Their Death-Marked Love
_Levicorpus_328 Reviews | 7.33/10 (328 Ratings, 0 Likes, 229 Favorites )
Sixteen-year-old Hermione Granger has come back to school for her sixth year, having acquired a few curves and a few more worries over the summer. But in Potions class, the Amortentia potion makes her realize an unusual desire. When the scent continues to crop up in her daily life, especially when she is helping Professor Snape after class, life takes a turn for confusion…
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Captivation and Obsession: All done! The story has been reccomended at The_New_Library on livejournal.com, a great resource for finding lesser-known fics!
Stay tuned for “To Be Or Not To Be”, a chaptered Sev/Hermione fic.
Reviews for Their Death-Marked Love
Anonymous
luv it so much
was that the last chapter (i dont think it is and i dont want to think it is)
yea
very good story
luv it sooooooooooooooooooo much
well done :D
Author's Response: There's a lot more.... don't worry!
mrsmalfoy73's response: YAY!!!
*does happy dance*
I wait for the next one!Great job!
It's good to see not every one has left his computer to read DH. Good chapter.
Great chapter, I'm waiting formy DH to arrive. Bites nails to the quick....what happens to Severous???!!
This is amazing stuff, I truely connect with Herminone. Please don't keep us waiting, we are already dying waiting for book 7! Wonderful! Amazing!
Hermione did a good job calmly explaining her circumstances, not that it went over well. However, she can take heart that it appears Severus can communicate with her, even if only once to tell her his immediate circumstances.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
She's in a pretty tough situation.... it would do to hope she will remain a fighter in upcoming chapters.
What a beautiful way for Severus to say what he wants to convey to Hermione.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks, I thought so. :)
Hehe so cute. I love how she wants to name it Juliet after the book she sent Severus. Poor Hermione, please please don't let her fall in love with Remus...I will have a heart attack. Keep them coming! Amazing stuff!
Excellent addition!!! Please update!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Next chapter is in queue!
Thanks for the update! I wonder if it will help or hurt [the whole situation] that the Order now knows about the pregnancy. And, does that help Snape or hurt is case [further]? Great job!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
You'll have to wait and see.... (she says cryptically)
I really do like this story. I feel bad for Hermione... although I think it rather makes sense that others can't really comprehend her feelings at this point, especially after Dumbledore's death.
Oh... there's one thing I've wondered about for the last few chapters - the timing of the pregnancy, i.e. shouldn't she be further along than 3.5 months now and thus quite obviously showing? If I recall correctly, Dumbledore's death occurred just before the end of the schoolyear, i.e. something like six months after Christmas? (Which is when Hermione got pregnant, yes?) Or am I just totally confused here?
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I understand your concern about the pregnancy date, do you remember that when she was breaking it to Snape she said "It would merely delay--" and he cut her off? When the potion was used incorrectly it somehow delayed the true start of the pregnancy.We've got an observant one on our hands! You're the first to have caught that... :)
Response from Mint Stick (Reviewer)
Oh, right you are! I did notice that but didn't really pay much thought to just what would be delayed.
Thanks for the explanation, it does make sense.
I am really enjoying your story so far :) Thank you very much for writing and I look forward to the next update.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I'm so glad you like it! The next update is on the way.
What a sad chapter, Hermione must me going through hell right now......
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Yeah, I wouldn't want to be in her position. It's tough out there for a pregnant teen.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
Yes, it is and the sad part is the last statisical check (that I'm aware of) the average American looses their virginity at age 11. EEEWWWW
Hahahahahahaha......I absolutly love your stories if J.K.Rowling didn't own every singe friggin' right to Harry Potter you could publish them :)!!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks so much!
absolutely fantastic!
Oh god. I am in love. I am ridiculously excited for the rest! eep! Brilliant, you have got talent.I can't thank you enough. Really.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Wow! Thanks!
I'm loving this story!! I found this today and sat at the computer for god knows how many hours and read it from begining to end! I'm in suspence! You're an awesome writer and if this were a book i would rather buy this than pay my cell phone bill!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Sheesh! Thank you! It's reviews like these that help me out when I'm having a bad day. Thanks again for your support.
Write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
The story is completed! I'll update A.S.A.P.
"I smirked, fighting back thoughts of, Severus, you old dog, with a mental stick." I LOVE that line. It is sooo perfect!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Thanks! I like that one too. I have a few favorite lines I've yet to post as well.
I would like to thank you for entertaining me this night with your story. I've shipped HG/SS for ever so I would just like to thank you for posting somthing so wonderful... though I would deeply apprciate you updating soon. I'm a writer myself and I know sometimes updating is difficult but I really enjoy this so please... As soon as it's convient for you.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
The story is complete, so updates will be regular. :)Thanks for reading!
This is excellent work! You have made me fall in love with Snape myself! Please post more chapters, I'm completely hooked! Amazing! Amazing! Amazing!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Wow! Thank you!I think I love Snape too now. While watching Order of the Pheonix I started laughing like crazy every time he spoke, thinking of the things I've made him do in fan fiction.
Oh boy, the cat is out of the bag now. Hermione had better explain things quick! I would love a happy ending.
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
Well you've a few chapters ahead!
Great chapter! God knows what will happen to them, stuck in a cave with no way out. Chilling in some way... I do not envy their present predicament. *shivers*
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I don't either, but I can promise a beacon of hope in the near future!
Now next chapter is going to be interesting! Maybe even more interesting than all the previous ones. I feel sorry for poor Snape. He didn't take it all too well. Can't wait to hear his side of story!!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
The next chapter was one of my favorites to write, I think you will enjoy it because it is so different from everything else we have encountered.
Well, not exactly a peaceful day, but I guess she's trying to keep an optimisitic perspective. I'm glad she told the boys; I always think that authors stretch it a little too thin when they expect the reader to believe that they wouldn't notice such a huge change in Hermione's physical experience. Yea, they're only boys, but they are also men.... Thanks for the update!
Response from _Levicorpus_ (Author of Their Death-Marked Love)
I agree, they aren't entirely stupid-- not even Ron. I hate how authors make characters into completely different people for their stories... so I've got another chaptered hermione/snape on the way in which all the characters are realistic..... whatever shall happen? I hope I can get that one up here soon, I think all the DML people would appreciate it.