place, only where.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Yes, this was the only way to sucessfully keep twisting this plot. Well, more cliffs are in store for the intrepid climbers of this story!
awww shite, talk about cruel and unusual punishments...... OK I'm trying to spit the hook, and I'm being reeled in and landed. Great chapter, nasty cliffie.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
More will be up within a few days!
Wow that was pretty powerful story! I read the first 3 chapters on MuggleNet, but then when I couldn't finish it, I decided to come here! It was great, I really liked it.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks so much! I'll be updating soon (it's not over yet....!)
You did a really good job of relating the depth of her despair over the outcome of their holiday. He semms to really love her; it's a shame that she's gotten cold feet too late. Thank you for the update.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks! Stay tuned for updates.
Oh no!! I'm crying right now...no really, I am...
I mean, I know that it's essential in order to be HBP compliant and all, but I hope that it could still happen after the war...
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Aw! I'm touched! I am vcery excited to post the next few chapters, all questions will be answered.
I'm gonna have to take Hermione's side in this one. Not just because she's a girl and such, but who the heck does Snape think he is? He practically tells her in the previous chapter that he doesn't love her - now in this one, he gives her a freaking amazing emerald necklace (that's a family heirloom I might add) and then immediately expects that means he has the right to jump on her. And of course she responds because she's a hormonal teenager with a crush on her professor and she's oh so flattered that he likes her back. And then he has the audacity to tell her that he loves her over and over and of course she reciprocates because of course, what else is she to do in such a situation? She has this man who seems to worship her and tells her he loves her. He's totally disregarding the idea that maybe he should use some forethought before practically taking advantage of this young confused girl. And Hermione realizes their actions all too rash - too late of course. I know this is all necessary to the plot, being HBP compliant and all. And for that reason I love it. It irks me, but I love it. I'm just really disappointed in the two of them (now I sound like an old lady) that they didn't think about this. And surely Severus had this planned from the start. The contraceptive potion - then giving her his grandmother's emerald necklace! Grr. And Hermione, the poor girl, just abandoned her usual logical thinking for the heat of the moment.Having ranted my head off, I would like to congratulate you on a thoroughly marvellous integration of HBP and this amazing little HG/SS fic. Their incredibly complicated relationship is so much more realistic than what usually comes about in this genre. So, hats off to you, and I'm looking forward to your next update.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I know, the generating of the hate for Snape was a true goal for the chapter. I thought that the proclamations of love from him were probably leaked through the fissue of his physical weakness in the moment. But you're totally right that he was taking advantage of her. I was so sick of reading these PWP's where Snape and Hermione would have random, meaningless and nearly illegal sex all over the place with no attatchments-- it's just WRONG. WRONG. WRONG. WRONG. Sex isn't just a tool for making your readers sweaty, it should provoke thought that this deeply emotional and vaugely spiritual sharing of emotions is being experienced. I hoped to evoke a bit of guilt as well, because sex is just being thrown around so much lately that it's simply ridiculous. Hey, I thought I was being edgy by showing this new vantage point. Anyway, thanks for the review and for reading, stay tuned for more edgy drama!-_Levicorpus_
Awwwww, what a sad ending for this chapter. Great story though.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks. :) I didn't want to to have the tone of "Whoopee! I'm seventeen and I just had sex with a forty-year-old!!" That's wrong and slightly insensitive to the situation. Thanks for reading.
*Hugs the computer screen and kisses* My god I have been without hg/ss fanficttion for a week..the horror. This is the first hg/ss story i have read..sadly my last ffor a while..computer is broken for two weeks. Anyway nice story and great chapter..my god has my made have a huge grin on my face and saying "AWW" in a room full people who think i'm nuts now.You really handle the hg/ss well , soft but still giving snape that edge he has.Snapedreamer ( I live again!)
I am really enjoying reading this! I hope that you continue it soon!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I'll put the next chapter in queue right now! :)
Response from Satai Delenn (Reviewer)
Wow! Thanks!
Wow. Things are progressing at an interesting pace!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks, I suppose....
This is a great story! Please update soon! They are so perfect together in this! YAY!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks so much! *blush* You have a chapter ahead of you designed to be pure fluff, I do hope it measures up.
And once again lovely chapter. I quite like your bitter Snape
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks so much. It was nice to take a detour from the SexGod!Snape and make him slightly more.... snape-ish.
Awww how sweet, it looks like they made up.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
There is a volatile future ahead, don't you fret...
Severus said the "idea was too young to induce heartbreak on both your part and mine." That sounds like he was heartbroken too. Despite the mask and part he plays, he seems so fragile and vulnerable to me.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
That is sort of what I was aiming for! Thanks for your rating.
Ooh, I feel like slapping him! (and Draco!) Poor Hermione, she is great and he's being a prat! This chapter was great :) Please post another chapter soon!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Next chapter will come as soon as possible, a few details have to be sorted out first, however. Stay tuned!
Draco's a arrogant bigoted git. Severus is being an insecure idiot. Hermione is feeling insecure and is now angry. I think you covered everything. What a day!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Huzzah!
Cute, I agree, Severus would want to put someone on the spot.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
During these chapters I was undergoing shirking the cuteness. I don't really accomplish it until about chapter 13... haha.